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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ tani18 , shilpatv , kamalapushpa , loveangel21 , madeenhaN , shimolina , zenia n vampyrgirlricha thankyou guys...today i cant pm anyone sorry for that..coz m not feeling well..i cant seat in front of my pc for much time so just updated the next part i hope u guys r not angry..thanks again so here is the next part..i hope u guys ike it..n one more thing this is a short update...sorry for that..but i'll try to update a big one tomorrow..

part 4

Nannie: byeee!!! (and they left)

Aft few mins suvreen sensed someone was staring at her..and her parents entered her room

Mumma: haiy mera bacha!!

Suvreen: mein theek hu, mumma!!

Pappa: aaj aapki mumma aapke saath hi soyengi..

Suvreen: pappa mein theek hu..

Pappa: ase kse?

Suvreen: ase kse kya pappa?? ( and shook her head in a NO)

Pappa: (understood it) acha theek hai

Suvreen: (confusely) kya?

Pappa: mein ek shart pe manunga ke tu theek hai..

Suvreen: (nervously) kya?

Pappa: lovely ji

Mumma: (gave her a glass of water) ye le

Pappa: tujhe ye pina hai!

Suvreen: bas? Sirf paani? Us mein kya hai, mumma dijiye! (and she forward her hand)

Pappa: ( kept 2-3 tablets) ye le lovely ji ab paani dijiye!!!

Suvreen's face dropped

Suvreen: nai mein dawaiyan nai lungi

Pappa: suvreen, dawai le le na, tu mera acha bacha hai na..

Suvreen: hmm..(yes)

Mumma: toh le

Suvreen: ummhmm..(no)

Mumma: (strictly) suvreen!!

Suvreen: (shocked) hmm? (she questioned)

Mumma: mu khol!! Aur 5 sec k andar ye dawai le warna!!!

Suvreen: (smiled stupidly)

Suvreen: mumma aur pappa jabhi mein bimaar padti hu toh tension mein aa jaate hai…pata nai q?? aur jab mein dawai lene se mana kar deti hu toh mujhe darane k liye jhoota natak, dhamki ye sab dete hai..lekin mein ohir bhi nai manti…par pappa k baate sab change kar deta hai….isliye toh kehte hai..maa-baap k bina life impossible hai..i love u mumma, I love u pappa 😃

Suvreen: (smiling stupidly)

Pappa: suvreen hum jaante hai k tu ye baat achi tarha se janti hai k hum warna k aage kuch keh aur nahi kar pate hai!

Suvreen: (shook her head in acceptance with a sweet yet mischievious smile)

Pappa: lekin, agar tune dawai nai li, toh tujhe theek kse lagega haan?? (he went near suvreen and wispered in her ears not letting mumma come to know anything abt it) toh tumhari mumma tumhe bed se uthne, friends se milne, mobile pe baat karne, tv dekne aur padhne nai dengi..

Suvreen's: (face were giving diff diff reactions and at the last one she felt reaaalllyyy happy but she controlled her feeling)

Pappa: kha le na bacha!!!

Suvreen: (opened her mouth and her mother fed her the medicines)

Pappa: ye hui na baat!!! Chalo beta ab so jaoo!!

Suvreen: ok pappa

Pappa: good night!!

Suvreen: good night pappa, good night mumma

Mumma: good night

And her parents left…suvreen slowly got up from her bed and locked her room, she then went inside the washroom n washed her face and came out…she wiped her face with the towel n stood near the window looking out and was hell shocked to see someone staring and smiling idiotically at her….she was abt to scream when the person covered her mouth n signalled her not to scream

Suvreen: (glared at the person and nodded) hmmumm

Person: kya?

Suvreen hit the persons hand

Person: ahh!! (and jumped in)

Suvreen: YUVRAJ, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??

Yuvraj: tujhse milne aaya hu…

Suvreen stared at him and here UV was checking out her room

Yuvraj: waise tera room toh kaafi bada aur acha hai!!

Suvreen: hmm..

Yuvraj: waise ek aur baat bolu?

