NaiRan FF: For-Never? Chapter 8 *UPDATED*

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For-Never?




"I cannot love you, but I need you by my side," He told her, for one last time.

"I cannot forgive you, but I will stay by your side" She replied, ever so firm.

What happens, when the past unfolds and you are left with no other option but to accept and embrace it?

Can misunderstandings and ego die a little?

Now, it's in the hands of Raina, to unite her parents amidst the hatred and the wall they have surrounded themselves within.

Follow the journey of Karan and Naina, to embark on a new love story, filled with HATE.

Pain.

Betrayal.

Guilt.

And Regret.

"I need a family. My Mumma and Papa's hands to hold on to!" Raina wept.

Index

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

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Sounds interesting. Looking forward to more.
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Interesting!!waiting for the first chapter😊
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Chapter 1

Jaipur

"Bachaaa" Meghna ran errands searching for her with a glass of milk; this was how Chauhan house's routine began.

"Bacha, enough of hiding and seek, now please come and drink the milk like a good girl, please" Meghna sighed and sat on the sofa and requested.

Dadaji laughed seeing Meghna's situation; "Shaitan is up this early?" he laughed and asked her.

Suddenly, two tiny pairs of tender hands wrapped over Meghna's eyes "Mausi Maa, I won" she laughed showing her pearly white teeth.

"Raina." Meghna kept the glass of milk on the table and pulled her onto her lap and kissed her on the top of her head.

"Now our good girl Raina will drink the milk," Nirmala smiled and handed the glass as Raina as the 6-year-old made a face.

Raina shut her eyes tightly and drank it in a gulp, making Dadaji and Nirmala laugh at her antics, however, Meghna's heart somewhere dropped. Raina was none but a miniature Naina. Her antics, the way she spoke, her values everything resembled Naina.

It had been 4 years since that dreadful night! A night that changed everything altogether, a night when relations and trust broke forever. Even when she saw her little sister taking the huge step of her life, Meghna was helpless and couldn't stand by her side. That guilt would never go away.

"Meghna"

Silence.

"Meghna" Nirmala calls her again.

"It's time for school, dress her up and I'll arrange the breakfast," Nirmala says and walks towards the kitchen.

"Quickly go and get ready, baby" Raina runs upstairs energetically to her father.

"Papa" she opens the door and shouts excitedly.


Hong Kong

"No, I want to watch Dexter," whined a 4-year-old Namik.

"But Champ, it's your sleeping time," his Nanny, Tressa tried to calm him down, but this little one wouldn't listen.

"I wouldn't sleep unless Mummy's here" he crossed his hands and continued watching Dexter, his favourite cartoon.

"Wouldn't Mummy be angry if she comes to know that you've been awake?"

Namik went on to ignore her until the doorbell rang.

"Mummy" He excitedly ran to open the door and stopped and sadly pouted looking at the door, it was far from his reach.

Tressa couldn't stop herself from laughing at his cuteness, indeed he was a sweetheart. "I knew, you wouldn't be able to reach" and pulled his cheeks.

She opened the door and there stood Naina, in a long Kurti and tights, her hair ponytailed. Nobody would believe that she was a mother to a 4-year-old kid.

"Namu" she picked him up and twirled all around and showered him with kisses and he was too happy for the attention he got.

"Tressa, set the dinner, I'll change in 2 and be back" she hugged Namik and ran to her room to change.

Things had changed for Naina since that dreadful night, since 4 years! From a high profile job in an investment company to a 3BKH apartment in the heart of Hong Kong city, she had everything to satisfy her prince's wishes. But, deep down she was void, immersing herself in work to hide the pain and loneliness that had bottled up inside since these 4 years. She was a broken single mother! And this fact wouldn't change.

Being sure that the door is locked, she dialled her mother, Sharda's number.

"Hello" each time she heard Sharda's voice, her voice choked.

"Mama are you busy?"

"No beta, on my way to school. When did you return?" she asked concerned.

Naina hated herself for being away from her mother and also keeping Sharda away from Namik.

"Just 5 mins before Mama,"

They spoke for around half an hour when Naina realised that she had to be with Namik.

"Mama, I'll call later." With that, she cut the call and went to the drawing room.

Namik had been so engrossed in watching Dexter that he didn't realise Naina hugging him.

"How was your day, champ?" she asked softly as she ran her hand over his hair lovingly.

"Mummy, today teacher told that I sang well" he had the same glint in his eyes like that of Karan, his passion for music, his love for solitude and all his features were a prominent resemblance of Karan.

