Tera Hone Laga Hoon (YuvAni SS)- part 8 on pg 7 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvanyuvani

Hi napshaj.. it was awesome.

. By yhe way .. u know me via tellyupdates.. im saraj \ shilpa...


Yup dear.. 😊
So how r u doing now?? 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Im fyn Napshaj.
Im in india nw..
Ill return to kwt on 29
After dat ill be active..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reminded me of DumbRaj..He thinks she wanna leave him..Dumbo he is😆Please continue..Enjoying it
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Reminded me of DumbRaj..He thinks she wanna leave him..Dumbo he is😆Please continue..Enjoying it


Really.. Hez DumbRaj.. Since the beginning of ssel, I have seen him standing like a dumbo in every situation.. 😛😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-4:


Its 6.45 pm. Suhani is in a dilemma whether to meet yuv or not. Yuv reaches the park with hope. But shez not there. Around 7.30, it begins to rain heavily all of a sudden. Suhani thinks if yuv is waiting for her then...

She calls sharad.
Sh- haan bhabhi, did u meet guru?
Su- is he still waiting for me? In the rains?
Sh- yes bhabhi. U didn't meet him?
Su (tensed)- nope. But I will go now.

Suhani rushes to meet yuvraj. Shez running in the rains as no vehicle could be seen. And reaches the park.
S- yu...yuvraj...
Yuvraj turns back and gives a sigh of relief on seeing her.
S- y r u doing this when u knew I didnt want to meet u?
Y- coz I knew u will come to meet me.
Suhani looks at him. They have an eyelock.
Suddenly she breaks it and asks him to say fast whatever he had to say.
Y- suhani, y did u go like this? Whats going on in ur mind?
S (looking down)- I just want peace. Thats all.
Y- suhani look at me and speak.
Suhani doesn't answer.
Y- ok fine. Let me say then. I wana apologise to u for...
Suhani interrupts- for u won't ever fall for me?
Yuvraj looks at her, confused.
Suhani continues- tell me something yuvraj, did I ever ask u to love me? Did I ever ask u to treat me as ur wife unwillingly?
Yuv- suhani why are u saying all these?
S- coz u have made fun of our relation. U dont even consider me as ur friend. U have contributed only ur sympathy towards me in our relation. This is my insult on face. U know very well that dadi has insulted me always, but I always ignored coz I had no expectations from her. But I had lil expectation from u. That u will always stand by me. Not once or twice, there had been many times when...i don't know y I felt that tum...tum bhi humse...
Yuvraj looks on with tears.
Suhani continues- and the very next moment, u brought me to reality, reminding me that we are friends. I was ok with it. But sympathy...i don't need it. Thats y I left coz i felt suffocated.

Yuvraj feels blank. He can't understand what had happened to her.
Y- u think I have such thoughts for u.
Suhani looks away.
Y- thats y u went to advocate kunj?
Suhani looks at him stunned.
After a short silence, suhani says- I'm leaving.
He holds her hand. She asks him to leave, but he doesn't. She gets angry and manages to get rid of his hold, and is about to leave when she hears something. She turns back to see yuv hitting his hand hard against a tree, due to which it was bleeding badly.

Suhani comes to him and takes his hand on hers.
Y- leave my hand and go wherever u want to go.
S- yuv its bleeding so...
Y- so what?? U must be getting late.
Suhani takes out a handkerchief and covers his wounds. Shez about to leave when yuv folds his hands and says- suhani, can u spend just a day more at birla house for me?
S- its not possible for me.
She turns.
Yuv falls on her feet with folded hands. Suhani is taken aback. He requests and she agrees.

YuvAni come back home. Pratima asks howz lata ji. They understand sharad must have lied. They say shez fine and proceed towards their room.

Suhani enters and yuvraj follows her. She turns on the light and finds the room decorated with balloons, flowers and their pics.

S- yuv...yuvraj wats all these?
Yuv comes close to her, holds her hands, makes her sit on the bed and he himself sits on the floor on his knees, holding her hands. Suhani feels uneasy. She thinks y is he behaving this way.

Y- suhani, plz. I wana share something with u. And now u will have to listen to me.
S- ok but wait. M coming.

She brings the first aid box. She takes his hand and does the bandaging. She looks at him while doing so, and sees hez already looking at her. She looks down and says- yuv m sorry. U got hurt coz of me. I wanted to go far away from u so that u can be happy. I know I am a burden on u and...
Yuv interrupts- suhani, its true that initially i used to feel pity for u and thats y i tried my best to keep u happy. But as time passed by, i got to know u better. I realised u'r an awesome person at heart. U have done a lot for me and my family. Suhani, not only a just friend, but u'r my best friend. I wanted to apologise for hurting u so much. Plz forgive
me.