Suvreen: jse ki agar meine tumhe mana kiya toh tum mujhe tumhara sawaal nai puchoge!! Pucho!!

Yuvraj: tu badi nautanki hai!!

Suvreen: (shocked) nautanki?? Kaun mein? Tum..

Yuvraj: (cuts her) shh!! (and went close to her making her walk backward and finally fall @ sit on her bed) aur nai toh kya?

Suvreen: matlab?

Yuvraj: dawaiya q nai le rahi thi??

Suvreen: oh! woh mujhe dawaiyan pasand nai hai..

Yuvraj: tu k

Suvreen: (cuts him) ek min, tumhe mere ghar ka pata kse mila???

Yuvraj: woh darasal meine Annie se pucha

Suvreen: kya?? (shocked) Annie ne tumhe mera address diya??

Yuvraj: Haan, q?? ( and aft few sec he realised wat he had done) (oh teri!!!!!!!!! Cheeteh ye tune kya kar diya?? Pagal, ghada, bevakuf!! Tune khud ne hi annie ko mana kiya tha topper ko batane se aur khud ne hi bol diya?? N was hell shocked n somewhere even afraid)

now wat will he do??

Hey guys I know this is a short update..m really sorry..but here it is..plzz read n enjoy…n once again 4give me for any of the grammatical mistakes I made while writing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chalo humara cheetah at last suvi ke ghar aahi gaya 😉 😆
eagerly witin 4 d next update 😍
plz pm d next time 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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when vil u update d next?????????😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute update...😍

wil b waitin for ur next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow dear it was sooo good
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Hey pradnya nyccc part dear... Plzwrite next part soon... I m waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Hey pranya nycc part ... Write next part soon dear... Dear wen u ryt next plz send PM
Edited by muneera_badar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awesome...i just read all the 4 parts...and wanna read more...plz update...as soon as possible..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ shimolina , shiplatv , sahashrabadi22 , zenia , muneera_badar n nancyB thanks alot guys..m updating the next part today.. i hope u guys njoy it..FC

part 5

Suvreen: (cuts him) ek min, tumhe mere ghar ka pata kse mila???

Yuvraj: woh darasal meine Annie se pucha

Suvreen: kya?? (shocked) Annie ne tumhe mera address diya??

Yuvraj: Haan, q?? (and aft few sec he realised wat he had done) (oh teri!!!!!!!!! Cheeteh ye tune kya kar diya?? Pagal, ghada, bevakuf!! Tune khud ne hi annie ko mana kiya tha topper ko batane se aur khud ne hi bol diya?? N was hell shocked n somewhere even afraid)

Suvreen: annie n tumhe mera address?? (annie asa kse kar sakti hai?? Kahi woh yuvraj aur mujhe phirse?? Nai usne mujhe promise kiya tha..usse pata hai mere mumma pappa ko agar pata chala k raat ko mere kamre mein ek ladka aaya tha toh..nai nai suvreen jarur is gadhe yuvraj ki hi galti hogi..annie asa nai kar sakti..ya phir??)

N she looked confused

Yuvraj: oyye, tere dimaag mein kya chal raha hai ye mein bahot ache je janta hu..lekin asa kuch nai hai…!!

Suvreen: (matlab annie ne hi isse mera address diya hai?? Lekin q?? woh toh meri best friend hai na, toh phir usne asa q kiya?? ya phir koi aur baat hai..ye yuvraj mujhe confuse karne ki koshish kar raha hai..)

Yuvraj: kya ho gaya??

Suvreen: tumhe kse pata mere dimaag mein kya chal raha hai?? ( curiously)

Yuvraj: q ki tere feelings tere chere pe saaf dikhayi deti hai..

Suvreen: acha??

Yuvraj: hmm..aur sun…annie ki koi galti nai hai..woh darasal..(agar topper ko meine bataya k mujhe usse milna tha, is liye meine annie se iska address liya toh acha nai lagega…aur usse galat fehemi ho gayi toh? Cheeteh kuch soch,soch,soch,soch,soch,soch kya karu?)

