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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ruha

di waiting egarely................... heart is going up and down
do cont fast please (if you don't have work burden then only )

😆Nai work burden nahi hai... Not untill this week though.... Kal maane aaj raat tak ek achcha update milega😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
to aaj update milega, na?
actually after friday i probably won't be around much, we'll be visiting family and everyone for most of the summer, so even if i can get online i might not be able to post anything...just to let you know.
love,
aj
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

to aaj update milega, na?
actually after friday i probably won't be around much, we'll be visiting family and everyone for most of the summer, so even if i can get online i might not be able to post anything...just to let you know.
love,
aj

Aure Aj.... Before Friday you'll get lots of updates... as for not being here... Will miss ya a lot... Come back soon and enjoy hols😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Dipika, Boxer, Raheem and Francis looked stunned for a minute at Aryan who had his gun inserted into Sandeep's mouth….

Dipika looked at Francis angrily who looked at her puzzled….

Dipika: Khush? Even when we are in duty we don't have rights to kill anybody! 😡

Francis: (Confused 😕 ) Lekin…. Main Dipika…. Listen! Us gun me to goli nahi thi… To...

As they looked on Aryan took out his gun and looked at Sandeep sternly… Sandeep who had his eyes closed in shock opened it slowly and looked around…. He sighed with relief at the thought of been alive!

Aryan: Mar deta…. Lekin nai…. Ek hi shot me you wouldn't feel the pain… Lekin yaad rahega tumhe ye din…. Maine kaha tha, kaha tha ki phir se kisi par haath uthaya to haath kaam karne layak nahi rahenge…. 😡

Saying Aryan got up and pulled him up looking at him closely….

Dipika went over to him and pulled his grip from Sandeep and nodded to Raheem who came and took him into custody… 😳

Before Dipika could ask anything they heard another tirade of bullet!

Everybody in the room looked at each other shocked…

Boxer: (Shocked 😲 ) Ye bullets…. Somewhere else it's been fired!

Francis and Aryan turned around running out of the door….. On the way Francis shouted to Raheem…..

Francis: Raheem take Sandeep in custody and tell the forces to come in here!

Boxer and Dipika followed them out the room door and the corridor and the lobby door…. Outside they looked here and there trying to find out the source of the bullet sound which had ceased now…

From all over the corridor room doors were opening and police came in pushing and pulling people they had arrested…. From the outer stairs Shotgun also came down accompanied by two police officers!

The party hall door too opened and the many arrested were brought out!

To one of the team officer who was in disguise but now leading a person under custody, who had come out of the party hall, Francis stopped and asked…

Francis: Who fired? ❓

Officer: (Confused 😕 ) We don't know sir… No one from here… We didn't give any shooting orders!

Boxer: Agar yahan bhi goli kisi ne nahi chalayi to kahan chali thi goli? Are everyone here?

Aryan: (Looking around) Ek minute… Ajay? Ajay and Neha kahan hain? ❓

Boxer looked at him stunned as he said….

Boxer: Maine tab hi Ajay se kaha tha ki Neha ko bahar le jaaye…. Uske baad to maine use nahi dekha! Bahar aaya to Francis ki transmitter me aawaazein suni aur main wahan aa gaya.…

Dipika: Now when everything is finished they should be here right? (Remembering) Sandhya!? Sandhya kahan hai, vo bhi to mere saath… Mere peeche! (As everyone looked on worried) Phone…. Let's phone them! 😳

Before Dipika even said Boxer had started to call Ajay…. Dipika too took out her mobile to try for Neha and Sandhya… But their mobiles came out of reach….

As Shotgun came over to them….

Francis: Shotgun…. Ajay aur Neha bahar hain? ❓

Shotgun: Nahi to… Main police van se hi aa raha hoon…. Kaheen nahi dekha unhe!

Boxer: (To the officer) Kya hotel me sab jagah search ho rahi hai?

Officer: Haan sir… Every room has been searched in fact…. Lekin suspicion me jo the unhe arrest kar diya gaya hai…. All the other guests were safely guided out…. Koi aur nahi mila!

As everyone became worried about Ajay and Neha's safety, still trying their mobiles furtively…. An officer came out of a door with a rifle in his hand and called out….

Officer: Sir yahan pe kuch rooms aur end me stairs hain!

Aryan, Dipika, Francis and Boxer looked at each other seeing a ray of light and ran towards the room….

They checked every room in the ground floor which was locked…. They took the stairs and saw light streaming out of one room at the end of the corridor…. 🤔

Aryan and Francis hurried forward to the room…. They stopped at the entrance to the room stunned taking in the scene in the room… 😲
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As the shadows fell inside the room, Neha looked up scared thinking it was someone else, but seeing it was Aryan and Francis she sighed relieved…. 😳

Getting up she ran over to Aryan and hugged him crying out of relief…. Concerned Aryan held her close comforting…..

Dipika and Boxer who followed stopping short seeing the situation inside…..

They all took in the sight of the room, the man dead, Ajay unconscious and Sandhya sitting down…..

