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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

di (can i call you that?)....aap kahan ho? you're not updating 😡 (just kidding-take your time😃😃 )

Hey Aj.... Yeah... I am here.... And yes you can call me Di... I love people calling me that😛

As for update.... Thoda aur latko naa... aayega.... dhamaal express😉

And you all have every rights to order me, to get angry with me and anything for you all😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Hey Aj.... Yeah... I am here.... And yes you can call me Di... I love people calling me that😛

As for update.... Thoda aur latko naa... aayega.... dhamaal express😉

And you all have every rights to order me, to get angry with me and anything for you all😊

cool, thanks!

to is update thoda lamba hoga, na? i can't wait to see aryan and vishal beating up whoever hurt dipika😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AJ_ss

cool, thanks!

to is update thoda lamba hoga, na? i can't wait to see aryan and vishal beating up whoever hurt dipika😆

😆Maar ya toofan dekhna hai..... And yes.... Lambaaaaaaaaaaaa sssssaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa hoga😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
dil mange update .............. 😛
..I am so excited for the moment ki jab Aryan aur Vishal jisne deepika par haath utaya uski dhunai karenge😉 and what will be the reaction of deepika on this😉😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ruha

dil mange update .............. 😛
..I am so excited for the moment ki jab Aryan aur Vishal jisne deepika par haath utaya uski dhunai karenge😉 and what will be the reaction of deepika on this😉😆

😆Dhulaayi zaroor hui hai, lekin yaar Dipika ko to pata hai.... Is baar unhe manana bahutttttt mushkil hone hai

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Posted: 17 years ago
When Neha was dragged out of the party hall as Sandhya and Dipika were unaware of the consequences happening to their friends….

In the Consignment Room….


Glaring at Aryan Sandeep said…. 😡

Sandeep: Manana padega.... Itna asaan nahi tha hume pakadna… Lekin ek baat ka garv hai ki ek kaabil officer se humara pardafaash hua…. Lekin bachchuu….. Tch... Tch... Itni bhi aasaani se hum haath nahi aane waale….

Aryan: Koun kiske haath kaise lagta hai dekhenge Sandeep… It would be better if you just surrender… Sazaa kam ho sakti hai…. 😈

Sandeep: I'll give you a better option…. It would be better if you (Stressing) would come over on our side…. Help me get this consignment out… Muh maanga inaam milega hi, saath me promotion bhi…. Lekin issse pehle hume information doge….. Shuru karte hain…. Koun koun hai yahan? Kya jaante ho aap sab is operation ke baare me?

Aryan glared back at him at the thought of getting bribed…. 😡

Aryan: (Smirking) Tum poochoge aur main bata doonga? Mera muh kulvane ki koshish bhi bekar hogi Sandeep… You will fail!

Already angry with the cheat, Sandeep became even more hyper with Aryan's words…. 😡

Sandeep: Muh kholega nahi to hamesha ke liye band ho jayega!

Aryan just gave a sarcastic smile at him and said….

Aryan: Bahut filmein dekhte ho Sandeep, uska asar hai ki aise shayarana andaaz me baat kar rahe ho…. Dara rahe ho? (Acting ) Lo main dar gaya…. Oooo… Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai…. Maaa!!!!!!!! (Glaring back at him in a stern voice 😡 ) Mr. Sandeep Thakare…. Is profession ko choose karne se pehle apne aap ke baare me sochke nahi aaya…. Sirf apne desh ke baare me socha tha….. Bahut kuch khoya hai aur bahut kuch paaya bhi hai yahan…. 😉 Ab jo bhi ho kuch farak nahi padne waali! 😕

Sandeep: (With an evil smile 😈 ) Haan…. Bahut kuch khoya hai tumne…. Apni family ko, right? Apni biwi bachche ko bacha nahi sake to khaakh desh ko bachaoge….

At the mention of Niharika and Pallavi Aryan became angry and said sternly…. 😡

Aryan: Mere family ko is me mat laana Sandeep…. Pach….

Seeing him getting emotional Sandeep smiled and said further stimulating him…..

Sandeep: Kaise mare the Briju vo? ❓

A guard at the back of Aryan said sarcastically….. 😃

Guard: Sir suna hai… Saamp ne kata tha…. Lekin ussse pehle uski biwi ko….

