YuvAni FF- After Realization: Part 7, P. 15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: yusu1993

your short but sweet made me make a face 😕

But can i just say from the first word to the last dot this was purely heaven👏

i am deeply in awww with this particular update. and i really wants to bow down for the effort you put in to give a reality affect to each word you use... this is BRILLIANT!

all of it is just praise worthy.. jitna kahon utna kum hai.. ya kuch na kaho toh definitely insult hogi because this is pure LOVE, you are so full of love.. isliye har line mai wo sab dikh raha tha..

She came back with something wrapped in a light blue blanket in her arms. As she came closer, I realized she was holding the baby. I walked towards her. She smiled and I smiled back. I looked down at the baby. He was wide awake and staring at me.

"He's very bright eyed for such a tiny guy..." I said.

omg omg omg the starting is to die for she comes with a baby... the baby stared at him too adorable just way too much adorable... 👏

The baby smiled at Suhani. I felt something tug at my heart's strings. He yawned.

"Awww...Snoopy yawns too." I said. Suhani laughed. "Yeah, he's a lot like Snoopy...but with less fur. You wanna hold him?" She asked.

aek delusional fan ki duaein lagi gi apko behna.. for writing this .. today you gave me more dreams. snoopi yuvani and yuvani's baby.. snoopi will protect yuvani's angel.. i adore your references ap yuvraj kay andar kai traits ko jaisay likhti ho no one can be even close to them...

"Me? I don't think so. I've never held a baby before. I'll break him or something." I said.

"Here..." She said and held out her arm and urged me. "C'mon Yuvraj, hold him...see how he's looking at you..." She said. I saw the baby and he was actually watching me like she said, with Suhani's nose and all.

"What if he falls? Bhavna will kill me."

such delicately you have written these lines... too real to be true... dil jeet lia phirse... he is so scared... and i am sure this is what how he is gonna react once he interacts with a real baby.. may it be bhavna's or his and suhani's .. i am dead behna.. you shouldnt have wrote that way.. you have truly killed me with all of this today.. this is too realistic... you are classic at this ...

"Shhh...take him." She urged me. I took him from her and the baby ended up in both our arms.

"Don't move...I'm scared to hold him alone..." I said. We held him together. The baby started crying.

poor little kitten yuvraj... way too cute... cuteness .. the baby ended in both their arms. a moment to capture.. yaar... make yuvraj name the baby...

"Crap, see..." He doesn't like me. Suhani looked emotional. "He does like you..." she said. "Hold him..." I held him on my own. He continued crying. Both of us experienced some unspeakable kind of emotion. I saw Suhani wipe away a tear. I knew what she was thinking. I held the baby against my shoulder and rubbed his back. Suhani watched me. Our eyes locked for a few seconds. Tears welled up in my eyes and I looked down. The baby had stopped crying. The feeling of the small and helpless child in my arms, against my shoulder, plus the image of Suhani holding him stayed with me for the rest of the night. I carefully gave him back to Suhani who headed to Bhavna's house.

BEAUTIFUL! a life they both crave, a future they want together and their pure naive feelings of a family. you have shown them all in these lines... hats off behna ... who can ignore falling in love with these two after reading your stuff? no one can... not at all...

an impact full scene by you...

"Do you think she hates me?" I asked.

"No Yuvraj! She'll never hate you. Why do you think she hates you?"

"No reason. Just wondering because, she has changed a lot..."

"Pain changes people. Your love will bring her back."

I nodded. I took Maa's hand in mine. "She'll come back, right Maa? She won't ask me for a divorce will she? She'll come back..." I stopped and cleared my throat. The fears began to come out. "She'll trust me again, right?" I said.

"I know you can make things right again and I have a feeling things are getting better. You just can't see that because you're afraid." She said. I hugged her.

"Yuvraj, Suhani will come back. She loves you...I see you both having a perfect life together. This is just a bad patch. You're going to have to help her through it. You have to show her and tell her how much you love her."

"But it's hard...it's hard to tell her how I feel. I don't know why..." I said. I felt frustrated.

"It's hard, but you'll manage. Can you live without her?"

