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PART-1
2 days before vanvaas news-
In Ayodhya everybody were having their lunch.
Dashrath - Sita aaj bhojan bahut accha banaya hai tumne atyant swadisht.
Sita- mujhe bahut khushi hui ki aapko bhojan pasand aaya.
All mothers praise Sita!!!
And mandavi, urmila , shruthkirti standing watch everyone enjoying their food. Ram [smiling]- haa Sitae pitashree sahi kah rahe hai aaj aapne atyant swadisht bhojan banaya hai.
Sita [ blushing] - Dhanyabaad!!
Lakshman - par bhabhi aapne yeh sabji itni teekhi kyu banayi hai. Aap toh kabhi itna teekha nahi banati hai.[He knows that the sabzi was not made by her bhabhi. He knew who has made it but he acts ]
Sita : ( in her thoughts)= Lagta hai lakshman bhaiya ko urmila kehaath ki banayi hui sabzi pasand nahi aayi hai. Ab kya karun main. Sita: Kyu lakshman bhaiya aapko pasand nahi aayi . [ she was fearing what he will answer ]
Lakshman [seeing to urmila]: Nahi bhabhi mujhe ye pata hai ki yeh aapne nahi banayi.[Sita was shocked as how he came to know]
Urmila was standing near Sita and she look at her pleasing eyes to handle the situation . Sita: Nahi ...Lakshman bhaiya ye maine hi banayi hai.
At that moment Shruthkirti and Mandavi burst out saying: Didi kitna jhooth bolengi , bataa kyun deti lakshman bhaiya ko ki aapne ye nahi banaya hai.
Sita got embarrassed and Ram looks on.
Lakshman : Toh kisne banayi hai bhabhi.
Mandavi and Shruthkirti : Aapki pyaari ardhangini Urmila ne.
Urmila due to fear that what lakshman will say hid behind her Sita didi. Lakshman: main jaanta tha ki yeh urmila ne hi banaya hai.
Urmila was looking at him with her wide eyes open!!
Lakshman: kyunki yeh Urmila jitni teekhi hai usi tarah uska banaya hua bhojan bhi teekha hi hoga na!!
Urmila was fuming with anger and her face has got red with embarrassment in front of the whole family.
lakshman: Lekin mujhe teekha bhojan bahut hi priye hai. shatrughan who was seating next to him teases him saying- Bhaiya yeh kya kah rah hai aap mai samajh raha hun ki aap kehna chah rah hai ki aapko teekha bhojan to priye hai hi uske saath saath aapko bhabhi se bhi bahut prem ho gaya hai. Kyu bhaiya ??? sahi kaha na maine.
Lakshman and Urmila started to blush badly.
Everyone looks lakshman and urmila blushing badly and smile gently.kaha apne shatrughan bhaiya ,ye mujhe prem bahut karte hai par sahi se vyakt nahi karte hai lekin main to sumitranandan ko bahut adhik prem karti hu.
lakshman: (in his thoughts) = agar yahan par maatayein , pitashree aur ram bhaiya na hote naa toh acche se tumko batata ki kitna sahi kahaa hai tumne. Abhi ruk jaayo sab log bhojan karke yahan se prasthaan karte hai uske baad main tumhari acche se khabar lunga.
Bharat who was seating next to shatrughan pulled shatrughan ear and said : Tum bahut shararti ho gaye ho shatrughan!! Lajja nahi aati apne bhaiya ke baare main aisa kehte huye.
Shatrughan ( feeling pain) : Bhaiya dard ho raha hai mera kaan chodiye, maine toh wahin to kaha hai jo main dekh raha hun. Isme meri kya galti hai.
Bharat now his pulled his ear more. He shouted in pain.
All 3 mothers says: arre jaane bhi do Bharat , usse dard ho raha.
Bharat : nahi maa agar aaj ise saja nahi mili toh ye aur bigad jayegaa.
Shatrughan: accha bhaiya galti hui maaf kijiye aage se aisa nahi karunga.
Bharat now leaves his ear.
Lakshman who was seeing all these was feeling very happy from inside and said in his (thoughts): Bahut accha kiya bharat bhaiya, aaise hi kariye jab ye shatrughan apni buddhi kuch jyada hi chalata hai. Chalo mera kaam aapne kar diya bharat bhaiya , ise toh main aaj ke liye chod raha hun.
