SiRa&MiLa :FF pt10-pg18 lakshman's confession:updated on 15th mar - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Agree with divi.c. Confession should be in thr room nd also there should be lots of emotions.
Coming to ds update, it's amazing. Huge round of applause for ur hindi. Lack of typo mistakes make ur story easy to read 👏.

Laxmila me urmi I think lack of concentration ki wajah se haregi no???
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Amazing updates dear..
Read all in one go..
Urmilla jealous and Lakshman only thinking about her...
Fabulous...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Zuby, this is fantastic :)
Update soon :)
I can't wait to see how Lakshman finds out the reason for Urmila's behaviour 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Awww i cant see my urmi lyk this
Do sumthing naa
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Part-5

Har sitam haske mujhpe dildaar kare,,, usko haq hai vo mujhe pyar kare ya na kare...😉

Lakshman was confused... he was not getting her ... he gets back to reality by the loud noise

A - bharat bhaiya ,,, ab mandvi bhabhi aap par aajeevan raj karengi... aapko parasth kar diya bhabhi ne

Sh - lo... bharat bhaiya bhi gaye kaam se (he said slapping his forehead with his hand), lakshman bhaiya ab aap to ayodhya ki laaj bacha lijiye

Lakshman and urmila sat infront of each other... he was still confused by her words but shrugged of his thoughts...

"ab aayega aanand, dekhen ke ayodhya ke ye sabse natkhat yuvraj apni patni ko apne vash me rakhenge ya fir urmila atyant dhoort yuvraj lakshman par apna samrajya ghoshit karke itihaas likhengi" (said kaushalya)

A - kadapi nahi... laksh aap parajit nahi ho saktey,,, anyathha urmila ki ichha anusar hi jeevan vyateet krna hoga aapko (she said teasingly)

Urmila was irritated by her continuous talk

L - nahi akshi... shubh shubh bolo, aisa kuchh nahi hoga,,, aur tum dekhna tumhari shubh kamnaon ke saath mai videh kunwari urmila ko parasth kar hi dunga (winked)

Urmila was ignoring everyone's talk

Lakshman gently gets hold of urmila's hand and a shiver roll down her spine...she gasped

She was growing more and more frustrated and hurt by her feelings towards her husband

She was not even looking at him

(his thoughts)"mila... mai nahi janta ke vo kya hai jo aapko vichlit kar raha hai, kintu mai is dhaage ko is bandhan ke roop mein dekh raha hoon jo aapke mukh par chinta pratyaksh kar rahe hain aur jo aapki adhron ki muskan me avrodh hai"

And in the blink of an eye he unfastened the knot of the thread "aapko un bandhano se mukt kia mila" he thought to himself

A - adbhut ... ye hui na baat (she jumped in joy)

Sum - chalo urmila ab prayas karo

Urmila took his hand... tried once but couldn't untie it, she tried again... but in vein,,, she looked around,,,akshi was enjoying the way she was loosing when she heard his voice

"tum... dono hath se ye dhaaga khol sakti ho, mujhe koi apatti nahi" he said in an usual tone

"avashyakta nahi hai... mujhe kisi bhi prakar ki sahanubhuti ki" (said urmila with anger in her voice)

(Her thoughts) "ye dhaaga vo bandhan hai jo aapko mujhse vivaah karne pe mila hai sumitranandan, jo aapke jeevan me prasannata ka avrodh kiye hue hai..."

With a strong stretch she unfastened the knot and the thread fell down in the dish

"mukt kia maine aapko us bandhan se... mai patni hone ka kartavya sadev nibhaungi,,, kintu aap par adhikar nahi" she thought to herself

R - bahot achha urmi... lakshman maine kaha thha na, urmila ko parasth karna itna aasan nahi hai, sita ka pratibimb hai vo... atyant guni (he said looking at sita)

Urmila flashed a fake smile

They dipped their hands in the dish full of milk... urmila was unwillingly participating in the game, she was not even trying to find the ring... there lakshman was trying his best to find it... when lakshman shouted "mil gayi mujhe" when he carried out his hand from the dish and all started laughing

Urmila too carried out her hand with some grass in it thinking that the game has already won by him

K - jeetne vale... apni vijay ka bigul nahi bajatey mere lal (she said pointing her hand towards urmila)

Lakshman looked up to urmila's hand where he saw her holding grass along with the ring

Urmila came out of her trance and was equally shocked to see the ring in her hand

