SiRa&MiLa :FF pt10-pg18 lakshman's confession:updated on 15th mar - Page 3

part -3

Tumhe yaad karte karte jaayegi rat saari; tum le gaye ho apne sang neend bhi hamari

urmila was uncomfortable seeing both so close

There the lost love birds bumped into each other

R- sita... aap yahan, is samay?

S - ji, urmila ko nidra nahi aa rahi thhi isliye vo mujhe yahan le aai

R - kintu urmila hai kahan

Sita looked around only to find out that she is alone

R - vaise lakshman ko bhi nidra nahi aa rahi thhi, hai na lak... "he stopped as he realised he is also alone"

They smiled and walked together feeling the cool breeze

Aapko yahan koi pareshani to nahi hui na sitae..."he asked softly"

A shiver rolled down her body... and she looked at him stunned with lots of love in her eyes

S - nahi... yahan sab bahot achhe hain keval

R - keval kya... kisine kuchh kaha aapse

S - nahi nahi yuvraj, mai kehna chahti thhi ke keval itne bade kaksh mein akele rehne se bhay lag raha thha isiliye mata kaushalya se nivedan kar ke hum sab ek hi kaksh me ruk gaye

R - ohh...achha kia aapne vaise 2-3 dino ki hi to baat hai uske baad mai rahunga na aapke sath aapko... he stopped as he realised what he just said'

S - ye vatika bahot sunder hai (she said looking in another direction)

R - atyadhik sunder, adbhut (he said gazing her)

S - ji (facing him)

Sita aapko prakriti ke sameep rehna bahot bhata hai na, aaiye mere sath (offers his hand, she held her hand blushingly)

They walked through the garden holding each other's hand under the moonlight

He took her near a fountain

S - ati sunder... (she whispered as she looked around admiring the beauty of the garden, sound of water fall, smells of the flowers... )

Suddenly she gets unbalanced, Ram holds her in no time

He shook his head as if he was complaining her that she is always careless about herself

She smiles "mujhe pata thha aap mujhe girne nahi denge raghunandan"

They were caught in an intense eyelock, his one hand was holding her by her waist and another was wrapped around her back, her heart beats gets faster as ram was gazing deep into his doe like eyes

"aap theek hain" ram asked breaking the silence

"hmmm" thats all she could say

R - chalein

S - ji

They walked through the garden stealing glances at each other

When ram noticed urmila standing far away with a pale face

"urmila"... "sitae urmila vahan hai, aaiye " saying that she took her to urmila

R - akshi (he litrally runs to her seeing her siting there with pain on her face) kya hua aapko

A - bhaiya hum theek hain, thoda sa paon

R - dhyan kyun nahi rakhti ho tum apna

A - o ho bhaiya kab se batein hi kiye ja rahe hain, hume bhabhi se to milvaiye

L - akshi bhabhi se milvane ke liye bhaiya ko bhabhi ka hath chhodna hoga na, itna kathin kaam kaise karenge bhaiya, tum bhi na (he said teasing ram)

Sita wanted to hide in acorner of the world due to embarrassment when ram released her hand

R - avashya, sitae ye akshi hain, lakshman ki priye mitra, kintu mere liye bilkul meri behen jaisi hain

A - pranam bhabhi

S - aapse milkar prasannata hui

L - aise kaise, akshi achhi bhali shaam bigaad di tumne aur ab khilkhila ke has rahi ho, tumhein lagta hai IS SAMAY tumse aise milke bhabhi bahot prasann hain

Sita twinched his ear lightly "bahot shaitaan hain aap sumitra nandan"

A - haan bhabhi, yahan koi kisi aur ka naam lekar apne man ki baat keh rha hai (she said teasing urmila and lakshman)

U - mai chalti hu, mujhe neend aa rahi hai didi

S - haan avashya mai bhi chalti hoon tumhare sath... she took permission from ram and after greeting everyone left from there

Ram, lakshman and akshi also left from there after sometime

That night lakshman had trouble sleeping, he was thinking about the newly found feelings he is developing towards his wife, earlier he was only a son, a brother and a warrior