Ram who was seeing all this said in his thoughts : Mere inn dono nadaan bhaiyo ka kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta .
Lakshman:maaf kijiyega bhabhi agar aapko bura laga ho toh. Mera iraada aapko dukh pahuchaane ka nahi tha bhabhi main to bas unko pakadna chahta hai jinhone ne yeh sabji banayi thi.
Sita : koi baat nahi lakshman bhaiya. Mujhe bura nahi laga . Ab aapko apna sawaal ka jawaab mil gaya hai toh ab aap bhojan kijiye. [Sita said this smiling with joy because lakshman has indirectly appreciated her small sister].
All of them again started to have their food.
Shatrughan again teasing lakshman: aap sabko pata hai lakshman bhaiya urmila bhabhi ko kya bulate hai , maine suna hai pyaar se kya bulate hai - urmi.
Everyone is looking and they are shocked and they are like : yeh iss shatrughan ko yeh sab baat jaane ka kabse interest ho gaya.
Ram and Bharat together thought the same thing: aaj toh lagta hai ki shatrughan lakshman aur urmila ki taang kichne mein koi kasar nahi chodega.
When lakshman heard this the food he was eating got stuck in his throat. He started coughing badly.
Urmila ran to him with a glass water and make him drank the water.
Lakshman: Shukriya Urmila!!
Dashrath and all 3 mothers asks: tum thik to ho putra lakshman.
Ram sita bharat mandavi shruthkirti : ab tumhe thik to lag raha hai. Lakshman: haa!! main ab thik hu.Bharat and Ram : tum kab shudhroge shatrughan .
Lakshman: chote ab main tumko nahi chodunga ruk jaayo abh bataata hu tumhe , sab log bhojan karke jaaye yahan se phir dekho tumhara kya haal banata hu.
Dashrath and all 3 mothers started giggling seeing his sons fighting.
Shatrughan : ab isme meri kya galti hai jo dekha hun wahi to bata raha hu. Pata hai aap ko urmila bhabhi yeh aapko kya bulate hai.
Urmila : kya bhaiya?
Shatrughan: kabhi kabhi aapko bhaiya teekhi mirchi kehte hai to kabhi rakshashi!!!!
Urmila turned red fuming with anger and said in her thoughts: Accha aap yeh sab kehte hai mere baare mein .Aap aaye to kaksh mein. Aaj aapki khair nahi , aaj aap nahi bachenge sumitranandan.
She ran from there with her eyes full of burning anger.
Dashrath : ye bahut galat baat hai shatrughan.
All 3 mothers : sahi kahe rahe hai swami aap, tumne bahut galat kiya hai shatrughan. Bharat (in anger): ye kya kiya moorkh urmila bhabhi ko krodhit kar diya!!!!
Ram: tumse yeh ummeed nahi thi
shatrughan. Tumne bahut galat kiya. Shatrughan: Ram bhaiya aur Bharat bhaiya aap mujhe kyu daant rahe hai, ye galti lakshman bhaiya ki hai woh kyu kehte urmila bhabhi ko aap hi bataiye.
Bharat and Ram [ taking favour of lakshman] : phir bhi tumhe yeh baat urmila ko nahi batani chahiye thi.
Ram and Bharat: ab tum kya karoge lakshman ????
Lakshman : main kaksh mein jayunga na bhaiya toh urmila mere ko aaj bhagwan ke paas bhejne waali hai .
Ram and Bharat start laughing gently .
Lakshman : bhaiya main urmila ko manane jaa raha hun aur phir tum shatrughan pitne ke liye taiyaar ho jaayo kyu ki aaj tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta hai!!
And he leaves from there and everyone started laughing hardly on his condition that what urmila will do with him now. God only knows!!!
lakshman in his thoughts : hey bhagwaan aaj mujhe iss rakshashi urmi se bacha lo bas yahi iccha hai. Apki bahut badi meherbaani ho jayegi!!!!
Will update next part soon !!!!!
