KriYam Os:'The Holi Night'

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How guys.. The holi went well? Yeah, bt something was missing since it was widout kriyam, ri8?
So at the holi ni8 m wid dis kriyam OS named "the holi night". Bt guys plz do consider it as jst an imagination, not a story since m not a writer. Its just dat I couldn't stop myself from writing. Its a long one so have patience(i hope so). N its not proof read so pardon me 4 mistakes.

-mugdha




The Holi Night

"Thnx a lot lot God 4 saving my daddu 2day. Only bcoz of Your blessings dat baba n baby r finally thrown out of the house, all r so happy n now is able 2 celebrate holi. Bt God plz bless my parents also.." She was praying.

One pair of eyes was staring at her wid tenderness n may b wid luv. N the lips had a slight smile luking at his beauty from behind.

Bt suddenly the expression of the eyes transformd in2 angry ones. How could she stand there lyk dis? She had bunnd her hair n as a result her whole back was xposed except the 1 inch part which was covered by the single dori holding her 2 short blouse.

Its not new 2 him 2 notice her everyday bt 2day he had noticed her inch 2 inch since she was luking lyk a fairy in her white lehenga. In the morning, while she was unable 2 tie the dori, he was the 1 who had tied it. The touch of her bare back had sent current through out his body n she also seemd no different since he could feel her breathing heavily.

Though he was vry possessive abt his dear wife, he had let her go out in dat 'explosively exposive lehenga' since she had covered her front wid a white dupatta n back wid her silky here.

He can understand dat may b she was feeling suffocated after the hectic day of exposing baba n getting back her daddu. N dats why, though his daddu wanted all 2 celebrate holi at least at the ni8 n all were celebrating, she was standing far away just praying 2 god. N may b only bcoz of the suffocation she had bunnd her hair wid a hairclip so dat she could get some cold breeze. Bt how can she b so careless. Some1 may see her lyk dat. She was his n only his. He can't let some1 else luk at her beauty.. It was only his ri8.. It was only n only his ri8 2 get attracted 2 her..

N he could have simply gone 2 her n asked her cover her back. Bt he being he can't do dat na.. It doesn't suit his personality. He had 2 do dat in a 'tedha' way.

He got some red color in her hand, went 2wards her n applied it on her whole face frm behind.
"Happy holi, Krishna," he said wid a smirk.

Krishna turned around 2 see her husband, sayyam laughing at her.
"Ri8, u r xcactly luking lyk a chudail who has jst drunk human blood."

Meanwhile he had already removd her clip n as a result her back was covered. N krishna hadn't evn noticd. Bt he had noticd something wrong. Krishna's eyes were getting teary. He bcame tensd.

"Hey, wht happnd? Tumhe bura laga dat I calld u chudail?"

"Sayyam," she shouted n held his collr tightly. Since the loud music was playing, none saw them. Else wht would happen 2 his ego?

"U nvr respect my feelings.. It was 2 much"

Nw he was puzzld. He didn't know why she was behaving lyk dis at dis sli8 mattr.

"Krishna,hey,r u OK?"

"No sayyam..."

Nw she was crying loudly.

"Ok m m.." He wanted 2 say sry bt his ego stoppd him.

"Sayyam, my fathr had died on holi. N yeh janne k baad se I hav nvr playd holi. Bt u.. As always.. "

She was crying vry loudly. He was 2 shockd 2 react. Hadn't he already hurt her enough? Nw only he had 2 do it. He was feeling lyk ti8ly hugging her, kissing her tears n apologize 2 her. Bt again his ego made him silent.

Krishna turnd around 2 go still crying as she thou8 he was hopeless. She so badly wantd sayyam 2 console her bt really he was hopeless.

She was going when...

"Bt u got ur another father back in holi only."

Krishna turnd back. Sayyam stood close 2 her n hold her hands in his.

