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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry to say but couldnt control laugh 🤣 battisi, 🤣 pravachan 🤣 lakshmila f8 😳 🤣 ...
thank u dear for changing my mood ..
Edited by Sana_J. - 9 years ago
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Episode 5


A/N:The CVs for this episode include people from the Lakshman AT.Guys,remember those SR discussions...? 😆

Four brothers were together in two of them's room.Tonight its the Suhagraat of Ram and Bharat.Lakshman had not missed a single opportunity to tease them,after all everything is moving into his favor.

Shatrughan was busy in his own world,admiring the letters sent by Kriti all over again,giggling over each word.But the centre of attraction was Kaikeyanandan himself!He was hell nervous!

"Bharat bhaiya bass kare aap sharma-sharma ke laal hu chuke hai"

"Hunh?Ye koi sadharan samasya hai?"

"Samasya?"

"Bharat,ye koi samasya nahii..."

"Hey bhagwan,Ram bhaiya,ek chhan toh mujhe prateet hua ki Sita bhabhi yahan aagyi!Aap bharat bhaiya ko pravachan de rahe hain!"Shatrughan got up,back to his work.
Ram was deeply embarrassed.
"Sangat ka asar Anuj!Samjha karo"
Lakshman told.

"Lakshman!"Ram gently said,
" Lakshman bhaiya,aap bhi aaj ka bhaag le le" Shatrughan said and faced a pacing Bharat.

"Ji!Bhaiya"

"Anuj!Maine aaj tak tumhari har samasya hal ki hai,aaj meri ek samasya hal kardo?"Ram asked,

"Ji?Kya hua?Aadesh karen"Lakshman stood up readily.

"Lakshman!!"

"Ji bhaiya"He stated and the three brothers became really serious ,

"Mujhe bhay lag raha hai!!"

Three princes burst out laughing,
"Kiska bhrata shree?pravachan ka?
Aap mere baare me soche,mera toh vidhvans hone ko hai!"Bharat told,

Ram smiled.
"Vaise Ram bhaiya,aap bhi mahaan hai?Aap is baare me kisse sahaayta maang rahe hai?Lakshman Bhaiya se?"

"Kyu??"Lakshman frowned on seeing Shatrughan.

"Vo isliye kyunki aapko toh kabhi prem-vem bhaata nahin!Aap kuchh nahi jaante!Aapko kisi se prem bhi nahin"

"Kya bakwaas kiye jaa rahe ho?Hum nahin samajhte?Arey,hume Mila se prem hai" Lakshman proudly blurted out.

Bharat and Shatrughan hooted, while Ram had a mile long smile.
Lakshman gasped,and then blushed,they giggled,

"Bhaiya dekhte hai aap..."he looked towards Ram who stood there covering his mouth with his hand.

"Bhai mere!aao tumhara dukh bhalibhaati samajhta hun!!"Bharat leaned on his shoulder.
"Vo kaise?Mere bhaybheet Bharat Bhaiya?"He asked him

"Tumhare prashnn me hi tumhara uttar hai anuj!Aise hi nahin tumhara ek naam Bharatanuja hai!"

"Achha?"

"Dekho,ye Ram bhaiya aur Shatrughan,inn ki patni aur bhavi patni,dono bohot saral,bohot shaant hai,kuchh bhi karengi,kintu in ki baat avashya sunengi"he sighed"aur"

"Aur ek hamari wali hain!samajh gaye hum bharat bhaiya!kitni ashaant,kitni chanchal hai"Lakshman too sighed.

"Aur bhayanak bhi anuj!!"Bharat added

"Arey haan,use kaise bhulun!!"Lakhan agreed.
They led out a fake cry,
"Bhai mere,hum dono ek hi naav ke savaar hain"

"Haan bhaiya vo naav jo kabhi bhi dub jaye"
They hugged each other.

"""""""

"Sita Didi,hum toh bohot utsaahit hain!!"
Urmi cheered.

"Kiskeliye?Suhaagraat toh hamari hai Rakshashi" Mandavi leaned on to her shoulder.

"Dhairya Rakho tum!Apni suhaagraat pe isse bhi adhik utsaahit honge hum"Urmi replied swaggering.

