yuvreen FF :Teri Meri Kahaani last upd pg 73 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shahz

Awesome chapter dear..i also liked the little tiff.Cant wait to see how they make up.And thank you very much for the pm.😛


well fnx 4 z comment 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 11A

It was soon 07:00 pm, but I was still in the same condition. I went in front of my mirror I saw my face, my eyes were red and puffy due to all the tears that fell. My face was tear stricken. I went in the wash room washed my face and took a pajama

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I took a shower but again I cried like nothing feeling really bad. I heard momma calling me to have dinner. I put on my pajama and tied my hair in a pony tail. I went in the dinning hall. Wen momma asked me

"arey suvi! Wat hap 2 ur eyes? Why is it red and so puffy?"

"nothing momma! It's just soap went into it that's all!"

Poppa came from work he also asked me the same question and my answer was the same. Momma cooked my favorite food but I didn't have the heart to it. I thought again of the morning incident again tears were trying to make their way on my cheeks but I controlled myself. I thought

"well zat's the one cause of falling in love! Crying!"

I sighed and ate a little and bid goodnight to my parents and went in my room. I was thinking of yuvraj

"why was he so angry and why did he behave like zis wiz me! He himself made a deal and didn't want to fulfill it!"

Again thinking of him I cried again wanting the pain to ebb away.


YUVRAJ'S ROOM

I was sitting by the window and was gazing at the moon and the stars. I again remembered the incident of the morning. I was feeling sick again and then I thought

"wat's her fault in it! She just asked me why I don't attend classes and I reacted like a retarded! Congrats cheetah u really rocked it in the morning!"

I took my mobile in my hand wanting to call her as I knew I behaved wrongly with her, even in the canteen I didn't acknowledge her, I knew she was looking at me but I was really messed up that I couldn't look at her. I dialed her number but cut the call.

"u'll call her then wat! A sorry won't b enuf for my behavior! Wat can I do now I have to apologize to her.I know she must be in a disastrous state. Oh sh*t yuvi! U must meet her now and make it up to her! I have to make it up to her!"

I dialed her number, it rang once but she didn't answer it. I tried again I got the same response, but I didn't give up at my 7 call she took the call, I let out a sigh of relief.

"hello suvreen! Listen don't cut the call! Plz listen to me! I have to talk to u! plz plz!"

"wat do u want yuvraj?"

I heard her voice I instantly knew she is crying as her voice was groggy. I really felt bad but I knew I had to make it up to her.

"suvreen I want to meet u now! Am coming to ur house in 10 minutes just wait for me. I'll pick u up and we'll talk!"

"no! I can't! it's late and my parent are at home I can't come!"

"ok fine! If u don't wanna come no problem I'll come in ur house and meet u then!"

"wat no u can't do zat! Ok am coming!"

"fine! Come out am coming!"

I was kind of relieved zat at least she accepted to meet me. I took my laila's keys and went in my jeep and drove to her place.

SUVREEN'S ROOM

"in wat situation he have put me in! grrr wat am gonna do now! Poppa and momma are in the living room watching tv! Wat am gonna do!"

I was pacing forth and backwards in my room thinking of something! Suddenly it struck into my mind 'the window'. I took a stool from the corner of my room and placed it near the window. I went near my bed and placed my pillow in the center of the bed and covered it with my quilt and switched of the bedside lamp.

I stood on the tool and jumped out from the window. I ran down the 2 lanes and he wasn't zer! I waited for more minutes but he didn't came I lost hope again tears were gathering in my eyes I turned around to go back wen I felt the flash of head lights on my back I turned and saw it was him.

a little hint for z next part: yuvraj try to make it up 2 suvi! the reason of his anger!

Guys here is the update hope it's ok. like and comment plz😃
part 11b would be updated later or tomorrow 😉


Edited by bhavnah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it is very romantic. i loved it❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angelmimi16

it is very romantic. i loved it❤️


fnx dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
it is very chweet and romantic.😊 i love it a lot.❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angelmimi16

it is very chweet and romantic.😊 i love it a lot.❤️


hey fnx a lot dear 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 dear
Loved it
ab dekte hai ki humara cheetah kaise apni cheetih ko manayega
Eagerly waitin 4 d next part
plz update tmrw before ur schl srtz

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for yuvraj how he will try to make it up...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm this update make me so emotional
first thing- suvi was crying...😭
this making me to cry from inside, poor girl got the punishment of nothing to do
second thing- finally yuvi realise his mistake and want to apologises😒
third thing-she still believe in him...lovely and also want to meet him😊
fourth thing- why is he late?😡
And last thing- your writing is such a beautifull...
i just fall in to this story👏
congrats
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Posted: 13 years ago
so cute n romantic...
lets c hw he makes up to suvi...
tanx 4 d pm...
update soon

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