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Posted: 10 years ago
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short but sweet update 😉

Part 3-


Yuvraj's POV:

She came back with something wrapped in a light blue blanket in her arms. As she came closer, I realized she was holding the baby. I walked towards her. She smiled and I smiled back. I looked down at the baby. He was wide awake and staring at me.

"He's very bright eyed for such a tiny guy..." I said.

"Yes. He's very observant." She said. The baby smiled at Suhani. I felt something tug at my heart's strings. He yawned.

"Awww...Snoopy yawns too." I said. Suhani laughed. "Yeah, he's a lot like Snoopy...but with less fur. You wanna hold him?" She asked.

"Me? I don't think so. I've never held a baby before. I'll break him or something." I said.

"Here..." She said and held out her arm and urged me. "C'mon Yuvraj, hold him...see how he's looking at you..." She said. I saw the baby and he was actually watching me like she said, with Suhani's nose and all.

"What if he falls? Bhavna will kill me."

"Shhh...take him." She urged me. I took him from her and the baby ended up in both our arms.

"Don't move...I'm scared to hold him alone..." I said. We held him together. The baby started crying.

"Crap, see..." He doesn't like me. Suhani looked emotional. "He does like you..." she said. "Hold him..." I held him on my own. He continued crying. Both of us experienced some unspeakable kind of emotion. I saw Suhani wipe away a tear. I knew what she was thinking. I held the baby against my shoulder and rubbed his back. Suhani watched me. Our eyes locked for a few seconds. Tears welled up in my eyes and I looked down. The baby had stopped crying. The feeling of the small and helpless child in my arms, against my shoulder, plus the image of Suhani holding him stayed with me for the rest of the night. I carefully gave him back to Suhani who headed to Bhavna's house.

I went back home. Maa was still awake, waiting for me.

"Hi Maa..." I said.

"How was dinner?"

"It was fine. Maa, I need to talk to you about something. I need you to promise you won't tell anyone. Tomorrow I'm taking Suhani to our farmhouse. I don't want anyone to know."

"Well, I can keep a secret." She smiled. She held my face.

"Do you think she hates me?" I asked.

"No Yuvraj! She'll never hate you. Why do you think she hates you?"

"No reason. Just wondering because, she has changed a lot..."

"Pain changes people. Your love will bring her back."

I nodded. I took Maa's hand in mine. "She'll come back, right Maa? She won't ask me for a divorce will she? She'll come back..." I stopped and cleared my throat. The fears began to come out. "She'll trust me again, right?" I said.

"I know you can make things right again and I have a feeling things are getting better. You just can't see that because you're afraid." She said. I hugged her.

"Yuvraj, Suhani will come back. She loves you...I see you both having a perfect life together. This is just a bad patch. You're going to have to help her through it. You have to show her and tell her how much you love her."

"But it's hard...it's hard to tell her how I feel. I don't know why..." I said. I felt frustrated.

"It's hard, but you'll manage. Can you live without her?"

"I can't. I need her." It felt like I would burst into tears if this conversation continued. It was better to end it here. "I'll see you in the morning, Maa..." I said. She nodded. I went to bed.

Suhani's POV:

I told Bhavna Di everything and she felt sure that Yuvraj was in love with me. I didn't. I couldn't believe that was possible.

"Suhani, he wants to be alone with you. These are dates. He's taking you out. I think he's afraid of your rejection. You know it as well, but you're not willing to believe it. Wanting to spend the night with you means only one thing..." She said. She shook me. "Wake up, Suhani!"

"Di, you don't get it. I'm not his type."

"We don't choose who we fall in love with, Suhani. It just happens. He loves you...and I think tomorrow night, he'll either tell you...or show you..." She said. I blushed. Suddenly, I felt nervous.

"How was he with the baby?" She asked. "Adorable...he was scared to hold him and then he looked like he loved holding him. He held him against his shoulder and it was just the sweetest thing I've ever seen..." I said.