Please share your views everyone!!!! And also share your favourite moments from the SS. 😊 😃
PART-1
2 days before vanvaas news-
In Ayodhya everybody were having their lunch.
Dashrath - Sita aaj bhojan bahut accha banaya hai tumne atyant swadisht.
Sita- mujhe bahut khushi hui ki aapko bhojan pasand aaya.
All mothers praise Sita!!!
And mandavi, urmila , shruthkirti standing watch everyone enjoying their food. Ram [smiling]- haa Sitae pitashree sahi kah rahe hai aaj aapne atyant swadisht bhojan banaya hai.
Sita [ blushing] - Dhanyabaad!!
Lakshman - par bhabhi aapne yeh sabji itni teekhi kyu banayi hai. Aap toh kabhi itna teekha nahi banati hai.[He knows that the sabzi was not made by her bhabhi. He knew who has made it but he acts ]
Sita : ( in her thoughts)= Lagta hai lakshman bhaiya ko urmila kehaath ki banayi hui sabzi pasand nahi aayi hai. Ab kya karun main. Sita: Kyu lakshman bhaiya aapko pasand nahi aayi . [ she was fearing what he will answer ]
Lakshman [seeing to urmila]: Nahi bhabhi mujhe ye pata hai ki yeh aapne nahi banayi.[Sita was shocked as how he came to know]
Urmila was standing near Sita and she look at her pleasing eyes to handle the situation . Sita: Nahi ...Lakshman bhaiya ye maine hi banayi hai.
At that moment Shruthkirti and Mandavi burst out saying: Didi kitna jhooth bolengi , bataa kyun deti lakshman bhaiya ko ki aapne ye nahi banaya hai.
Sita got embarrassed and Ram looks on.
Lakshman : Toh kisne banayi hai bhabhi.
Mandavi and Shruthkirti : Aapki pyaari ardhangini Urmila ne.
Urmila due to fear that what lakshman will say hid behind her Sita didi. Lakshman: main jaanta tha ki yeh urmila ne hi banaya hai.
Urmila was looking at him with her wide eyes open!!
Lakshman: kyunki yeh Urmila jitni teekhi hai usi tarah uska banaya hua bhojan bhi teekha hi hoga na!!
Urmila was fuming with anger and her face has got red with embarrassment in front of the whole family.
lakshman: Lekin mujhe teekha bhojan bahut hi priye hai. shatrughan who was seating next to him teases him saying- Bhaiya yeh kya kah rah hai aap mai samajh raha hun ki aap kehna chah rah hai ki aapko teekha bhojan to priye hai hi uske saath saath aapko bhabhi se bhi bahut prem ho gaya hai. Kyu bhaiya ??? sahi kaha na maine.
Lakshman and Urmila started to blush badly.
Everyone looks lakshman and urmila blushing badly and smile gently.kaha apne shatrughan bhaiya ,ye mujhe prem bahut karte hai par sahi se vyakt nahi karte hai lekin main to sumitranandan ko bahut adhik prem karti hu.
lakshman: (in his thoughts) = agar yahan par maatayein , pitashree aur ram bhaiya na hote naa toh acche se tumko batata ki kitna sahi kahaa hai tumne. Abhi ruk jaayo sab log bhojan karke yahan se prasthaan karte hai uske baad main tumhari acche se khabar lunga.
Bharat who was seating next to shatrughan pulled shatrughan ear and said : Tum bahut shararti ho gaye ho shatrughan!! Lajja nahi aati apne bhaiya ke baare main aisa kehte huye.
Shatrughan ( feeling pain) : Bhaiya dard ho raha hai mera kaan chodiye, maine toh wahin to kaha hai jo main dekh raha hun. Isme meri kya galti hai.
Bharat now his pulled his ear more. He shouted in pain.
All 3 mothers says: arre jaane bhi do Bharat , usse dard ho raha.
Bharat : nahi maa agar aaj ise saja nahi mili toh ye aur bigad jayegaa.
Shatrughan: accha bhaiya galti hui maaf kijiye aage se aisa nahi karunga.
Bharat now leaves his ear.
Lakshman who was seeing all these was feeling very happy from inside and said in his (thoughts): Bahut accha kiya bharat bhaiya, aaise hi kariye jab ye shatrughan apni buddhi kuch jyada hi chalata hai. Chalo mera kaam aapne kar diya bharat bhaiya , ise toh main aaj ke liye chod raha hun.
