Ram Milaye jodi updated

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Hai. ๐Ÿ˜Š
This is my first. Ff. Here in skr. Hope u like it. ๐Ÿ˜Š

PART 1:


All the four couples are welcomed grandly in Ayodhya the queens are very happy with their dil
After the pre marriage rituals all the princes and princesses are asked to rest as they are tired. As per pratha they should not stay together for a fortnight. So the four brides are allocated four big rooms for each one. They all went to their respective rooms for sleep.

Shatrughan: (in his room). Meri Saath he aisa kyun hota hai? Maine to use theek se vaarthalap bi nahi Kiya. Vivaah ke poorv. Abmuch aur din Pratiksha karma hai

Passing by there Lakshman saw him and came to him.

Lakshman: Kay hua Shatrughan Nidra nahi aarahe hai? Kisi ki yaad aarahe hai tumhe? Tum Kahe to mai unhe bulav yahaan ๐Ÿ˜‰
S: shocked. Nahi bhaiya muje shrtkirti se nahi Milna hai ,!
L:(smiling) mai rajkumari ki bath nahi kar Raha Hon mai hum are maa ki bath karahi hu
S: blushing bhaiya aap homesha muje cheda te hai muje aap se bath hi nai Karna hai mai Bharat bhaiya ke paas jata hoon shubhratri.
He stood to go but asked Lakshman.
S: Aap is Samay mere Kaksh ke Bahar Kya kar rahe the kise ki Pratiksha Ho Raha hai bhaiya .? Asked Shatrughan smiling ๐Ÿ˜‰
Lakshman trembled but composed himselfand answered
L: main ram bhaiya ke pass ja Raha hoon muje kisi ki Pratiksha nahi hai.
S: bhaiyya Vivaah ke paschath Aap Sab kuch bhoolne lage Kya?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ram bhaiya ki Kaksh is Disha me kaha hai Voh to use Disha main hai. Is Disha mein to mere bhabhiji ka Kaksh hai.
L: vo...mai..mai...ram bhaiya ke pas hi ja rahatha avem marg Bool gaya tha.
He quickly left from there leaving his brother smiling๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

TBC...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely start !!!!!
Plzzz continue ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Grt update.
15 din ki doori, why u so cruel? Ab kya karenge sab dilwale.
Jokes apart, continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai. Thanks. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Part2:

๐Ÿ˜ฒ Ram is in his room trying to sleep on his bed.
Ram:Mujhe Nidra kyun nahi aa rahe hai. Kya hua hai mujhe. vaise hi hai Mehra Kaksh mera palan. sab pehle bhathi hi hai par,mujhe Sab adhoori ki tarah Lange lage.
He got up and went to the balcony to get some fresh air. He looked up at the sky with full moon. He smiled seeing his hand ,with traces of sindoor still on it which he applied on Sitas forehead few hours ago.
Ram : Kya aap so rahe hai ,Sita. Mere neendh to aap apne sath . legaye hai.
Sita is in her new chambers allocated to her by the queens. Her sisters are also given special grand chambers

Sita: Ayodhya aur Mithila kitne alag hai yahaan to Sab kitne bhavy hai. Hamare Mithila me Sab koch kitne sadharansa hai. Yeh Kaksh kitna badi hai. Itne badi Kaksh to hum charo behno sath rehsakte hai main akele kis prakar yaha raho.
Sita went to the mirror and removed her heavy bridal jewellery except her mangalsutra. She looked at the sindoor on her forehead and smiled reminding ram filling it. She walked through the balcony and is looking at the sky.

Sita:AajTak mein itne prasann kabi nahi huyi. Mujhe mere swami ke roop me Dashrath Nandan mila.
Kya wo Nidra me honge? Ya jag rahe honge?
Mujhe Nidra ke Sambhavna nahi hai par mere behen Kya kar rahe hongi. Mujhe unhe dekhna a chahiye ekbar nayi sthan me Kudh ko sambhal payege ya nahi.

Ram is in some deep thoughts. When Lakshman came to him.
L: bhaiyya aap soye nahi abtak?
Ram: akele Nidraa kaha Aati hai?
L: (laughing) Kya?..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.
Ram came out of his trance and saw Lakshman laughing. He blushed but composed himself
Ram.: tum has kyun rahe ho. Mere tatparye hai ke mere bhai ke Bina Mujhe Nidra kaha ati hai. Tum to roj sone ke vaqt mera seva karte hona.
L: aap mujhe kitna yaad karte Ho bhaiya said teasingly ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Ram. Paranthu tum kyu nahi soyi abtak...?
L: Mujhe be aapki bhati akele Nidra nahi arahi ti. ...๐Ÿ˜†
R: Lakshman!jakar so Joao.
L: vaise aap ko bhabhiji se Milne ka iccha nahi ho rahe hai?
R: kyu, tumhe iccha Ho rahe hai rajkumari Urmila se Milne ka?
L: iccha huyi bhi to nahi mil skate haina bhaiyya wo tho sogaye hongi ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Ram: tumhe kisne kaha ki wo so Gayi honge tumhe Swayam dekha kya?
L: bhaiyya Nidra to unko Sab se Priya hai. Avsar ane par wo tho varsho Nidra me reh Shakti hai!
Ram. : ๐Ÿ˜Š parantu Bharat avem Shatrughan so gaye hai kya?
L: ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Shatrughan ke bhare main Kya Batav. Wo bhaite bhaite swayam se kuch vaarthalap kar Raha hai. mujse rusth hokar Bharat bhaiyya ke Kaksh me gaya.
Ram: chalo tum bhi jakar so jao. Shubhratri.