"I can't. I need her." It felt like I would burst into tears if this conversation continued. It was better to end it here. "I'll see you in the morning, Maa..." I said. She nodded. I went to bed.

well written scene with pratima.. his fears are pretty evident... and they hurt me all.. i am really sad after reading this.. this is what happens when i read your work which includes all genre and every line have depth.. I AM TELLING YOU AGAIN GO FOR WRITING YOU ARE UNBEATABLE AT TOUCHING PEOPLE WITH YOUR WORDS...

sooo touching... suhani is his life... his need , his reason... i am even in love with his pain and fears but i want them to be gone... i want a blissful smile on their face and clearance that both there hearts contains love for eachother...

EXCELLENT!!!

Suhani's POV was one of favorites too.. now suhani's pov is giving competition to yuvi's one but what do you want? me to get confused..? i loved how she thought that she was not his type.. and i love you for bhavna being so sure... i know you have taken it from the character bhavna she is always kind of a cupid in the show ... and she also gave ideas to suhani for proposing and all... this is your quality you don't change the heart of the character... MIND BLOWING...

yes yes yes yuvraj will show and say it too...

"How was he with the baby?" She asked. "Adorable...he was scared to hold him and then he looked like he loved holding him. He held him against his shoulder and it was just the sweetest thing I've ever seen..." I said.

"Awww!" she hugged me. I hugged her and cried against her shoulder.

"I can't live without him, Di...I can't. I love him..." I said.

"Suhani, you'll never have to live without him. He's going to be only YOURS. He already is. I'm telling you, tomorrow night..." She winked. I blushed again. I hoped she was right about his feelings.

i hope cvs bhi itnay realistic rahein...finally she is going to get the love she craved for...

the baby talk again was cuteness personified... i am sure he would have been way too adorable holding the kid and putting the baby with his shoulder trying to stop him from crying... awww "yuvi kahluuu" eeeksss 😳

dear behna

you can lit up any gloomy mood, freshen up each individuals mind with your piece f work... EPICALLY BEAUTIFUL... this is way too touching all of it... i am so happy... FANTASTIC way of putting up with sweetness and pain in one update... hugss you

bless you and update soon...

i have literally craved for your work so i cant get full of it .. jitna marzi parhloon...

Originally posted by: rbb1

Great update can't wait to read what happens next
It will be interesting to see what Yuvraj does next
Them holding the baby together aww so cute
Bhavna helping and assuring Suhani is cute
I like how pratima is helping Yuvraj it's good
Aww Yuvraj the didn't want to cry in front of his mum so sweet and cute
Please update tomorrow can't wait to read the next update
Them alone in the farmhouse will be fab I'm sure
Yuvraj better not spoil it

Originally posted by: kishu789

Awesome ff! Totally love how you're writing each pov! Please update soon! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: sreelovesindia

mehwish...you are turning me a devdas for your ff...

so sweet...yuvi holding baby...aww,.. so cute..

Originally posted by: SunaP

I'm just wondering abt ur writing skills yaar... 👏

Actually I can't write a nice essay even on my own language.

Originally posted by: srinithi25

Awsm post mehwu really i was imagining both wid de bany...he says he yawns like snoopy...aww soo sweet...n suhani saying she cant live widout him wow...wqiting to read next part...pratima n yuvi convo was cute...👏pls update soon

Yuvraj's POV:

I had to talk to Uncle first, privately. Suhani looked surprised when I told her that I wished to speak to her dad alone. He didn't seem as surprised as her. I asked him for permission to take Suhani with me for the night.

"Yuvraj, she's your wife...you can take her anywhere you want to."

"Ok, well, there's something else that I want to tell you as well."

"Go ahead..."

"I love her. I'm just doing this to give her some time. I want to spend time with her outside my house and make her feel that she's wanted."

"I know."

"You do?"

"I do. I know you love her..." He said. I smiled. He smiled back.

"Don't tell her, though, ok? I will tell her, eventually. I want to make her feel it on her own." I said. He nodded. "Whatever you do is fine with me. I'm content. I can tell how much you love her. A parent can always tell when someone loves their child." He said.

"And Lata Auntie?"

"She gets it as well. We're all with you. But you're right; Suhani does need to be convinced this time. This is between the two of you. However you choose to approach this situation is alright with me." We finished talking and I met Suhani who was waiting outside. She had a small bag with her things for the night, and she looked very pretty in a red saree. I smiled at her.