"Yes Krishna. U got ur daddu back 2day. Wht would happn if u had lost him also. Krishna, u always got fatherly luv from him. Just think unlucky ones lyk me.. Krishna(He gave a sigh) Shouldn't u thank ur god by celebratig the day?"

Till now she was just luking her so changd husband. He had so much care 4 her in his eyes. His each word giving her confidence n their fingers intertwined 2gether giving her assurance. Yeah, finally his heart had defeated his ego. N she quickly understud wht he was saying.

She couldn't bt hug her quickly. N her eyes found new tears of newly found feelings. Neither his eyes could escape the falling water. A diffrnt kind of comfort tied thm.

May b after a long tym whn Krishna was breaking the hug, Sayyam understud dat he was also hugging him quickly.

Bt Krishna didn't even giv him the tym 2 luk anywhere bt her, since she had already taken the plate of green color in her hand n pourd the whole of it on sayyam.
She was laughing.

"Wht the heck krishna?"

"Wht? U wanted me 2 celebrate. Toh aab bhukto. U r really luking lyk a zombie. Oh, actually dis is ur original face na? Ha ha"

"Isss.. Meri annkh mein chala gaya hain. Do something"

N she got worried. "Oh shit! OK lemme bring something.."

And... Sayyam poured the full bucket of colorful water on her. Now he was laughing.

"Sayyam," she frownd.

"U can't defeat Sayyam.. Looser," he started running.

"But u cheated," she said running after him.

"Oh plz. Everything is fair in luv n war. If u dare thn mujhe pakad k toh dikhayo," He said still running n krishna running after him.

"Then see how I murder u 2ni8.."

N the music started wid their laughter chasing each other.
Thus they reached between all the other members of the family.

"Itna majaa kyon aa raha gain
Tune hawaa mein bhaang milaya"

All, especially suhani n yuvraj were surprised seeing Krishna happily playing holi bt they were happy seeing KriYam lyk dis.

"Doogna nasha kyon ho rahaa gain
Aankhon se meetha tune khilaya"

She tried 2 put colors on sayyam bt it fell on dadi n Sayyam again laughd at her while dadi frownd.

"Oh teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi"

Sayyam danced wid yuvani n rags n they laughd.

"Manchali chal kaise nawabi ho gayi"

Now she tuk Bhabhna n suhani's hand n danced wid thm.

He saw Krishna getting jealous since he was dancing wid every lady of the house bt her.

"Toh.."

Sayyam gave Krishna a mischevious luk.

"Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
To seedhi saadhi chhodi sharabi ho gayi"

Sayyam finally went 2 Krishna, lifted her in his arms n muvd around.

"Haan jeans pehenke jo tune mara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan ki bhabhi ho gayi"

Sayyam n Krishna were dancing lyk a mad couple joined by all the members of the house except dadi n yuvaan.

"Haan bole re zamaana kharabi ho gayi
Haan bole re zamaana kharabi ho gayi"

Suddenly Krishna could not find Sayyam. He had gone somewhere. She was searching 4 him while others were busy in dancing. "Where is he?" she thought when she saw a shadow behind the outhouse n went there quickly.

"Sayyam.. sayyam.. It's u here na?"

All on a sudden somebody pulled her dupatta n it fell on the ground. She was about 2 scream when a hand touched her bare waist from behind her. The touch was comfortable n she had no doubt dat it was none bt 'him'.

His touch again sent electricity throughout her body. He got closer n got comfortably uncomfortable. He put his another hand in the other side of her waist n pulled her more colser 2 him.

Her back touchd his front. Only her hair n his shirt were the hindrance between their bodies 2 melt 2gether.

Sayyam's hands were full of color which traveled the path from her waist through her armpits 2 her hands. May b the color was the symbol of the new colors of their hearts.

Krishna was now breathing heavily. She was getting unable 2 stand on her feets as they were weakening. So she leand her head on his shoulder giving all her wight on him bt he didn't mind.