The guard had no more words to say or didn't see the day after that…

Aryan elbow directly found that guy's face and he fell bleeding full from the nose…. 👏

Sandeep got stunned at such a reaction…. He immediately ordered the other guards to take over…..

Sandeep: Are mera muh kya dekh rahe ho… Catch him!

Aryan tore of his Sheikh costume which would disturb him in the fighting process….

The other guard at the back of Aryan tried to hit him with the rifle butt…. But Aryan bent and pulled the rifle and the guy along with him, making him fall flat on the back in front of him…. 👍🏼

The guard behind Sandeep rushed at Aryan…. Aryan bent and swung his legs out which made the him fall down flat on his faces…. 👏

Before Aryan could get up the second guard revived from his fall came and twisted his hands around Aryan's neck…. Aryan struggled to remove his hold but found it a little difficult….

Twisting and squirming he knelt on his knees with the guard behind him…. He then hit his head backwards at the guard's face which stunned him permanently…. ⭐️

The other guard who had fallen on their face recovered in meantime…. Before Aryan could get up, one of them hurried forward and gave a blow at his back… 😵

Aryan turned swiftly, got up angrily and caught his color…. Before that guard could duck and defend himself, he felt a sharp punch in his stomach…. He buckled up wincing in pain….

Before Aryan would turn around Aryan felt Sandeep ram the rifle in his back….

Sandeep: Hoshiyaari nahi Aryan…. Peeche mudo…. (Aryan turned slowly) Hands up…. (Aryan lifted his hands) Down… Down on your knees! 😡

Glaring at him Aryan went down on his knees thinking of the next plan of action……

Sandeep: Ab to tumhe chodoonga hi nahi Aryan Khanna! Mere hi jagah me mere hi aadmiyon ko maaroge aur…. 😡

Aryan looked up and said….

Aryan: Jaise tum meri jagah, mere aadmi keh rahe ho naa…. Ye mera desh hai…. Aur yahan ke noujavaanon ki zindagi jis tarah barbaad tum kar rahe ho, uske liye tumhe kya sazaa dein? Faansi to kum padegi!

Sandeep: (Angrily) You!!!!!! 😡

Sandeep raised the rifle in anger at Aryan and was just about to press the trigger when…. 😲




Outside The Consignment Room……

Francis was taking in the situation when he heard Sandeep and the guard talk about Aryan's family….

Hearing the guard's words Francis straightened his fists bawled…..

Francis: (To himself) That b*****d! Purposely Aryan ko uksa raha hai... Lekin pach... I….😡

He was about to enter the room when he heard a shout and thump… Peeping in he saw the guard behind Aryan slump forward on to the floor….

Francis: (To himself appreciatively ) Main keh hi raha tha ki pachtayega! Good punch buddy boy! (Seeing the fight starting) Hmm… Andar jaaoon? Lekin Aru ko fight karte aaj hi dekh raha hoon…. Let's watch! 😎

Saying Francis leant against the door way, away from the light watching the fight and giving running comments to himself….

Francis: Nah…. Bad take you guys…. Peeche se vaar karte ho?!?! Ha…. Dekha Aryan ne kar diya naa bhejha ka bharta…. 😆 (Singing silently to himself) La… La… Oie… Neeche hai us par jaa tapakta hai… Galat baad…. Ha…. Ab tujhe hospital se teri par daadi amma leke jayegi…. 😉 Are are…. Kitni baar kahoon peeche se… (Making a face ) Oo…. Laga naa… Pet me ab khaana kaise jayega… Ya phir peeche sab aa gaya…. (Grinning)Ah ah…. (Straightening, his grin fading seeing Sandeep point the rifle at Aryan!) No… No… No…. Ab to andar jaana hi hoga!



In the Consignment Room….

Sandeep felt a round cold tip of the gun behind his head…. Stunned he turned back slowly and Francis came into view who gave him a cheeky smile and bowed in style twirling his hands…. 👏

Aryan still kneeling looked from behind Sandeep's rifle and saw Francis…. Seeing him involuntarily he got a smile on his face and looked up at Sandeep sarcastically……

Francis: (In his sing song attitude) Ohhh….. Sandeepeeeeeee……. 😆 You have to learn manners yaar…. Kisi ko ghutne tek baatein karte hain… Nah… Aru beta… Utho naa.... Punishment mili hai ky?!

