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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: shinseen

both parts are equally superb,

one is emotionally and other is romantic
as per show yuvraj like that ,show will be more interesting and watchable ,
every update you write more amazing ,interesting and imaginative
thanks for wonderful updates

Thank u dear...Yuvraj aj kal intresting toh hai..Kal ka golu scene he was adorbs😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Thank u dear...Yuvraj aj kal intresting toh hai..Kal ka golu scene he was adorbs😳

hotstar per dekhne ke liye 6am ka intezar karna padta hai
ab dekhogi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Amazing update sri. Loved both parts. Part 10 showed more desperate yuvraj. wow Yuvraj at 11:05pm at suhani's house. this can only happen in ff sri. show me toh never. But you have written their missing and her anger very well. And Gauri is not done yet in your story nice to see a new villain apart from dadi. Loved their conversation.
Part 11 was superb loved the romantic Yuvraj using the window to enter her house is like dream come true. I wished these kind in the show when they gave the namesake separation track. But loved it sri. Poor yuvraj he was so romantic and suhani very bad. In the show its opposite and that too for dadi sake😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sumabkb

Amazing update sri. Loved both parts. Part 10 showed more desperate yuvraj. wow Yuvraj at 11:05pm at suhani's house. this can only happen in ff sri. show me toh never. But you have written their missing and her anger very well. And Gauri is not done yet in your story nice to see a new villain apart from dadi. Loved their conversation.

Part 11 was superb loved the romantic Yuvraj using the window to enter her house is like dream come true. I wished these kind in the show when they gave the namesake separation track. But loved it sri. Poor yuvraj he was so romantic and suhani very bad. In the show its opposite and that too for dadi sake😆

Where is Suhani romantic in show..She is just trying to seduce him for BQ..I expected a strong seperation but they just fooled around hanging together...Anger toh hona hi tha😉
LOL he do entered through the window n exited through the same in show when they went for aloo tikki date but it was made a joke..Yuvraj is always a fun when he turns romantic😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a Romantic update!!The 1st part of update, rona dhona was ok for me..but the 2nd part, frm yuvi's entry to her room..u juz killed it..I loved the desparate yuvi..😳their convo was really a treat for me..👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Where is Suhani romantic in show..She is just trying to seduce him for BQ..I expected a strong seperation but they just fooled around hanging together...Anger toh hona hi tha😉
LOL he do entered through the window n exited through the same in show when they went for aloo tikki date but it was made a joke..Yuvraj is always a fun when he turns romantic😳😃


oh yah i forgot yes he did enter through the window. and yes separation was not their that's why i mentioned namesake😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blue_Mist

What a Romantic update!!The 1st part of update, rona dhona was ok for me..but the 2nd part, frm yuvi's entry to her room..u juz killed it..I loved the desparate yuvi..😳their convo was really a treat for me..👏

Yesterday I wrote while watching golu scene..Just got struck with this idea😉
Rona dhona I too hate...I did not show for long too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Thank u..More romance in next part😉


Really thank u so much Sri...pls try to update soon cant wait more time...😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunitha28


Really thank u so much Sri...pls try to update soon cant wait more time...😆😉

Until night next part will be updated
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Posted: 9 years ago

Yuvraj put his arms around n interlaced his with fingers her...They were sleeping entwined together in the bed with a blush in their cheeks..It was 6.00 in the morning n both were disturbed by the sound of alarm...Yuvraj turns it off n tugged Suhani as she was to leave the bed..She lands over him with a force n their heads hit each other..Yuvraj grunts Aww Suhani tut oh bahot bari ho gyi ho..Aunty se bolkar tumhara khana kam karti hon..

Su: Hamne kiya kya..Tume peeche se zor se keech liya..Yahi hona hi tha..

Yu: Man lo ki tum jyada khati ho..Aise khaogi toh phat jaogi..Boom(laughs)

Su: So funny..Haske pagal ho rahi hai ham..Ab chod kam pada hai...

Yu: Oh wait a minute..Aj Sunday hai na..Am I right..Waise aj kon kam karta hai..Sirf aram karte sab..

Su: Tum log office ko chutti de sakte ho..Ham ghar ko nahi de sakte.. Tumhe sona hai toh so ..Hame tang mat karo..

Yu: Tumhare ghar mein koi nahi hai kya kam karne ke liye..Aunty hai Bhavna hai or Somya bhi..Woh log kya karenge..Teen log kafi hai nahi kuch jyada hi hai..

Su: Ham hat batayenge..Madad hogi un logon ko..Tumhe kya problem hai hamare kam karne se..

Yu: Kya Suhani..Kya problem hai..Batate hon..Tumhara kam karna hi problem hai..(in her ears).Jab mein yahan hon tumhe kya kam hai mere sat time spend karne ki alawa..