A - o ho laksh kya kar rahe ho ... bina soche samjhe bas chilla dete ho... urmila ko mili hai angoothhi aapko nahi,,, ab agar aap agli vidhi me parajit hue na to hum aapse kabhi baat nahi karenge (she said making a pout)

L - achha achha theek hai,,, tum krodhit kyun ho rahi ho (he said convincing her)

"Chalo urmila ab is angoothhi ko apni mutthi me bandh karo or lakshman tumhara hath kholke ye angoothi tumse lega" said kekayi

But urmila was very irritated she was just glaring at akshi...she clenched her fist tightly.. lakshman tried to unclenched the fist gently

A - laksh jaldi kijiye na (she said impatiently)

L - "aap rajya karna chahti hain mujhpe, kintu aisa hoga nahi urmila..." (he whispered in a teasing tone in urmila's ear)

Urmila clenched her fist more tightly, lakshman noticed it... he knew that his wild cat is in full tigress mode, she can hurt herself but ll not accept her defeat... and he can't see the love of his life in pain

L - mujhse nahi ho raha hai... videh kumari,,, khaati kya hain aap (he said making a fake sad face)

Sum - lakshman ne to apni parajay sweekar ki ... mai bahot prasann hu ke ab koi is dhurt ko apne vash me rakhega (she said giggling)

Kk - satya kaha sumitra... urmila... putri ab hath khol lo,,, tum vijayi hui

"aapne apne daitvo ko nibhane ke liye ye vivaah kiya hai sumitra nandan, aur mujhe koi adhikar nahi hai aap par rajya karne ka, aapne ye vivaah keval apne pitaji apne bhaiya ki aagya anusar kia, aur aaj ye videh kunwari urmila aapko vachan deti hai ke mai kabhi bhi aapke kartavya aur daitvon ke madhya nahi aaungi, mai aapse aajeevan kuchh nahi mangungi, mai sadev ayodhya ki riti anusar hi apna jeevan vyatit karungi, aapko jeevan mein kabhi mera tyag bhi karna pade to mai aapse prashn nahi karungi"

Urmila was lost in her thoughts when lakshman saw blood oozing from her fist

"rakt"... "urmila bas kijiye hath kholiye apna"(tensed) this took eveybody's attention and they get panic ... sita ran towards her and held her hand

"kahan khoyi ho... dekho kitna rakt beh raha hai" (said sita worried)

L - urmila... aap theek hain na... aapne itni zor se kyun pakda ise... ghav lag gaya hai (tensed)

U - aap chintit na ho arya... itna bhi gehra nahi hai ye ghav (she said ignoring him)

The expressions on urmila's face dint go unnoticed by Ram and Sita

Everyone was tensed as well as stunned ... sita realising the seriousness of the matter tried to give it a halt " khel ko khel ki tarah khela karo,,, pratiyogita ki tarah nahi..."

K - aao urmila... is ghav pe lep laga dete hain(she said worriedly)

U - ma... mai bilkul theek hu aap chinta na Karen... mai abhi jakar lep laga lungi... aap sab bahot thak gaye honge na... vishram kijiye (she said smiling)

Lakshman smiled at his understanding loving wife but he wanted to go with her,,,, Kaushalya put a loving hand on her head and left from there with kekayi and sumitra...

R - sitae... urmila ko kaksh me le jaiye ... mai raj vaidya ko bhejta hu, aur agar koi aavashyakta ho to mujhe btaiyega

S - vaidya ji ko bulane ki aavashyakta nahi hai raghunandan, mai swayam uska upchaar karungi, aur koi aavashyakta hui to mai aapko suchit kar dungi, aap chinta mat kijiye

She reached in the room along with her sisters after taking permission from ram

S - urmila mai dekh rahi hu, tum kuchh dino se chintit lag rahi ho, kya baat hai... lakshman se jhagda hua kya (she asked applying the ointment on her wound)

U - aisa kuchh bhi nahi hai didi (she said confidently looking in her eyes and put her head on her lap)

mai unse jhagda nahi karungi ab didi...(she dozed off to sleep while sita kept humming and caressing her head in order to make her sleep)...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Awesome update :)
Superb :)
Very nicely written :)
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
I am in ❤️ with your FF !loving the misunderstanding between Mila !!Awesome update !do write more and update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Amazing nice I'm a new one..but read your story yesterday...mind blowing..the feelings of laxman and urmila wow...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Zubii :)
This is amazing :)
Update ASAP :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
What should I do of this urge to read more? 😆
I wish you were in the CVs we could have got so many lovely scenes as such.
Lets see how Laksh makes his Mila happy again 😉

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