But now he is a husband, he has a wife... and this feeling is altogether different, he never felt this way... for anyone

He use to be surrounded by the nearby girls of ayodhya because of his physique, but he never paid attention to them, but in case of urmila... he has different feelings from day 1

She is different, he enjoys the arguments between him and her, he loves when she makes a frowned face that eventually turned into a pout whenever she is losing the argument

His eyes lit up When he see her excited like a small baby whenever his Ram bhaiya takes stand for her instead of him

He wanted to sleep, but he couldn't

When he tried to close his eyes... he gets flashes of her

"aap ke liye kia gaya koi bhi karya mere liye kasht nahi, santosh ka nimit hoga"

He sat with his head in his hands thinking He could not get rid of her thoughts

He leans himself on the back of the bed trying to sleep

Next morning

All the four sisters got up early and quickly got ready for the rituals, urmila shrugged off her thoughts of lakshman being with akshi... she was sick and tired of her thoughts of lakshman being so close to the girl who is eventually her guest and dear to her in-laws

S - urmila, kahan khoyi ho kal se dekh rahi hoon, udaas lag rahi ho tum

U - nahi nahi didi aisa kuchh nahi hai, naya sthaan hai na, to kuchh vichitra lag raha thha aur kuchh nahi (she said trying to hide her worries from sita)

S - hmmm (she sighed with an unsatisfactory expression)

Just then a dasi came inside

"sabhi yuvraniyo ko mera pranam, kya aapne sumitra nandan ko kahin dekha hai, yuvraj (Ram) unhein dhoond rahe hain"

M - nahi, hum to apne kaksh mein hi hain, humne to kisiko nahi dekha, han urmila ko pata ho to alag baat hai (teasing her)

U - nahi, mujhe nahi pata kahan hain ve, aap rajkumari mrigakshi se kyu nahi poochhti, avashya hi unke saath honge

"ji yuvrani" Dasi left from there

M - shrutkirti tumne suna... lakshman bhaiya mrigakshi ke sath honge, bahot pragadh mitrata lagti hai dono ke beech hai na (she said making urmila jealous)

Sh - haan didi, sahi keh rahi hain aap

S - bas karo tum dono, kyun chidha rahe ho use, aisa kuchh nahi hai, vo lakshman ki balyakal ki mitra hai isliye ve unka itna dhyan rakh rahe hain (giving an angry look to mandvi)

U - rakshasi mujhe koi farak nahi padta in sab se, kyunki mujhe gyat hai hum raghukul ki kul vadhu hain... aur yahan bahu vivaah ki parampara hai,,, tum bharat bhaiya pe dhyan do, samjhi (she threw a glance to sita... and they all laughed at their thoughts)

M - didi aapki ek karnika kahan hai

S - pata nahi, maine bahot dhoonda kintu

U - koi baat nahi didi, aapki karnika jijashree ke pas hi hogi, aap chintit kyu ho rahi hain

S - kya unke pas kyu hogi m... (she stopped getting that urmila is teasing her)

U - kal ratri bhraman atyant adbhut ho gya lagta hai (she whispered in her ear)

Sita glared at urmila with red cheeks hiding her blush

All the brothers were gathered in hall talking about some issues but Ram was desperately looking for sita

B - bhaiya praja ki job hi samasyaein hain unhe door karna humara kartvya hai, maine bulaya hai shatrughan ko vo jaega dekhne, pata nahi kahan reh gaya

R - han bharat kitni der ho gayi aaj

B - bhaiya vo kabhi samay pe aaya hai kya

R - itna samay to pehle nahi laga, sab theek to hoga na

B - bhaiya ho sakta hai nidra na puri hui ho

R - nahi nahi, itni der tak nahi soti hain vo

B - bhaiya der tak hi to...(he turned to face him realising what he just said)

Lakshman who reached there long ago was listening to the conversation and burst out laughing

Bharat and ram both turned to him

L - arrey bharat bhaiya aap ye kya ajeeb si baat kar rahe ho, bhaiya to kisi aur ke vishya mein baat karna chahtey hain

Ram closed his eyes trying to compose his bushed up face...