Aryan glared at Francis for calling him that way, but got up on his knees and turned his attention to Sandeep…. 😡 😉

Francis: Bahoottt sawaal pooche the tumne Aryan se…. Ab main poochoonga aur tum bataoge…. Right? Lekin ek deal bhi karte hain…. Main tumhare kuch sawaalon ka jawaab doonga… Uske badle me tum kuch sawaalon ka jawaab hume doge…. (In the meanwhile Aryan had taken a rifle and was checking the remaining boxes) Ab ye consignment London se aayi hai, ye hume pata hai…. (Enjoying the stunned look on Sandeep's face 😲 ) Ab tum batao ki kaise? Humne sab ports aur flights ki regular checking ki thi!?

Francis waited for an answer which Sandeep didn't give….

Francis: To nahi batoge? Hmm…. (Thinking) Phir to kuch karna padeega….
Francis's voice faltered as he felt the round tip of a gun behind his back….

Voice: Bandook neeche daal! 😕

Both Francis and Sandeep turned around surprised and saw the guard who had left the room earlier pointing the gun at them…. Along with him where three more gaurds!

Aryan who was checking a box turned around sharply hearing the voice…. He started to life his rifle when the guy said…. 😳

Guard: Ae… Koi chaalaaki nahi…. Phek bandook ko aur yahan aa!

Aryan glaring moved towards the group slowly…

One of the guards grabbed his gun from him…. Both he and Francis were pushed together…..

Smiling Sandeep grabbed the gun from Francis and going over to his men said…

Sandeep: Itni akad tum police waalon ke liye theek nahi hai…. Tumne kaha mujhe manners nahi hain?! Ab dekhenge koun kisko tameez sikhata hai…. In dono ko baando….

Francis: Mmm… Shayad isliye kehte hain, watch your back! Lekin... Lekin... Lekin.... Ab bhi tumhare jaise bewakoof ko maine nahi dekha hai Sandeepe! (As Sandeep glared at him 😡 ) Sabko, yahan tak ke humare Commissioner ko bhi pata hai ki hum yahan hain…. Aur humne andar jo kiya uska sabot bhi hai…. To bachke kahan jaoge?

Sandeep: (Smirking 😈 ) Bas itnaa…. Ab tak koun iske peeche tha pata nahi tha, ab pata chal gaya hai bas…. Lekin mujhe pakadvana mushkil hai! Ab seedhe seedhe batao ki tum logon ne kya kiya? Koun koun hai andar? Waise Raghu ne details bataya hai, phir bhi….

Sandeep stopped as his phone buzzed… Glaring at them he attended the call, while the guards started to search for a rope to tie Francis and Aryan! One of them keeping them at a distance at gun point!

Aryan and Francis indicated through eyes to trying to make a plan of escape!

Sandeep: Haan Vikrant….. Kahan? ❓

………………..

Sandeep: Good… To main aake arrangements check karta hoon!

………………..

Sandeep: (Looking at Aryan and Francis) Hmm…. Theek hai…. Main abhi aata hoon!

Sandeep kept the phone and looked pointedly at Aryan and Francis….

Sandeep: (To his guards) Suno…. In dono ki achchi tarah khayal rakhna… Main abhi aaya! (Going near to Aryan and Francis but standing out of reach) Soch rahe ho kiska phone tha? Mere right hand ka… Pata hai kya kaha hai usne? Shipment is ready to leave! 😛

Saying Sandeep smiled evilly and left the room closing the room door, but not fully….

Francis and Aryan looked at each helpless and wondered what to do now? 😒
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Few Minutes Later…..

Aryan and Francis were looking all around the room finding a way of escape…. 😕

The guards were still holding them at gun points now having tied them up….

Just then the door swung open and Sandeep entered dragging someone… Aryan and Francis looked at him wondering who he was dragging in… 🤔

When they both came in and the person whom Sandeep dragged in came into view, both of them started…. 😲

Straining against their rope Francis called out….

Francis: Dipika!

Dipika looked up and saw Aryan and Francis tied up…. Relieved that both were safe she gave a feeble smile… 😳

But immediately thinking, before Sandeep could drag her to them, she used her left hand to wipe off the blood that had come out because of Sandeep hitting her… Because she very well knew it's consequences….

