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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nirmola

gr8 di 👏

ur deserve this

thank you so much nirmola

Originally posted by: sam78

it was awesome, amazing and great etc.........

I'm so sorry for late commenting. i was little busy with my college things.

sandeep you got of easy man.
dipika and aryan are little opening to eachother that is great start.
well well vishal you're just like aryan, when it comes to some one you love. i would say this will bring vishal and sandhya little more close.
it was fabulous krithika.

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Hey sam... Missed ya... But no problem... College work is more important.... Thanks for all the apprecations😳

Originally posted by: kanan_26

excellen fantabulous amazing!
loved ur update!
liked the way vihals concerned for sandy!
aru and deepi were just to adoreable! 😍
love them together!
keep up the extactic work!
u write sooo nicely that everytime im out of vocabulary!
god bless and update soon!
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Thank you so much Kanan.... and yes many more updates are coming on😃

Originally posted by: minisa

wowwwwwwwwwwww amazing grat updates good u wrote fafulous i imagine all da scence great u r great writer
luv deepika ,aryan ,vishaal scence /diaolouges 👏

Thanks minisa.... What's your name by the way? minisa itself?😛

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Originally posted by: maisoon

slap!!! wow!!!! 😆 really cute slap from vishal i think 😳 but sandy ko kitna cute laga ye to wo francis ko hossh main ayne ke baad he bataye gi!!!😉

sooo case solve than!!! 😃it was the most exciting most dhamal and kamal case ever and greatly done by you 👏

aryan came to know about vishal 😃 daat dene pare gi of his presence of mind...he was not himself than.....😳 and ye shotgun bhi bada sataan hai!!!!sab pata hai 😉😆


😆Shotgun ki shaitaani ka kya karoon..... Use bhi pyaar hua tha naa? as for slap, Sandy has a lotttttt to tell him about it.... thanks a lot!

Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
great great part di.👏 👏 👏one of the best case solved again 👏👏👏,lekin di Vishal ko wapas mat bhej dena .😛
Abhi uski BHaut jaroort hai Sandy ko 😳aur Aryan aur Deepika ko bhi😉 😆.Vishal and Aryan both together rocks.
Aryan ko pata chal gaya na ki Franch hi Vishal hai.Ab mazza ayega .😆
jab Sandhya ko pata chalega tab ..........😉 Wow
.loved Vishal caring for SAndhya,after this case both vishal and Sandy ,Aryan and deepika, came closer. 😃
Aryan: Jab apne ko chot hoti hai to unke kusoorvaar ko dand milega... Anywhere.... Everywhere!
Aryan for first time speaking so clearly.
Neha and Ajay also together . 😃
Shotgun: Ami je tomar... Shuduje tomar...
bechare ko nahi pata uska bhi chance ane wala hai. 😆

Edited by ruha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks minisa.... What's your name by the way? minisa itself?
hiiiii kritika my name is mini ,manisha 😃
ya olzz post next part soon i am waited 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ruha

great great part di.👏 👏 👏one of the best case solved again 👏👏👏,lekin di Vishal ko wapas mat bhej dena .😛
Abhi uski BHaut jaroort hai Sandy ko 😳aur Aryan aur Deepika ko bhi😉 😆.Vishal and Aryan both together rocks.
Aryan ko pata chal gaya na ki Franch hi Vishal hai.Ab mazza ayega .😆
jab Sandhya ko pata chalega tab ..........😉 Wow
.loved Vishal caring for SAndhya,after this case both vishal and Sandy ,Aryan and deepika, came closer. 😃
Aryan: Jab apne ko chot hoti hai to unke kusoorvaar ko dand milega... Anywhere.... Everywhere!
Aryan for first time speaking so clearly.
Neha and Ajay also together . 😃
Shotgun: Ami je tomar... Shuduje tomar...
bechare ko nahi pata uska bhi chance ane wala hai. 😆

Thank you Pooja.... Hmm... Very clearly speaking..... As for sending Vishal away..... Ab sandhya hai to kaise bhejh sakti hoon😉

