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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update Sri ...sry har Baar story read kar Leti hmm par comt nahi karti ..sorry ...Tum har din achi writer bannti ja rehi ho .. 👏 Tfs..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Navi16

Amazing update Sri ...sry har Baar story read kar Leti hmm par comt nahi karti ..sorry ...Tum har din achi writer bannti ja rehi ho .. 👏 Tfs..

Thank u...Writer😆 i suck as a writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Sri..Hitler Papa..I too felt hurt by his words😭 YuvAni convo was superb..atleast half of this is needed in real too..!hope she meets him...update sooon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Bechara bored me on the show


Who sri Pankaj??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh yes I had many hopes on him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blue_Mist

Nice update Sri..Hitler Papa..I too felt hurt by his words😭 YuvAni convo was superb..atleast half of this is needed in real too..!hope she meets him...update sooon..😊

Man has rot in jail reaction toh obvious hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yuvraj rushed to his vehicle and drove as fast as he could to reach Suhani's house..Suhani on the other hand was crying yet..Though she tried to control her tears they just flowed irresistibly...She never noticed the time ..Her mobile flashes with the name of Yuvraj.She swipes and reads his message..Hey I am waiting for u just at your gate..Hope u would join me soon..I am sorry for what I had spoken right then..Please spare me..I want to meet u and explain things.I can understand that u are upset with me.And u do know what made me to mouth those words.I am experiencing the same as you.Its too painful when you avoid me.Evrything cant be put in a message.So please come asap..Please..She noticed the time was 11.05 and turned down her phone ..She wasn't much interested in meeting him but she subconsciously wants to meet him and just remain in his arms which gives her solace..She was wary to just go n meet him..

Yuvraj was losing his patience and was thinking of breaking her window..He cant tolerate her avoidance..He was desperate ,guilty and angry at the same time..It was 11.30 when he last saw for her reply which was a hopeless case..He wondered had she even noticed the message..The night was cold and the chill dawned his nerves slowly..He started feeling cold and looked for the jacket in his car..It then struck him that he never wore one today..He just stood rubbing his hand for heat and looking for her in the direction of her house..He again checked his mobile once hoping she would have replied but slipped it back into his pocket finding his inbox empty..It was 11.45 when he slipped the phone..He even wondered whether she was even moved by his words..She would respect his feelings n meet him..Or he was a fool to have come to meet her..Suhani had been vacillating between meeting him or not...It was an irresolute question..She looks at the clock n finds it was midnight and felt sorry for making him wait..She decides to step out.As she steps out she finds the weather bleak..The chill went through her spines n she trembled as the air struck her..She notices Yuvraj standing trembling of the weather..She enters the house and wears on her sweater n takes a shawl for him...

Yuvraj lost his patience and the cold too was scorching n unnerving him..He gives a thought to barge into her room but drops the idea as he thinks why would always he had to try to reconcile..Let she try out this time and am not gonna spare her..He grunts due to cold and looks at the time..He curses himself for his foolhardiness to rush for meeting her.He curses his stars for being so cruel.He turns to open his car when a hand covers him with a blanket..He turns to see Suhani and hugs her at an instance..He says Thank my luck for u had come at last to meet me..And how do you know I was in bad need of warmth..

Su: I just watched u trembling of cold..So I brought it.

Yu: Oh thanks...At least u are not cruel with me at this else u would avoid me n make me mad..

Su: Yuvraj...Fine..I am not here to fight..Why you want to meet me and what is so head breaking that makes you to discuss at this night n especially today when I am in no way interested..

Yu: U had again started off n your words are hard on me..Dont you know what for I had come...Please don't keep mum n break my head..

Su: I do no but why do you stress for it to be discussed today at this hour of night..

esorry for that..But do please dont act cold with me..It hurts me..

Su: Then it's the same with me..I too was hurt by your words you spoke few hours ago..Do u know how it felt to me when you branded me selfish..Do I really seem to be selfish to you..(starts walking off)

Yu: Suhani..Just stop the scene u r making now..Its not that you are only the person affected by the turn of events last few days...It was even more harder for me being sandwhiched between my wife and my sister..Had you gone through the thing I suffered..Why don't u answer..(turning her around)...And now why do you cry..Just to make it more harder for me..

Su: (tears flowing) Had you come here to hurt me..I am tired of all Yuvraj..Please ...

Yu: Suhani..Dont make me to start off...I never have any intention to hurt you..And how do you think hurting you is gonna help me any better...Instead I would die..

Su(placing her finger): Shhh..No more..I don't want to hear anymore unpleasant words..I understand it had been hard for both..

Yu: Its you forcing me to..

Su: Lets end this..Why had u come to meet me..

Yu: I am happy at least now u felt to ask me...I want to clear all the Mus and make everything normal between us..I cant anymore stand being avoided by my wife and hurting her knowingly or unknowingly..I want badly my chirpy and strong wife back..I want to see her sweet smile which has a warmth in itself...

Su(smiling): Oh stop..How much would you appreciate me..Its done with me..A few seconds back you were just yelling at me..

Yu: U don't have any better to start of..I guess u wont leave any strings to screw me up..You want to put words into my mouth..

Su: Alright..alright..I will stop for now..

Yu: What do you mean..

Su: I wont spare you for the words you had uttered today(faking anger)

Yu: I am sorry..It was all an instance..I did not mean so..Dont mistake me..

