Siya ke ram SS: Vanvaas News!!! Updated part 4 on pg=5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Rex_Ryan

wow...lovely update ...urmila throwing things on lakshman ...but later worrying for his wound and crying is best part ...
ps -try to update long part ... n other couple scenes (if possible)


thanks ryan . Will update very soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Ankita.11

😆😆

This was nice..
loved the contrast...first urmi's anger and then her concern
update soon !!!!



Happy that u like it dear Ankita . Will update very soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Lovely update Sumi

Do update soon

Eagerly wating !!!😃


Thanks shivam bhaiya , will update tomorrow night.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Hello everyone😊 This is third part of my SS. And thanks to all of you for the appreciation for previous SS .😉😃 Dandaas r also welcome!!!! 😆
SS- part 3 = vanvaas
Urmila( talking to herself): kya karu kuch soch urmila!!!!
lakshman : kuch kaha.
Urmila : nah... nahi maine kuch nahi kaha. Chodiye naa mujhe.
Lakshman: nahi aaj main tumko nahi chodunga , kyunki mujhe aaj tumpar bahut pyaar aa raha hai.
Urmila held him more tightly .
Lakshman: oh!! Accha Lagta hai aaj meri urmi ko bhi mujhpar bada pyaar aa raha hai.
Lakshman close his eyes and want to enjoy that moment to the fullest.
While enjoying that moment his grip to hold urmila lessens.
Urmila( in her thoughts): Soch kya rahi ho urmila yahi sahi mauka hai bhaag le.
Urmila push him , blushes and ran away from there.
Lakshman: aaj tum nahi bachogi Lakshman ran towards Urmila to catch her in corridors of mahal but she was too fast that he is not able to catch hold of her.
Lakshman : yeh urmi toh jitna socha tha usse bhi jyada tez hai , isne toh mujhe bhaga bhaga kar thaka hi diya hai. Ab mujhe kuch karna padega.
Urmila ( laughing ): aap mujhe nahi pakad payenge,yeh to pakka hai.
She began running after saying this.
Lakshman takes a shortcut and comes in front of urmila
Lakshman ( smiling ) : ab kaha bhagogi urmi.
he holds her.
Urmila ( shocked ) : yeh koi baat nahi hoti hai aapne chalaki ki hai aap mujhko pakad nahi paaye toh aapne chalaki kar di.
Lakshman ( smiling ) : Toh tumne bhi toh chalaki se mujhko apne se chudwa liya.
Urmila blushes badly after listening this.
Urmila ( acting) : Jijashree ram!!! aap yahan .
Lakshman ( in his thoughts ) : maare gaye ab toh.
Lakshman quickly leaves Urmila.
Lakshman : woh bhai... bhaiya main toh ... toh.
And he turns back and found no one standing .
And he again turn back to urmila and he found that she has done the trick and she was running fastly.
Lakshman ( shouting ): Rukiye Urmila!!! aapne phir se mujhe dokha de diya.
Urmila teases him with showing her tongue .😛
Lakshman again runs towards her while urmila was also running .
And lakshman previously wounded hand got struck to the sharp candlestick while urmila was still running and didn't notice him.
Lakshman ( shouts in pain) : aaahhh... Mera haath.
Now he was feeling more pain than before .
The pain was now unbearable for him and he falls on ground and began crying.
Urmila who hears his shouts turns back and found lakshman sitting on groung and crying in pain.
Now Urmila heart melted and she rans towards him.
Urmila ( shocked ): hey ishwar!!!
Blood was continuously flowing out from lakshman hand Urmila ( worrying ) : sumitranandan aap apna haath mujhe dijiye.
Lakshman ( crying in pain ) : nah ... nahi mujhe... nahi dena...
Urmila (worrying badly) : sumitranandan aapke haath se pehle se bhi bahut
jyaada rakt nikal raha hai .
Lakshman ( still crying) : nikalne dijiye... aapko toh meri koi chinta hi nahi hai... mere itne... pukaarne par bhi aap nahi ruki. Apko jahan jaana hai jaiye , mai nahi rokunga.Jaiye!!!
Urmila( crying and folding he hands ) : mujhe maaf kar dijiye sumitranandan main bas aapke saath majaak kar rahi thi , kripya karke apna haath dijiye.
Lakshman feels dizzy in pain and he found Urmila becomes blurring to him.
Urmila notices this and becomes more worried and says: aapka jyada rakt nikalne ki wajah se aapko chakkar aa raha
hai kripya kar ke apna haath dijiye.
Lakshman ( somehow bearing unbearable pain ) : toh aapko... mujhko vaada dena hoga ki... aap mujhe aise kabhi nahi chodengi... warna main aapse humesha ke liye rusht ho jayunga .
Urmila ( crying): Thik hai sumitranandan!!! Main kabhi aapko aise nahi chodungi ab aap apna haath dijiye.
Lakshman gives her hand to her .
Urmila notices that his hand is more deeply cut than before.
Urmila ( stops crying and wipe her tears) : yeh aapka haath toh pehle se bhi bahut jyada gehra kat gaya hai.
Lakshman was not able to bear pain.
Lakshman ( feeling dizzy) : Urmi mujhse ab dard bardhaast nahi ho raha hai.
Urmila: hausla rakhiye!!!!

