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Lovely Update... 😊
Waiting for next part...
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Chapter 3
Sanskaar: What are you saying swara? This is not possible

Swara: I know sanskaar that this is not easy and I am asking you for a huge favor. But you're the only one who can help me.

Sanskaar: do you even have any idea that what could be the outcome of this? Marriage is not a joke swara. It is bond of lifetime. It is unbreakable

Swara: you know a lot about marriage na. Then think about my parents. My own sister broke their relationship. I need to reunite them sanskaar. I need to expose Ragini. Only you can help me please.

Sanskaar: Swara this not easy. I know I can understand what you're going though but marriage is not a solution

Swara: Then tell me sanskaar what is the solution? Tell me! Do you have any way.

Sanskaar: We will think about it. We will do something swara for god sake this is not right

Swara have tears in her eyes

Swara: you're right sanskaar. I know I am asking you for something which will change your life entirely. But don't worry, I will not destroy your life. I will leave as soon as my parents reunite. I would never come back.

After a pause

Swara: I need you sanskaar

Sanskaar looks in her eyes. She has tears in her eyes. Her eyes are red.

Swara: it is fine sanskaar. I know what is your decision.

Swara heads out of the mandir but sanskaar stops her,

Sanskaar: Stop Swara.

Sanskaar holds swara's hand and take her to the Madap.

Sanskaar calls pandit jee.

Pandit jee first say the mantras. Then sanskaar swara stand up for pheras.

Vaachan #1 that Sanskaar makes: I promise that I will provide you with money and needs to run a happy family. I would avoid all those things that can harm you and our family.

Vaachan #2 that Sanskaar makes: I will remain committed to you forever. I will love you and provide courage and strength

Vaachan #3 that Sanskaar makes: I will take care of our future children and will look after all their needs.

Vaachan #4 that Sanskaar makes: I thank you for bringing happiness, prosperity, and sacredness to my life.

Vaachan #5 that both pray together: They pray to goddess of wealth to provide them prosperity and blessings for rest of their lives.

Vaachan #6 that Sanskaar makes: I will keep you happy forever. I promise to make your life joyless

Vaachan #7 that Sanskaar makes: Our relationship is firm and we are inseparable. You are mine and I am yours. May we live happily forever.

They both sit down. Sanskaar puts mangalsutra in swara neck and fill her maang with sindoor

Pandit jee: Now both of you are Pati and Patni.

Both of them get up.

Swara: thank you

Sanskaar: don't say thank you. No thank you and sorry in friendship. Did you forgot that? (Smiles)

Swara: I am serious sanskaar. I don't know how to thank you. What you're doing for me is something I can never forget.

Sanskaar: Swara, this wedding might hold no importance for us. But I promise you as a friend that I will protect you from all the evils. As long as I am there, I will make sure that no harm comes to you.

Swara: Sanskaar you're already doing so much for me. Even I want to make one promise to you that I will never let you down. I will stand for you till I am here.

Both of them smile.

Sanskaar: Now we should leave. Mission churel (witch) khatama should kick start now

Swara laughs.

Both of them head out of the mandir.

They are waiting for taxi but swara coughs. She is thirsty. Sanskaar goes to bring water for her.

Swara is standing there. Suddenly she gets SHOT... Thrice in her both kidneys and stomach.

Swara screams SANSKAAARRR

Sanskaar looks back. He is shocked. Sanskaar runs towards her and scream swaraaa

She is in sanskaar arms. Sanskaar is crying and pleading for help.

Sanskaar: Swara I am here. I will save you. Please don't close your eyes...no don't close your eyes. I am there.

Swara: sanskaar...I want to live. I don't...want to die.

Sanskaar: nothing will happen to you swara. We will fight together. You can't leave.

Swara is slowly closing her eyes.

Sanskaar: NO No you can't leave swara. We have reunite your parents, expose Ragini, we have to bring your family together. We have so many things to do. You can't leave swara. For god sake, get up. You are sherni. You have to fight.

Swara: ahhh...I am alone. Maybe this is my luck

Sanskaar: no no just few mins back we got married. We took vows together. How can you go? You even said that you will always stand by me. How can you leave me? You can't leave your friend. I need you swara.

Sanskaar pleads. He looks around but there is no car.

Sanskaar holds swara in his arms and run.

Sanskaar: we will reach the hospital soon. Don't loose hope. Don't close your eyes.

He says to her again and again that don't close your eyes.

His leg hits the rock. He is in unbearable pain. But he says to himself that I can't stop. I have to save swara,

BG music ( Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Joh tu mera Humdard hai)

End of chapter 3

Precap: Sanskaar in mehashwari house. Laksh slaps him and kick him out of the house

But why? Would sanskaar be able to save swara? If yes then how? Why Laksh kicked him out of the house?
Edited by Saraa. - 9 years ago
Anu0517 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Beautiful update...😊
How ll swara survive eagerly waiting for next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Nice update saraa . Pls update the next part. very eager to know what happend to swara😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
superb don't kill swara pls😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice update saraa👏
Finally swasan marriage 😃but swara shot😭
Precap - lucky slaps sanskaar😡how dare he...poor sanskaar his wife is in hospital n this lucky😒
Feeling bad for him
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
yar continue yar cant wait for next chap plz thank u for this super chap and sonu same felngs here swaraaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
very nice story ...Thank u for sharing it with us
cant wait to read the next chapter


Pls update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update saraa 👏
Loved the Swasan wedding 😊
Precap was soo interesting poor sanskaar 😭
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Nice story!good swaKar FRIENDSHIP.

But hey humdard is swarYas BG and always will be 🥱

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