Sita shook her head,
"Hawwh!Kahin tumhare aur Lakshman bhaiya ke mashtishk me koi aur yojna toh nahin"Mandavi asked,
Sita gasped.

"Toh kya tum utsaahit nahin ho Rakshashi?"

"Hum?hamara toh mann kar rahaa hai Aarya ko swayam hi bulane chal jaye.Kyu Sita Didi?"

"Kitni nirlajj ho tum dono"She twisted their ears"Ek ka vivaah ho gya,ek ka ho jayega,kintu dekho inhe..."

"Haan toh GuruMata,humne asatya toh nahin kahaa!"Urmila winked.

"Arey Sita Didi,yadi aap pravachan dene lagi toh purii ratri yuhi beet jaayegi"

"Rehne dijiye na Didi,dekhiye Mandavi kitni utsaahit hai"They had to plead.

"""""""

"Kya hua?"Laksh asked her,

"Vahin,Bade chhoton ko samjhaate hai,kintu hume apni Didi ko samjhaana padaa,ki pravachan mat dijiyega ratri bhar!!"She replied standing by the pillar.

"Bechare Ram bhaiya!!"Shatrughan said,

Naughty Laksh thought again to embarass his Mila a little,
"Toh Videh Kumari,aur Kya karnaa chahiye Ratrii me?"
He thought Mila would become speechless for it was Shatrughan present,but he was wrong.

"Chhote Dashrathnandan,itni aaturta kyu?Aapko aapki baari pe pataa chal jaayega.Hmm?"She replied very easily,as if she was explaining a maths problem to a 4 year old.
But that not-a-4-year-old was blushing as there was no tomorrow.
Shatrughan laughed at his best,"Kya hua bhaiya?"

"Kuchh nahin Shatrughan tumhare bhaiya ko chhupne ke liye koi sthaan chahiye!!"

"""""""
Ram sat on his bed,in the centre was his beautiful lecturer.
'Aaj toh keval hume bolne ka avsar mila hai'he sighed happily.

"Sitae"
"Ji swamii"
"Aaj hum bole?"
"Kya swami,aap toh sadaiv bolte rahe aur hum sune,aisa hi hona chahiye"

Ram adored her cuteness,but while he was about to reply,

"Si..."
"Swami,aapko pataa hai ek patni ka kartavya hota hai apne pati ki baat sunna,hmm,pati ka bhi kartavya hai apni patni se salah maangna...Aap samajh rahe hai naa?"
Ram's smile faded away,
"Ji Sitae"

"Haan toh hum aapko aur samjhate hai!!"

"Bhaiya!!Bhabhi!!"Shatrughan opened the door,Ram sighed in relief

Shatrughan walked towards them,
"Kshama kare!aane ka koi aashaya nahin tha kintu..."Shatrughan threw his hands in air,

"Punah bhaag gya??"Ram and Sita asked,more of replying.

"""""""

Bharat gulped.
He entered,the door behind was closed by Lakshman and Urmila.

"Aap aagye Aarya!!"

"Hmm"he showed his battisi

"Ye lijiye,ye mata ne aapke liye kesar dugdh bheja hai"She tried to hand him the glass,
Bharat blurted out,
"Arey!Kahin tumne isme kuchh milaayaa toh nahin naa?"

"Arthaat??""Mandavi frowned,

"Hunh?hanh!arthaat hum dugdh me mishri nahin lete!haan"ofcourse,Bharat might have learnt some or the other thing from his angry-young-brother.

"Aarya?dugdh mishri ke bina kaun leta hai?"

"Arey haan!chi!Mishri ke bina dugdh"he thought realistically."Ab de do ,jo bhi haii"

"Thik hai"A romantic Mandavi handed him the glass,while drinking,Bharat saw Mandavi adoring him.It was hard for him to take a drop down his neck.

She tried to take his hands in hers,he closed his eyes,panicking.
"Aarya!"Mandavi moved close,

Bharat ran away as fast as he could,he reached the door opening it.

"Aarya kahan jaa rahe hain?Aaj hamari suhaagraat hai aap nahi jaa sakte haii"
She shouted from behind,ran up to some distance,and hopelessly sprang on their bed.

