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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FatemaMazahir52

Bhavnah plz update the 11B part plzz i am eagerly waiting for it


Hi ya will try 2 update later 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnk god at last yuvi realizes his mstk ...
happy by seeng his eagerness to meet his topper and dat too 4 apology...gr8😊
update soon watng eagerly ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
P.S: whatever is written here is of pure imagination. I don't own z characters but the story yes as it's just an imagination.

Part 11b

After I disconnected z call I drived my jeep in fast speed unfortunately for me the traffic officer stopped me and as I didn't bring my lisence with me I had to pay a fine. I was frustrated

"just wen I need to do something important unfortunate things have to happen! Sh*t!"

The officer took 10 minutes at least I glanced at my watch it was 10:15 pm I had to reach at suvreen's place 10 minutes earlier.

"sh*t! hope she's has not gone away! I even didn't brought my mobile! Wat a luck!"

I reached zer.I spotted her, her back was facing me. She turned and stood there. I went down my jeep and ran to meet her. Wen I saw her I was really feeling angry and guilty her face was tear stricken, her eyes were red and puffy.

"gr8 yuvi! Really u made her cry like hell! Now make it up to her!"

I tried to touch her cheek but she pushed my hand away. I tried again and she did the same thing again, her eyes were lowered . Finally I understood that she didn't want me to touch her. I sighed.

"suvreen! U won't even look at me! I know I have hurt u! but plz at least look at me."

She looked up at me her eyes were filled of tears threatening to fall down, at the same time a tear fell out of her eyes I immediately took my tumb and removed the tear from her cheek.

"suvreen plz stop crying! Plz listen we need to talk! come with me!"

I held her hand and brought her to my jeep I made her sit on the passenger seat and I got on my seat I drived till the park. I went down I again took her hand and led her in the park I spotted a bench




(park link: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs39/i/2008/348/2/0/Lamp_Post_Park_at_Night_by_Moon_WillowStock.jpg

I took her there and made her sit. She had her eyes again lowered, I took her hands in mine and looked at her face.

"suvreen am really sorry for the incident in the moring! I know I behaved badly with u and I didn't even acknoledge u in the canteen! Even I didn't respected our deal I let u go on ur own!"

With that she busted in tears I felt helpless I gathered her in my arms and tried to soothe the pain I gave her.

"sshhh suvreen! Stop crying now plz plz! I can't see u like zis! Plz my love I know ur strong plz stop crying! I know am wrong sorry love sorry!"

She went out of my arms and I could make out by her apperance zat she was really angry

"don't u dare love me here ok! U know how much I cried do u even imagine zat!"

I was about to talk wen she cut me

"I lied to my poppa in z morning just to b with u! n u dare show ur attitude to me! Wat do u fink of urself huh! Do u fink am a toy who is available for u to toy around wen u want! If u fink like zat then am sorry yuvraj ur mistaken!"

" suvreen plz yaar I know ok ur not a toy! U have the right to be angry as am the cause! I know u cried a lot but am sorry I behaved like a retarded wiz u!"

"oh! Ya coming to u behavior! I just asked u a question n u behaved like zis! Y were u angry huh! Tell me!"

I looked down and didn't utter a word

"oh y r u quiet now! Answer me I need an answer! Y u behaved like zis to me! Don't stay quiet! For god sake yuvraj"

She was yelling on top of her voice I knew she was really angry. I turned my back to her debating with myself to tell her z truth , suddenly she pulled me to face her

" I asked u a question! Ur suppose to anwer! Why r u quiet now! U wanted to talk so be it talk! Yuvraj talk to me! Y u behaved like zis tell me! Anwer yuvraj"

I lost complete control I held her by her arms tightly and beagn to talk

"it's bekuz of my friend!"

She looked at me confused

"yes suvreen my friend! It was my first year in college I had no friends not even mannu or rathi.I was alone I had to fill my admission form.I asked every one to help me but they turned their face away. Suddenly a guy came he was none other than gyanesh he took me with him telling me zat he'll help me. I believed him and went with him. Wen we went in the class I saw junoirs like me being ragged and then gyanesh pushed me I was about to fall down wen a boy helped me.I looked up at him and he smiled."

"who was he yuvraj? Ur friend?"

" ya my friend! He helped me to stand up! He looked at me and said ' don't worry we won't let the newcommers be ragged let's rebel" with zat he punched gyanesh in his face. Wen he did that it was like everyone had gain a boost of confidence. They at their turn punched and fought wiz the senoirs for ragging zem. Soon everything was over we went out till now mannu and rathi joined me, I followed him he stopped and look at me "u r a really fearless guy by the way my name is ARYAN KHURANNA. I smiled at him we all joined hands together and became a team."

"soon all of us became good friends, but Aryan and I were the best friends we were like brothers. We could give our lives if something happen to us. We were always together, attending classes, playing football and u know it was him who named my jeep 'laila'. one day we were in class suddenly he began to feel suffocated, I asked him if he was ok but he didn't say anyfing. Soon class was over he directly went in his room I followed him and asked him if he's ok, still he didn't reply he just told me to leave him alone for some time and I did"

"mannu,rathi and me were in the canteen but he didn't come.I thought maybe he was missing his family zat's why he didn't come. The very next day I went in his room and suvree--n I --"

I was choking my words, I didn't realize but I was crying but I continued

" I went in his room, he was laying on his bed, I thought he was sleepy I went and tried to wake him up but he didn't move I was frighten I checked his heartbeat it was not beating. He was de--a he was dead suvreen! My brother left me."

"yuvraaj ssshhh wat happen to him?"

"he had leukemia, yes leukemia, he died because of it! He left a letter for me explaining himself and his disease. I called his parents, suvreen I was the one who burned my own brother pyre. The 1 whom I considered to b an important person in my life left me, the worst thing was that I didn't even know anyfing to be able to help him. I was not myself after I lost him I stopped attending classes bekuz every time I went in a class I was remembering how we used to make fun of teachers and also working together. I was lost suvreen really I didn't want to do anyfing but rathi and mannu helped me. I went in a depression but my friends stood wiz me and never let me down"

I was crying, until I felt two arms wrapping my waist. I couldn't help and hugged her back tightly still trembling in her arms.

guys here the part 11B... while writing yuvi past i was crying myself😭. i don't know about u guys but i was really sad while writing it,

p.s: plz like and comment and ignore grammatical mistakes 😳
p.p.s: silent readers give ur feedback😃
p.p.p.s: school starting tomorrow so updates will be irregular😉

Edited by bhavnah - 13 years ago
..chotu.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear its gr8 but sad also
i too cried i am very emotional
kaveriw2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow your imagination is really good it really hurt form inside
good work
i'm impress
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wow suvi is so aggressive she really want to know the answer
hmmm
so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tis was d 1st time I cried while readin a ss
It realy touched my heart
simply awsum
plz do update whenever u get time
Waitin 4 ur next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
yuvi s so sad...
i was also cryin wen he was teelin...
cute upate...
tanx 4 d pm...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very emotional but superb chapter...plz do update as soon as u can waiting eagerly. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates. very well written n eagrly waiting for next. thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love it very much. plzzz continue.😊

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