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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am writing the fan fic assuming that the last episode with Anna Kartoos didnot end with Aryan's death but they were successful in that mission. After that Neha agrees to start afresh with Ajay. Within 2 months they both get married. My fanfic takes place 4 months after the Anna kartoos mission.

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Morning:10 a.m.

Ajay entered the special squad office. On his way to Aryan's office he glanced towards Neha's workstation but she was not there. In the previous case that they had a couple was murdered right in front of their child. The case was solved and the child had to be handed over to his grandparents who were living in Pune. Aryan had requested him to accompany the social worker responsible for the child to Pune and leave the child with his grandparents.Since it was late at night by the time they completed all the formalities Ajay decided to stay back in Pune and come back in the morning.

Ajay: "Aryan maine bache ko uske nana aur naani ke paas chod diya. Raat ko late ho gaya tha isliye mein aaj subhe nikla Pune se."

Deepika comes into the room from behind.

Deepika:"Ajay tum yeh baat phone karke bhi bata sakte the. Rules ke mutabik if u r going to be late you have to call and inform before hand.."

Ajay:"Lekin Ne.."

Deepika cuts him off ,"Lagta hai tumhare saat rehkar Neha ko bhi tumhari aadatein lag rahi hain. Abhi tak nahin aayee hain office mein. Ek phone bhi nahin kiya usne."

Ajay was shocked. "Kya? Neha office abhi tak nahin aayee?"

Boxer comes into the room .

Boxer:"Haan Ajay. Infact hum soch rahe the ki tum aur Neha second honey moon ke liye chal gaye."

Ajay immediately picked up the phone on Aryan's table and tried Neha's cell. It was ringing but no one was answering. He tried their home number and heard the recorded message that the phone was not working. he got a really bad feeling about this. Seeing his expression everyone in the room got worried.

Aryan:"Ajay tumne Neha se baat aaj subhe baat kiya?"

Ajay: "Nahin. Mere mobile mein charge nahin tha isliye meine Neha ko phone nahin kiya.Kal raat humari baat hui thi. She was perfectly fine."

Aryan's gut feeling told him that something was wrong but didnot voice his thoughts so as not to worry Ajay.He got up from his seat walked around the table and patted Ajay on his shoulders.

Aryan:"Don't worry shayad raat ko tumse baat karne ke baad uski tabiyat kharab ho gayi." This reason sounded solame to his own ears and the look that Ajay gave him said that he too didnot believe it."Tum aur boxer apne ghar jao aur check karo."

Edited by Darwin - 18 years ago

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Kavi1982 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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is it all right. If u guys like it I will continue otherwise ...
Edited by Darwin - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes please continue with this.
good attempt...

we need some deepika-aryan fan here .
kep it up.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i think it was very good. keep it up.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey,,,,thts really amazin....plzzz do not keep us waitin and continue!!!!
p.s. 1 request......its just a request...i donno how u'll take it....since this case is after the anna kartoos thing....and aryan is aliove...can u plzzzzzz plzzzzz get shaina bak???plzzzzz 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you AryanDipika fan,shhs2 & Reshmae for your encouragement.
Reshma frankly speaking I had not planned on getting Shaina back.Let's see how the story shapes up.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Boxer and Ajay left to check out on Neha. Aryan returns to his desk and looks at the pictures of his daughter and wife.

Deepika:"Aryan don't worry."

Aryan:"Deepika meri gut feeling strongly keh rahi he ki something is wrong.We are talking about Neha. Agar uski tabiyat kharab ho jaati ya koi aur baat hoti jiske wajah se woh office nahin aa sakti woh 100% call karke inform karti."
Edited by Darwin - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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???????????????????????what next????????????????????? 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i want more.jaldi karo jaldi karo jaldi karo. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Deepika watched Aryan walk up and down in the room waiting for some information about Neha..She noticed that whenever a situation concerning Neha arose he got all protective about her.

Edited by Darwin - 18 years ago

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