ajay-neha

Hi frnz

Now that both the aryan pairs are taken,I wud like 2 write a story on neha –ajay relnship.

I cant write as well as swati and reshma but I ll try my level best.

I needed a start 4 d story and as in swati's story neha and ajay r already getting engaged,so I think I ll start from reshma's story in the track of ajay and neha..

So here d story goes.all of us no dat ajay and neha r seein each other.

Aftr wishin Shaina and Aryan (refer 2 aryan-shain story),Neha and Ajay go 2 d canteen.
They both choose a corner table .
Neha :don't they look really good together? Wow .shai s goin 2 get married.
says 2 herself -kash Ajay ne mujhe…
Ajay(reading her thoughts):Aeha, aaj raat ko kya kar rahi ho?
Neha(smiling): kyon?
Ajay: aaj raat ko mere ghar aaogi?
Neha:what?
Ajay: are who nahi,meri maa tumse milne chahti hai. Tumne kya socha?(and starts laughin)
Neha:stop it ajay (and then joins ajay smiling)
Boxer enters the canteen and smiles at them.
Boxer:arey yahan pe bhi lovebirds.mujhe aaj kal ss ka office office kam bandstand zyada lagta hai.upar aryan aur shaina yahan tum log.Chaliye ajay saab naya case aaya hai,kaam pe lag jate hai.
Ajay: chalo.aur neha raat ko time pe paunch jaana.(gives a quick peck on neha's cheeks and leaves.)

if u people dont like it jus tell me.i ll completely understand .i don wnt 2 bore any1.
plz gve me ur opinion frankly.i wont feel bad.i promise

its really good. pls continue fast.

yeah its really good. please continue.... good work
akanksha

Thanx . i l try 2 write better.
So here is the next part.

After finishing the day at ss, Neha goes home. She switches on the tv when she remembers that she has 2 go to Ajay's place.She feels a bit scared thinking 'Wt if Ajay's mom doesn't like me?'

Just then her cell rings.She sees Ajay's no. and smiles 2 herself.
Neha: Haan Ajay bolo.
Ajay:bas tumhe aaj raat ke bare mein yaad dilano ko call kiya.time pe pahunch jaana,babes.
Neha:what if tumhare mom ko mein pasand nahin aayi..
Ajay:u don't worry. .waise bi meri mom wohi karti hai jo mujhe pasand hai.she nos dat I love you.
Neha(blushes) :ok.bye.i ll meet u in an hour.

Neha takes a quick bath.Wears a white salwar kameez, puts on all accessories like long earrings,a necklace,bangles.She leaves her hair open takin d parting from the left side and letting her hair loosely fall on the right side of her face . In the end she looks really beautiful and feels more confident.

Neha reaches Ajay's place. He opens the door.

Neha: hi Ajay! I m really scared.
Ajay is completely dazed by Neha's looks as he had never seen her like dis b4.
Ajay:U look really beautiful in Indian clothes.(sayin dis he comes quite close 2 her and runs his hand through her hair).
Neha not knowin wt 2 do just closes her eyes when Ajay's mom's voice his heard callin him .
Neha and ajay part away b4 ajay's mom enters d room.

Ajay's mom:Ajay beta,kaun hai?

Ajay's mom is a typical Indian mom who loves and cares 4 his son, She s wearing a light pink sari with blue flowers on it.
(seeing neha)
U must b Neha, d one who one stole my son's heart.
Neha: Namaste aunty (and enters d house)

Time passes by. Ajay's mom develops a gr8 liking 4 Neha.Neha 2 finds Ajay's mom as a very lovin person. Ajay spends most of the evening sittin quiet and starin at Neha which his mom also notices. Neha has food with them.and then it is time 4 her 2 leave .
A's mom:beta bahut raat ho chuki hai.Tum akele mat jaana.Ajay tumhe chod dega.
Neha: no aunty. its ok.mein akele chali jaaongi.
A's mom: beta I no tum bahut brave ho .isiliye tum ss mein kaam karti ho.but plz I want 2 b sure dat u r safe.mujhe nahi lagta mujhe tumse achi bahu kahin aur mil sakthi hai.
{Hearin this both Ajay and neha look at each other.they r in the seventh heaven.)

(to ajay) beta , neha ko uske ghar tak chod do.

Ajay goes in 2 get his bike's key .his mom gives a gold bangle 2 neha as shagun.
Neha s spellbound..she hugs Ajay's mom.

hope u like it.
if u feel anythin s missin.tell me plz.i ll improve

good. keep it up 👏

Bravo Praveena!
It's great!,i hope there's more abt wht they wud do alone 😉 but it's amazing-the way u place every character stealthily.
Keep up the gr8 work!
God bless you!
Lookin fwd to reading u'r next update,
bye