But this act of hers didn't escape Francis's eyes as he glared at Sandeep! 😡

Sandeep dragged her in forcefully and pushed her hard in front of him to the guard next Aryan!

Dipika reeled off from him and hit her head against Aryan's chest…. Aryan looked down at her concerned and called out….

Aryan: Dipika! Tum…. Theek to ho? 😵

Dipika looked up at him and saw the genuine concern in his eyes… Smiling a little she nodded and looked besides him at Francis…. 😳

The guard next to Aryan took hold of her forcefully as she winced a little in his grip…

Aryan: (Angrily 😡 ) Ae…. Auraton se kaise behave karte hain nahi pata kya? Aapke boss ne nahi sikhaya?

The guard smirked back at him and tightened his grip on her as Dipika winced a little and Aryan glared at him….

Sandeep: Ah… Gussa…. Pehle se bhi zyada! (Looking at Dipika 😈 ) Pata tha ki use yahan laaoonga to tum log muh khologe!

Francis: (Angry 😡 ) Muh humara kholega nahi Sandeep…. Lekin tumhara band karvane waale hain….

Sandeep: (Laughing and clapping 👏 ) Ha ha ha ha ha….. Mazaak! Band pade ho dono aur phir bhi mera muh band karne ki baat…. (Coming back he took hold of Francis's collar 😡 ) Dikhne me shareef hain hum lekin hain nahi…. Abhi to consignment move hone me waqt hai…. Aur hum bach bhi jayenge, kyunki hume pata hai ki jab tak tum logon se, main head ho naa… Signal nahi milti kuch nahi hone waala!

Francis: Shayad… Shayad pehle bach jaate Sandeep…. Lekin ab tumne jo kuch bhi kiya hai uske baad to bilkul bhi nahi! 😡

Aryan, Dipika and Sandeep at him wondering what he was talking about…. What had Sandeep done which provoked his anger so much? 🤔

Sandeep: Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki maine kya kiya…. Lekin ab jo kuch bhi karoonga, uske baad tum log koste rahoge apne zindagi bhar ki muh kyun nahi khola!

Angrily Sandeep stepped over to Dipika as she looked back at him bold in his eyes….

Aryan: Sandeep! Don't you dare touch her! 😡

Both Aryan and Francis strained against their rope seeing him getting closer to her…..

Sandeep smoothed a finger across Dipika's cheeks and trailed to her lips…. Waiting for the moment Dipika fred her hand from the guard's hand and gave him a resounding slap across his face…. 👏

Seeing this act of Dipika's Aryan and Francis looked on stunned but proudly…

Sandeep: You!!!!! 😡

Sandeep took his hands away from his cheeks and twisted Dipika's hands hard behind her….. Going close to her more than needed, which boiled Aryan and Francis's blood, he hissed….

Sandeep: You will definitely pay for this in an extreme way! 😈

Even though it was paining more because Sandeep had twisted her fractured hand, Dipika kept a straight face and said……

Dipika: Mujhse mat kehenaa…. Mard ho to mardon se jaake lado… As for payment….

There a swishing sound in the air and the next moment Sandeep fred his hand from Dipika's wringing it in pain….

Aryan, Dipika and Francis looked at him stunned as blood poured out from his hands, and he fell down faint with shock…. 😲

Before any of them could raise their heads to see how it had happened there was another swish of sounds and the rope tying Aryan and Francis broke free! 👍🏼

Free from the ropes they finally looked at the entrance and found Boxer and Raheem leaning on the doorway in style, guns in their hands and blowing the smoke out of it….

Boxer: Tch... Tch.... Hume kisi ki signal ki zaroorat nahi padti Mr. Sandeep Thakare... Humare boss ne hume waise training di hai naaki tumhare kutton ki tarah! ⭐️

Smiling Aryan and Francis showed them thumbs up…. 👍🏼

Just then Raheem's reaction changed to one of warning and immediately Francis ducked…

The guard standing beside Francis fell forward…. Going up to him, took hold of his hair and lifted his face Francis said….

Francis: Tumhe pata hai… I hate people hitting from the back… Cowards! And now you will pay for it…

Saying Francis closed his eyes and banged his head on the floor… 😵

Francis: (Opening an eye 😉 ) Oops! Haath phisal gaya!