R - tum, tum adhik bolo mat, jao jakar dekhke aao k itna samay kyu lag rahi hai

L - bhaiya aap kahein to mai bhabhi ko yahi bula laun

R - lakshman

L - aa... jata hoon bhaiya (he left the room to call shartughan)

amazing as always!!! loved how you included the quote from the show, it's one of my favorite lakshmila moments ...poor urmila...wonder when lakshman will realize what she's feeling...but where is shatrughn? or was that just to give bharat and lakshman time to tease their ram bhaiya? sorry to be demanding but please update again soon!!!

WOW I read all 3 chapters at one go
And @zubi_23 U write so amazing somewhere its romantic so kabhi funny
All 3 chapters are just awesome👏
Continue soon.
P.S. Hey I don't know your name, is it Zubi only or something else?😊

With Lots Of Love,
Anushka

Originally posted by: Choclate...

WOW I read all 3 chapters at one go
And @zubi_23 U write so amazing somewhere its romantic so kabhi funny
All 3 chapters are just awesome👏
Continue soon.
P.S. Hey I don't know your name, is it Zubi only or something else?😊

With Lots Of Love,
Anushka

thank you all of you for the love and appreciations😊

Cant wait to read next part..pls ipdate soon..i want it oflaxmila plsss laxman menofying urmila 0ls..

I love this entire seires, Zubi :)

Part - 4

Dil sambhal ja zara, fir mohabbat karne chala hai tu...

Lakshman reached the corridor and stopped there, he then stopped for a second and turned towards his left "arre tum kahan chal diye, chhotey ko bula kar lana thha na" (asked bharat)

L - vahin ja raha hoon bhaiya, apne kaksh me nahi hoga vo, jahan hoga vahin se bulakar lata hoon use

Bharat gets confused while ram understood where he is going

Lakshman reached near shrutkirti's room and stopped before the entrance "chhotey yahan ho kya tum"

Sita came outside from the room "lakshman kya hua"

L - pranam bhabhi, kshama kijiyega mai shatrughn ko dhoond raha thha"

S - yahan to nahi hai vo , shatrughan ko hi dhoond rahe thhey na tum (smiling)

L - haanji bhabhi, abhi to bataya maine

Shatrughn- bhaiya.,..(reaching him) pranam bhabhi,,,, bhaiya aap yahan (rolling his eyes)... o ho mai bhi kya prashna kar baithha, aap ko to yahin hona thha

S - arthaat (confused)

Shatrughn - bhabhi koi poorn ratri so nahi paya hai, kisiko dekhe bina ab na to surya uday hota hai na asth ( he said hiding behind sita)

Sita admired the look on lakshmana's face with a naughty twinkle in her eyes

L - chhotey, tum apni aayu se kuchh adhik nahi bol rahe (changing his expressions from worry to anger)

Sht - dekha bhabhi kaise bade hone ka adhikar pratyaksh karte hain lakshman bhaiya, galat kya kaha maine, apni patni se milne me kaisi sharam, rukiye mai hi bula deta hu urmila bhabhi ko...urmila bhabhi (he literally shouted)

Lakshman covered his face with his hand "moorkh kya kar rahe ho"

Sht- bhaiya, sita bhabhi se kya chhupana ke aap urmila bhabhi se kitna prem karte hain

meanwhile urmila came outside

"Pura din akshi ka itna dhyan rakha aapne, itni sahayta ki uski,ab bilkul theek ho gya hai uska paon, din to aise hi nikal gaya kintu raat akele nahi katati hai na bhabhi, kisiki smritiyan ratri ko bahot vichlit karti hain" (shatrughan continued looking at urmila)

L - "tum ruko, aaj to tum gaye chhotey, aaj chhodunga nahi mai ise bhabhi" (he said chasing shatrughan)

S - Laskhman,,,,, shatrughan... sambhal ke, gir mat jana (she sighed and shook his head looking at both of them)

Urmila who was standing behind sita... felt a sharp pain in her heart, her eyes were teary but showed a deep pain, "sumitra nandan...akshi ..." she quickly wiped her face