Originally posted by: minisa

Thanks minisa.... What's your name by the way? minisa itself?
hiiiii kritika my name is mini ,manisha 😃
ya olzz post next part soon i am waited 😳

Nice name! I'll call you Mini😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey di,
sorry i'm late replying, was really busy since we're leaving soon..since we're shifting to the US this summer we have to get everything taken care of now 🤢
awesome part! the case is tied up finally, our team can get some rest now (or not, i guess, they're always working na.)
it was great to see Vishal caring for Sandy 😳
and Aryan and Dipika were cute as well. Finally he's found out it was actually Vishal bugging him all this time 😃 Aryan's dialogue was really nice too.
OK, probably I won't be able to post anything for a while...maybe I'll show up every once in a while and make some random comment...so bye guys! have fun!
and keep writing!
love,
aj
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

hey di,
sorry i'm late replying, was really busy since we're leaving soon..since we're shifting to the US this summer we have to get everything taken care of now 🤢
awesome part! the case is tied up finally, our team can get some rest now (or not, i guess, they're always working na.)
it was great to see Vishal caring for Sandy 😳
and Aryan and Dipika were cute as well. Finally he's found out it was actually Vishal bugging him all this time 😃 Aryan's dialogue was really nice too.
OK, probably I won't be able to post anything for a while...maybe I'll show up every once in a while and make some random comment...so bye guys! have fun!
and keep writing!
love,
aj

Thank you so much Aj.... Will miss ya... And Happy Shifting!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Apollo Hospital….

As Dipika hurried inside the hospital Aryan asked….

Aryan: Koun sa room? ❓

Dipika: (Pressing the lift button) Ajay ko emergency ward me rakha hai…. Sandhya is in special ward! Dono second floor!

Dipika, Aryan and Shotgun entered the lift and came out in the second floor…. Looking around they saw Neha and Boxer standing at the end of the right corridor….

Hurrying up to them….

Aryan: Ajay! Kaisa hai? 😕

Neha: (Smiling feebly) Fine…. Chot gehera to nahi hai, phir bhi aaj raat hospital me rukne ko kaha hai!

Dipika: Thank God…. Ussse mile? ❓

Boxer: Haan… Lekin doctor ne use sedate kiya hai to he is sleeping!

Aryan went over to just have a peek inside the room….

Dipika walked back along the corridor searching for the Special Ward… Neha and Boxer looked at each other wondering what Dipika was searching for!? 🤔

At the left corridor, the first room left side of the lift she found it….

Seeing the room Dipika thought for a while and slowly opened the door and entered it….

At this end, Aryan came back saying….

Aryan: Shukar hai Ajay is safe…. (Looking around) Dipika? Dipika kahan hai?

Neha: Vo shayad Sandhya se milne gayi hai…. Lift ke left me first room me hi use admit kiya hai!

Aryan: (Looking in that direction) Doctor ne kya kaha uske baare me?

Neha: Tch… Pata nahi… Hum to Ajay ke paas the… Franc…. Mera matlab Vishal uske paas hai!

As Aryan looked at her questioningly Neha smiled and said….

Neha: Boxer ne bataya tha kya hua neeche, us room me…. Dipika ne Francis ko Vishal bulaya aur samajh me aaya ki he was under disguise!

Aryan: Haan…. Cheater cock hai hi vo…. (Chuckling 😃 ) Lekin kiya to ek good cause ke liye! So it should be fine! Lekin is ke liye ussse khabar zaroor leni padegi!

Shotgun, Neha and Boxer looked at each other smiling to see Aryan back in form! 😛




Special Ward….

Dipika opened the door and saw Vishal in his true Vishal form, without the beard and the hat and coat of the dance costume, sitting beside Sandhya….

Smiling, she silently went in and placed a hand over his shoulder….

Vishal started and looked up at her…..

Vishal: Oh…. Aa gayi mem saab…. Case khatam hua…. Lekin aapko apne Romeo ke saath hi rehena tha! 😉

Dipika with mock anger hit him on his shoulder and sitting down on the bed said….