His hot breath was being embraced by her exposed back which made her hear beat even more.

One of his hands again touched her waist while the other intertwined its finger wid hers. His hand reached 2 her xposed belly frm waist n made unknown patterns. She felt lyk the already existing butterflies of her stomach has just given birth 2 infinity numbers of butterflies dat were troubling her 2 much.

She could feel color filling her navel as it was touchd by one of his fingers. She felt goosebumps throughout her body. His hand started walking up n it traveled the way from her navel 2 her cleavage. Thnk god he didn't stop his hand there else she would have just died there. His hand kept going upwards crossing her neck n stopped near her ear.

The whole sequence gav so much vibe all through her body dat she didn't evn realized dat till now she was clutching his shirt so ti8ly. She realizd it whn he turned her slowly 2 face him. Again he pulld her by waist 2 increase the closeness.

She finally gained courage 2 say,"Tumne bhaang pi rakhi hain kya? How can u change so much all on a sudden?" He laughed giving a smirk,"Wht bhaang? Ok then.. U should also taste the bhaang.." His smirk was enough 2 tell her dat he was not at all drunk. Saying dat he leaned closer 2 her. His fingers touched her soft lips dat had gained several colors.

His hot breath were reaching closer n closer 2 her lips. She felt she would just die there. Her cheeks went more red n breath became faster. She closed her eyes out of shyness. She just wanted 2 feel the moment her heart out.

"Thank God. Finally Yuvan is gone," saying dat he moved apart 2 give Krishna a big shock.

"Kya bola tumne? Yuvan?" She asked..

N his reply,"Haan, actually..."

...
Flashback:

While all were busy in dancing n sayyam was escaping from krishna..

Yuvan:Tu krishna ka peecha kyon nahi chodta?

Sayyam:Not me. She is following me. Usse lagta hain ki she can win over me by putting colors.

Yuvan: Shut up Sayyam. M not talking abt dat. Listen, tum aur krishna baas naam ki pati-patni ho. U don't luv her. N yeah, baby is thrown out. N I think u should leave krishna now. I can b a much better husband of her than u. I know maine galti ki thi. Bt now I want 2 repent. I luv her. N I k w dat she still luvs me. Tum donoka toh koyi rishta hi nahi hain..

Till now Sayyam was just listening. He was so angry dat he would kill him there. Bt he kept quiet bcoz he didn't want 2 ruin her mother's happiness again by showing the cheap though of her ladla son.

Sayyam answered calmy,"Sun, hamara rishta alag hain."

Yuvan:Tune ek din usse kya khush kar diya aur tum dono ka rishta bhi baan gaya?!

Sayyam(again controling his amger):Come wid me. Lemme show u ki mera aur Krishna ka kya rishta hain..

(Flashback ends)
...

"Yeah, he was standing there till now. See, how dare he?" said sayyam.

Thud.. Krishna slappd him hard.

"How dare u, Sayyam?"

Sayyam was 2 shocked 2 react. He didn't know wht his fault was.

"U did all dis jst 2 make Yuvan realize? U uncovered me n did all this? Chhiii.. U r so cheap. I hate u sayyam I hate u."

She was crying terribly. N she started leaving.

"But Krishna"

"Jst leave me alone"

"Ok fine go from here. Jab bhi main badal ne ki koshish karta hoon, sochta hoon ki apni dimmag ki nahi dil ki soonoo, tab hi aisa hota hain. Isse accha toh pehle hi thik tha. Jst go frm here n nvr expect me 2 return 2 u."

Saying dat he left leaving a crying Krishna.

...

It has been hours. He was sitting at the roof of the house. His eyes were red. Bt dat couldn't bring out the water dat needed 2 come out of is eyes. He jst stared at the sky unable 2 say something.

The sky had understood his pain. It was lightening lyk his heart. N the fast wind moving everything of the nature was symbolizing the numerous questions coming 2 his mind.

