ajay-neha - Page 2

i just came back..i'll read and ofer feedback.
why do u assume u must be bad, i know all cant write like professionals and poets or story tellers but here we just share and imagine and ahve pleasure and fresnhip...once one starts writing he/she keeps improving and u must be good.

Originally posted by: AryanDipikaFan

..once one starts writing he/she keeps improving and u must be good.

dats y even i m tryin 2 do. improve .promise wont try 2 bore u much.

thank u all 4 ur encouragement.love u people and love dis forum.

hey people here s d next part.hope u like it

Ajay rides d bike wid Neha sittin behind him .Neha tells him how gr8 she thinks Ajay's mom is!
Aftr reaching Neha's apartment
Neha:thanx Ajay, ghar pahunch ke call karna
Ajay:: wt manners yaar? Tumhe mein yahan tak chodne aata hoon aur tum mujhe ek cup coffee ke liye bhi nahi poochti.
Neha (smiles):(smiles):acha ! chalo upar aa jao.
(smiles):acha ! chalo upar aa jao.


Ajay parks his bike and they go 2 Neha's place.Neha opens d door
Ajay:Tum akeli rehti hoon phir bhi itna neat and clean room kaise rakh paati ho ? u shud hv seen my room b4 my mom came.
Neha:wohi to diff hai Ajay aur Neha mein.
Ok wt vl u have? Tea,coffee,ya soft drink?
Ajay :U
Neha(blushes): ): seriously puch rahi hoon
Ajay:seriously keh raha hoon.(lookin at neha) tik hai abhi ke liye kuch thanda.
Kyonki as u r hre the whole atmosphere s so Hot!
Neha:Ajay tum bhi na no.1 flirt ho!! (sayin dis she opens d fridge takes a coke bottle and goes 2 d kitchen)
Ajay gets up makes a round through d hall ,looks at Neha in d kitchen and wid a mischievous smile on his face enters d kitchen. Neha not realisin Ajay's presence in d kitchen carries on pouring d coke in d glass

Ajay moves in a slow manner and holds Neha by her waist from behind..
Neha knowin it s Ajay turns her face towards him wid a mixed expression of confusion , astonishment and pleasure.. Ajay moves his lips closer 2 hers .She shying turns her face away .Missing her lips Ajay goes 4 her neck. His lip explores her neck in a very passionate manner. Neha getting erotic turns toward him. They both look into each other's eyes.He movese 2wards her .Neha closes her eyes,Ajay moving forward brings his lips 2wards hers.their lips meet and then Ajay's cell phone rings

hope u like it. i wnt ur honest replies.plz guys

Its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
too good 👏
continue soon

Originally posted by: praveenam

Now that both the aryan pairs are taken,I wud like 2 write a story on neha –ajay relnship.

well prav..... u can write on the aryan pairs too....i mean, its not like its just my fanfic or swati's....its just a thred whr we can all share our views...since i know ur an aryan-shai fan....i'd be more than delighted if u can contribute to my thread too...u can think of a totally different line from my story too....

as for others ...i also request u all to contribute to the fanfics...sofia, u for example can add to swati's....etc......

it'll be more fun that way as we can have lots of ideas....👍🏼

Originally posted by: praveenam

if u people dont like it jus tell me.i ll completely understand .i don wnt 2 bore any1.
plz gve me ur opinion frankly.i wont feel bad.i promise

u deserve a slap...(like the ones u give ur frnz)...for sayin this babes....😆.... how can u even think that a love story can be bad.... and its ur imagination and creativity and we all respect it.....

and ajay and neha are such a cute couple that we are relly lovin ur fanfic...

and hey....i know its ur exams prav....but do come bak soon and continue with the story ...we're all waiting eagerly.... 😊

happy dat u likd it. vll continue soon.
and abt aryan shai fanfic i dont think i ll b able 2 do justice 2 der love story d way u do it.
really glad dat u r bck.