I honestly didn't know what I was going to do or say tonight. I had no plan of action. I wanted to show her I loved her before I ever said it. I wanted her to feel it and believe it. Somewhere I knew what needed to be done, and I wanted to take that step, but I was very afraid of how she would respond. I had feelings for her now, very deep ones. Tonight was a test of sorts. How would I feel being alone with her? I thought we could watch movies together. I could take her out for dinner, at a restaurant near our farmhouse. We could talk. I could apologize for some of the things I'd said and done. Beyond that, I didn't know if I could do more without offending her or being rejected.

I knew I couldn't be nervous anymore. I couldn't afford to be. Maa told me that she would respond if I expressed myself properly. I had to try much harder tonight. There was an awkward silence in the car. It was a long drive and barely a few minutes into it, it began to rain heavily. I had no idea it would rain tonight. In all my fuss over what to do, what to say, and how to behave, I didn't bother checking the weather. Suhani seemed worried. The rain only got heavier.

"Yuvraj, maybe we should turn back." She said. That's the last thing I wanted. It took me days to gather enough courage for this night and now that it was here, I wasn't going to turn back and go back to being a coward.

"Don't worry, if it becomes too much, we'll stop somewhere..."

"Where?"

"There are some places...around..." I said. I knew there were some. It was a heavy downpour. And then, the car broke down. We ran over something or the other in the rain. I couldn't see what it was. We were in a forested area and the farmhouse wasn't much farther off but there was no way to continue driving in the rain, with a flat tire. I tried going online to find out if there was any place to stay around here, but there was such poor reception here. Suhani tried too. I had to call Sharad. I had no choice.

"Sharad, go online right now and do as I tell you...HURRY!"

"Whoa, Guru...calm down. Where are you?"

I told him where and after teasing me and pulling my leg for 5 useless minutes, he managed to find out that there were places to stay.

"There are cabins but those are in the woods. Be careful there, Guru."

"Yeah. I will..."

"Have funnn..." He added.

"Shut up. Get a life. Don't you dare open your big mouth and tell anyone."

"I love you too, Guru. Say hello to Bhabhi for me..."

"Get lost." I said. He laughed and I finished the call. It meant we needed to walk. I had an umbrella. Suhani looked worried and I tried reassuring her.

"It'll be ok. Don't worry...I'll make sure we're safe." She nodded. I gave her the umbrella, took her things out and hoped Sharad would keep his mouth shut. Well, this wasn't what I was planning, but I had to make the most of it anyway. It was windy and we both got wet even with an umbrella. Sharad's directions were spot on. There were cabins and apparently they rented out rooms to unfortunate people like me who got screwed over by the weather, or their cars.

I held her hand as she nearly slipped near the entrance of the cabin. It was in a very secluded, forested area but once we were inside, it seemed a lot bigger. There was a receptions desk and they had more than one floor, and more than one empty room.

The lady at the counter eyed us suspiciously. She was an elderly woman.

"Are you married?" She asked.

I nodded.

"You'll stay in the same room?" She asked. I nodded. She stared at Suhani for a minute. She was looking at her sindhoor.

There were a total of 4 bedrooms. Only one of them had room for two people.

"Lucky for you, that's available." She said. She showed us to our room. We entered and now we were completely alone. The rain began to slow down. It was nighttime now. My car was in no shape to be driven yet. Both of us were wet. The room was as simple as can be. There was a small bed for two in the middle of the room, huge windows with blue curtains, a bathroom, and a dressing table. I sat at the edge of the bed. She turned on the lights. I had to think hard how to keep this night from becoming a total failure.

We didn't even have anything to eat yet. Did this place have any room service? I changed into my clothes for the night and then I went to ask the lady about food. They had some kind of room service. I was grateful for anything at this point. I could manage but I didn't want my wife to starve due to my pathetic sense of planning.

I went back to our room and Suhani was sifting through her bag.

"What happened?"

"All my clothes are wet." She said. She looked frustrated. She pushed her bag away and sat on the edge of the bed. I felt bad. This was all my fault and I knew it. I handed her my clothes.

"Wear my shirt...or whatever's still dry...I'm so sorry, Suhani. I didn't think this would happen. I had something else planned." I said. "I promise you..."

She still looked upset. I hated seeing her like this. There was a knock on the door. The food was here. At least we had that much. She didn't change. She was drenched. I was afraid she'd catch a cold. It wasn't until she sat across from me that I noticed how attractive she looked with a wet saree clinging to her skin. Strands of her hair were sticking to her face. Drops of water fell down the side of her face. Before I knew it, I was mesmerized.