KriYam Os:'The Holi Night'

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Lovveeed it...

Thnx a lot 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Ohhh..U all made my Holi yaar..It was so... I'm falling short of words to praise u..Do write more of Kriyyam stories..N I luv d fact dat u add more n more romance in your stories..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anjali33
Ohhh..U all made my Holi yaar..It was so... I'm falling short of words to praise u..Do write more of Kriyyam stories..N I luv d fact dat u add more n more romance in your stories..

thnx a lot dear4 dis precious comment.

N why can I do.. Kriyam is so hot dat.. I can't stop myself 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: -DZ-
beautiful os

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Posted: 8 years ago

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woahhh. Girl! This is so intense! You're killing me!! One doesn't need to be a writer, imagination is enough to tell the story! I was so lost into KriYam's world. This was a full romance and masti holi night. Wish we could get some romance like this in the actual drama too.

Welldone and do write more!!

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Originally posted by: Poojaa_P
woahhh. Girl! This is so intense! You're killing me!! One doesn't need to be a writer, imagination is enough to tell the story! I was so lost into KriYam's world. This was a full romance and masti holi night. Wish we could get some romance like this in the actual drama too.
Welldone and do write more!!

Thnx a lot dear pooja 4 did lovely comment.. Bt u know wht.. Ur os made me write dis since dat had sent vibes 2 me... 😳

Thats why I didn't describe the kiss scenes since I was so amazed did ur kiss scenes..

Bt yeah again thnx a loot...

I found there r 2 many mistakes bt m 2 lazy 2 correct them 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: laughingpearls
awesome one shot loved it

Thnx a loot 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: __shibani__
Awesome!

Thnx shibu 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Metaphor.

Thnx a lot dear pooja 4 did lovely comment.. Bt u know wht.. Ur os made me write dis since dat had sent vibes 2 me... 😳
Thats why I didn't describe the kiss scenes since I was so amazed did ur kiss scenes..

Bt yeah again thnx a loot...

I found there r 2 many mistakes bt m 2 lazy 2 correct them 😆

Aww I'm happy that you wrote it and it really was amazing. KriYam can make everyone creative.

Haha I was surprised your gutter mind only stopped at Kiss..I was expecting more from you 😆

I hope you write more! 🤗

I might write a SS..but haven't planned properly. Any suggestions, pm mee!

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