LakshMila RomCom/TS:Hum Aapke Hai Kaun? Finale-Epi 10-Pg 36 7/10 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Wow, Maha episode part is too lovely Mila. But poor Sita, why are you behind her?😉 Even Sumathra Ji is afraid of her? so sad. But guess one thing. What will happen to Ravan when her kidnaps Sita? 😆😆😆😆 Asw far I could guess, he will surrender to Ram and exclaim that for sure he (Ram) is the greatest of all and he desrve to be the King of thrilok and without hesitation, he will handover his reign to Ram (as a compensation for his mistake to abduct Sita) with a small wish that he should provide a small place to Ravan (to make penance) which will never be wandered by Sita.
(you know what, we will joke like this for my elder co sister as even she is like that, she will talk to any one and everyone and guess what, she will be the winner as she will have the last word. So even the kids in the family says, Veena Doddamma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if some one kidnaps her, then he will call Ravi doddappa and say, sir I will pay you 5 lacs and also promise that I will never ever kidnap anyone in my life, please take back your wife)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: deejagi

Wow, Maha episode part is too lovely Mila. But poor Sita, why are you behind her?😉 Even Sumathra Ji is afraid of her? so sad. But guess one thing. What will happen to Ravan when her kidnaps Sita? 😆 Asw far I could guess, he will surrender to Ram and exclaim that for sure he (Ram) is the greatest of all and he desrve to be the King of thrilok and without hesitation, he will handover his reign to Ram (as a compensation for his mistake to abduct Sita) with a small wish that he should provide a small place to Ravan (to make penance) which will never be wandered by Sita.

(you know what, we will joke like this for my elder co sister as even she is like that, she will talk to any one and everyone and guess what, she will be the winner as she will have the last word. So even the kids in the family says, Veena Doddamma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if some one kidnaps her, then he will call Ravi doddappa and say, sir I will pay you 5 lacs and also promise that I will never ever kidnap anyone in my life, please take back your wife)

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What to do?StarSita is a born lecturer.😛
Raavan 😆
So,
Your elder co-sister is just like StarSita😆wow
And what are you like?more of Mandavi/Urmi/Kriti ? :P
😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: LakshMila

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What to do?StarSita is a born lecturer.😛
Raavan 😆
So,
Your elder co-sister is just like StarSita😆wow
And what are you like?more of Mandavi/Urmi/Kriti ? :P
😆

I relate more to Urmi and if I have to say then a mixture of Mandavi & Urmila. That's one reason I understand Urmila more than I understand Sita. To be frank with for me the family comes first and husband is part of it. Thoughsome times he feels bad that I give more importance to the whole family than him, secretly he is happy that I love his family as much as I love him.
So if there is a situation where the family needs my presence (help or support) and there is trip or party planned by husband, I will end up with the family even if have to disappoint my hubby. Though he will be unhappy at that moment, later he will realize what I did was right but yes, I will have to bear the brunt for some time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Seriously ! What is this ? 🤣

I just cant stop laughing 🤣 🤣 🤣

OMG that pravachan part ...🤣



I can totally visualize Ram's expression 🤣

Oh goddd ...This is so Hilarious .
Meri saari tension jst lost in seconds .
I still cnt stop laughing 🤣

And Bharat - Mandavi ...LMAO 🤣

What did U do ? meri peth mai dard horha hai 😆
I laughed so much ! 😃👏

Shaastang dand vanth pRanaam to U Mili for this Incredible Update .
I am spell bound actually .

P.S- I knw I am vry Bad for commenting so late . Sowiiee


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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

Seriously ! What is this ? 🤣

I just cant stop laughing 🤣 🤣 🤣

OMG that pravachan part ...🤣



I can totally visualize Ram's expression 🤣

Oh goddd ...This is so Hilarious .
Meri saari tension jst lost in seconds .
I still cnt stop laughing 🤣

And Bharat - Mandavi ...LMAO 🤣

What did U do ? meri peth mai dard horha hai 😆
I laughed so much ! 😃👏

Shaastang dand vanth pRanaam to U Mili for this Incredible Update .
I am spell bound actually .

P.S- I knw I am vry Bad for commenting so late . Sowiiee

Shru I am glad you liked it😃

Was waiting for you to read this!Ab mai itni bhi kuchh khaas nahin!!*shies away* 😛
Thankyou...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Omg can't stop laughing...
Poor ram kaan dukh rhe honge...
Bharat madvai lol...
Lakshmila fight dono.ke.pass budhi bhi...lol..
Sita pravachaan and.ram and sumitra condition poor guys ...
Fab update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Filler


A/N:Wanted to post things before my vanvaas life starts tomorrow.Take it as an ek jhalak!
And Thankyou for all the love I got for this TS ❤️

"Hum sameep ki nadi se jal leke aate hain"
Lakshman announced,

"Hum bhi aate hai!"She whisphered into Ram and Siya's ears.She followed Laksh quietly,unknown to him.