"Hmmh!Jaaiye!Jaayenge kahaan?"

Bharat came out,panting.
Lakshman,Urmila and Shatrughan who were about to leave,saw his condition and were shocked.

"Bhaiya,aap yahan??"Urmi asked,

"Vo bhi kuchh iss stithi me?"Lakshman eyed him top to bottom mischievously,
Urmila hit him on his arms.

"Mai nahi jaunga!mujhe bhay lag raha hai!Maa Kaushalya ke paas jaana hai!!"
Bharat said,and Urmi held her face to the other side,hiding her smile.

"Kya Bhaiya?Aapko gyaat hai,yadi Sita Bhabhi ke baad,koi gyaani shiromani hai iss Ayodhya me toh ve aap hai!"
"Aapse ye Apeksha nahi thi hume!"The twins stated.

"Bharat bhaiya,maana ki vo meri Rakshashi hai,kintu aap nishchint rahe,vo aapko nahin khaayegi!!"

"Haan bhaiya,Urmi keh rahi haina"Lakshman added

"Aap toh chup rahe,hone wale patni pujaari"came Shatrughan's great dialogue
Urmi smiled,

"Anuj"
"Kya?"
"Achha jao,Ram bhaiya ko bula lao,ye aise nahin jaayenge!"

"Bharat Bhaiya aap bhi naa!!"

"""""""
"Bharat,kya hua??"

"Bhaiya,mai nahin jaunga bheetar!!"he retorted,

"Kintu kyun?"they asked,

"Bass...mujhe sharm aa rahi hai"

"Haan toh ye konsi nayi baat hai??aapko toh tab bhi sharam aati hai jab aapko daasiyan bhojan parosti hain"
Urmila and Sita eyed him,

"Lakshman!!"Ram called out sternly,

"Bharat bhaiya,kuchh seekhe apne anujon se,yadi Lakshman bhaiya ka vivaah hua hota,toh voh aapko dekhne bhi nahin aate yahan.Kyu Agraj?"

"Haan!"As usual jijashree's chhote anuj blurted,Urmi giggled and so did Sita.

"Arthaat nahin!Shatrughan tum vartmaan stithi pe dhyaan do"he scolded him.

"Bhaiya iss ka toh ab ek hi upaay dikh rahaa hai!!!"everyone looked at each other and nodded something.
Bharat stood confused.

The next moment,three strong muscles took his hold in their hands,almost dragging him,while the two ladies opened the door,
"Chalo Bharat,jao!!"

"Nahin!!"he escaped,

"Bharat bhaiya,suniye,aapko aisa nahin karna chahiye..."Sita,as usual,started the golden 'pravachan'.

"Nahin,bhabhi,Mai chaltaa hun"Bharat told quickly,

"Kintu,abhi hamara pravachan samaapt nahin hua hai,rukiye toh!!"But it was too late ,as Bharat had already left.

"Sitae,shaant ho jao,yadi tumne pravachan diya,toh aaj bhi hamara din yuhi beet jaayega"Ram said,

"Kya kahaa Swami?"

"Bhabhi,bhaiya ko aapko bhent bhi toh dena hai naa,jaaiye!!"Lakshman sent them away.

"Priya Anuj,tum kyu in ke suhaagraat ke chakkar me apni neend udaa rahe ho.Jao,so jao,tumhara bhi samay aayega!!"Lakshman sent him too.

" jaate hai jaate!!"
Shatrughan left.
"Shatrughan bhaiya,Kriti ke swapn dekhiyega"Urmila waved him bye.
"Jii Di...Bhabhi!!"
"""""""

Lakshman sighed,happily.Urmila moved her odhni here and there playfully.
Lakshman glanced at her from a side and she did that too.
Both of them blushed. *mann me laddoos*

Time for some excuse!!

"Vo hume Ram bhaiya/Sita Didi ke bina nidra nahin aati"both of them said in unison.
'Great!'both of them said in their minds.

"Toh kya kare??"Urmi asked,
"Jii??"Laksh smirked,
She blushed for once,
"Aap bhi naa!!"
She ran away,he tried to catch her but failed.He ran his fingers through his hair,having decided to follow her.