Suddenly he felt her presence. Yeah he could sense her. N only the feeling of her presence changed his mind, his eyes searches her her n his heart spoke,"Krishna?"

Bt he found her no where. N so he again sat on the ground of the roof dis tym closing his eyes.

All on a sedden, He felt two hands hugging him ti8 from behind. He had no doubt dat it was his krishna. He felt his neck going wet so she was crying. He just lukd behind 2 see a still crying krishna.

N he was no more angry. he just spoke his heart out bcoz he couldn't help himself pacifying her,"Krishna, plz plz don't cry. Listen, really m not dat cheap lyk my father. I had been covering u all the tym so dat yuvan doesn't get a glimps of u. N trust me..."

He couldn't finished the words as his lips were embraced by her lips. Yeah, she was kissing him closing her eyes, clutching his hair. He was 2 surprised at 1st bt thn adjusted her properly n kissd her back. It was a sweet kiss of "bilief"

She broke the kiss. Sayyam lukd at her wid questioning eyes.

"Sayyam, I didn't call u cheap 4 dat. I knw u care 4 me n mst b covering me. I was just angry bcoz I thought u did all dis just 2 prove our relationship 2 some1 else. Bt thn ur words made me think again. N now u proved dat, u biliv it or not, but U LOVE ME, U WANT ME n U NEED ME, just the way I DO SO. dats why u couldn't stop urself from going so further evn in front of someother person, u couldn't stop urself pacifying me inspite of being so angry n couldn't stop kissing me 2 give me the bilief dat u'll always b mine... I LUV U,SAYYAM, I LUV U SO MUCH."

Till now he was just listening 2 her wid teary eyes. Bt the last words gave him the greatest happiness of his lyf. He didn't knw how bt he had fallen in luv ve...ry deeply. Now he didn't mind her luving him so much lyk he used 2 do. He is of course capable of her luv. Her luv has made him capable of dat.

N so in response, he kissd her deeply.. Very deeply, whichd turned out 2 b a very passionate one. N the sky just added 2 the beauty of luv by pouring the rain of luv on them. While kissing he murmured, "I LUV U 2"

She was now above the cloud 9. She felt the world should just stop there.

They broke 2 get some air. Bt Sayyam didn't seem 2 leave her 2ni8. N she tuk the advantage of the situation. She unbuttond his shirt while kissing so dat he doesn't realize. Bcoz of the rain water, the color he had added 2 her skin was wet again. She somehow broke the kiss from her hungry husband n quickly hugged him who didn't even realize dat she was shirtless. He simply hugged her back.

Bt he felt a punch from her at his chest. "Ouch," he screamed. N she was laughing.

"See Sayyam. I won. I have colored u wid the holi color. U r a looser."

Now he realized dat he was sitting there shirtless n his body was filld wid colors. Bt he now he luvs 2 b defeated by her. Bt after all he is Sayyam. So he totally changed the topic.

Wid a big smirk,"Not bad haan. Acchi shuruwat hain. Making me shirtless? 2 check out my body??"

No, she didn't do dat in dis purpose n she was about 2 defend herself bt as soon as her eyes fell on her sexy six packs she was actually checking him out. N she actually was feeling shy n awkward.

Sayyam continued dramatically, "I love u, I want u, I need u... I can't stop myself from going so further." She started at him. N he gripped her by arms, made a husky voice n said,"U just said dat. N yeah, u also do so ri8?" Dat made her go insane n her heavy breathing started again.

He made themselves fall on the ground in a such a way dat they don't get hurt. Now she was lying on the floor and the deposited rain water was flowing under her while the new drops were rain were falling over her. N her dear husband was lying over her putting all his wei8.

"Sayyam, wht r u doing? Koyi..."

"Shhh... Koyi nahi aayega. All must hav slept."

"R u drunk? How can some1 change so much in just 1 day?"

"Dats bcoz m not some1, m UR SAYYAM"

"Bt Sayyam we may catch cold. Let's go 2 the rum now."