Su: Lets keep it aside for some other day..I am keen to know what made u to meet me..

Yu: Its about Gauri n you do know that..

Su: Hea...(in a distant voice)..I do know

Yu: I am guilty for her act n upset with myself for being failed as a brother to guide her properly..Things wouldn't have got so complex if I have guided her..

Su: Why do you blame yourself..You were not the sole reason for it..There were many factors which forced her to..

Yu: I was in a way indirectly responsible for it..I regret for not having listened to you regarding marriage of Gauri.

Su: What would you do.Adi acted so polished that it convinced you he was in love with her..

Yu: You were stressing the fact zillions but I never listened..It was my stupidity..If I had this wedding might not have happened..

Su: Yes..This wedding would have been called off.But what would have been Gauri's state if the wedding was ever called off..She took such a big step just for the reason that I and my papa scolded Adi and now she hates me..And just think what would have happened if u had called off the wedding coming into my words..

Yu: I know that u make sense.But things are unexplainable.Even now my shell shakes when I think she had planned the entire trap..

Su: It wasn't really her..It was Dadi and two bhabis who had filled her mind with rubbish of me and forced her to do such an act..I wonder from where she had got the idea..

Yu: I too wonder how could a girl who is stunted by growth plan such a devious thing..What was the source of her idea..Its a question mark..

Su: This has to be answered only by her..We cant help it out..But why did you yell at me back that day when your own sister had confessed her mistake..

Yu: Things were different the day back..All happened at an instant that I had no time to think and react..You came all of a sudden n blamed your brother and as Gauri confessed you shifted the entire thing on her..It was just hard to believe that she could do such an act...And being a brother how can I think that my sister would turn out such even in my wildest dreams...I was baffled when u announced that she was the culprit..It seemed that you were blaming any tom dick or harry to prove your father innocent..And Gauri herself being a victim how can I believe she had done it..

Su: I agree ...But it dawned on me when you kept mum as Gauri threw tantrums on me..I thought you would at the least understand me n voice me..But..

Yu: I am really sorry Suhani n I regret it..I was just shocked and confused ..I was wary how to handle the situation and whom to believe n whom not..And why did you not show me the video or at least you could have made copies of it..

Su: It was all in a hurry that I failed to make copies of it...

Yu: Why didn't you show me..

Su: Coz I know that it would be hard on you as you love Gauri the most after your ma n Dadi..

Yu: If that is the case ma too loves her as me.I know ma would have reacted the same as me.You could have certainly shown it to me..

Su: It was much harder for her to believe the video..I cursed myself for hurting her unintentionally..I could have shown you but I thought of handling the issue in a calm and matured manner.So I went to ma..We aren't that much matured to handle such a situation..Ma was my final resort..

Yu: I do agree as I would have broken beyond repair on watching the video and would not have known how to proceed.And Suhani u made the big blunder by keeping mum of Adi..If u had ever uttered the truth to all the situation would have been different..This problem wouldn't have arised

Su: Oh..You feel so Yuvraj..You think Dadi would have even trusted my words.She was behind the wedding from the very day Adi proposed.She wouldn't have consented at any cost.

Yu: I would have tried my best to convince her..

Su: Never..Instead she would have insulted me for turning you against her..She was hell bent in making this wedding happen at any cost where she was the one who tried her best to hide Gauris identity from the family and kept her in Suhagi..

Yu: Who can understand her..I am not interested to speak of her..She makes me feel bitter whenever I think of her..I shouldn't have easily forgiven her in Gauris issue..She will never mend her ways.(sighs).At least I am happy that Gauri is in rehab and she will be back as a refined person..She will apologise for all her mistakes especially to you..I am looking forward for the day(sigh of relief)

Su: Oh Yuvraj..Do you think so.It would never happen..She would never reconcile with me in her life

Yu: Why do say so.

Su: She sent me this minutes before she was off to rehab..

Yuvraj reads the message..Bhabi mein apko zindgi mein kabhi maf nahi karonga ya mafi nahi mangonga apse..Ap hi sirf ek waja ho jiske karan mein apni parivar se door ho rahi hon aur khas kar Aditya se..Apko use kya problem hai..Wo apki bhai hi hena..Ap kyu uski jan ke peeche pade ho..Ap hi ne use job se nikalvayi thi .Ap hi ne us par chori ka ilsam dali aur mere galti mein use phasane ki khoshish ki..Apse meri khushi dheki nahi jati..Merizindgi karab karne mein thule hue ho..Apko meri aur Aditya ke shadi min bhi problem thi..Hazar khoshish ki use rokhne ki aur apki papa ko bhi Aditya ke khilaf badkaya..Ap aisa karti bhi kyu ho..Aur to aur mere viyu ko bhi meri khilaf lar diya..Apko kabhi nahi chodungi mein..In sab ki keemat chukayengi ap.Ye meri wada hai apse..

As Yuvraj read the message it was unbelievable for him to imagine that her sister would even think such ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Navi16

Amazing update sri...well written...

Thanksss😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update..!yuvi waiting for suhani in the hazy night..awesome thought sri..nd gauris msg is juz prfct..👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blue_Mist

Nice update..!yuvi waiting for suhani in the hazy night..awesome thought sri..nd gauris msg is juz prfct..👏

so how did you like my version of psychobabe..

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