Ram who was seeing all this said in his thoughts : Mere inn dono nadaan bhaiyo ka kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta .
Lakshman:maaf kijiyega bhabhi agar aapko bura laga ho toh. Mera iraada aapko dukh pahuchaane ka nahi tha bhabhi main to bas unko pakadna chahta hai jinhone ne yeh sabji banayi thi.
Sita : koi baat nahi lakshman bhaiya. Mujhe bura nahi laga . Ab aapko apna sawaal ka jawaab mil gaya hai toh ab aap bhojan kijiye. [Sita said this smiling with joy because lakshman has indirectly appreciated her small sister].
All of them again started to have their food.
Shatrughan again teasing lakshman: aap sabko pata hai lakshman bhaiya urmila bhabhi ko kya bulate hai , maine suna hai pyaar se kya bulate hai - urmi.
Everyone is looking and they are shocked and they are like : yeh iss shatrughan ko yeh sab baat jaane ka kabse interest ho gaya.
Ram and Bharat together thought the same thing: aaj toh lagta hai ki shatrughan lakshman aur urmila ki taang kichne mein koi kasar nahi chodega.
When lakshman heard this the food he was eating got stuck in his throat. He started coughing badly.
Urmila ran to him with a glass water and make him drank the water.
Lakshman: Shukriya Urmila!!
Dashrath and all 3 mothers asks: tum thik to ho putra lakshman.
Ram sita bharat mandavi shruthkirti : ab tumhe thik to lag raha hai. Lakshman: haa!! main ab thik hu.Bharat and Ram : tum kab shudhroge shatrughan .
Lakshman: chote ab main tumko nahi chodunga ruk jaayo abh bataata hu tumhe , sab log bhojan karke jaaye yahan se phir dekho tumhara kya haal banata hu.
Dashrath and all 3 mothers started giggling seeing his sons fighting.
Shatrughan : ab isme meri kya galti hai jo dekha hun wahi to bata raha hu. Pata hai aap ko urmila bhabhi yeh aapko kya bulate hai.
Urmila : kya bhaiya?
Shatrughan: kabhi kabhi aapko bhaiya teekhi mirchi kehte hai to kabhi rakshashi!!!!
Urmila turned red fuming with anger and said in her thoughts: Accha aap yeh sab kehte hai mere baare mein .Aap aaye to kaksh mein. Aaj aapki khair nahi , aaj aap nahi bachenge sumitranandan.
She ran from there with her eyes full of burning anger.
Dashrath : ye bahut galat baat hai shatrughan.
All 3 mothers : sahi kahe rahe hai swami aap, tumne bahut galat kiya hai shatrughan. Bharat (in anger): ye kya kiya moorkh urmila bhabhi ko krodhit kar diya!!!!
Ram: tumse yeh ummeed nahi thi
shatrughan. Tumne bahut galat kiya. Shatrughan: Ram bhaiya aur Bharat bhaiya aap mujhe kyu daant rahe hai, ye galti lakshman bhaiya ki hai woh kyu kehte urmila bhabhi ko aap hi bataiye.
Bharat and Ram [ taking favour of lakshman] : phir bhi tumhe yeh baat urmila ko nahi batani chahiye thi.
Ram and Bharat: ab tum kya karoge lakshman ????
Lakshman : main kaksh mein jayunga na bhaiya toh urmila mere ko aaj bhagwan ke paas bhejne waali hai .
Ram and Bharat start laughing gently .
Lakshman : bhaiya main urmila ko manane jaa raha hun aur phir tum shatrughan pitne ke liye taiyaar ho jaayo kyu ki aaj tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta hai!!
And he leaves from there and everyone started laughing hardly on his condition that what urmila will do with him now. God only knows!!!
lakshman in his thoughts : hey bhagwaan aaj mujhe iss rakshashi urmi se bacha lo bas yahi iccha hai. Apki bahut badi meherbaani ho jayegi!!!!
Will update next part soon !!!!!
Please share your views everyone!!!! And also share your favourite moments from the SS. 😊 😃
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