Saying he stood up and turned to see the guard who had caught hold of Dipika trying to hit Aryan….

Francis: (Shouted) Oie! 😡

Aryan turned in time and catching that fellow's hand twisted it…. And one punch on face sent him reeling on a column of cartons stacked behind him.… There was a loud crashing noise as the guard came sliding down on the carton column breaking! 👏

Francis went up to Dipika…

The other guard standing along with Sandeep tried to escape but met the strong fist of Raheem on his head which made him unconscious….

Sandeep recovered from the bullet hit and looked around… He saw Boxer and Raheem dragging the unconscious guard away from the door…

Seeing that he was in trouble and caught he searched for a route out and stealthily made his way out… 😕

Francis was asking Dipika….

Francis: Tum theek to ho? ❓

Dipika: (Smiling a little nodding) Haan… Fine…

Seeing her wince he asked….

Francis: Haath bahut dard kar raha hai, hai naa?

Dipika: Nai… Bas… Fracture ka haath tha to…

Aryan: (Stunned) What?! 😲

Francis and Dipika looked up to see Aryan standing there looking angry….. 😡

Aryan: Fracture ka haath? ❓

Immediately he took Dipika's hand and looked at it…. Dipika looked at him taking her hand and caressing it……..☺️

Francis just looked on appreciatively and thought of how to break the news of Sandeep hitting Dipika to Aryan! 😍

He knew that if he said this Sandeep was sure to be a goner, but this was the best situation to make both realize that they cared for each other more than colleagues or friends! ❤️

Aryan: Haan… Yahi haath to fr…. That!

As Aryan turned to get a hand on Sandeep Dipika caught his hand….

Dipika: Aryan! No… Ab pakada gaya hai…. Sazaa kanoon dega!

Aryan: (Looking back at her frustrated) Sazaa kanooon dega use drug smuggling ke liye…. Not for twisting your hand!

Francis: (Getting his chance, said with genuine seriousness) Ya…. Nor for hitting you!

Dipika and Aryan looked at Francis shocked…. 😲

Dipika looked at him stunned wondering how he knew Sandeep had hit her, while next to her Aryan jerked his head at Francis shocked and looked back at Dipika and asked… 😔

Aryan: (Looking at her closely) He did!? He hit you? 😡

Dipika: (Glaring at Francis who just shrugged his shoulders, she looked back at Aryan and said) Nai… Nothing like that! Agar aisa hota, to…. To kaheen chot lagti ya khoon aata naa Aryan…. 😕

As Aryan looked at her and Francis doubtfully, Francis thought "Hmm… Hiding…. But not with me!" 😈

Francis: (As if in doubt) Hunh? Lekin tumne to khoon ko clean kar diya muh se…. Room ke andar aate waqt, vo kya tha? Ouch! 😵

Francis looked at Dipika as she had stamped on his foot scolding for blurting out the truth!

Aryan caught hold of Dipika's arms and looked at her closely… He saw a little blood in the corner of her mouth…. Turning her cheeks he saw the finger prints which had made Dipika's cheek's red… Shaking her hard he said…. 😡

Aryan: Did he or did he not hit you? Meri aankhon me dekhke kehenaa….. 😳

As Dipika looked up at his eyes, she saw anger and concern and worry… But didn't want to him to go to any extreme because of this! 😒

Seeing her close her eyes in response to his question Aryan knew Sandeep had really hit her….

Leaving her, he looked around to see Sandeep stealthily move across to the entrance….

He ran up to him and pulled his coat collar…. Bang Sandeep fell down as Aryan stood over towering over him…..

Boxer and Raheem who were over the corner calling up forces turned back shocked at the sound…. Seeing Aryan bent on beating the hell out of Sandeep they made way to stop him, when they saw Francis shake his hands… 🤔

Surprised they looked on at Dipika who too was looking at Aryan shocked…

Aryan: (Punching him on his face) How dare you? (Another punch from the other side) Aurat par haath uthata hai!

Dipika: Aryan stop it! Vishal… Aryan ko roko!

Francis: Oie… Mera naam le liya! 😲

Dipika hit him on his hand and said……

Dipika: Samay iska ab nahi hai Vishal… Naam ko chodo… Aryan!