Suvreen: kaha kho gaye?

Yuvraj: umm..ab..woh..darasal meine umm..nai, (stared at suvreen) woh doctor ne..haan, haan woh apne shekhawat sir ne mujhe tere family ko inform karne kaha tha..toh isliye meine annie ko kaha inform karne k liye..jab woh tere pappa ko call kar rahi thi..toh hum sab saath mein the..aur jab naro address column bhar rahi thi toh usne annie se pucha aur annie ne gad badai mein jor se tere address bola…joh meine sun liya.. (he then blinked his eyes n wiped his sweat n said) haan..(and smiled confusly)

Suvreen: kya??? (confusly) lekin ase kse ho sakta hai??

Yuvraj: (ab kya ho gaya??) kya??

Suvreen: peheli baat colg mein address, naro ko address bharne ki kya jarurat thi?? Aur dusri baat naro mera address janti hai..infact annie humesha bhul jati hai..tum jhoot bol rahe ho na??

Yuvraj: nai mein q jhoot bolunga?? Woh darasal..(ab kya batau??) colg mein naya rule start hua hai..ki students ka address shekhawat sir ko dena hai..aur naro dari thi na..toh is liye shayad tera address bhul gayi hogi..

Suvreen: matlab annie ne tumhe jaan muchkar mera address nai diya??

Yuvraj: (na bol de, na bol de)

Suvreen: yuvraj (with questioning face)

Yuvraj: na..usne mujhe tera address unknowingly de diya..

Suvreen: (suvreen tu ghadi hai, stupid hai tu, idiot!! Tune apne hi best friend pe shak kiya?? Kse??)

Yuvraj: tu galat nai hai..toh khud ko gali q de rahi hai??

Suvreen: (SHOCKed) tumhe kse pata?

Yuvraj: woh sab chod…bas ek baat yaad rakhna..Annie teri best friend hai, thi aur humesha rahegi..samjhi??

Suvreen: (had tears in her eyes) hmm..

Yuvraj: oyye tu ro q rahi hai?? (worriedly) ro math!! (and wiped her tears [ofcourse not intentionlly])

Suvreen: ( was still crying) meine..(hiccups)…uspar..(hiccups)..kse??(hiccups)..

Yuvraj: (sat besides her) shh! Topper meri taraf dekh!!

Suvreen: (looked at him) hmm..

Yuvraj: (ye tune kya kiya yuvraj?? Tujhe topper se milne hi nai aana chahiye tha..ab sach bol de cheeteh..phir topper ka faisla joh ho..tu mane ga..lekin 2 doston ko alag nai karega!!)

Suvreen: yuvraj??

Yuvraj: topper woh darasal..annie ko meine hi tera address pucha tha..usne toh mana bhi kiya tha..lekin..mujhe tujhe sirf ek bar dekhna tha..isliye..mein

Suvreen: (shocked) kya?? Tumhari himmat kse hui yuvraj?? Tumne annie aur mere bich galat fehemi paida karne ki koshish ki..

Yuvraj: nai topper..

Suvreen: abhi issi waqt yahan se chale jao..

Yuvraj: topper meri baat toh sun..

Suvreen: aur kabhi bhi mujhe apna chehera math dikhana..chale jao..

Yuvraj: topper please meri baat sun le..

Suvreen: (dragged him out of her room n opened the main door) just go away..

Yuvraj: topper, me

Suvreen: (with tears) I hate u yuvraj..(and closed the door on uv's face..)

Yuvraj: topper!!

PS: plzz guys dont be angry on me aft reading this part..i know most of u will be in shock...but just wait till the next part is updated..n guys tomorrow or day aft tomorrow whenever i update the next part is the last part..then my ss will get over..so have patience..tc

Edited by Pradnya55patilP - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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d ss was a bit shocking
But I knoe ther is sumtin gr8 2 cum up 😉
Dekte hai ki ab humara cheetah apni princes ko kaise manata hai 😳 🥱

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