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Posted: 9 years ago

Yuvraj parks his car walking towards his room with all smile n naughtiness in his face...He runs over Sharad who screams "Guru...Cant u be careful"..Yuvraj was not paying attention as he was still thinking of the morning..Sharad gets up brushing away the dirt n runs to catch him..He blocks his way ..It was when Yuvraj was back into his senses n looks surprised at Sharad...Sharad says Why are u looking the way...Yuvraj was not paying attention yet again n just looked at him blank..Sharad shakes him up Guru..What had happened..Why do u look at me this way..He questions why are blocking my way..Sharad replies in which world are you..Still in dreams huh..See what you had done to me..(showing the scratches..)Blood oozes out of the wound..Yuvraj asks Sharad you will play with snoopy such reckless way..Sharad thinks he had gone mad n sighs Its ridiculous..You were the one who ran over me just now n the wound was coz of that..And excuse me where are u..He stares at him...Yuvraj was jerked by his reaction..I am so sorry mere bhai...Leave it n look after your job n tend the wound soon..Dont be like your bhabi..He leaves patting his back..Sharad stops him n gives an interrogative look as he had noticed the glitter on his cheeks..He just takes in his fingers n analyses it..Yuvraj looks quizzical n thinks he lost his brains as he fell down..He clicks his fingers asking what had happened now..Why are you some weird reactions..Sharad looks him even closer asking I will appear weird to you..And what do you say for this(showing the glitter)..You cannot guess what it is.Oh poor boy..Its glitter n when have you started using it..He glares at him Oh please...Its not me using it..Its you who has applied on your cheeks..Yuvraj rubs his cheeks n notices the glitter..Sharad asks and how are u gonna explain this with a questioning eyes..Yuvraj remembers when Suhani was trying to loosen his hold her hands brushed against his face and the glitter on her bangles got all over his cheeks...He smiles and start to leave..Sharad stops oh..hello..where are you trying to escape..make me clear...where does this glitter come on your cheeks..Yuvraj gives a serious look n replies you do know the answer for the same..why do you waste my time..Sharad makes a victory smile that he had got some rich news to tease his brother..He winks Han..i do know it..I just wanna hear from you..and so you were with bhabi with an excuse of jog...Yuvraj sighs So..what is much special in that..He smirks what handwork had you done that glitter in her bangles are on your face..Yuvraj cuts him short Oh please han..Dont start your never ending bluff..I met her to just clear some misunderstandings over Gauri issue..Sharad laughs people only talk to clear MU..Yuvraj knows where it was gonna end..Sharad will publish the news to entire family leading to his brothers teasing him which he felt sick of..He glares Sharad don't you dare to say it to anyone in the house..I never want Dadi to know of it..She will yet again create a show involving Suhani..So please zip your mouth..Sharad laughs teek hai..I wont say...Between how long you had been there..Yuvraj was losing cool as he never likes people interrogating his personal things unless her finds it necessary to share..He replies cold from yesterday night..Had you done with your enquiry..May I take a leave n walks off..

Suhani enters the kitchen with her saree messed up as she rushed asap as she escaped Yuvrajs hold..Somya shrieked out of excitement as she had noticed Suhani n made her ready to tease her..Suhani gives a blank look Somu why do you shout ...What is so exciting..

So: Suhani had u noticed your state..

Su(looking at herself): What is wrong with me..

Bh(laughing): Where had u learnt to wear the saree in this way..

Su(quizzical): What..I could not understand...I had worn as I usually do..

Bh: Haww...Suhani usually u wear saree in this way(showing her a plate)

Su(shock): I wore it perfect..I dunno(remembers the incident)..Nothing..I had been cleaning my room..

So: You had been cleaning the room..(laughs)..

Su: Why are you laughing..You never clean yours..(thinking whether she would have noticed Yuvraj)

So: I do clean mine but make it sure that my saree is not messed.(laughs)

Bh: But what is the need to clean the room when its perfectly clean..(interrogative look)

Su: Why do you people are so interested in my saree rather than cooking..

So: Dhi is right..And please don't try to act clever n cook up some reasons..

Su(bhagwan kahan aake fas gaye..Ye Yuvraj bi na): Oh god!!How can I make u believe..I had been cleaning my closet..And dhi u never cleaned it..

Bh: How come u r so messed up just by cleaning closet n you haven't dried your hair..

So: How will she..(winks)

Su: what do you mean..

So: Nothing..U may explain

Su: Why cant u believe in me.When ma comes n looks at the kitchen she will think we are fit only to chat..Lets get into work..

