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yep...its relly gr88....plzzz continue 😊

plzzzzzzzzzz continue yr.....plz plz plz

Aryan's cell phone rang,before the second ring he picked up the phone and intently listened to the speaker. He replaced the phone in its place ,got up and started taking his chain and gun from the drawer while updating Deepika about the call.

"Boxer ka call tha. Neha ko kisine kidnap kiya hai." Saying this he ran out of his room and yelled for Shotgun and Zubin to come fast.

hey amazing story ! plz continue!
PS: i agree wid reshma, it's just a request.......but can u get shaina back in ur story plz! it'll be gr8!
but whatever it may be plz continue soon!

yeah i know...its ur wish ...lekin shaina ke bina mujhe kahani sooni lag rahi hai....plzz try to get her back... 😊

Originally posted by: Darwin

Boxer noticed that the door had been opened with a lock pic. Someone had broken into the house! Suddenly images of Priya lying dead flashed in his mind and he was sure that the same was going through Ajay's mind. He slightly pushed opened the door.

Ajay closed his eyes to block out the images flashing in his mind on seeing the door opened with force. He was seeing Priya's dead body being replaced with Neha's. If anything happened to Neha he.....His thoughts were cut when he heard Boxer pushing open the door.

who is priya???

Aryan updated both Zubin and Shotgun on the way. When they reached the right floor they saw Ajay leaning against the wall right outside his home with his eyes closed. Boxer was standing next to him with a stricken expression.
Aryan felt sick when he saw the yellow crime scene tape put around Ajay's home. Since Shaina had left there were times when he would feel really depressed and lonely. At such times images of victims and his dead family haunted him at night. At such trying times he always found himself at Neha's doorstep. She was like a little sister to him who helped him through depressing times. Infact she was the one who encouraged both him and Shaina to get into a long distance relationship. SHAINA! It reminded him that he would have to call Shaina about this latest development afterall they both are best friends.
He went upto Ajay and touched him on his shoulder. Ajay looked at him. Aryan could make out that he had been crying."Mere career mein ek unsolved crime hai. Us waqt mere paas Special Squad ki team nahin thi. Lekin Is baar hai. We will solve this Ajay. Tum is team ke bahut hi important member ho. Tumhare bina hum kuch bhi nahin kar payenge.Apne aap ko control karo."

He handed Ajay the latex gloves. Ajay wore them and they entered the crime scene.

Sweet Candy Priya was Ved saab's daughter. In the 5th episode she was murdered and the SS team solved the case and found the killer.

Originally posted by: Darwin

Aryan felt sick when he saw the yellow crime scene tape put around Ajay's home. Since Shaina left there were times when he feel really depressed and lonely. Images of victims and his family haunted him at night. At such trying times he always found himself at Neha's door. She was like a little sister to him who helped him through depressing times.

Infact she was the one who encouraged both him and Shaina to get into a long distance relationship. SHAINA! It reminded him that he would have to call Shaina about this latest development afterall they both are best friends.

the story is amazin!!! u r a wonderful story teller vijaya....i have highlighted the parts i really loved.... the first sentence is expressed beautifully...the yellow tape around ajay's home...and aryan feeling sick abt it....😊

the second one shows aryan and neha's relationship...which i always thought is super duper special....like u said...a little sister....and it feels wonderful the way u said she would be thr for him when he was depressed...😳😃

and lastly..... omg!!!!! THANKS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR GETTING SHAINA BACK!!!!!! AND FOR SAYIN ABT THE WHOLE LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIP THING!!! THT MEANS THEY ARE IN LOVE????WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS SWEETHEART THANKS!!!!😳

but u have said they are in a long distance relationship first...and in the end u said they are best of friends....am i missin something here??😕

It reminded him that he would have to call Shaina about this latest development afterall they both are best friends.

Reshma what I meant was that since Neha and Shaina were best friends Aryan had to inform Shaina otherwise she wouldn't be happy about i