"Awww!" she hugged me. I hugged her and cried against her shoulder.

"I can't live without him, Di...I can't. I love him..." I said.

"Suhani, you'll never have to live without him. He's going to be only YOURS. He already is. I'm telling you, tomorrow night..." She winked. I blushed again. I hoped she was right about his feelings. The thought of being all alone with him at night made me feel anxious. I went to sleep feeling confused, anxious, excited and giddy. The next day I went back home and told Yuvraj to pick me up from there.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
your short but sweet made me make a face 😕

But can i just say from the first word to the last dot this was purely heaven👏

i am deeply in awww with this particular update. and i really wants to bow down for the effort you put in to give a reality affect to each word you use... this is BRILLIANT!


all of it is just praise worthy.. jitna kahon utna kum hai.. ya kuch na kaho toh definitely insult hogi because this is pure LOVE, you are so full of love.. isliye har line mai wo sab dikh raha tha..


She came back with something wrapped in a light blue blanket in her arms. As she came closer, I realized she was holding the baby. I walked towards her. She smiled and I smiled back. I looked down at the baby. He was wide awake and staring at me.

"He's very bright eyed for such a tiny guy..." I said.


omg omg omg the starting is to die for she comes with a baby... the baby stared at him too adorable just way too much adorable... 👏


The baby smiled at Suhani. I felt something tug at my heart's strings. He yawned.

"Awww...Snoopy yawns too." I said. Suhani laughed. "Yeah, he's a lot like Snoopy...but with less fur. You wanna hold him?" She asked.


aek delusional fan ki duaein lagi gi apko behna.. for writing this .. today you gave me more dreams. snoopi yuvani and yuvani's baby.. snoopi will protect yuvani's angel.. i adore your references ap yuvraj kay andar kai traits ko jaisay likhti ho no one can be even close to them...



"Me? I don't think so. I've never held a baby before. I'll break him or something." I said.

"Here..." She said and held out her arm and urged me. "C'mon Yuvraj, hold him...see how he's looking at you..." She said. I saw the baby and he was actually watching me like she said, with Suhani's nose and all.

"What if he falls? Bhavna will kill me."


such delicately you have written these lines... too real to be true... dil jeet lia phirse... he is so scared... and i am sure this is what how he is gonna react once he interacts with a real baby.. may it be bhavna's or his and suhani's .. i am dead behna.. you shouldnt have wrote that way.. you have truly killed me with all of this today.. this is too realistic... you are classic at this ...


"Shhh...take him." She urged me. I took him from her and the baby ended up in both our arms.

"Don't move...I'm scared to hold him alone..." I said. We held him together. The baby started crying.


poor little kitten yuvraj... way too cute... cuteness .. the baby ended in both their arms. a moment to capture.. yaar... make yuvraj name the baby...



"Crap, see..." He doesn't like me. Suhani looked emotional. "He does like you..." she said. "Hold him..." I held him on my own. He continued crying. Both of us experienced some unspeakable kind of emotion. I saw Suhani wipe away a tear. I knew what she was thinking. I held the baby against my shoulder and rubbed his back. Suhani watched me. Our eyes locked for a few seconds. Tears welled up in my eyes and I looked down. The baby had stopped crying. The feeling of the small and helpless child in my arms, against my shoulder, plus the image of Suhani holding him stayed with me for the rest of the night. I carefully gave him back to Suhani who headed to Bhavna's house.


BEAUTIFUL! a life they both crave, a future they want together and their pure naive feelings of a family. you have shown them all in these lines... hats off behna ... who can ignore falling in love with these two after reading your stuff? no one can... not at all...

an impact full scene by you...



"Do you think she hates me?" I asked.

"No Yuvraj! She'll never hate you. Why do you think she hates you?"

"No reason. Just wondering because, she has changed a lot..."

"Pain changes people. Your love will bring her back."