Dipika: Neha kya hua? ❓

Boxer immediately went over to Ajay to look at him… Dipika saw Sandhya sitting turned the other side…. Giving a glance at Francis who was also looking at her she hurried over….

Kneeling down beside her she looked at her face as Sandhya still in shock kept mumbling….

Sandhya: No…. How could I? I shouldn't have done it….. I broke my oath…. I did it purposefully!

Dipika: (Softly) Sandhya! (Looking up at Neha) Neha…. Kya hua? Aur tum log yahan kaise? ❓

Neha parted from Aryan as she looked down at Ajay who was been revived by Boxer….

Neha: Vo… Dance ke baad Ajay mujhe bahar laaya… We were searching for a way out…. Neeche search shuru ho chuki thi…. To humne socha we'll get out of some window at the back of the hotel… So we came up one floor….. To hum yahan is lobby me aaye…. Ajay said to me wait in the lobby while he went to get the gun from the make up room… Tab ye (Indicating the dead man 😡 ) isi room me tha, mujhe zabardasti andar kheench laaya…. Tried to misbehave with me…. (At this Neha felt Aryan start while she looked at him smiling feebly 😳 ) Lekin Ajay came back immediately…. Bahut jhagada hua dono ke beech…. Lekin jab hum bahar nikalne waale hi the, usne Ajay ko bottle se behosh kar diya… I didn't know what to do when suddenly I heard bullet shot…. Sandhya ne us aadmi par goli chala di!

Boxer, Aryan, Francis and Dipika shocked said aloud…. "What!?!?" 😲

Neha: (Nodding) She actually saved me!

Dipika looked at Sandhya, up at Francis who had the same stunned expression and back at Neha……

Dipika: Sandhya ko to gun use karna nahi aata tha…. Maine use di to vo lene se dar hi rahi thi!

Neha: Nahi Dipika… She has not used a gun before… Isliye ab shock me hai, ki kisi ko maar diya… Doctor hai naa… So she is thinking she had no rights to kill anyone as such!

Dipika understood the state and turning back to Sandhya said softly….

Dipika: Sandhya! Sandhya! Meri baat suno… See… (Taking her face in her hand) Tumne kuch galat nahi kiya…. (Smiling a little) Neha ki izzat aur jaan dono bachchayi hai tumne… (As Sandhya kept ranting not listening what she was saying) Nahi… Tumne apne doctory ka oath nahi thoda hai…. Sandhya!

After a few minutes of persuasion Dipika looked up at the others shaking her head helplessly….

Dipika: She is in deep shock… Pata nahi ki use meri baat samajh aa bhi rahi hai ya nahi!

Aryan: Er…. Phir to hume yahan se chalna chahiye… We'll take her to the hospital….

Dipika nodded and she got up helping Sandhya stand up… But Sandhya was not in a state to even stand by herself and went sliding down again, when two strong pairs of hands came and supported her…. 😳

Surprised Dipika looked up and saw Francis supporting her making her lean against him… She slowly released her grip on Sandhya smiling a little to herself….

She looked on as Francis made her face her and said sternly…..

Francis: Listen…. Tumne kuch galat nahi kiya…. You saved someone else's life too…. So compose yourself! Understand?

But Sandhya seemed not to listen and kept mumbling…. Before she could open her mouth once again, Francis gave a sound slap on her cheeks!

The others looked stunned at Francis's reaction! 😔

But the slap seemed like a good treatment as it brought back Sandhya from the shock… She stopped mumbling and fainted into Francis's arms…. The gun slid from her hand on to the floor.....

Francis immediately supported her and carried Sandhya in his arms…. Without another word he hurried out of the room!

The whole group looked on standing outside the room at Francis's retreating back surprised! 😛

By now Ajay had also revived and came outside the room… Seeing Neha he called out to her….

Ajay: (Catching his head) Neha!

Neha standing beside Aryan came up to him smiling and hugging him said…. 🤗

Neha: Ajay! Are you okay?

Ajay: Main theek hoon…. (Concerned) Lekin tum? Ye sab yahan kaise aaye? ❓

Neha looked around at her team and back at him and said….

Neha: Ajay bhool jaate ho… Special Squad hamesha sabke saath hai! 👍🏼

As Ajay looked on surprised Neha supported him putting his arms around her shoulders, while Boxer supported him from the other side….

Neha: Lambiiii kahani hai…. Raaste me bataaoongi… As for now… Operation success but patient dead! 😆

Ajay smiled at her joke as Boxer and Neha walked him downstairs…. Shotgun looked inside the room for the other weapons and finding none left the place too…

Just as they left few officers came up the stairs and to the room….

Aryan started to give them some instructions to remove the body and seal off the place….

Dipika looked at him and deciding to wait went over to the window in the lobby and looked out, up at the sky, at the twinkling stars and crescent moon….