As Dipika made a move to stop Aryan herself Francis stopped her and said seriously…

Francis: Dipika! Chod do…. Kitna gussa aur frustration apne andar rakhega…. He has to get it out of his system…. Warna andar hi andar vo us par dam ghoota rahega and he will be out of our hands! (Looking back at Aryan who was beating the hell out of Sandeep) Don't worry Sandeep will live…. 😃

Aryan: (Taking Sandeep's hand) Himmat kaise hue Dipika par haath uthane ki? Maine kaha tha…. Kaha tha ki phir se haath kisi par uthaoge to haath kaam nahi karenge!

Saying Aryan bent the wrist of Sandeep as Sandeep shouted out….

Dipika: Vishal samjho…. Agar use kuch ho gaya to Aryan would have to face trials! You…

Vishal: (Calmly) Bharosa hai mujh par? ❓

Dipika looked at him helpless and was about to retort back when Vishal said again…..

Vishal: Tumhara dost tumse pooch raha hai!?

Dipika's confusion cleared and she said….

Dipika: Bharosa hai tab hi ab tak chup hoon, phir bhi…. Kiska imtehaan le rahe ho.... Dosti ka ya pyaar ka!

Dipika bit her lip realizing what she had said... She looked at Vishal and saw him smiling victoriously... 😛

Smiling Vishal just nodded and turned back his attention to Ayran…. 😉

Vishal: Hey Aryan! Yoheen use maarte rahoge, to kaheen mar naa jaye…. Maar maarke marvaoge, to jawaab dena padega yaar…. Ek kaam kar… Lo… (Giving him a gun) Issse shoot kar do… Keh denge ki he was shot when he tried to escape! 😲

Aryan looked up at the gun Francis extended to him and back at a worn out Sandeep….

Dipika: (Shocked) Vishal! 😲

Grabbing it Aryan took aim at a scared Sandeep and pulled the ammunition load…

Dipika, Boxer and Raheem shocked at what Francis had done moved from their places to stop Aryan when the bullet went off….😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh cool cool cool!
fantabulously amazing!
loved the way u write ur ff so real and full of energy! that u can actually feel the emotions!
im soooo sorry i couldnot reply to the earlier parts but was a silent reader and they were tooo gud im out of words!
now i think aru and deeps sld confess to each other!
loving vishal and sandy!
but tell sandy that after deepikas hes mine then hers! 😆 naughty me hehe!
heet up the extactic work!
god bless u!
by the way i updated my ff do read and coment!
waitting for the other part!
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

THANK YOOU THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH KRITS!!!!!!! FOR ONE OF THE BEST PART EVER🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
you really have given what we wanted yaar!!!!! the action, the suspence, the concern and the danger 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 loved everyline of it!!!!

vishal to really rocked yaar!!!!!👏 👏 👏 aur aryan ki fights ki comentary de raha tha....lolzzzzz 😆
BUT JAANU TO RULED THE SCENE AND DIPIKA'S HEART 😉 mera bhi ❤️ 😳 🤗
he got soo concerned for deep!!us ka pyaar us ke ek ek punches main dekh raha tha jo us ne sandeep per nichawar kiye😆
dipika bhi kaam nahi hai.....a slap coming from dipika!!!quite refreshing😆

aryan got totally crazy when he saw sandeep with her😳i got crazy seeing him with deeps😆
uufff!!!jaise us ne sandeep ko punches kiye nah....vaamp##@# mujhe laga he will die 🤢
but bahut acha hua. the b***#@ of the doctor deserved that very much😡

aryan ne sandeep ko mar diya 🤔well im not sure 😉 i know what vishal was doing when he handed the gun
he have confidence in aryan👍🏼aryan is out of control but pagal to nahi hai

Edited by maisoon - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow, a long update! 😆
i totally loved it. you're so good at detail, I could never have written out the whole fight scene and everything like you did. 👏 👏
vishal giving commentary was too funny. and even in the middle of a fight and tension and everything, he's still thinking of how to bring dipika and aryan together 😆
that sandeep guy got what he deserved. loved dipika's slap especially, almost more than i loved aryan beating him up.
fantastic job!
love,
aj
Edited by AJ_ss - 17 years ago

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