"Mummy's rock star" she hugged his tighter "And?"

"And..." he thought for a moment, "And, teacher told that I will sing for the annual day"

She was proud of the success her little son was achieving in his nursery, be it small or big, it mattered to her than her bonus or cracking any big deal.

"My rock star should set the stage on fire, okay?" she showed him her pinky finger "Promise!" he said entwining his pinky finger with hers.

"Mummy, how was your day?"

"Too much work," she said making a face and they laughed in unison.

"Nyna and Champ, come have the dinner" called out Tressa.

This was Naina's family, there wasn't less happiness or anything more; she made herself believe that she had everything, but how long will this facade stay?

The first Chapter is finally here! So, did you all like it? Please do write your reviews and comments and support me.

Aren't Raina and Namik extremely cute? Did you like them?

For more suspense stay tuned.

Love You All ā¤ļø





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Wow!! This is great. Loved it. Please update soon.
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Originally posted by: -Namita-

Wow!! This is great. Loved it. Please update soon.


Thanks Nami Diii (Hopefully, I can call you that, I can right?)
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Originally posted by: AkshitaGupta



Thanks Nami Diii (Hopefully, I can call you that, I can right?)



Oh absolutely dear girl. I'm know as Dii on some other forum as well.
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That was interesting!!
I am eager to know their past now šŸ˜›
Update soon dear šŸ‘

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this is diffierent and amazing
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Chapter 2

Jaipur

"Papa" Raina ran up to her father and hugged him tightly by his legs, "Dress me up, I need to go to school"

Karan picked up his princess and pecked her forehead "Princess, everything is ready" he winked and showed her the ironed uniform.

Raina knew that her Papa wasn't a morning person and it normally takes him half an hour to iron her clothes which always make her late to school.

He got her ready in the uniform and combed her hair "Ouch" she squealed as he combed a tangled hair.


Flashback:

The fairy lights had dimmed and relatives who had come to attend Vishal's Mehendi function had started leaving and Kunal and Karan had escorted them all.

After making sure all the relatives had left, Karan went to Naina's room only to see her worriedly sitting in front of the mirror.

"Naina, what are you up to?" he laughed.

"Please Karan!" she made a face.

"Ok baba, what's the matter?" he went next to her.

She looked at the comb and then pointed to her Mehendi applied hands "I can't sleep with a messy hair"

Karan burst out laughing leaving Naina to roll her eyes, "KARAN!"

"Fine, I'll help you" he managed to say between his hysterics.

He took the comb and started untangling the locks of hair "Ouch" Naina squealed.

"Sorry, does it hurt?" he asked her slowly and she shook her head slightly.

He then carefully removed the tangled using his fingers and then again combed her hair "does it hurt now?"

"No," she smiled brightly and Karan placed a kiss on her forehead.

"Papa"

Silence.

"Papa"

Karan's reverie was broken when Raina shook him, "Papa, it hurts" she droned and he mumbled a sorry.

He removed the tangles using his fingers and combed her hair again, "does it hurt now, princess?" he asked Raina.

"No, papa best" she replied in her child-like tone and hugged him.

Quickly they headed downstairs and had a hurried breakfast and rushed for school, coz, like every time, Raina was late.

Karan dropped her in the school and left after he made sure that she had reached the class.

He knew he wasn't a perfect father. He could never drop her on time nor pick her on time. He did fail in a lot of things, but he hadn't left her, unlike her mother!

He knew Raina did miss her mother's presence, a mother's love and care. She was just a two-year-old kid when her mother decided to walk away not even bothering to think twice how it would affect Raina. He held no love for the woman who had caused him and his little princess only misery to dwell on!

Back in Chauhan house, Meghna was preparing lunch along with Nirmala.

Things had changed a lot since the past 4 years, Meghna had given up her job, Kunal had ended his conversations with his father, and by the time Nand Kishore had started realising his mistake, it was late. The only relation now he had in that house was that of a Grandfather to Raina, none except Raina and Nirmala acknowledges his presence.

"more of chili powder, beta" Nirmala said.

They were so engrossed in cooking that Meghna didn't realise her phone ringing.

Meghna rushed to wash her hands and pick the call when she saw the caller ID, Mama.

"Ha Mama, how are you?" she spoke cheerfully.

"Gudiya, this is Vishal" she could sense panic in his voice.

"Vishal Bhaiyya, is everything alright?"

There was silence from the other end, and this just increased Meghna's concern "Bhaiyya, please say something, is everything alright?