I nodded. I took Maa's hand in mine. "She'll come back, right Maa? She won't ask me for a divorce will she? She'll come back..." I stopped and cleared my throat. The fears began to come out. "She'll trust me again, right?" I said.

"I know you can make things right again and I have a feeling things are getting better. You just can't see that because you're afraid." She said. I hugged her.

"Yuvraj, Suhani will come back. She loves you...I see you both having a perfect life together. This is just a bad patch. You're going to have to help her through it. You have to show her and tell her how much you love her."

"But it's hard...it's hard to tell her how I feel. I don't know why..." I said. I felt frustrated.

"It's hard, but you'll manage. Can you live without her?"

"I can't. I need her." It felt like I would burst into tears if this conversation continued. It was better to end it here. "I'll see you in the morning, Maa..." I said. She nodded. I went to bed.



well written scene with pratima.. his fears are pretty evident... and they hurt me all.. i am really sad after reading this.. this is what happens when i read your work which includes all genre and every line have depth.. I AM TELLING YOU AGAIN GO FOR WRITING YOU ARE UNBEATABLE AT TOUCHING PEOPLE WITH YOUR WORDS...

sooo touching... suhani is his life... his need , his reason... i am even in love with his pain and fears but i want them to be gone... i want a blissful smile on their face and clearance that both there hearts contains love for eachother...


EXCELLENT!!!




Suhani's POV was one of favorites too.. now suhani's pov is giving competition to yuvi's one but what do you want? me to get confused..? i loved how she thought that she was not his type.. and i love you for bhavna being so sure... i know you have taken it from the character bhavna she is always kind of a cupid in the show ... and she also gave ideas to suhani for proposing and all... this is your quality you don't change the heart of the character... MIND BLOWING...

yes yes yes yuvraj will show and say it too...



"How was he with the baby?" She asked. "Adorable...he was scared to hold him and then he looked like he loved holding him. He held him against his shoulder and it was just the sweetest thing I've ever seen..." I said.

"Awww!" she hugged me. I hugged her and cried against her shoulder.

"I can't live without him, Di...I can't. I love him..." I said.

"Suhani, you'll never have to live without him. He's going to be only YOURS. He already is. I'm telling you, tomorrow night..." She winked. I blushed again. I hoped she was right about his feelings.


i hope cvs bhi itnay realistic rahein...finally she is going to get the love she craved for...

the baby talk again was cuteness personified... i am sure he would have been way too adorable holding the kid and putting the baby with his shoulder trying to stop him from crying... awww "yuvi kahluuu" eeeksss 😳




dear behna

you can lit up any gloomy mood, freshen up each individuals mind with your piece f work... EPICALLY BEAUTIFUL... this is way too touching all of it... i am so happy... FANTASTIC way of putting up with sweetness and pain in one update... hugss you

bless you and update soon...

i have literally craved for your work so i cant get full of it .. jitna marzi parhloon...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay can't wait to read it thank you for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great update can't wait to read what happens next
It will be interesting to see what Yuvraj does next
Them holding the baby together aww so cute
Bhavna helping and assuring Suhani is cute
I like how pratima is helping Yuvraj it's good
Aww Yuvraj the didn't want to cry in front of his mum so sweet and cute
Please update tomorrow can't wait to read the next update
Them alone in the farmhouse will be fab I'm sure
Yuvraj better not spoil it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome ff! Totally love how you're writing each pov! Please update soon! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mehwish...you are turning me a devdas for your ff...
so sweet...yuvi holding baby...aww,.. so cute..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm just wondering abt ur writing skills yaar... 👏
Actually I can't write a nice essay even on my own language.
Edited by SunaP - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsm post mehwu really i was imagining both wid de bany...he says he yawns like snoopy...aww soo sweet...n suhani saying she cant live widout him wow...wqiting to read next part...pratima n yuvi convo was cute...👏pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pls update nxt part soon...can't wait
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