Suhani doesn't know what to say. She says- first u get up. They get up.
S- yuv I have already forgiven u.
Both of them wipe their tears.
Y- so.. R we friends now?
Suhani nods with a smile.
Yuv gives her a yellow rose says- this is for my friend...my best friend...
Suhani accepts it and thanks him.
She turns to leave and yuv holds her hand. She looks at him.
S- ab kya hai?
Y- suhani wo...actually...I...
S- do u wana say something more?
Y- yesss...no...I mean...
Suhani looks at him confused..



Guyz I hope u enjoyed it.. 😊 😊
Edited by NAPSHaJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kia moore per stop kiya hai
superb ,want to more

please next one come soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story dear...tfs..n do continue
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Thanks guyz.. I will update soon.. 😊😊
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Chapter-5:


Yuvraj- suhani, things didn't end there. With time, I got used to u, so much that I couldn't imagine my future without u. I often showed that ur too many talks irritate me, ur habits annoy me, etc etc. But u know what, I used to enjoy them silently. May be thats y I missed u so badly when I wasn't here. Silence used to hurt me there, nobody was there to care for me. I don't know suhani how u have been able to tolerate things since months. U'r really very strong and independent. U can survive without me, but I wont be able to live if u leave.

Suhani cant understand what has happened to him.
S- yuvraj...I...I can't understand what exactly r u trying to say.
Y- suhani, those 20 days have opened my eyez. And I got to know what position u hold in my life. I thought I will tell u everything tomorrow, but I think that if I wait, I will lose u forever.

S- wat did u wana tell me?
Y- u had asked me a question yesterday.
Suhani looks away and says- yu...yuvraj...ignore it. I don't wana talk about it.
Y- don't u want an answer?
S- I already know it so plz...
Yuvraj takes her near their wedding pic. There were three red heart-shaped balloons. He asks her to burst the 3rd one and he bursts the 1st one.

After bursting the balloons, suhani sees that the letter 'I' is hanging on the 1st one and 'U' on the 3rd one. She smiles with tears of joy in her eyes.
She turns and finds him sitting on his knees. He looks up at her and takes out a beautiful ring from his pocket.
Y- I love u Suhani. I'm madly in love with u. U'r above everything for me.
Suhani cant control her feelings. Its like a dream come true for her.
Yuv continued- will u give up ur decision of leaving this house? Of leaving me? Would u like to spend the rest of ur life with me? Will u give me the right to make u wear this ring?
Suhani nods with a smile and forwards her hand.
Yuv makes her wear it and kisses on her hand. Suhani closes her eyes.
Y- open ur eyes suhani. Its not a dream.
She slowly opens her eyes and looks at him. He hugs her. She hugs him back and says- I love u too yuvraj.
Y- so.. Now u won't leave me na?
S- never!
He smiles.
Y- suhani...thank u so much...
S- yuv therez nothing like that.
Y- not only for accepting me, but for making my life worth living also.
He takes out a red rose and gives it to her saying- this is for my wife, Mrs Suhani Yuvraj Birla.
Suhani blushes hard. She accepts it and says- thank you...
She feels shy and turns to the other side.
Yuvraj too smiles, not knowing what more to say.
Y- may I have the pleasure of a dance with u?
Suhani feels shy and turns to him smiling.
Yuv forwards his hand. She gives hers on his.
Yuv plays the song 'itni si baat hai'. They dance romantically. His hands are on her waist and her hands are on his shoulders. They have an eye-lock. When the lines 'chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon, itni si baat hai, mujhe tumse pyaar hai...' play, yuvraj starts singing as well. Suhani feels shy. She tries to escape, but he pulls her closer. Their lips touch. Suhani blushes while he continues to sing and they dance.
Yuv- y r u blushing? Did I say anything to u? I m just singing.
Suhani- oh really? Don't act smart. Waise since when did Mr Sadu Kumar become so romantic?
Yuvraj cups her face and says- since the day he fell in love with u without even realizing it.
He gets closer to her, closes his eyez and tries to kiss her on her lips.

Suddenly somebody knocks at the door. Yuv makes faces. Suhani laughs and yuv opens the door.
Pratima and sharad are there.
P- yuv...sharad told me everything. Is everything fine between both of u?
Then they looks at suhani, who looked very happy. They also sees the 2 roses and the ring and understand everything.

Sharad- suhani bhabhi who gave u these roses? Ur best friend?
All laugh.
P- don't tease her. After so many days, I m seeing them so happy. She blesses them. And thanks God for uniting them.
P- I think we should tell everyone that both of u have accepted each other.
Y- no maa. Not now. I will tell myself in the new year party tomorrow. In front of everyone.

Pratima and sharad leave from there. Yuv closes the door. Suhani feels ackward and says- I think we should sleep now.
Yuv slowly walks towards her. She gets nervous and looks down smiling. Yuv also smiles, bends and keeps his wallet in the drawer beside which suhani was standing. She looks up. They have an eye-lock. Suhani says- good night Mr halki daadhi bikhre baal and escapes. He smiles and replies- as u wish sweetheart.
Suhani blushes.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautiful..Loved it so much🤗please continue
loved itni si bat😳wish he would have proposed like this..but he is slow in realising things..damn slow

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