Siya ke ram SS: Vanvaas News!!! Updated part 4 on pg=5 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rex_Ryan

fabulous!!! loved it ..update next part as soon as possible


Thank u Ryan!!! will update tomorrow night!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was just too good... Just loved it
Please update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone !!! Thank u all for appreciating for my SS. Now enjoy this=
SS : Vanvaas news
Part - 2

As lakshman was heading towards his room he was very scared as what will now.
lakshman : hey ishwar!!! kuch kariye. Mujhe to apne hi kaksh mein ghushne ki himmat nahi ho rahi hai. Aakhir wahan par
rakshashi urmi mujhe swarg bhejne ki taiyaari kar rahi hai.Itna darr toh muje Ram bhaiya se bhi nahi lagta hai jitna aaj urmi se lag raha hai. Hey ishwar!!! Raksha karna.Lakshman open his room door nad found urmila removing her bangles.
lakshman( scared): Urmi...Urmila
Urmila was in so much fuming with anger that she started throwing the things whatever she found on him.
Lakshman was saving himself from his wife urmila attacks.
lakshman: ye kya kar rahi ho urmi!!!
Urmila(still In anger): aap mujhe rakshashi bulate hai naaa ye lijiye.
she again throw things at him.
Lakshman ( saving himself from attack): nahi aisaa nahi .
Urmila: kya aisa nahi hai ?? to aap kehna kya chah rahe hai ki aapke chote bhai shatrughan jooth bolte hai ??
Lakshman ( pleading):Urmi mujhe maaf kar do mera iraada tumhe dukh pahuchane ka nahi tha.
Urmila was continuously throwing the things at him . Lakshman ( in his thoughts): sahi toh kehta hu tum rakshashi ho rakshashi!!! lagta hai ki yeh aaj mujhe maar maar kar saara kaksh ki halat kharab kar degi.
Urmila: Chalo thike maaf kiya kyuki mandavi didi bhi mujhe rakshashi kehkar chidati thi.
Lakshman ( in his thoughts): dhanya hai aap rakshashi urmi.
Urmila : Lekin uske saath mujhe aap teekhi mirch kehte hai jo mujhe mandavi didi ne bhi kabhi nahi kaha isliye main aapse yeh puchna chahti hun ki aap kaun se meethe se rasgulle hai . Aapki naak par hamesa gussa jo kut- kut kar badha hua jo agar phat jaaye toh lagta hai ki jwalamukhi phat gaya hai.
lakshman staring lovingly at his angry wife urmi (in his thoughts) : jo bhi ho par mujhe aap gussa karte huyi bahut pyaari lagti hai.
Lakshman ( showing fake anger): Urmila !!!!!
Urmila: Kya urmila kya!!! ab maine aapke baare kah diya toh aapko bada gussa aa raha hai.
She again throw a thing to lakshman that makes a cut on lakshman hand.
Lakshman (shouting in pain): ahhh!!! urmila ye kya kiya????
Blood starts coming out of lakshman hand.
Urmila forgets her all anger and she rush towards him.
Urmila( seeing his wound and worrying): hey ishwar !!!! main kitni pagli hun, gusse mei kya ho jaata hai mujhse, bahut dard ho raha ho ga naa?
Lakshman who was in pain forgot all pain when he saw his wife urmi worrying about him.
Lakshman ( acting): dard bahut ho raha hai.
Urmila: rukiye!!!
She make him sit on the sofa and washes the wound and then she put medicinal herb on her wound.
Lakshman : aaahh [ he shouts in pain]
Urmila began crying seeing him suffer pain due to her and she put a cloth and tie it on the wound
Lakshman( worries) : tum ro kyu rahi ho urmi!!!
Urmila ( sobbing): meri wajah se... meri wajah se aapko itna dard ho raha hai.
Lakshman after hearing this have tears in his eyes.
Lakshman( wiping her tears) : nahi urmi isme aapki koi galti nahi hai Aapko mujhpar gussa karne ka haq hai . Galti to meri thi maine aapka majaak udaya!!!
Lakshman : Ram bhaiya ke baad mein tumse bahut adhik prem karta hun. Kya mera itna bhi haq nahi hai ki mai aapko thoda sa gussa dilayu.
Lakshman never thought that he will get the most caring wife.
Lakshman : Maaf kijiye ga urmi ab maine aapka prem aapko acchi tarah se liya hai ab se main apko kabhi rakshashi nahi bulayunga lekin main agar tumhe mirchi kah kar chidaunga toh tum gussa nahi karo gi naa??
Urmila ( smiling) : kabhi nahi!!!
They both share an intense eye lock.
Wind starts blowing.
Lakshman stands and Urmila also stands and he pulled urmila towards him such he collapsed into him.
Lakshman [being romantic] : Ab kahan bhagogi urmi ab main tumhe nahi chodunga.
Urmila ( in her thoughts) : mujhe inke iraade kuch thik nahi lag rahe hai , mujhe kuch karna padega warna mai to gayi].
Next part will be updated soon.
please share your views and post your precious comments and also tell your favourite scenes from the SS. Waiting for your replies . 😊 😃
Edited by Sumi-19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Woow...soo sweet rakshashi cum mirchi..
aap kaun se meethe se rasgulle hai .
That was epic...👏👏
Thank u for wonderful part but u kept us waiting...
Please do update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...lovely update ...urmila throwing things on lakshman ...but later worrying for his wound and crying is best part ...
ps -try to update long part ... n other couple scenes (if possible)
Edited by Rex_Ryan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Lovely update Sumi
Do update soon

Eagerly wating !!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: saranya.saran

Woow...soo sweet rakshashi cum mirchi..

aap kaun se meethe se rasgulle hai .
<font size="2">That was epic...👏👏</font>
<font size="2">Thank u for wonderful part but u kept us waiting...</font>
<font size="2">Please do update next part soon</font>


thanks a lot saranya.
So sweet of u.
will update next part very soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Eee i cant wait for the next part
Iss point pe q roka *pouts*
Jldi updt do na
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
😆😆
This was nice..
loved the contrast...first urmi's anger and then her concern
update soon !!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: minamma

Eee i cant wait for the next part

Iss point pe q roka *pouts*
Jldi updt do na


thanks minamma for appreciation . 😊
Will update very soon dear !!!!! 😉
Edited by Sumi-19 - 9 years ago

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