Tera Hone Laga Hoon (YuvAni SS)- part 8 on pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Napshaj welcome to forum dear...😊
And thank u so much for posting this lovely FF on the first day itself feeling very glad to see one more good & new writer in forum...pls continue next part asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunitha28

Hi Napshaj welcome to forum dear...😊

And thank u so much for posting this lovely FF on the first day itself feeling very glad to see one more good & new writer in forum...pls continue next part asap...



Thanx for the compliment sunitha.. 😊 😊
Btw can u tell me how to delete a comment??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAPSHaJ



Thanx for the compliment sunitha.. 😊 😊
Btw can u tell me how to delete a comment??

Napshaj we cant delete comment bcs there is no delete option here...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-2:


YUVRAJ'S PoV:

I rang the door bell. Ramesh opened the door.
All were happy to see me back. I touched the feet of the elders, took their blessings, hugged my bros, n looked around everywhere for Suhani as she was not there. Sharad noticed this. He understood I was looking for suhani and smiled.

S- what happened guru? Whom are u looking for when all are here?
Me- no nothing.

I went to my room and felt so relieved on seeing her. She was standing near the window, deeply lost in thoughts. She looked upset. I wanted to make her smile and hug her. But...

Me- Suhani...
Suhani turned and saw me. Her eyez were teary. She ran to me and was about to hug me but stopped. She again turned and asked when did I come.
Me- Just now.
I came in front of her and asked her y was she crying. She replied "nothing".
Me- Suhani u can share anything with me.
S- are we friends? Good friends?
Me- yes of course
S- how long can I stay at a friend's home? Some day or the other I will have to leave.

I was shattered on hearing this. How could I stop her when I never accepted her as my wife? My eyez got teary.

Me- y r u saying all this?
She didn't answer. I just hugged her. I felt my whole world was within my arms. She didn't hug me back; may be she was feeling awkward. So I broke the hug then and said, "so u'r planning to leave ur friend and go?"

S (looking away)- actually yuv...
I wanted to change the topic, so I congratulated her.
S- for what?
Y- u hv lost weight that's y.
S- o really? Thanx for noticing.

She finally smiled. I too smiled. But then she again seemed to be upset. I couldn't understand what was troubling her. And she wouldn't say anything. I left from there.

SUHANI'S PoV:

Y yuvraj? Y? There had been many times when u made me feel that therez something more than friendship between us, that u have developed feelings for me, but then u reminded me that we are friends. Is that what we will always be? Was dadi right?

Flashback:
D- ei ladki. Y don't u leave this house? Don't u know that yuvraj doesn't love u? And who knows whether he really considers u as a friend or its his sympathy for u.
S- dadi we r friends. And I have felt that he too has started liking me.
D- every unfortunate lover feels this way. Don't u have any self-respect or wat? Staying at a friend's place since months.
S- let yuvraj come. U will get to know the truth.
D- challenge accepted. And if I'm proved right then?
S- I will leave this house forever.
FB ends.

The way u hugged me today, it was not that friendly hug; there was something more than that and I could feel it!
I can't stay with any misconceptions now. I will make things clear today itself.
...

Yuvraj and sharad is with pratima in her room.
Y- maa u should take care of ur health.
P- y? So that suhani leaves asap?
Yuvraj looks on.
P continues- r u so eager to send her out?
Sharad and pratima observe yuvraj.
Yuvraj looks here and there and thinks he can tell them the truth.
Y- I wana share something with both of u.
S and P become hopeful.
Just then ramesh enters and says- yuvraj bhaiya suhani bhabhi is calling u. He nods. S and P tell him to meet her first. He leaves.

P- don't know sharad wat's this boy upto. I thought he loves suhani.
S- he does, its just that he hasn't realized this yet. But now I know wat to do.

Y- suhani...
S- yuv today I wana ask u something. And i'm expecting an honest answer from u.
Y- yes ask.
S- i love u yuv.
Y looks on.
S continued- and I will always do. Do u too love me?
Y feels he has got his answer and he shouldn't wait for two more days as she deserves to hear it now.
S waits for an answer.
Y- suhani I wana share something with u.
S looks on.
Y- suhani... actually... First of all I wana apologise to u.
S- for what?
Just then sharad comes there. He sees them and is about to leave.
Su- pa bhaiya, do u need something?
Sh- no bhabhi. I wanted to talk to guru but I will talk later.
Su- no bhaiya. U can talk. Our convo is over and I think (looking at yuvi) that I have got my answer. She leaves.

Su steps out of the room and stops. "I know yuv u wanted to make me understand that u can't love me . I am ok with it. U don't need to give any explanation. U dont have to apologise. I don't want u to love me forcefully. I should leave this house tomorrow itself. I should meet maa now."

Shez about to leave when she hears sharad- guru, plz tell me honestly what do u feel about suhani bhabhi?
She waits to hear his answer.
Yuv- first u have to promise me that u will not say anything that I will say now to anybody and especially suhani.
Sh- I promise.
Y- u know sharad, suhani is not at all my type. Shez not that kind of a girl I dreamt of spending my life with.
Hearing this, tears start flowing from her eyez.
Yuv continued- she doesn't care about her looks, she doesn't want expensive clothes, jewellery, etc. She doesn't even put make-up and is happy the way she is. U know I used to feel pity for her and that's y I tried to keep her happy coz she was cheated by the ppl she trusted the most and dadi, rags bhabhi, etc used to insult her always.
Su couldn't bear it now and leaves from there.