Soft, cool breeze was blowing her hair as she thought about what had happened today… Everything from the start to the end which now seemed like a nightmare… She smiled thinking about the concern and worry on Vishal's face she had seen…. A little more push only was required, she knew….. 😉

But she didn't like the drastic step he and Aryan had taken into beating Sandeep…. Hit him to catch him, but Aryan literally hit him to death!?!?! And she never approved of such a thing…. Not from her friend, not from her… She paused thinking what to fill in the blank…… 😳

Suddenly her heart which was happy, became elated as she sensed him behind her….. Turning around she saw him looking at her accusingly…

Wondering what she just looked on as Aryan said……

Aryan: Vishal?!?! Hunh?! 😔

Dipika looked at him surprised and wondered how he knew Francis was Vishal when she remembered her taking his name in the consignment room!

Dipika: (Lowering her eyes) Vo… Er…

Aryan: So you knew?!?! Since when? ❓

Dipika: Jab se vo Francis banke Special Squad aaya!

Aryan looked at her stunned and thought of all the incidents which had made him insecure about Dipika…. He now knew that Vishal had done all that in purpose to irritate him!

Aryan: You knew! Ek maheene se pata tha.... Usne tummhe bataya? Sab pata tha tumhe lekin mujhe ek baar bhi....

Dipika: (Interrupting) Vo… Er… Usne kuch nahi kaha… I identified him… The day he came to Special Squad…. I knew it was him…. (Looking up enthusiastically) Best friend hai to easily identify kar di! Jo khaas hote hain unhe ek pal me pehchaan sakte hain….. Jis disguise me bhi ho! Jitni bhi bheedh ho.... Anywhere.... Everywhere!

As Aryan looked at her eyebrows raised she immediately averted her eyes….

Aryan: Anywhere and everywhere?☺️

As Dipika looked at him she saw something new, something different in Aryan's eyes… Something like… Something to… To… A sense of belongingness! ❤️

Dipika composed herself and she said…..

Dipika: Der ho rahi hai…. Chalein?

Aryan nodded and both of them made way downstairs as the police did their job of wrapping up the things….

Dipika: Kya zaroorat thi use itni berehmi se maarne ki?

Aryan: Galat kiya hai to sazaa milni chahiye....

Dipika: Aryan! Sazaa dene waale hum koun hote hain.... Agar use kuch ho jaata, to tumhe trials face karne padte... Reason kya dete!

Aryan stopped and turned to look at her walking beside him.... Then softly, but sternly he said....

Aryan: Jab apne ko chot hoti hai to unke kusoorvaar ko dand milega... Anywhere.... Everywhere!

Saying Aryan walked off as Dipika stood for a little while thinking of Aryan's response! What was happening? 🤔

Wondering she hurried to get out of the place!

Coming out of the building Aryan and Dipika went over to where they had parked their car…. Shotgun alone was there waiting for them…

Seeing the other cars missing….

Aryan: Baaki sab kahan hain? ❓

Shotgun: Boxer aur Neha Ajay ko lekar hospital gaye hain…..

Dipika: Vishal aur Sandhya?

As Shotgun looked at her confused….

Shotgun: Vishal!?!?

Dipika: (Shaking her head) I mean Sandhya kahan hai?

Shotgun: Pata nahi… Jab hum yahan aaye tab vo nahi the… Aur ek gaadi bhi yahan nahi thi!

Dipika became worried at this.... Seeing her Aryan said....

Aryan: He would have taken Sandhya to the hospital.... Call him up and see.... We'll go to the hospital too.... (To Shotgun) Shotgun vo gaadi tum le aana... Main aur Dipika isme jaate hain!

As Aryan got in to the car and opened the passenger door for Dipika, she looked at him mildly surprised and got in.... 😳

Seeing them go Shotgun smiled and said....

Shotgun: Ami je tomar... Shuduje tomar....😉

Grinning and then whistling he left got into the other care and drove off mouthing its hindi meaning! 😃

Mere Dholna Sun
Mere Pyaar Ki Dhun
Mere Dholna Sun 😳
Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 di 👏

ur deserve this
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was awesome, amazing and great etc.........

I'm so sorry for late commenting. i was little busy with my college things.

sandeep you got of easy man.
dipika and aryan are little opening to eachother that is great start.
well well vishal you're just like aryan, when it comes to some one you love. i would say this will bring vishal and sandhya little more close.
it was fabulous krithika.

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Edited by sam78 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
excellen fantabulous amazing!
loved ur update!
liked the way vihals concerned for sandy!
aru and deepi were just to adoreable! 😍
love them together!
keep up the extactic work!
u write sooo nicely that everytime im out of vocabulary!
god bless and update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwww amazing grat updates good u wrote fafulous i imagine all da scence great u r great writer
luv deepika ,aryan ,vishaal scence /diaolouges 👏
Edited by minisa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
slap!!! wow!!!! 😆 really cute slap from vishal i think 😳 but sandy ko kitna cute laga ye to wo francis ko hossh main ayne ke baad he bataye gi!!!😉

sooo case solve than!!! 😃it was the most exciting most dhamal and kamal case ever and greatly done by you 👏

aryan came to know about vishal 😃 mujhe laga ab to sab ko fursat hai😉 francis can get enough chance to^^^^^aryan😆
(............how would you like you man maam!!!?😉 roasted? jala hua?ya ya coyala😆)
per daat deni parey gi of aryan's presence of mind...he was not himself than.....😳


Edited by maisoon - 17 years ago

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