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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice...soumya ughhh😡...please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you again for all the motivating comments 😳 those are what makes me write 😃

Next part... Hope you all would enjoy it!

Part 6

Pratima frowned at Sharad who was walking from one end to other with thoughtful and troubled face. He had been doing this for the past ten minutes wasting their time and ruining the plan Pratima had plotted.


"Sharad, ab bas bhi karo, Kitna socho ge?"


"Mousi you know how Yuvraj is, he is too stubborn, if he refuses to realized or stop her from going, this is going to end in a huge mess,"


"Asie soch soch khe hum kaafi waqt guzaar chuke hain, ab aur nahi beta,"


"Haan mausi mein samaj tha hun, phir bhi... daadi is waiting for her to leave, ho sake toh dusre din hi shaadi karvaenge dono ka, mein Soumya kho bhabi khi jaga lete hue nahi dekh saktha,"


"Shh... be quiet Suhani had gone to talk to Yuvraj, she might return anytime now,"


"Mausi do you think she will tell him?"


"I don't mind even if she doesn't, but I need them to at least look at each other before she leaves... dekha nahi tumne how they were avoiding each other..." Pratima shook her head.


"Hmm... I'm worried about daadi and the two bhabi's too mausi, I saw them go to Saumya's room... wonder what they are upto,"


"Achcha? Jo bhi ho, mein apne bte ko uski zindagi aise karab karne nahi de sakthi, Ab jo bhi hoga kal hi hoga... dekh lo tum,"

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Suhani fidgeted as she entered Yuvraj's room, his absence in the room made her indulge in the decision she has made. She had stayed with Pratima for the last two weeks but today ma was adamant on Suhani talking to Yuvraj about her decision of leaving the house for good, but Suhani wasn't planning to do anything as such, he knows that she was going to leave anyway... he wants it too so why hurt herself by telling him that again, what she was doing wasn't easy... it felt as if she was leaving her whole life behind but this was all what she could do and also to an extent wants to do... Maybe she was running away from her problems, maybe she was being a coward but sometimes leaving is the best option.


Suhani walked inside the room lost in though and didn't notice Yuvraj walking out of the washroom, they both collided and Suhani gasped as he held her from her hip, for the first time in the last two weeks he looked at her straight in the eyes and she held her breath, the intensity of his look was so new, so different and held so many emotions which she couldn't comprehend. Was it anger? She wondered, however her thoughts halted when he moved his fingers close to her face as it caressed her skin from her fingers to the shoulder creating a trail of goose bumps. Yuvraj looked at her as she stood charmed by his touch, why did she want to leave him when she was still clearly in love with him?' he thought, her hair which was let loose like always and the silky strands came in between his vision making him move his fingers towards it as his skin caressed hers softly, she closed her eyes as he moved forward to tuck the locks behind her ear. She held the towel which was around his neck as his breath touched her neck and Yuvraj could feel himself losing control over his actions. His left arm which was around her waist was holding her with a strong grip keeping her close to him and she left out a gasp when the tip of his nose touched her soft cheeks. There were lots of questions within him, lots of confusions, somehow amidst all of those he also realized how content this proximity made him feel... her thudding heart against his chest, her ragged breath on his neck, her cold skin against his palm... why were all these making him go crazy? It was crazy because he didn't want to get out of this enchantment... he wanted to go further deep, explore every angle and feel content like this forever. Yuvraj was about to dip his face into the darkness of her hair when someone knocked on the door, Suhani who had lost her senses completely was startled with this rude intrusion, she staggered back as she pushed him away slightly and rushed into the washroom with a regretful heart.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Ur ona roll girl wid back to back updates...part 6 is sooovhot n romantic. ...I died
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Floored what an awesome chapter u sooo good sweetie lovely chapter I hope it aint souyma that crazy dog
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
That chapter was amazing! I think the cv need to take some romance lessons from you. I would love to see thar kind of romance on th real show. Keep up the great work! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
It was simple yet romantic.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Loved all 6 chapters
Can't wait to read the nxt part
Congo ur soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
amazing chapter, Sharad is funny, I like him he is a sweetheart
the last part was wow, beautifully written, it's good to see Yuvraj is in love with Suhani, now he just has to tell her so she can stay
if he knows she loves him, then he really needs to do something to stop her from going
hope we get the next chapter soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Oh, what a treat

Loved reading the last 3 updates together (especially the last one where Yuvi is boldy romancing his wife (about time😆😉). I just hope it's not slimy Somu interrupting (unless of course she got a healthy dose of Yuvraj getting up close and personal with his wife!)😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Even i am rudely awake by that stupid knock.. Hope no evil witches came to disturb them..
I dont want their seperation talk to be an emotional talk.. Let it be like some realisation from yuvaraj end and confusion at suhani end

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