As Lakshman is about to leave Shatrughan came to his brothers tensed.
Ram. Kya hua Shatrughan. Tum yaha?
L: Bharat bhaiyya so gaye kya?
S: nahi wo tho apni Kaksh me nahi hai. Mujhe Laga ve aap ke Saath honge. Ve yaha nahi hai?
L. : ram bhaiyya Mujhe lag ta hai nidra Devi hum Charon se rusth hogaye. Ise kaaran hum Sab ko Aaj Nidra nahi arahi hai๐Ÿ˜‰
Ram. : Lakshman. Tum chup Ho Jao. Mujhe sochnedo ki Bharat kaha ja Sakta hai.
L: Mujhe ashanka hai ve bhabhiji se Milne Gaye honge. Mei jakar dekh aao๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ram. : nahi. Tum ko itna Kasth uthane ki avasyakta nahi hai. Shatrughan jayega.
S: ๐Ÿ˜›mei unhe dhoondkar Ata hoon.
L: tum keval Bharat bhaiyya ko khojna. Koi aur ko nahi!... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ram : Lakshman!,,,,,
Ram and Lakshman went to room while shartrughan went to search Bharat excitingly towards the brides rooms.

To be contd...
Edited by Bdaygirl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update!!
Waiting for next part ๐Ÿ˜‰
Plzzz update soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start! do continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update!!!!
Waiting for next one
Do updat soon ๐Ÿ˜›
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Thanks to all ๐Ÿ˜Š

PART 3
Shatrughan went to the brides chambers to search for Bharat...Mandavi is in her chamber tossing in her bed. She is not getting sleep.
M: Rajkumar Bharat kitne ache hai. Maine un ka Apmaaan kiya. Paranthu oh is vivaah ko svikruthi dedi. Mujhe unse Shama manga chahiye apne vyavahar ke liye. Me prathahkaal hi unse milkar maangti hoon.
Shruthkirti is in her chamber tossing tensely.
Sk: Mujhe mata Sumitra ko mana karna chaiye tha. Mein is Kaksh me akele nahi so paungi. Muje bhay Ho Raha hai. Mai mandavi didi Kaksh me jakar unke sath hi so Jati hoo.
She came out of her chambers and is walking in the corridors. Mean while Sita went to see Urmila. She is sleeping in her room. Sita came out quietly.
Sita: Urmila so Gaye am mujhe mandavi ko dekna hai.
Sita came to mandavi' is chamber and found Shatrughan there.
Sita: chote Sumitra nandan.! Aap yaha. Is samay ?
S: Pranam bhabhi! Vo mai Bharat bhaiyya ko khoj Raha tha. Ve apne Kaksh mai nahi hai. Is Karan ram bhaiyya ne mujhe bhabhi se pooch kar ane ke liye kaha. Is Karan me yaha aaya.
๐Ÿ˜›Sita called mandavi and informed about Bharat.
M: Kaikeyi nandan apni Kaksh me nahi hain? Mujhe gyath nahi ve kaha honge.
S: Chita na kare ve mahal me hi honge. Me unhe khoj ta hoon. Aagna dijiye!
Suddenly due to strong wind the diya went off and it became dark.
Sita: mandavi tum mere Kaksh me chalo. Yaha to andakar hai.
S: bhabhi aap Sita bhabhi ke kaksh me Jayiye yaha mei diya jalatha hoon.
Sita and mandavi left and Shatrughan went to light diyas in mandavi chamber.
Here shruthkirti is going to mandavi room she found everywhere dark and got scared. Suddenly there was a thunder and she frightened and ran to mandavi room.
She ran fast and bumped into Shatrughan who is lighting diya. She could not see his face and thought him a thiefand started shouting.
Sk: bacho koi! mere didi ke kaksh mei chor aaya.
S: (holding her). Shant Ho jayeye. Mei chor nahi. Apka swami hoon Shatrughan..
Sk: composing herself. Chote Sumitra Nandana! ... aap ?
Mein apni swami ko chor kaha...
Kshama kijiye. Mujhe andakar mei kuch bhi dikha nahi. Aur mei bhaybheet Ho ๐Ÿ˜ญ
S: aap sadiv itne sheegr ta se kyu bhagte rate ho? Kya bhagna aap ki Priya Khel hai Rajkumari? ๐Ÿ˜›
Sk: almost crying. Mujhe akele nidra nahi aati. Is karan mei mandavi didi ke kaksh me arahi ti tab andakar hogaje. a aur meghon ki garjana sunkar me bhaybheet hokar Bhaagh aye. . Mei punah skhma chata Hoon. Sumitra nandan.
S: nahi. aapko kshma mangne ki avsyktha nahi hai kirti.
He called her by name for first time .
S: (wiping her tears.) Aap Roye math. Mei deknahi pavunga.
She blushed and moved away from him. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Sk. : aap yaha? Soyi nahi ab tak ...
S: mei Bharat bhaiyya ko khoj Raha tha. Ve apne Kaksh mei nahi hai. Me mandavi bhabhi se poochne hetu aaya.
Sk: Didi kaha hai ?
S: ve Sita bhabhi ke kaksh me gaye hai. Aap ko mein apki kaksha tak chodu aap phir se bhaybheet
hojaynge...
Sk. : ji.
S: kadachit. Yeh Ayodhya hai koi bhi chor raj mahal me Pravesh nahi kar sakta. Dariye math. ๐Ÿ˜Š Me apki kaksh ka diya jwalit kar deta hoon aap bhaitiye.