Dipika: Haan… Haan… Jaise Majunu apne Laila ke saath hai! (Giving a glance towards Sandhya) 😆

Now it was Dipika's turn to wince as she received a sharp pinch on her arms…. 😵

Vishal: Bahut bolne lagi ho tum!

Dipika: Are baap re…. Aap hi ke sangat ka asar hai!

As Vishal tried to hit her again, Dipika moved and in turn he hit Sandhya's hands which was in drips….

Vishal: (Jerking back his hand as if shocked) Oh no… Dekha kya kar diya!

Vishal got up and checked to see her drip needle…. Confirmed that it was intact and she was still sleeping he turned to look at Dipika who was looking at him smiling in a weird way…. 🤪

Vishal: What? 😳

Dipika just shrugged making a straight face and looking at Sandhya asked….

Dipika: Ab kaisi hai vo? ❓

Vishal: Still in shock… Abhi tak hosh nahi aaya hai…. Injection lagaya hai doctor ne…. Said she would be fine my morning!

Dipika: Good…. Good to see you concerned for her!

Vishal: (Lifting up his hands) Oh oh oh oh…. Madam ji…. Please…. Stop there…. Concerned yes…. Kyunki usne humare liye itna kuch kiya hai…. Uske is halat ki zimmedaar hum bhi kaheen na kaheen hain!

Dipika: (Mocking 😈 ) Ah! Hum nahi tum… Tumhi ne to suggest kiya tha ussse help lene ke liye, jab pata chala Aadhya ka college perform kar raha hai us get-together me… Phir vo medical council ki taraf se performance hone waali hai uski jhoothi khabhar sab tumhara idea tha!

Vishal: Alright! Alright! Itna bhadakne ki zaroorat nahi hai.… Haan to main hi zimmedaar hoon…. Isliye uski help ki…. Ab main chala…. Maine hospital se unke ghar waalon ko phone karne ko keh diya hai… They will be here anytime…. 😒

As Vishal left the room Dipika hastily followed him and stopped him at the door…

Dipika: Vishal ruko! Such me tumhe Sandhya ke prathi koi feelings nahi ha 😕 i? True to yourself? Why are you stopping yourself?

Vishal: Mujhe nahi pata…. It's just that…. I am not interested in her…. Will you just leave the matter here…..

Dipika: Such bolo Vishal….

Determined she took his hand to keep it on her head, when he jerked it back and said sternly….

Vishal: Apni kasam mat dena ab....

Dipika: To phir bolo ki kyun ussse baat bhi theek se karna nahi chahate... I know... Mujhe pata hai you like her..... Phir itni chuppa chuppi kyun….

Vishal: Koi chuppa chuppi nahi.....

Dipika: Then tell me the reason…. Tell you don't like her…. Give me a solid reason….

Vishal: (Irritated by her pester 😡 ) Dipika…. Please…. Just leave the matter…. Mujhe ab shaadi nahi karni…. I want to concentrate on my work…. Ab uske man me kuch feelings ho to isme main kya kar sakta hoon!

Dipika: Nai… Tum jhooth bol rahe ho… Something else is the matter…. Vishal!

Frustrated by the pester Vishal said aloud sternly….

Vishal: Fine! You want reason…. This is the reason…. Until you are settled in life I am not thinking about myself! Understand? (As Dipika looked on stunned, Vishal said slowly) Chalo… Tumhe ghar chod deta hoon! 😔

Saying Vishal left the room as Dipika looked on upset with herself….

So that was why Vishal was not taking interest in Sandhya…. Because of her!?!? 😲

Thinking about what Vishal said Dipika left the room… She looked across the corridor where Aryan, Neha and Boxer were talking….. She looked at Aryan whose back was towards her… Was she closer to him or far away from him? Did she want to be closer or far?

She waved her hand to Neha who was facing her and left the corridor….

Neha looked at her wave and was about to tell Aryan, but Dipika had left…

Aryan: (Seeing Neha watch elsewhere) Kya hua? ❓

Neha: (Hesitantly) Vo Dipika said she was leaving!

Aryan turned and looked at the corridor and back at Neha….