He walked through the dense jungle,on that narrow path,smiling as usual,he got rid of Mila's rants for some time.
She made sure he doesnt get to know she was behind,'How clever I am!'they thought.
Nothing sacres Urmila,accept one thing.

"Aaa"She shouted loudly,she saw her nightmare,a lizard.
Laksh turned back and on seeing someone behind him,a rather confused ,too shouted
"Aaa"
They both shouted,
She ran forward,he was shocked.
The lizard ran away deep into woods seeing both of them.

"Aap Kyun chilaa rahe the?"Cried a panicked Urmi.She doesnt get well into her senses after she sees a lizard.

"Main toh aapko dekh ke hi darr gaya tha!"he was panting.

She began to cry,
"Arey?aap in sab se darrti hain,mujhe toh lagaa ki aap aur streeyon ki tulna me adhik daraavani...arthaat bahadur hain!"

Sobbing lowly ,she replied,
"Jii"
"Jii?"
"Vo toh mai hun hii!Mai inn sab se darrti nahin."she stood proudly errect.
"Toh?daraa kyu rahi thi mujhe"
"Hain?"
"Arthaat cheekh kyu rahi thi aap?
"Hum?..Vo..isliye"
"Vo kisliye?"
"Aap bhi naa bade murkh hai.Ye bhi hume hi batana padega,arey,har manushya ki aakhir koi na koi nirbalata hoti hi haii"

"Oh!Toh aapko isse bhay lagta hai"he smirked,
"Aur nahin toh kya,dekha hai,kitni bhayaanak dikhti hai.Hume toh bilkul sahan nahin hota isse dekhna...eww..soch ke bhi!Hum moorchhit ho jayenge"
"Aapko pata hai kya?"he smiled,
"Kya?"
"Aap badi murkh hai.Aapko ye bhi gyaat nahin ki apni nirbalata kisi ko nahin batana chahiye"
He raised his eyebrows,she bit her tongue,he had a winning glow,but she was Mila at the end.
She pouted and spoke aloud,
"Jeejashreee!!"
"Ye kya kar rahi hai aap?"he panicked,
"Shatrughan bhaiya!!Aapke agraj mujhe daraane ka prayaas kar rahe hain"
Lakshman began to jump here and there,
"Ye kya kiya?"

"Kaun hai jo meri behen ko tang kar raha hai?"came Ram,
"Kiska itna dussaahas?"Shatrughan came angrily,

"Bhaiya,Bhaiya!Aapke anuj athavaa aapke agraj"Mila looked towards both of them,and indicated her finger towards Lakshman.
Lakshman gulped,
"Lakshman,tumhe pehle hi chetaavani dii thi humne!"Ram scolded him and Lakshman stood there facing the ground.
Shatrughan and Mila hi-fived.
Ram began his pravachan,
'Koi nahin!itne samay pashchaat Ram bhaiya ko bolne ka avsar mila hai.Sun leta hun'Lakshman thought.

Ram continued,and at some point Lakshman could not help yawning.
"Lakshman!!Ye koi nidra aane ka samay hai..Nidra toh..."came a stern sweet voice from behind which made Lakshman gasp.

"Arey nahin,Sita Bhabhi aagayi kya?"
He spoke only to realize it was Urmila's great mischief.
Ram concluded,
"Antim chetaavani!!"

"Ab hamari baari"Shatrughan came forward,
"Aey!Anuj ab kuchh baaki nahin rahaa.Kya karoge bol ke"
"Bhaiya aap toh Ayodhya walo ki naak kataade"

"Mai sirf Lanka walo ki naak kaat ta hun!"
(A/N:this line isnt included: P)

"Achha!Anuj!Ayodhya ke paksh se tum muh pher lo aur Ayodhya ki naak main kataa raha hun!"
"Aapke kehne ka taatparya kya hai bhaiya?"Shatrughan gulped,

"Shatrughan,vaise prateet hota hai ki tum mere vivaah ki vo riiti bhul gaye"Ram folded his arms across his chest.
Shatrughan was caught red handed,
Laksh and Mila looked towards each other,
"Vo bhi koi bhulne wali cheez hai!!"
They said.

Dulhe ki saaliyon hare dupatte waliyon,
Dulhe ki saaliyon hare dupatte waliyon,
Jute dedo,he he,Paise lelo!
Dulhan ke devar tum dikhlao na yun tevar,
Dulhan ke devar tum dikhlao na yun tevar,
Paise dedo,he he,Jute lelo!
🥳
vrinda65 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Haha yaar kya update tha...
Res fr now
Will unres tmrrw
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
It was very well written especially vo lizard waala part... Bahut accha story hai... Loved it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Wow Amazing
I loved it
So finally Ram also got a chance a give a pravachan😆
Urmila is too good
"Ab humari bari" Shatrughan came forward😆
Cant wait for next part

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