Su: Han ji..Hame hazar kam hai..Tum kya hamare peche hi pade ho..Jyada pyar aa raha hai kal se..

Yu: Kyu pyar karne mein koi galt hai kya ya uske liye koi waqt hota..Jab man karien karo..Simple..And Suhani no bahana..You had promised me yesterday..

Su: Hey bhagwan..Tumne use seriously le li..Mein toh tujhe chup karne ke liye kaha taki tu soyega..

Yu: Nahi..Mein nahi manongi..Aisa nahi chalne wala..Tum mujse bhag rahe ho...Itni asani se chutkara nahi milega mujse..I wont spare u so soon(winks)..He runs his finger along her neckline n reaches her back.Suhani just skips a beat n tries to escape..He tightens his grip n tucks the strand of hair on her face n pecks her on neck..Suhani blushes ..He continues to trace her curves until Suhani holds his hands to stop him..He wasn't the one to give up easily.He kisses her near her ears which makes her shy away n she buries her head in his chest blushing more..He lifts her face but she just turns away to avoid his eyes which would make her blush even more..He turns her face n she stammers Yuv..Yuvraj..He places a finger on her lips hushing her n plants a kiss on her cheeks..She pushes him away breaking the stance..He pins her to bed n they get all over on each other..She slips away by rolling under him n enters the washroom..He just smiles thinking she is just hard to and rests himself on the bed..

She was back after having bath n was wearing a black saree with a deep cut blouse just arousing his instincts...She sits in front of the mirror n dries her hair...As she dries the hair a drop runs down her blouse n she gives a low shrill n twitches her body as she thinks Yuvraj was the one playing with her as she noticed him near her..Yuvraj was just enjoying watching her..He was smitten by her..And man she was hawwtt..He was piqued n adds kya Suhani ..Sharma kyu rahi ho aisi jaise pehle bar ki tarah...She speaks with her eyes closed Yuvraj.Chodo na..Kafi nahi hai kya..Yuvraj adds Kafi..Nahi hai Suhani..Mere biwi ke sath time spend karne kab muje barega..Tu toh aj kal bagne mein lagi ho..He was answering her standing behind her..She blushes Bas bhi karo..Hame jana hai..Kam karne hai..He bends n whispers in her ears nahi Suhani n pulls her by the knot undoing it n hugs her from back..Ab Suhani jaldi se muje ek kiss do..Suhani stammers Yuvraj..Please..Yuvraj whispers No way Suhani..She pleads him but he wasn't ready to give up..She turns with a force that her wet hair brushes his face n splashes water on his face..Their faces were inch apart n they could feel their heart racing..Yuvraj pulls her more closer that his lips brushes hers..Suhani pants for breath n blushes hard..Yuvraj does the knot which he had undone..Suhani buries into him when Lata knocks the door calling her..They were lost in each other that they fail to hear..Lata bangs the door hard n they were bought to senses..She shouts kya kar rhea ho..abi tak uti nahi..Jaldi karo kam pade hain..Suhani stammers Kuch..kuch nahi mammi..ate hain todi der mein..ap chalo..She pleads Yuvraj with her eyes..Lata replies teek hai..Ham chalet hai..Tum a jana jaldi..Suhani gets up loosening his grip..Ab toh chodo hamein..mummy bhi bala liya..Jane do..Aur tumhe ghar nahi jana..Ab toh gharwalein ute honge or doond rahe hoge tujhe..Tum niklo..Yuvraj pulls her mujhe bejne mein itni jaldi kya hai..Abi tak tumne mujhe kiss nahi diya..Suhani twists n turns to free from his hold Are kya zid pakadke baite hai tu..Nikalne ki idea nahi..Isse pehle ma dobara ayein ya di akar pakdein hamein nikalo tum..Yuvraj replies nahi.Un log ne pakad bi liya toh kya ..Mujhe kuch nahi bolenge.Tu mera patni hai..Suhani rushes Teek hai ..Ye sab chod..Aur tum nikal ab..ma tension mein hogi..Yuvraj says Ma ko mein samja donga..Tu kab mere wish poori karegi..Mein nahi jaongi tab tak..Suhani grunts Yeh bhagwan..Tum bhi na n holds his face planting a kiss on his cheeks..Ho gaya..Ab khush..Ab to jaogi na..Yuvraj rants muje bejne mein tumhe kya shanti milegi pata nahi mujhe..Suhani replies Aisa kuch nahi..Mein ja rhi hon kitchen pe..Tum bhi ghar ja ab and she leaves closing the door..Yuvraj stares the way she left n jumps through the window..Somya catches him..Before she stops he shouts bye n rushes off..Somya makes her mind to tease Suhani

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