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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ isnat , LoveAngel21 , Shimolina , shilpatv , sarun_vishti , vampyrgirlricha , Ritu_Cool_2197 , tani18 , Kamlapushpa n kiran.h thanks alot guys...so here's the next part..
Part 3

UV: kya? 6:30?? Suvreen ko toh 5:00 baje tak hosh aa jana chahiye tha..he said to himself..mujhe hi annie ko call karna chahiye..(and he called annie)

Annie: (was busy talking with suvreen and naro when suddenly her phone rang she saw it n smiled) hey! Mein tumhe call karne ko bhul gayi! Actually woh m…

UV: (cuts her) ase kse bhul gayi?? Tujhe pata hai Annie yahan mein kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha..

Annie: sorry na baba! Aur bol!

UV: tu bata, topper ksi hai? usse hosh aaya kya?

Annie: oh! (she was abt to speak when suvreen's mumma came in n she excused herself) naro mein ek min mein aati hu (she went near the window and stood there looking out)

Suvreen: ok! So naro tum kuch bolo..!

Naro: shh!! Aaram kar

Annie: haan ab bol..

UV: tu kya kar rahi hai?

Annie: actually mein tujhe batane wali thi, lekin phir suvreen ko uske ghar lane mein, usse hosh aane mein time laga..

UV: ghar??

Annie: haan, actually, princi ne suvreen ko permission grant ki hai k who ek din ki chutti le sakti hai..so uske mom n dad usse ghar le aaye hai..

UV: (hyper) ghar q? hostel toh hai na..

Annie: haan, lekin suvreen ko jitna apne mom n dad k saath acha lagega uthana hostel mein nai lagega..so hum log bhi maan gaye…

UV: so tum log wahi ruk ne wale ho?

Annie: nai yaar, lekin aunty ne kaha hai khana khake jao, so we'll wait till next 2 hours..

UV: acha! Sun zara topper ka address bata..

Annie: (surprised) suvreen ka?

UV: haan q?

Annie: actually uske mom n dad purane khyalaton k hai..so agar tum usse milne aaye toh woh log shock ho jayenge..i hope you know wat I mean!!

UV: (thought for a while) toh bhi tu de..

Annie: ok! (and she told him suvreen's address)

UV: ok! Thanks yaar!!!

Annie: no problem!

UV: waise topper ksi hai?

Annie was abt to ans him when suvreen asked her

Suvreen: annie kiska phone hai? Itne der se phone pe chipki hui hai..kahi ANISH ne toh phone nai kiya?? ( and aft completing her sentence she was shock to her death)

(Here UV was happy, he heard topper's voice)

Annie: (angry yet shock) suvreen!!

UV: kya hua?

Annie: ek min!

Mumma: anish? (punjabi accent) ye anish kaun hai , tumhara bhai?

Annie: bhai?? Nai nai aunty..

Suvreen: anisha, mumma woh hum sab ne uska short form, matlab pet name anish rakha hai..iski best friend hai..

(come on guys agar suvreen UV ko ladki bana sakti hai, toh anish q nai?)

annie n naro: ji ji aunty!

Mumma: acha acha..theek hai..usse mera hi bolna..!

Annie: ji!

Suvreen: annie chal ab aaja! Bas na abhi..

Annie: bas 2 min!

Suvreen: (glared at her)

Annie: please!!!!!

Suvreen: 5in, par jaldi..

Annie: haan baba..(and she continued talking with UV) hmm..ab bolo..

UV: topper ko kya hua hai?

Annie: kuch nai, pagal hai woh!!

UV: so toh hai..

Annie: UV, sun na hum baad mein baat karte hai na..suvreen mujhe bula rahi hai…please??

UV: oyye theek hai yaar…please math bol..chal bye…

Annie: byeee..!! (and she kept her phone) bol!! (she sat beside suvreen n naro..)

Mumma: mein khana laga du??

Annie: ok aunty!!!

Mumma: theek hai..(and left)

Annie: suvreen, tune toh marwa hi diya tha..anish kehene ki kya jarurat thi?