Bh: This is not done..You are just beating around the bush..You cant escape so easily n the food has been cooked..For your kind information you are late...(shoving her wall mount)..Its been 9.00..

So: How can she di..How can she say that she was with Yuvraj

Bh: Yuvraj was here today..I never saw him..

So: I caught him today morning as he was escaping through the window..(smirks)

Bh: So you asked him n why had he been here..

So: How would I know..Suhani only knows why he was here..

Bh: Suhani ..He was here today n you haven't informed us..Why was he here..

So: How will she inform di..She was busy with him as he left just 10 min before..

Bh: Really..You had been upset with him n said u wont be able to forgive him soon..How do you explain this

Su: He was here to discuss of Gauri n nothing much..Have u guys done with your session..May we continue our work

So: Why are u getting furious on us..

Su: I am not intending to hurt you..I will say what had we discussed last night..

Bh: Oh...He was here since night.

Suhani explains what they had discussed n informs Gauri had been sent to rehab..

Yuvaraj showered n dressed up to leave to office ...He comes to dining table n Ramesh serves roti n sub..Saurabh looks at him curious as he came to have breakfast..Yuvraj asks do I look so handsome that you are staring at me..Saurabh laughs I was intrigued to know where are going on a Sunday all dressed up..He gasps stuffing the roti I was leaving to office ..There would be files stocked on my desk as I had not been to office since a week..Saurabh sighs what is the need to hurry today..U can very well do it tomorrow..Take rest for today as u had been running to n fro from house to court or Suhanis house for past days...Yuvraj leaving have you forgot that we have consignment to be despatched on Tuesday n the file is still pending..I know no one had given damn to clear the file n kept the documents ready to send them on Tuesday..Saurabh slaps his head..Wait I will accompany you..I have to check whether packing had been completed n talk with the truck driver.. Else the guy will be engage himself in other chores..Saurabh rushes to change..

Dadi comes from her bashing Suhani..Yuvraj thinks what the hell had happened now..

Da: The girl had taken away the peace in my house..She is clever n crooked...

Yu: Dadi..I guess you miss my wife so much that you cant live a moment without speaking of her..

Da: Are you crazy..Why would I ever miss her..I am happy that she left..I am tired of all show of hers and her family's..

Yu: If you are feeling happy in her absence then why do you rant that she had taken away you peace..

Da: Yes ..She had taken the peace that prevailed in our house..Havent you gone through the news flashing on the tv...She has added insult to our family's name..She had published in papers that Gauri is mentally ill..

Yu: Oh..Really..I went through the article..There was nothing of such sort mentioned..They have just detailed the judgement..

Da: They had stated that Gauri is in rehab n she is ...

Yu: Just stop it Dadi..They have just printed the truth n nothing much..And Suhani has nothing to do with this..Have you people not published ill of Pankaj ji...

Da: You try to defend her that she is justified by publishing it in media as we published of her father..Are you so blinded by her

Yu: I meant neither..This was not done by her as the statements were given by Ila ji herself to the before my eyes..So please..I am too tired of making you understand about Suhani..

Da: How can you support her when the victim is your own sister..I know about the girl..She can make anyone on her side by her sweet words..

Yu: Dadi..Please spare me..No more ill of her...And she has a name SUHANI..

He leaves with Saurabh who was waiting for him watching the show feeling pathetic for him

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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG Yuvi is so romantic.😛 I love Sharad teasing Yuvraaj which is now not found in the show.😊. And one more thing you added the scene which I always wanted in the show Yuvraaj staying Suhaani's room at NIGHT without the information of others n you make it hot.I love It 😛😛dear which is my dream scene. n of course I can imagine them very well while reading. Please Update soon I want to see More Yuvaani romance chore chupke milna.😆😆
Edited by bkabita - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bkabita

OMG Yuvi is so romantic.😛 I love Sharad teasing Yuvraaj which is now not found in the show.😊. And one more thing you added the scene which I always wanted in the show Yuvraaj staying Suhaani's room at NIGHT without the information of others n you make it hot.I love It 😛😛dear which is my dream scene. n of course I can imagine them very well while reading. Please Update soon I want to see More Yuvaani romance chore chupke milna.😆😆

Thank you for loving it...Yuvraj always demands her time but she runs away from him..I too wanted him in her room😆You read the entire 15 parts..What about rest😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all thank u for updating sri..
Loved yuvi's state in the beginning..😆sharad teasing yuvraj nd bhavn,soumya teasing suhani..awesome..nd as always ur yuvi is more courageous than original..liked it..👏

Plz do update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Blue_Mist

First of all thank u for updating sri..