Sita turned slowly and stared at her,. Her lips curved tenderly and her eyes softened "urmila, dekho na dono kitne shaitaan hain"

"ji didi, aaiye na shighrata se aapko taiyar kar dete hai hum, vidhi ke liye mata kaushalya ne bulaya hai" (she said without meeting her eyes)

Sita followed her they all get sita ready

S - chalo, mata ne sabha bhavan mein aane ka aadesh diya hai

(all head towards the grand hall, all were looking so beautiful, with a light pallu on their wet hairs, small bells tied to anklets were creating a sweet noise drawing attention to everybody in the palace... as they reached in the corridor near the hall all the three queens smiled listening to the bells of the anklets... and looked at each other

Kk - aa gayi humari vadhuen (without turning towards them)

M - mata humare aane se poorv hi aapko gyat kaise hua, ghoshna bhi nahi hui fir bhi aapko kaise gyat hua ke hum sab yahan upasthit ho gaye hain (surprised)

K - kyunki mandvi humari putriyo ke aane ki ghoshna unki payal hi kar deti hain

(said kaushalya reaching all of them)

They took blessings from the three queen and then sumitra told daasi to call the four rajkumars

As soon as Ram reached there, he remained frozen for a moment

He looked at her admiring

He looked down at her royal blue lehenga lifted slightly above the foot to reveal golden anklets studded with precious stones against her milky white feet, he looked at her hands full of dark red bangles, he was busy admiring her beauty when kaushalya's voice bring him to reality

"Ram... aa gaye tum, baki sab kahan hain"

Kaushalya asked looking at him along with sita

R - haan mata, ve sab bhi aa hi rahe honge

Sum - to tum vahan kyun khade ho Ram, aao

Ram took some steps and stands besides Sita

R - aap achhi lag rahi hain sitae

She blushed and spies him out of the corner of her eyes

Sum - pata nahi baki sab kahan reh gaye, vidhi ke liye vilamb ho raha hai

Kk - sumitra, akshi gayi hai na unhein bulane, aa jaenge sab...

Just then lakshman along with bharat and shatrughan arrived, akshi had hold of him by his arms as if she dragged him all the way from outside

L - tum kya kar rahi ho hath chhodo

A - adhik jivha mat chalaiye apni, chaliye mata ne bulaya hai

K - kya ho raha hai ye

Bharat and shatrughan started laughing loud looking at both of them

Sh - ma, akshi lakshman bhaiya ko kheech kar yahan laayi hai

A - dekhiye na badi ma, abhyas kshetra se aane ka naam hi nahi le rahe thhey ye, is liye hum inka haath pakadkar inhe yahan le aaye...,,, theek kiya na (she asked making all smile)

Urmila stood silent her heart sank into the depth of her body, she looked up to his arm held by akshi

When lakshman's eyes fell on his beautiful attire he gazed at her without blinking his eyes

She turned her face away when she saw him looking at her with a smile

Lakshman was confused with her reaction

Su - lakshman vahi khade rahoge ab, andar aao vidhi aarambh karni hai

L - ma aapki laadli mera haath chhodegi tab to aaunga na mai

All laughed

First Ram and sita sat for the ritual

Kaushalya explained that first they have to untie each other's thread which was tied on the day of haldi on the bride and groom's wrist afterwards they will mix the wedding band into a dish filled with milk, grass and a ring. The bride and groom will dip their hands in the dish to fish for the ring

Kk - in vidhiyon ka bhinn hi mehatv hota hai putron, ye jeevan mein aane vali samasyaon, kathinaiyo ko darshatey hain evam jis prakar var aur vadhu is khel ko kheltey hain ,,, ve darshata hai ke vaivahik jeevan mein aane vali kathinaiyo ka saamna ve kaise karenge

A - aur ma is khel ka ek pehlu ye bhi hai na, ke jo ismein vijayi hota hai, vivahik jeevan mein rajya uska hota hai... haina(she popped in)

"Han han aisa bhi hai, chalo ram aarambh karo"

