SS2 (III) (Pg 150 Full Update(In progress)) - Page 60

what di. u cant do that.plz hurry do the update,i'm dying for it. just thinking wht will aryan do now

love u di ,🤗kya dhunnai karwai Aryan se us sandeep ki.
that idiot guy have given many trouble to all of them and specially deepika.loved deepika giving him a resounding slap .👏Vishal giving commentry and thinking what will be best to realize Deepika that How much Aryan loves her was great👍🏼 👏 👏 .Aryan vishal kitna bhi ek dusre ko taunt kaare koi dussra agar doono me se ek ko takleef deta hai to dussre ko bhi utni hi takleef hoti hai a great relationship.😃 👏


di loved each and every word ,each and every dialouge. starting to end sabhi ek se bhadiya ek the.👏 👏 👏 👏

Aryan: Did he or did he not hit you? Meri aankhon me dekhke kehenaa…..

Dipika: Bharosa hai tab hi ab tak chup hoon, phir bhi…. Kiska imtehaan le rahe ho.... Dosti ka ya pyaar ka!

loved the most. 😳

Ab deepika ko samajh me ayega ki Aryan loves her so much . 😳
Boxer ki entry damakedar thi. 👏
Vishal calling Aryan Aru ,giving him hint. 😉
great great part .👏 👏 Amazing work 👏 👏.ek ek secene eyes ke samne aa raha hai.you are a great writer di. 😛
jaldi doosra part do di ,Aryan ne gooli to chalayi hai lekin
us gooli ka kya hoga ,us stupid guy ka kya hoga ,bhaut raaz kulne baaki hai😊 waiting ........................ 😳 👏 😳

Originally posted by: kanan_26

oh cool cool cool!
fantabulously amazing!
loved the way u write ur ff so real and full of energy! that u can actually feel the emotions!
im soooo sorry i couldnot reply to the earlier parts but was a silent reader and they were tooo gud im out of words!
now i think aru and deeps sld confess to each other!
loving vishal and sandy!
but tell sandy that after deepikas hes mine then hers! 😆 naughty me hehe!
heet up the extactic work!
god bless u!
by the way i updated my ff do read and coment!
waitting for the other part!
👏

Oh no problem kanan.... Thanks a lot... Yeah.... reading your ff.... Got the promo till now😊

Haan Sandy ko bata doongi ki kanan said so😆

Originally posted by: maisoon

THANK YOOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH KRITS!!!!!!! FOR ONE OF THE BEST PART EVER🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
you really have given what we wanted yaar!!!!! the action, the suspence, the concern and the danger 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 loved everyline of it!!!!

vishal to really rocked yaar!!!!!👏 👏 👏 aur aryan ki fights ki comentary de raha tha....lolzzzzz 😆
BUT JAANU TO RULED THE SCENE AND DIPIKA'S HEART 😉 mera bhi ❤️ 😳 🤗
he got soo concerned for deep!!us ka pyaar us ke ek ek punches main dekh raha tha jo us ne sandeep per nichawar kiye😆
dipika bhi kaam nahi hai.....a slap coming from dipika!!!quite refreshing😆

aryan got totally crazy when he saw sandeep with her😳i got crazy seeing him with deeps😆
uufff!!!jaise us ne sandeep ko punches kiye nah....vaamp##@# mujhe laga he will die 🤢
but bahut acha hua. the b***#@ of the doctor deserved that very much😡

aryan ne sandeep ko mar diya 🤔well im not sure 😉 i know what vishal was doing when he handed the gun
he have confidence in aryan👍🏼aryan is out of control but pagal to nahi hai

Thank you so much Amna... expected the unexpected is an FF right?😉

Hmm... Vishu intelligent hai ki Aryan smart, dekhna hai😃

You really are crazy, no doubt😊 Ab Dipi ko bhi kuch haath chalane hain jab vo ab Shona ban gayi hai😉

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

wow, a long update! 😆
i totally loved it. you're so good at detail, I could never have written out the whole fight scene and everything like you did. 👏 👏
vishal giving commentary was too funny. and even in the middle of a fight and tension and everything, he's still thinking of how to bring dipika and aryan together 😆
that sandeep guy got what he deserved. loved dipika's slap especially, almost more than i loved aryan beating him up.
fantastic job!
love,
aj

Thank you so much... Lekin itnaaaaa lamba nahi tha pata hai.... Like to hang you guys on thread😆

Originally posted by: minisa

ya maha_prakrti(dunno ur name) i come 1 time here becoz i duuno know abut dis ff thanzz sunara 4 give me da link otherwise i miss a good ff its amazing i read sum parts in sum shorts becoz i am busy that r so lenthy but i love ur ff ur updating love vishaal deepika scence 😳 👏 👏

My name is Krithika minisa.... And thank you... Please whenever you can do read😳

Originally posted by: nirmola

what di. u cant do that.plz hurry do the update,i'm dying for it. just thinking wht will aryan do now

nirmola, wait to karo....😉 Kuch to hoga... Thanks for the appreciation😃

Originally posted by: ruha

love u di ,🤗kya dhunnai karwai Aryan se us sandeep ki.
that idiot guy have given many trouble to all of them and specially deepika.loved deepika giving him a resounding slap .👏Vishal giving commentry and thinking what will be best to realize Deepika that How much Aryan loves her was great👍🏼 👏 👏 .Aryan vishal kitna bhi ek dusre ko taunt kaare koi dussra agar doono me se ek ko takleef deta hai to dussre ko bhi utni hi takleef hoti hai a great relationship.😃 👏


di loved each and every word ,each and every dialouge. starting to end sabhi ek se bhadiya ek the.👏 👏 👏 👏

Aryan: Did he or did he not hit you? Meri aankhon me dekhke kehenaa…..

Dipika: Bharosa hai tab hi ab tak chup hoon, phir bhi…. Kiska imtehaan le rahe ho.... Dosti ka ya pyaar ka!

loved the most. 😳

Ab deepika ko samajh me ayega ki Aryan loves her so much . 😳
Boxer ki entry damakedar thi. 👏
Vishal calling Aryan Aru ,giving him hint. 😉
great great part .👏 👏 Amazing work 👏 👏.ek ek secene eyes ke samne aa raha hai.you are a great writer di. 😛
jaldi doosra part do di ,Aryan ne gooli to chalayi hai lekin
us gooli ka kya hoga ,us stupid guy ka kya hoga ,bhaut raaz kulne baaki hai😊 waiting ........................ 😳 👏 😳

Wow.... Pooja.... Thanks for an awesome comment... Hmm.... let's see what Aryan does or Dipi does😉

di waiting egarely................... heart is going up and down
do cont fast please (if you don't have work burden then only )