He found her having a walk in the royal garden,he went upto her,almost frightening her.
"Vooh!!"
"Hanhaaa"she shivered,
Both of them giggled,

"Aap yahan?"she asked,
"Hume satya me nidra nahin aati!"
"Hmm"
"Aur vaise bhi jab aap samaksh ho tab toh kadaapi nahin!!"
She looked up,in his deep eyes.

"Ek sahayta karengi hamari??"

"Kahen?"

"Pratiratri milengi humse yahan,hamesha"
She smiled,
"Thik hai!!kintu..."

"Kintu kya?"

"Kintu Vivaah ke pashchaat!!"

"Vivaah pashchaat,aap humse milengi kaise?"he thoughtfully answered

"Kyun?"she frowned.

"Vivaah ke pashchaat,hum aapko humse dur jaane nahin denge!!"
She finally blushed.

"Awwh!Aur parivaar se kya kahenge?"

"Kahenge jahan Ram bhaiya vahaan Lakshman,aur Jahaan Sita Bhabhi vahaan Urmila,aur unn dono ko hum saath rakhenge"
She looked impressed.

"Vo aapko abhi bhi kehna padega,hamare saath rehne ke liye!!"

Lakshman walked beside her,she smiled.

"Chandrama ati sundar hai"she spoke excitedly.He moved really close to her and spoke,"Aap bhi"

They were close,really close.Her eyes were down, and his eyes on her.She chewed her lips,he played with her hair strands.
She rested herself by the pillar,he,rested on her.Their hands touched,she closed her eyes,he felt the magic.

"Hume nidra aa rahi hai.Hum jaate hain!!"She escaped.

"Arey!!Rukiye!!"he said,

"Kyu?Hum aapke hain Kaun?"She turned to him and asked.

He was fond of her,and So was she.She was his best half,and he was hers.Be it what era,what story,they are just meant for each other.Isnt it??

(LakshMila dreams everyone)

Precap:
"Hum sab jaayenge!!"
"Kahan?"
"Kekaya Udyaan,Bhaiya Bhabhi ko vahan chhodne ke liye aur bhraman hetu bhi"
::::::::::::::::
She falls,he catches.
He eats,she watches.
She talks,he adores.

"Ye lijiye aapke liye!!"Lakshman handed it to her.
"Oh!hamare liye"Urmi screamed with joy.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
@Charvi teekhi mirchi,that I am :P
Have an affinity for teekhi things 😆

Thankyou Ranju darling.

@Sana so glad you liked it!thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
🤣 😳 Bharat 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
mandevi 😔

🤣
every1 is scared of Pravachan 🤣 🤣



Lakshmila 😳 👏

thank u sooo much for wonderful update 🤗
Edited by Sana_J. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Mili 🤗
We meet again :P
I loved this :)
LakshMila ❤️
Arre laadli, kal se update haina?
I am so proud of your skills as a writer 🤗⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Mili , Awesome Dear

You deserve the whole credit for this hilarious update

Oh God , the brothers dragging bharat , I was just imagining the scene😆


You made me just relive the day when we all had stomaches from laughing during those bharat suhaagraat discussions on th AT.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww...so cute Mili...I could see them talking under the moonlight.
Plz Continue sweetie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Mili 🤗

We meet again :P
I loved this :)
LakshMila ❤️
Arre laadli, kal se update haina?
I am so proud of your skills as a writer 🤗⭐️



Ji avashya!regular updates by midnight.
Aww!Lakshman Bhaiya ab hum aapke liye hi toh likhte hain😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivam...

Mili , Awesome Dear

You deserve the whole credit for this hilarious update

Oh God , the brothers dragging bharat , I was just imagining the scene😆


You made me just relive the day when we all had stomaches from laughing during those bharat suhaagraat discussions on th AT.


Thankyou,thankyou!😃

And yes that day,I wish Shru could read it soon.She would be 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya_16

awww...so cute Mili...I could see them talking under the moonlight.

Plz Continue sweetie


Sita Didi🤗
Aap ke pravachan hamare inspiration hai 😆

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