Ram and Lakshman are waiting for Shatrughan.
Ram. : Shatrughan kaha rah Gaya?itna samay bheet gaya.
Lak: Main dekh kar aata hoon bhaiyya ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Aap,... Agna diya tho.
Ram : tum kyu itna utsuk horahe Ho?... Kadajit jakar sheegr aajao

Lakshman went to search his brother. He headed towards mandavi chambers. Mean while Urmila woke up from sleep hearing some sound from mandavi room.
U: yeh kaisa Dhvani hai. Mandavi didi ke kaksh se aaya. Ve koi apay mei to nahi hai?
She came out of her room and went to see mandavi.
It is dark only with a single diya.
U: yaha itna andakar kyu hai? Mandavi didi kaha hai. She called her but did not get any response

U: yeh kaha gaye! Rakshasi. Oh rakshasi. Kaha chali gayi ho aap?

Lakshman reached there and heard someone calling Rakshasi. He felt like some rakshasi is attacking and went with his sword drawn in to the room. There Urmila saw him and thought him as a snake and started shouting
U: sarp sarp raksha kijiye. ,,,,,,
L: Raj kumari aap! Kaha kaha .. rakshasi?

U: Sumitra Nandan. Aap Mujhe rakshasi kaha?๐Ÿ˜ก
L.: ji nahi. Parantu. Aap ko mai sarp lag Raha hoon? Batayiye!
U. : parantu mein ne to Sarp dekha.
L: Kya aap ne phir mujhe sarp kaha! Mei abhi ram bhaiyya aur bhabhi ko bataunga avem. Maa ko bhi , ki unke putra sarp hai. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
U: nahi nahi. Skhamah kijiye mujhe. mujse itna bada bhool Ho gaya. Use din se mujhe hear sthan per sarp ki chavi dikhayi de raho hai.
She said with tears rolling down her cheeks.

Lakshman pulled her close to him. And wiped her tears mein pariahs kar raha the aap satya me rorrahi hai. Mujhe apki sundar mukh par asru achi nahilagta hai. Royeya math Urmila.
Suddenly she became conscious of their proximity and moved away blushing. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
U: ji. Paranthu aap yaha. Nidra nahi aayi
L: mein Bharat bhaiyya avem Shatrughan ko khoj te yaha aaya. Kadachit aap yaha is kaksh me Kya rahe hai?aap ko gyath hai ve dono kaha hai?
U: nahi muje gyath nahi
L: . To aap jakar sojaye. Mein bhi prasthan karta hoon. Mujhe bhaiyya ke pas Jana hai.
U: ji. Shubhratri.
Lakshman left. From there searching his brothers.
He saw Shatrughan coming from shutkirti room and asked his brother
L: Shatrughan tumhe Bharat bhaiyya mila?
S: nahi. Mein ne bhabhi se poocha parantu Unko gyath nahi.
L: vaise kaha se aarahe Ho tum. ๐Ÿ˜‰
S: ji...vo..vo.. Mein rajkumari se ...!
L: koi bath nahi. ... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Ychalo
S: aap kaha the?
L: mei mai. Vo mei tum ko hih khoj Raha aur mujhe mujhe ...
S:๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ aur aapko bhabhi mila na?
L: blushing. Chalo ab. Ye bharat bhaiyya kaha gaye ?
To be contnd...
Edited by Bdaygirl - 9 years ago
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Such cute update ๐Ÿ˜›
Loved LakshMila & shatrukriti ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Do give next part asap!!!!
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Loved the update.
Do continue ๐Ÿ˜Š

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