Loved yuvi's state in the beginning..😆sharad teasing yuvraj nd bhavn,soumya teasing suhani..awesome..nd as always ur yuvi is more courageous than original..liked it..👏

Plz do update soon!

courageous😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Sri...loved the teasing part of Yuvani...pls update next part soon...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Somya Bhavna n Lata have breakfast n insist Suhani in having but she took a strong stand that she wont eat unless her father shows up.. They were fed up in forcing her n silently munched their food.. It was 2 in noon n Lata was insisting Bhavana to buy ration as her legs failed her.. Bhavna was busy with golu feeding him.. She turns to fetch Somya who was nowhere available.. Suhani makes her sit n gets the money leaving to the shop..

Yuvraj was engrossed in his work.. One could have not found him easily with files spread all over covering him entirely.. Saurabh searches for him n ends up calling him. Yuvraj looks up from between the files n waves at him.. Saurabh laughs I thought I would take u for lunch.. But its better I leave alone waving to him back.. Yuvraj taking heavy breath Give me another 45 minutes .. I will join you bhaiya.. Saurabh winks at him and leaves.. Suhani dials him n he replies I am busy Suhani.. I will call u later for sure n hangs up..

Suhani hangs up n walks slowly towards her home been finished shopping.. The sun showered his blessings on her.. She was feeling giddy having not had food since last day...She was searching for some shady place n spotted a car under a tree...She rushes n stands resting her back on the body of the car.. She immediately moves as the cars body was hot n stands under the tree.. Prats noticing her places her hands on her shoulder.. She turns wiping the sweat off her face.. Prats asked her where was she returning from n extends the bottle of water which was in the car.. She thanks her n refuses to have water. Prats make her to sit in the car n switches on the ac.. Suhani feels relieved n rests her head on the seat.. The driver turns on the ignition n speeds up.. Suhani requests him to drop her at her house.. Prats asks of her father to which her face turns hard n drops... Her eyes wells up n she rests her head on Prats shoulder whispering he had locked himself in his room for past 2 days... He hadn't had a morsel of food or spoke with us.. I am worried of his health.. Prats wipes her tears n pacifies her... Suhani notices her house n asks the driver to stop.. She waves a good bye n Prats asks her to update her n take care of her family without being disheartened... Suhani asks her to come in but she refuses n leaves..

Prats enters the house backed by Yuvraj n Saurabh... They take the prasad from her seeking her blessings.. Prats was worried of Pankaj n she was longing to help Suhani.. She whispers to herself n leaves to Dadi room... The brothers looked confused n left to have their lunch.. They were jerked by the thundering voice of Dadi.. Pratima ..Have u gone crazy.. What the hell are u speaking..

Both rush to her room n try to understand the scene..

Prats: Han maaji.. U have heard it right.. We have to apologize to Suhani n her family.

Da: Do u know what do you mean... Are you in your senses..

Prats: I do know what I am speaking and I am speaking sense only now..

Da: Do you mean we have to apologize to them for the crime that Pankaj had committed.. U have forgotten that the victim was your own daughter..

Prats: What had he done.. He is innocent.. And the real victim was only him ...

Da: What do you mean by it.. You say they are justified for proving our child mentally ill.. You were the one who was furious on Suhani when her lawyer proved Gauri mentally ill..

Prats: yeah...I was furious at her as I was unaware of the truth... There was no mistake on her part..She had no other way but to ..

Da: Shut up.. How can u be cruel to your daughter.. Is that girl so important than your daughter that you are not ready to realize you daughter's suffering.. She is rotting in rehab just because of the girl n her family..

Prats: I know that my daughter is in rehab n I do care for her.. She suffers only for injustice she had done to Suhani n her father.. Its only because of her they have faced insults from the public..

Da: Just shut up Pratima.. How can you be so blind n cruel to your daughter..

Prats: What had I said wrong .. She is the prime reason for Pankaj ji being arrested when he was innocent.. He had suffered for a crime which he would not think of committing even in wildest dreams..

Da: Pratima.. Have u totally lost it.. How can you speak so high of him after knowing his low deeds..

Prats: Maji.. How on earth I can make u understand it was Gauri who was the prime reason for the whole show..

Da: Oh god! Are you so blinded by the family especially by that girl...I know the girl.. She is clever n ...

Yu: Just stop it Dadi.. Aap aa rahe hai hamare sat... That s final..

Da: Yuvraj..

He leaves taking Prats out of the room..

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