Urmila removes the cloth put by her on his hand .
Lakshman kept looking at her.
Now Urmila brings the medicinal herb , washes the wound and was going to put medicinal paste .
Lakshman: nahi urmi phir se nahi, bahut jalega!!!!
Urmila ( softy and caressing his cheek) : nahi apko yeh lagana padega warna aapka ghaav jaldi kaise bharega .
She puts the paste on her wound.
Lakshman : aaahhh.(Tears fells from his eyes and he hold urmila shoulders in pain)
Lakshman: bahut jyada dard aur jal raha hai urmi!!!!
Urmila also hold him so that he can gain strength by forgetting his pain.
Now urmila tears her cloth and put it on lakshman hand .
Urmila wipes Lakshman tears from her cloth.
Urmila: ab aap jaldi thik ho jayenge. Ab chaliye apne kaksh chalte hai.
Lakshman stands and he feels dizzy . He was about to fall down unconscious but Urmila notice this and she hold him from behind and quickly makes him go in his room by holding his shoulder and makes him lie on the bed.
She brings a glass of juice for him ans make him half sit and makes him drink the juice.
Lakshman now feels good . Urmila says him to rest and she was going to leave but he holds her hand.
Lakshman: abhi aap mere saath baithiye .
Lakshman : aaj main aapse ek aur vachan maangna chahta hun.
Urmila: kaisa vachan.
Next part will be updated soon.
Plzzz post your precious comments and also share your favourite moments from the SS.
Will wait for your favourite moments and your replies from this SS.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Sumi dear bahut accha update hai... Romantic bhi tha... I just loved it... Ab jaldi jaldi update karna... Varna main sochti reh jaungi ki aage kya hoga
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Clever Urmi
Poor Laksh, bechare ko chooth lag gayi, ur are after poor Laksh😛😆😉
Dont leave us hanging on the cliff, please update soon
Really I cant wait for the next part😆
And yes it was wonderful👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
nice update sumi ...but please update next part soon ...nahi to main vachan ke bare me sochti rahungi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Great Going dear as always
continue soon


Small suggestion - pls try to incorporate other characters as well into the plot to make it lengthier amd more intriguing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Great Going dear as always

continue soon


Small suggestion - pls try to incorporate other characters as well into the plot to make it lengthier amd more intriguing


Thanks Shivam bhaiya!!!! 😃
I will update next part in 4-5 days. 😉
I will also incorporate other characters as well!!! And the next update plot is going on in my mind,
I think this update will be very long as compared to my previous parts. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Please continue soon sumi. Loved the update. Liked the scene where Urmila fakes abt Ram's coming 😊

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