Aryan: Akeli? But… 😔

Neha: Nai…. Vo Vishal bhi nikala…. To usi ke saath….

Aryan looked at her and smiled for sake…. 😳

Neha and Boxer just gave a glance towards each other…😕
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Special Squad Office…..

Next day Dipika entered Special Squad office to find it in heights of celebration….



When she entered all the officers came to her and wished her for the success on the operation…. Behind the group Neha and Vishal stood smiling at her….

Coming up to them she hugged them good morning and asked….

Dipika: Kya baat hai? Ye celebration kis baat ke liye? ❓

Vishal: Are wah? Just like that pooch liya? Are baba… (Guiding her to the pantry) Kal ke operation ki success ki reaction hai ye…. News nahi dekha kya? Kal humare operation wrap up ke baad control room se information gayi… World wide arrests hue hain… All big shots…. Many in London especially! 😊



Dipika: Hmm…. Breaking news pada tha! Sirf humne thode kuch kiya…. Sabne kaam kiya hai naa?

Neha: (Coming along her side) Haan…. Tab hi Commissioner sir bhi aaye hain…. Everyone…. The whole special team is there in the pantry!



Dipika: Commissioner sir?! ❓

Vishal: Yes… Chalo!

Saying Vishal took her inside the pantry which was crowded with the whole team formed for this sting operation!

Dipika saw that the Commissioner was talking to everyone and congratulating them….

She saw Aryan with him happy and enthusiastic with the success…. After a long time she was seeing him so happy and wished him to be so forever! 😊



Hearing the three come in he turned around and looked at Dipika….

The Commissioner too turned and smiling said….

Commissioner: Hello Dipika!

Dipika: Good Morning sir!

Commissioner: Great job… Everyone has done splendidly well…. International level se appreciations aa rahe hain, humare liye….

Dipika: Of course sir… Ye to hona hi tha… Especially when Aryan and Vishal are leading the operation! ⭐️

Commissioner: Rightly said Dipika…. Okay then… Today I have given you all a off because I know for the past one month you have forgotten your sleeps for this…. From tomorrow you can report back to your normal duties…. (To Vishal) And you too Vishal! 👏

Vishal nodded and the Commissioner left the pantry….

The rest of the team came over to Aryan and Vishal and talked about yesterday's incident while Aryan's eyes rested only on her!

She smiled seeing her friend and …… (The blank again! Where she knew not what to fill! 😳 ) getting praises…. Shotgun, Neha, Ajay and Boxer were also enjoying the attention! Rarely such praises came by for Special Squad team even though they did a splendid job in crime solving!

Just then an officer came over to her and talked excitedly about yesterday's incident…. Accompanying her Dipika went over to the counter to pour herself a glass of juice when she heard one officer tell Aryan and Vishal….

Officer 1: Sir…. Maine suna aapne kal Sandeep ki haddi pasali ek kar di?

Aryan and Vishal immediately looked over at Dipika who glared at them… 😳

Officer 2: He deserved it…. Kitnon ki jaan gayi thi uske karan!

Officer 1: Vo to hai… Haath se rukna nahi chahiye tha, pair, sir sab todna chahiye tha!

Dipika kept the half full glass of juice and bottle back at the counter and left the pantry angrily! 😡

Aryan looked at the door upset while Vishal mumbled….

Vishal: Soch hi raha tha ki madam bhool gayi…. Thanks to him, yaad dila diya…. Ab kya karein?!?!? 😔



Some time later….

Special Squad office came back to normancy after an hour or so when all the officers and well wishers from other departments left for their work….

Finally free from everyone Vishal came hurrying out of the pantry searching for Dipika…. She was not in her cabin…. He searched everywhere and finally came to Neha's place….

Neha's place was already a place of hustle as the whole Special Squad team was there….

The newly wed Zubin had returned back and Haseena had also come to congratulate the team for their success!

Boxer was saying…

Boxer: Mujhse bhi kaha nahi!



Haseena: Abbas aap ko pata to hai ki Vishal sir ne mujh par bharosa kiya hai, to its part of my job to keep silence!