Guyzz I hope u enjoyed reading it.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear readers.. Did u like this ff? Plz do leave a comment.. If I feel its not being liked, I won't waste my time by continuing it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The update was just beautiful baby..Loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was really good, really enjoyed reading it ! Can't wait to read about how he tells her finally how he feels about her . Do update soon :) Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sashnihaa

This was really good, really enjoyed reading it ! Can't wait to read about how he tells her finally how he feels about her . Do update soon :) Waiting eagerly...


Thank u sashnihaa.. I'll update soon..😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-3:


Yuv continued- but u know what? With time I realised that shez really different, but on a positive note.
Sh- I didn't get u guru. Plz speak to the point.
Y- I love her.
Sh is stunned and asks- whom? Suhani bhabhi?
Y (smiling)- yes.
Sharad happily hugs him n says- kya baat hai guru. Its time for partyyy. Mausiii.
Y- keep quiet. I hvnt told suhani yet. I will tell her on 1st at 12 am. And u have to keep ur promise.
They smile.

Suhani comes to pratima's room and sees her asleep. So she leaves and goes towards her room. She sees yuv and sharad coming out of the room so she hides.
Y- sharad suhani asked me wat i feel for her. So I think I should tell her everything now only.
S- hmmm. That will be better.

Suhani comes to the lawn, recalling moments spent with yuv. "Was it all coz u felt pity for me? Don't u consider me even as a friend? Is this the reason that u could stay for 20 days without missing me or talking to me? M I that bad? Yuv u have made fun of our relation, be it friendship or... Whatever.. I will leave tonight."
She wipes her tears and turns to leave. She sees yuv standing in front of her. She recalls his words.
Y- Suhani I wana say something.
It starts thundering..
S- its too late yuvraj, good night.

She leaves. Yuv thinks something is definitely wrong. He goes after her, comes to their room and sees her packing her stuff.
Y- why are u packing now? R u going somewhere?
S- I wana meet my parents so I will be going tomorrow morning.
Y- ok. I will drop u. But plz don't leave alone.
Suhani nods.
They go to sleep.

Next morning, yuv gets up. He sees the time, its 6 a.m. And suhani is not in the room. He gets worried and looks everywhere in the house. Shez nowhere. He gets worried and calls pankaj.
P- haan beta. How are you? And suhani? Haven't seen her since so many days.
Y- uncle I will talk to u later.
P- ok beta. Is all ok?
Y- yes.
...

YUVRAJ'S PoV:

This is what I deserve. I have hurt her so much, I deserve the same. I kept her waiting for me but never bothered about what she wants. She's also a human, with dreams, wishes... But why did she leave without saying a word?
I called her twice to get no response. And then it was switched off.
I went to sharad in tears and told him everything. He was stunned. I told him not to say anything to anybody at home. We left to look for her.
We looked almost everywhere but couldn't find her. It was getting 1 and we didn't get a hint about her.
Me- sharad she must be in the park where she usually goes whenever shez upset.
We went to the park.
And she wasn't there as well.

Now I felt my world was getting out of my hold. I couldn't afford to lose her!!
She did confess her love so many times, but i .. I didn't even get a single chance. Wat an unfortunate lover I am!!
My phone rang. Its dadi. I ignored. I was so tensed about suhani. Her phone was also switched off. Sharad consoled me and gave me hope that shez alright.

My phone rang again and again. I thought I must switch it off. But then I saw it was from a friend of mine, Kunj, who is an advocate.
Me- hello
K- hey yuvi. What's wrong? All ok between u and suhani bhabhi?
I thought how did he get to know that suhani is missing.
Me- yes ofcourse. Y r u asking this?
K- no yuvi, something is wrong. Otherwise y would she come to me and ask me to prepare divorce papers for both of u?

I was taken aback on hearing this.
Me- what? Have u lost it? She must be somebody else. U haven't ever met her before.
K- yes but she told me her name. And ur name too. And she has given me her number as well to call her when the papers are ready. She also told to get the papers ready by tomorrow.

I confirmed the number. It was hers. I was broken. Everything that was happening had only one interpretation- she wanted to leave me. If that's true, I won't stop her now!
I told sharad and he supported me. But he was upset too, as he always wanted to see us together.

Sharad- guru if bhabhi has given her number to kunj, then she must have switched on her phone. Try once.
I got hope. I called her. She didn't pick up, so I dropped a msg for her, "Suhani I don't know why are u behaving so weird. I wana meet u. I have lots of things to tell u. Plz meet me at the park where we often go. Around 7. I will be there and I won't go back home without meeting u today, no matter what happens."
Suhani reads the message.



Guyz plz do comment whether u like it or not..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi napshaj.. it was awesome.
. By yhe way .. u know me via tellyupdates.. im saraj \ shilpa...

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