Teri meri Kahani: KriYam SS* UPDATED CH7, pg12

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Faeeqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

OMG Pooja!! This chapter was too hot and romantic! I could imagine everything, I'm blushing too much! ☺️ I don't think Krishna even needs this challenge lol! They can't keep their hands off each other! I love how you write your romantic Kriyam scenes, can't wait for more. Also love how Yuvaani is rooting for Krishna in this. Loved it! Can't wait for the shopping date!

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Shiney19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Wow Pooja, I loved this!!! I have actually wanted to see a scene of Sayyam in a towel and Krishna walking in on him! 😳 it was so romantic and passionate. You describe everything so well, I could visualise it all! Loved it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Rockstr897

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Im so in love with this,i cudnt help bt read it over and over again...ua writing skills are too good!!! I so badly want to read sayyams pov,cant wait fr ua next update..

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itsAveesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Already feeling goosebumps... U are stealing my heart how amazing writer you are! Love the way you write these romantic scenes and the most important thing krishna is making the first move 😳 I couldn't get over it.. Please write more I'm waiting for the next part... 😉😛

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Ok..Wait a minute..Did they jst kiss!! Twice!! R u sure u don't want me to die blushing??

M very excited for d Goa trip..

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Wow thank you for this chapter di! It was sooo hot and soo romantic, everybody in the house must be wondering why i was smiling at my phone screen for 15 mins straight! You are a magical writer, when i post episodes you never fail to send me a comment complimenting my writing and make me feel over the moon, but im absolutely nothing compared to you di! Thank you xxx

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: somewhatwriter
Wow thank you for this chapter di! It was sooo hot and soo romantic, everybody in the house must be wondering why i was smiling at my phone screen for 15 mins straight! You are a magical writer, when i post episodes you never fail to send me a comment complimenting my writing and make me feel over the moon, but im absolutely nothing compared to you di! Thank you xxx

What a surprise! haha WHERE have you been!? I hope you're well. Waiting for you to update!! And Thank you for such a sweet comment!! 🤗I like how you call me Di 😳

ohGod, you are being modest! Writing is definitely your thing. Sometimes its good to accept the compliments, doesn't mean you're over confident. 😊

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Faeeqa
OMG Pooja!! This chapter was too hot and romantic! I could imagine everything, I'm blushing too much! ☺️ I don't think Krishna even needs this challenge lol! They can't keep their hands off each other! I love how you write your romantic Kriyam scenes, can't wait for more. Also love how Yuvaani is rooting for Krishna in this. Loved it! Can't wait for the shopping date!

Originally posted by: Shiney19
Wow Pooja, I loved this!!! I have actually wanted to see a scene of Sayyam in a towel and Krishna walking in on him! 😳 it was so romantic and passionate. You describe everything so well, I could visualise it all! Loved it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you so much Faeeqa and Shaz! You guys are always complimenting and supportive. I'm waiting for both of you to update!! Embarrassed

I honestly didn't expect this chapter to turn out like this LOL I'm quite surprised myself but I'm so glad you guys liked it because I feel weird making KriYam completely different from the TV..

And btw Shaz, a funfact about me: I've been told that I have some serious psychic powers LOL.

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Rockstr897
Im so in love with this,i cudnt help bt read it over and over again...ua writing skills are too good!!! I so badly want to read sayyams pov,cant wait fr ua next update..

Thank you! 😳 It means a lot when you comment, especially when you're a Newbie and have limited posts per day. Sure, I will add more of Saiyyam's POV in the next 2 chapters. 😳

I will update on Sunday 😊

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: itsAveesha
Already feeling goosebumps... U are stealing my heart how amazing writer you are! Love the way you write these romantic scenes and the most important thing krishna is making the first move 😳 I couldn't get over it.. Please write more I'm waiting for the next part... 😉😛

Aveesha, your comment really made me smile. Thanks!!

Yes, I really want to show a stronger Krishna.. But I will also show more of Saiyyam's POV in the next few chapters 😊

Will update on Sunday!