Putting his arms around her shoulder…..

Boxer: Are baba…. I am not complaining…. Mujhe pata hai tumhara job hai… I am not complaining at all! 🤗

Neha: Boxer… Complain karte to bhi kuch nahi hone waala! Tumhara muh to ghar jaake band ho jaata hai…. Haseena ko gussa karne ki ghustaaki tum kar hi nahi sakte!

As they all laughed Vishal reached them…..

Vishal: Haseena ko to phir bhi manana aasaan hai, lekin Dipika ko kaise manaye? ❓

Vishal leant against the table, arms folded and looked at them all questioningly….

Ajay: Kyun kya hua? Ab to theek hi thi…. Andar hans ke baatein bhi kar rahi thi!



Vishal: Haan… Lekin kisi ko ye bardaash nahi hui…. Baaton baaton me kal us Sandeep ke haath todne ki baat aayi aur phir se Vetal ped chad gaya!

Neha: Tum logon ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha…. Pata hai naa ki is operation ke liye Commissioner bhi maan gaye the, Dipika ko manana hi mushkil ho gaya tha! Phir us Sandeep ke haath kyun toda? 🤔

Vishal: Lo jaise maine toda… Aru se poocho! Dipika par usne haath uthaya aur sir ne uska haath tod diya!

Haseena: (Shocked) Dipika ko maaraa usne?!!? 😲

Boxer: Haan… Haseena… Bataya to tha maine tumhe kal!

Haseena: Aapne to sirf ye bataya ki Dipika se batameezi ki usne, maaraa nahi bataya…. Phir to Aryan ne sahi kiya!

Vishal: Haseena ji… Hum sab yahan jaante hain ki jo kuch bhi Aryan ne kiya theek tha, lekin Dipika to manegi nahi… Kal pray kiya maine ki bhool jaye…. Bhool bhi gayi thi, lekin!

Zubin: Ab Dipika kahan hai? ❓



Vishal: (Grinning 😃 ) Are naya navela dulha bola! (As everyone laughed and Zubin blushed 😳 ) Pata nahi… Poora office chaan maraa! Aryan hai ki apne laptop me ghusa hua jaise kuch hua naa ho…. Ab in dono ko patch up karne hume ghoomna pad raha hai!

As the group smiled Neha said…..

Neha: Dipika aur Shotgun basement gayein hain… Lab ke liye kuch items lane…. Dipika aur Aryan jitna ek doosre ko samajhte hain utna hi door ho rahe hain… Paas aaye to hi naa!

Vishal: Hmm…. Kuch to karna padega?

Zubin: Lekin kaise? ❓

Ajay: Kyun Zubin? In sab se experience le rahe ho kya Purvi ko manane, jab vo gussa hogi?

Ajay and Boxer gave each other high five as Haseena and Neha shook their heads smiling…. 😆

Vishal: Well ek idea to hai!

Haseena: (Puzzled) Kya?

As Vishal explained his plan slowly the confused expression on the team's face turned to one of enthusiasm…. After explaining his plan he extended his hand out palm upwards…. Smiling Haseena kept her hand on his, then Boxer, then Ajay, Neha and Zubin! 😛
Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part di. 👏 👏 👏hope Sandhya jaldi theek ho jaye.😊

Vishal ko uske paas rukna tha na..lekin he is not accepting the truth. in this matter he is just like Aru. 😕

Zubin to chupa rustam nikla di 😉,Akle hi shaadi kar le bataya hi nahi ,lekin humare team bhi use aise nahi chodne wali. 😉 😆

Boxer Hassena ko kitne Acche se samajta hai ,so nice of him. 😃

woh do officers ne Dipika ko phir se yad dela di na Aur Aryan aise baitha hai jaise kuch nahi hua ,Ab Vishal ne kya plan banaya hai dono ko melane ka?😉

lagta hai Vishal ke liye bhi plan banana padeja taki wo bhi apne dil ki baat sune ........ 😉

waiting for more .............................😛


Edited by ruha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was awesome.

vishal you are to great.
i loved the part.
let see what plan vishal has made for aryan and dipika.

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