Suvreen: SORRY na baba!! (and suddenly started to cough)

Annie: suvreen!!! (she rubbed suvreen's back..naro gave her water) le paani pi le..

Suvreen: (drank water) mein theek hu yaar..annie woh m

Naro: shhh!!! Tu aaram kar!

Suvreen: (rolled her eyes) mein theek hu naro!! Waise kisa phone tha annie?

Annie: UV ka..

Suvreen: Yuvraj?? Usne tujhe call q kiya?

Annie: teri halat puchne, I mean tu theek hai k nai, tujhe hosh aaya k nai..ye sab puchne

Suvreen: usse ye sab q janna hai? (confusingly)

Annie was abt to tell her when she got a msg 4m UV

UV, "annie, topper ko ye math batana k tune mujhe uske ghar ka address diya hai..please!!".

Annie read it n replied,

Annie, "don't worry, I'll not tell her".

UV read it n replied thanks

Annie: any time..cya!!

UV: hmm

In mean while naro told suvreen everything…

Suvreen: kya???? (she was shocked) yuvraj ne mere liye ye sab kiya??

Annie: haan!!!

Suvreen: lekin q?

Annie: qki woh teri care karta hai isliye..simple!!

Naro: exactly, bechara kitna dar gaya tha…

Annie: I know!

Suvreen: dara? Woh dara kyu tha?

Annie: qki tu behosh thi na, ek min

Suvreen, naro: kya?

Annie: tu has (smile) q rahi thi?

Suvreen: kab?

Naro: jab tu behosh thi tab!!

Suvreen: pata nai, shayad Tultuli aur baby ko sapne mein dekha hoga..( come on guys like I said abv..she is suvreen..THE suvreen guggal she can imagine anything..lolzz)

Annie n Naro kept looking at her in shock : kya suvreen??

Mumma: chalo ladkiyon khana laga diya hai..

Annie: naro, tu yahi ruk, mein ek min mein aati hu..!

Naro: ok!

Annie: (went out) aunty!

Mumma: ji annie beta?

Annie: kya hum mera matlab hai…mein aur naro, suvreen k saat andar beth kar kha sakte hai?

Mumma: (was touched by annie's request) jarur beta..ek min! mein suvreen ka khana lagva deti hu..

Annie: ji!

Mumma n annie together entered suvreen's room n kept all 3 plates on the table n mumma left with a smile..

Naro: acha hua joh tune khana andar khane ki sochi!

Annie: hmm..chalo khana khate hai..bahot bhuk lagi hai!

Suvreen: ok!

(and they started to eat their dinner, they fed each other, talked giggled, laughed n this way they completed their dinner..)

Annie n Naro hugged suvreen tightly…

Annie: suvreen, chal hum abhi chalte hai…kal phirse milne aayenge…

Naro: haan…suvreen apna khyal rakhna..

Suvreen: ok!! Byee!!

Nannie: byeee…(and they left)

Ok guys do comment n thanks 4 reading..n plzz forgive me for any grammatical mistakes made by me..

Edited by Pradnya55patilP - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
awesomly written pradanya...😊
i luved it plzz tell me wen u pdate next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so cute frndship...
loved dere frndship...
continue...
wn wil u update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
tat s frndshp...d last few lines showd annies frndshp...awsum update yaar..tanx 4 d pm...yuvi will cum to her house na?if so dn it will b more awsum
viratanushka thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
@ shilpatv i'll update the next part tomorrow or day aft tomorrow...anyways thanks alot dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww such a cute update:)...wese teri suvi badi dumb h yar!!topper ko samjh ni aa rhi hmare romeo ke dil ki baat..so sad...chalo shayad nxt ud mein samjh jaye...waitin 4 hr tube light to light up;)...lots of love...keep updating...nd pm-ing:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Its reely Gud..plz update often...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
plz update d next part..Awesome update cant wait to know about UV's entry in suvreen's house..:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was awsum yaar 👍🏼
Plz pm me weheve u update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
cute update...the threesome best frnds...
n yuvi toh address tak pahunch gaya..kahin khidki se toh kamre nhi aa jayega..lol...
awesome update...n thnxxx 4 the scrap :D

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