YuvAni SS- part 11/page 15 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
really nice update, I like how Suhani is keeping her distance from Yuvraj and his family, this will make him realise how important she is for him and his family
I hope Pratima will be ok and gets well soon
it was nice Yuvraj told Souamya off, she deservers more, I can't believe she had a go at Suhani and was she was not wanted there and Yuvraj will not love her etc
I like how Sharad came and said sorry to Suhani
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Amazing updated! I love it when OS become SS we get the pleasure of reading more wonderful stories.

Please continue! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Aww beautiful what a heartbreaking chapter I could so imagine this happening. The writers of this forum are just so darn talented u guys are just building up the scene when suhani finally founds out the truth. Beautiful chapter I cnt wait for the next chapter and update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Wow loved the way Yuvraj shrugged off Soumya. Hope she gets some brain but thats impossible
Suhani is tryng to be strong in such difficult situation. I am loving her
Loved ur update.Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Another short update 😃
Enjoy!

Part 5

Days passed, there wasn't a day where Suhani wasn't taunted by dadi or Saumya, but whatever they said they made sure that it wasn't in front of Yuvraj. And as for Yuvraj, Suhani just couldn't understand what he was trying to prove... his behavior towards her was alien to her, he would sit with Pratima for hours but wouldn't look at her or talk to her, he would help her look after ma but wouldn't scold or snap at her like he usually does. And that was weird!


Suhani was sitting next to Pratima as she took her medicines, Suhani took the empty glass from Pratima and was about to walk out of the room,


"Suhani, mujhse baat nahi karoge?"


Suhani turned and faced Pratima, confused as to why she was asking that question, "baat?"


"Haan, jo tujhe itna pareshan kar raha hai... uske baren main,"


"Ma main teek hun, aap yeh,"


"Beta yahan aao," Pratima held out her hand, "I know, I know that you are hurt and I know you are feeling betrayed but beta mein ya Sharad even Yuvraj, we didn't do any of this to hurt you beta,"


"Ma please, leave all that... I don't want to talk about it,"


"No beta, nahi... mujhse yeh bhoj aur bardash nahi hota... whatever happened, yeh sab meri bhi galthi hai... tumhe patha hai jab Yuvraj told me..." she started telling everything she knew about him falling in love, telling her about it and the misunderstanding, when she finished and looked at Suhani, she knew that she had hurt her yet again but she wanted Suhani to know the complete truth, Pratima wanted Suhani to know how the confusion she created such a big mess by few decisions Soumya, her father and Yuvraj made. "Mein tumhari gunyadar hun beta aur mein tumse maafi mang rahi hun, mujhe..."


"Kya bhol rahe ho maa aap, nahi please don't say sorry, you are nothing less than my mother, I love and respect you more than anyone in this house agar mein yahan wapas aayi toh sirf aap khi wajah se... ma please,"


"I know beta, I know... but a mistake is a mistake, I spoilt your life,"


"Ma please, don't think like that, what you are doing now isn't good for your health and ma you know every mistake can be amended, hum iss galthi kho bhi teek kara denge, mera dhil tho tutna hi tah tab nahi hua toh ab ho gaya... bas, actually ma your mistake gave me an opportunity to be so near to the person I love... wahi kaafi hain ma, jee lungi main,"


"What are you saying beta?"


"I am saying ma, we shouldn't spoil yuvraj and Soumya's life for my happiness alone... sach kahun toh ab when I know that Yuvraj isn't happy with me, I'm not happy with this life either... toh,"


"Kaise pagal pan hai beta, yeh zindagi tumhe baghwan ne diya hai... jo bhi hua haan humhe galthi lag tha hai... par isme bhagwan khi marzi shamil hai, what you are thinking of doing is..."


"Aap pareshan math hona ma, this is the only way to set things right, I know you'll understand,"


Pratima shook her head, not wanting to agree but how can she be selfish? How can she force Suhani to live in this hell because her son was taking too long to realize his wife's value, his love for her and the importance of the relationship he shares with Suhani. She tried, as a mother who wishes the best for her son she tried to make him realize... but now it's her turn to play the role of being a mother to not only Yuvraj but also for Suhani, she was a Birla too and she would prove that good intentions are what makes a plan successful not pride or evil intentions.


"Ok beta, I wouldn't stop you actually I would help you get what you need, just give me a day, I have to make some preparations,"


"No ma..."


"Meine tumhari baat maani na?" she asked and Suhani nodded, "now it's your turn to listen to me," Pratima cupped Suhani's face as she smiled at her affectionately.


Edited by aysha1989 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Aww I just love u u so awesome thanks for the double treat u the best I loved the chapter and I cnt wait to read what happens next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Superb updates
Thanks 4 the double treat😊
Can't wait 2 read what happens nxt

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Thank for the double update!!! No words for sowmya...
I think yuvaraj is like suhani is here i wont talk n mess things up now mode..

Let us see what pratima has in her sleeves..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Loved both updates.saumya is disgusting.How cud she behave like that with suhani,one who supported her in every thick and thin.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Aww I love the relationship between Pratima and Suhani so sweeet, it's good that Pratima told Suhani everything now she knows what happened and how it happend

Can't wait to read your next updates

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