Ram held sita's hand with his one hand and with other he tried to untie the band, sita looked up to him with a smile, he stretched one end of the thread and untied the knot and the thread fell in the dish full of milk... all smiled

"Ram ne to ek bar me kangan khol diya, sita ab tum prayatn karo" (said sumitra)

Ram held his wrist in front of her, sita tried to untie the thread but in vein, the knot was hard

She again tried... looking her struggling to untie the knot ram could not resist helping her,,,, his another hand reached the thread he stretched one end of the thread and sita quickly stretched the other and the thread fell in the dish... she looked at him with thankful eyes he smiled in return

Everybody looks on the divine couple

Then sumitra mixed a ring in the dish and they were told to find the ring

They both dip their hands to find the ring when ram's hand touched sita's, they were caught in an eyelock... he looked down when his hand touched the ring... he smartly swifts the ring between sita's finger when she was taking her hand out of the dish

Everybody applauded and sita gets shocked to see the ring in her finger she looked at his calm face still maintaining the composer

A - adhut, bhabhi aap vijay rahi, arthaat bhale hi ram bhaiya ayodhya ke raja banne ke pashchat ayodhya par raj Karen parantu unpar raj aap hi karengi (she said in an exciting tone)

Sum - abhi nahi akshi, abhi ek aur vidhi shesh hai,,,, muthhi bandh

Sumitra explained that the winner of the previous task have to hold the ring in his/her fist while the other person will try to open it...

All of them gets excited for the next interesting task

Shtru - bhabhi is bar vijay nahi ho sakti, bhaiya bahot shaktishali hain, bhabhi ka hath khulva hi lenge ve (he exclaimed)

R - avashyak to nahi hai na ke vijay hone ke liye shakti pradarshan kiya jaye

L - bhaiya aap seedhe seedhe kyu nahi kehtey ke aap bhabhi se jeetna hi nahi chahtey, aap nishchit karke baithe hain ke bhabhi hi aap par raaj karengi (frown)

R - adhik mat bolo tum, kuchh hi samay pashchat ye tumhein bhi karna hoga, mai dekhunga ke tum dono me se kaun kis par raaj karta h (giving him a stern look)

They all burst out laughing along with the queens

Sita took the ring and closed her fist tightly, ram reached up to her to touch her fist which felt so soft and silky to his touch, he rubbed his hand on her fist, she looked at him with an "i don't believe it looks" she knew ram is again going to loose intentionally...so she quickly opened her fist when ram's fingers reached her's

Ram has been left shocked by her intelligent wife

This did not go unnoticed by the three mothers

They looked at them lovingly

"didi jeevan ke kisi bhi marg pe ek doosre ka saath nahi chhodenge ye dono" (said kekayi to kaushalya)

"Satya kaha... ram aur sita ek doosre ke poorak hain" (said sumitra)

Lakshman looked at urmila who was admiring her sister and brother - in-law madly in love

L - urmila, pati - patni ka sambandh kitna adbhut hota hai na... do log ek bandhan mein bandhne ke pashchat kaise ek doosre se judh jatey hain... haina

U - nai aarya ... baat pati patni ki nahi hoti... ise prem kehtey hain jo do logo ko baandh deta hai aise bandhan mein jo kabhi nahi khulta fir bhale hi ve saath rahe ya na rahe... ek dusre se door bhale hi ho jayen kintu unka prem vahi rehta hai...

L - to kya is sambandh ko prem nahi kehtey... pati patni ke Madhya prem

U - har pati patni ke madhya itna prem ho sambhav nahi hai aarya (she said cutting him in between) kabhi kabhi to keval daitva hi hota hai kuchh vivaahit jodon ke beech... prem hota hi nahi, prem vivaah ke pashchat ho aisa avashyak nahi, vivaah se poorv bhi ho sakta hai,,, do log jab prem k sath vivaah ke bandhan mein bandhtey hain to ve abhajya ho jate hain kintu jab vahi bandhan hatth se aur be-mann se joda jaye to vo keval ek aupcharikta bankar reh jata h(she said in a low tone)

Lakshman looked at her confused...