"Gudiya, don't panic and listen to me carefully, ok?"

"Bhaiyya, you're scaring me now, where's Mama and why are you calling from her phone?"

"Gudiya, bua met with an accident while coming back today. She's admitted to the ICU, please be here urgently,"

The phone slipped from Meghna's hands and tears started flowing, Nirmala who was unaware of everything stood there taken aback.

"Meghna," Nirmala shook her.

"Mama" was all she uttered and hugged Nirmala tightly.

~

Everybody had crowded near the ICU of the hospital, walking from left to right impatiently.

Kunal has been trying to console Meghna, who had turned numb from all the crying. It was almost midnight, and yet, Sharda's condition made no progress increasing Meghna's worry. Raina was fast asleep in Karan's shoulders, Dadaji and NK had left to Sharda's Bundi house, while Nirmala decided to stay back along with Kunal, Meghna and Karan.

"Gudiya, don't you think we need to inform Cheeku about this?" Vishal asked her. Tears welled up in Meghna's eyes hearing Naina's name and she looked at Karan who sat in a corner holding Raina.

She shook her head negatively, "You have your reasons Gudiya, but she has the same right over Bua as you have and we can't hide this from her," Vishal tried to make her understand.

"But,"

"We can't hide this especially when Bua still talks to her every day, she needs to know," Vishal says and gives her Shard'a phone.

Flashback:

Thunder and rain had showered the land, and nothing was a mess compared to Karan. Three bottles down, Karan had lost all his senses to think right, all he could think was Naina walking away.

Suddenly baby Raina started crying, Karan looked at her helplessly and tried picking her up from the cradle, but due to the alcohol he had consumed, he was scared and just looked at the crying baby.

"Karan," Meghna came up to Karan's room hearing Raina's cries.

She picked up the crying baby and rocked her back to sleep, "she's fast asleep," Meghna carefully placed the baby in the cradle, "if at all she wakes up in the middle of the night just give her the milk," she pointed towards the milk bottle and Karan nodded absent-mindedly and walked towards the balcony.

"Karan," she placed a hand on his shoulder.

His bloodshot eyes had all the replies she wanted, and she found herself more helpless. "Whatever happened..." Karan cut her off

"wasn't supposed to happen. How could Naina leave? How can she just walk away leaving me and Raina alone?" his voice was vulnerable yet angry.

"Naina has her reason and.."

"her reasons? What's a bigger reason than leaving our 2-year child? Has she become so selfish that she forgot to think about Raina, at least once? ONCE?"

"I don't have words to support her, but nor do I have anything to say about what she had been going through, and you know it Karan" Meghna tried calming him down, but this got him angrier.

"Is this the solution? I know, I have been a jerk to not know what she has been going through but she could have told me. Leaving us wasn't the solution!" Karan angrily kicked the teapot stand and it shattered to pieces.

"Karan please, Raina is sleeping," Meghna shushed him.

"I have to be quite, okay. Tell me one thing Bhabhi, what is Raina's future? What..."

"I'm here Karan, for her. Everyone is here. Me, Maa, Mama, everybody. And she has you. Isn't that more than enough? I know how important is mother's love, but that is not possible now, right?" Karan silently sat on the bed.

"You need to realise that you have more responsibilities now, you have to be her mother as well as her father," a lone tear escaped her eyes.

"I promise to be by her side always, Karan and so will Kunal." She patted his back and started leaving.

"Bhabhi, I want a promise from you," Karan opened the fourth bottle while Meghna looked on.

"You will never contact Naina, never again." His eyes pleaded though it broke her from inside for Raina she agreed.

"I promise." She took the beer bottle from him and threw it in the dustbin and left the room.

"What have you decided?" Nirmala asked her.

She looked at the contact "Cheeku" and tears rolled down her face, "Meghna, you can't hide this from her for a long time." Kunal consoled her.

Gulping the lump that had formed in her throat she dialled the contact.

"Mama," Naina spoke after a few seconds and all the courage that Meghna had built up broke into pieces.

~

How was the chapter? Did all like it? Do like and post your valuable comments.

How will Naina react after talking to Meghna after 4 long years?

And, also more flashback scenes coming up, so stay tuned. Btw, are you enjoying the flashback scenes?

I'm planning to write the next chapter from Naina's POV, do comment if you want so or else, I will continue in third person's POV.

Also, yesterday's episode, OMG. NaiRan conversation was the highlight!


Love You All ā¤ļø

Edited by AkshitaGupta - 8 years ago

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