"No, we'll stay only here."

"Here?"

He was amazed by the questions of her dear wifey.. So he had 2 stay n do IT there only.

He giv her a smirk n again huskily, "yes,here only" n he kissed her again. Dis tym the kill was not comfortable lyk the previous ones. It was uncomfortably comfortable bcoz it was full of her want 4 her. His hands started touching all over her covered or uncovered skin. She felt lyk she would melt in no tym. Vibes spread through her veins n emotions spread though her soul.

Bt again she asked softly, "Sayyam, u r really not drunk na?"

He had already reached 2 her back n he opened the dori of her blouse.

"Yes I m drunk n now I want the most intoxicating drink of the world."

N the bliss of the ni8 started n continued till the sunrise. Then they went 2 their rum taking promise from the nature dat it will keep the secret dat THE HOLI NIGHT has made them ONE.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow what an amazing take on holi. Beautifully written and very well articulated. I am glad atleast in your version, you gave Krishna a nice sexy look. I honestly do not like her choice of Salwars in the show much as they seem so out of style.

Your one shot had everything from emotions and drama to romance and masti. Beautiful choice of song for holi festival and loved the way you described each scene and the lines of the song.

It is so refreshing to read your OS on Kriyam as the show is too busy to even show us one decent scene on them. I am so getting bored and tired of this baba storyline.

Thank you for taking the time to write this for us. It's simply amazing!
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Wow this is amazing! You described their love and passion so well! They want each other so much. You have described everything so well, especially their chemistry! They cant control themselves when they're around each other. We needed this at a time where we are not getting Kriyam scenes. This is seriously good! Please write more!
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Oh my goodness! 😳 This was so intense on romance and passion! All the emotions between them was described so well, I could imagine everything! I really enjoyed reading it and thank you for writing it, it was needed after not getting any Kriyam on holi. Hope you continue writing more on Kriyam!
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beautifully written...😊..i cud actually imagine all this...thnku...
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Originally posted by: Kiran1018

Wow what an amazing take on holi. Beautifully written and very well articulated. I am glad atleast in your version, you gave Krishna a nice sexy look. I honestly do not like her choice of Salwars in the show much as they seem so out of style.

Your one shot had everything from emotions and drama to romance and masti. Beautiful choice of song for holi festival and loved the way you described each scene and the lines of the song.

It is so refreshing to read your OS on Kriyam as the show is too busy to even show us one decent scene on them. I am so getting bored and tired of this baba storyline.

Thank you for taking the time to write this for us. It's simply amazing!


Thnx a looot dear 4 such an inspiring n lovely comment.

Yeah I know an os was much needed since all r tired of such suffocating drama.

N krishna would actually luk hot as I have imagined. N in sayyam's eyes she must b the sexiest,ri8?

Again thnx a lot dear 😃
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Thnx a lot dear 😃
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Originally posted by: Shiney19

Wow this is amazing! You described their love and passion so well! They want each other so much. You have described everything so well, especially their chemistry! They cant control themselves when they're around each other. We needed this at a time where we are not getting Kriyam scenes. This is seriously good! Please write more!


Thnx a lot dear 4 such a lovely comment .
Actually KriYam chemistry is so hot dat my writing just came out... ☺️
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Originally posted by: Faeeqa

Oh my goodness! 😳 This was so intense on romance and passion! All the emotions between them was described so well, I could imagine everything! I really enjoyed reading it and thank you for writing it, it was needed after not getting any Kriyam on holi. Hope you continue writing more on Kriyam!


Thnx a looot dear 4 ur lovely comment...

Its just kriyam's chemistry dat made me write did. I imagine so much things bt m 2 lazy. Bt did tym I couldnt stop myself 😳
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Originally posted by: divyaak123

beautifully written...😊..i cud actually imagine all this...thnku...


Thnx a lot.. N u r most welcome 😆

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