Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di!
ohk ohk.....i guess i nearly lost the pms......and u have not taken care of the index!!!!!!! bad thing..... [i can scold for for ur laparwahi being younger]
but now i got to see three poems today!
see my luck!
so i wud be commenting on them simultaneously!
LIFE-
wow di!
what a poem!
i mean its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice!
i am in love with it sooooooooooo much......
and these lines....
Remember never to forget what good happened,
Remember never to forget what bad phase meant.
u r right.......
everytime anything bad happens to us, we must close our eyes and try to cherish some good moments........they make us feel better.....
this poem is really amazing......and i read it when i needed to read it most importantly.....
i really needed to read something like this....and this poem came to my rescue....
aap har baar itni achi poems kaise likh leti hain?
i really love how u expressed the positivity here......
i really loved it to the core of my heart.....
mere paas koi words hi nahi rehte hain to tell u how much i love ur poems!
awesome.......
and now i am gonna read the next one....
this one was really very beautiful......
and now the chance comes of next one......
EMARLD AND DIAMOND-
oh!
this is so sad........a boy loved a girl and he asked her to marry him.....but she was not ready.....and then the boy asked her to either except the ring or throw it away....and she didn't loved him that deeply so she refused to accept the ring and he threw it away......
she cud feel his pain....
she was hurt to hurt him......
and i loved the way u ended it as a question.....
i think it came in your mind within a few minutes....
am i right?
coz i don't know why.....but i feel so......
well, life too never gives all answers.......and i loved it more and more.....
awesome creation!
wow!
i am soooooooo damn excited to read the next poem......
WHAT CAN I SAY?
now.....what can i say?
i have no more new words to praise ur work....
and i can't find anything amiss in them!
and plz don't write back that u r immature and u don't know anything....u just write what u feel.....but u r not so good etc types!
cause i always read ur replies........and i think u always underestimate urself!
and stop doing that!
i really loved this poem.....
coz it was a search for one own self......
she was given divorced......she was feeling pain.........yet she is struggling......and she wants to search what she actually is!
i loved this poem!
too good.....
and i am so happy that u got poetry award for the poem u wrote for ur story!
i saw that few days back and commented there........
and today i saw ur reply to it.....
how can u even think that ur poem can bore anyone?
poems always refresh others.....
they help us!
and i love writing and reading poems......
and besides i was thinking to publish ur poems on my site too.......coz they r out of the world!
i totally love to read ur poems.....
they are always superb!'
get well soon!
and take care and luv ya always.
love,
Mahak
HI Mahak dear,
Oh , yup once u told me PM r not reaching, I thought u may check the thread and read the pending ones. I was not very regular in postign these poems, so in between when posted i Pm'd u .. actually kabhi kabhi I even forget to Pm ..lol... meri laaparwahi ke liye u scolding me.. mummyyyyy but itney pyaar sey scold kar rahi ho..aww thats soo sweet... icecream khatey hue dant khane mey mujhe mazaaa aya..:) yup i will surely try and update the index as soon has i have enough time in hand dear. waise there are some option of puting url of the link directly with the name of the poem.. dont know why i cant get that... duffer hun yeh discover kar nahi paa rahi..later on u give me classes of how to do that..ok.. dear..
oh u missed reading three of the poems.. oh i missed ur comments and lucky me i got to read
all the comments in one goo...:) Life... so u liked it.. yup I guess for all of us life is the same, everydifficult phase may be different and situations different but it comes in everyones life..its just how people deal with failures and disappointments.. whom they blame and whether they feel to continue the battle or not. I actually do this.. when i get people trygint to make me feel i am good
for nothing..i write down in my diary all that i love abotu myself... it helps not ot hate ones life.. and it surely helps to smile and be proud of ur own decisions whether u succeed or
not but u facedit and ready to face consequences not running away from life.. Aww Mahak thanks for all the lovely comments on this one... it touched u , it inspired made me
to get inspired too... i hope i continue withmy thoughts with cheer always.. as i have such amazing people aroudn to come into my life and make me feel so wonderful...
Emarld and Diamond
this poem and the next one was written in few seconds rather than minutes actuallly we had this antakshri with original poems and i wrote posted with the flow and when i read i was laughign how a story had developed.. i posted it here.. to share iwthu all..i am glad u could
feel the story in those few words and liked it.. and u r right as always dear.. thanks for
sayign awesome..ab doston ka asar mujhpar hoga hi.. warna log kya kahengey Mahak itni talented aur uski friend dekho..lol..
HAhhahah MAhak ya, i do try and underestimate myself in writings..and its not out of modesty..actually many many people have told me in the real world that i can never be a writer.. and to the extent that i am not compatible to be that.. i alwyas felt why only literary capacity is taken a note of.. why not the idea or the thought given even an inch credit.. I think professional i can never but sharing my thoughts here makes me fel happy.. and when u all praise me so much , behind in my head i know the real world in which i love may not feel the same as profesional i am not a master in it.. but honestly i dont care a damn.. i enjoy writing , i share my thoguhts.. if u like my thoguhts i am glad.. my spelling error writing style if someone doesnt like i am not offended i agree and i try to improve.. in my heart i am child but with issue i feel to raise i am a grown up woman...
Hi dear , yes i got that award heheh. but i was expecting for my hindi poems got for ths enlgish one... will post those hindi ones here.. they are very small but i like them.. they were written lognback...my poems dont bore u ...wow!! feels nice dear... chalo story sey jaldi bore
karungi..lol..i know u wont get bored i hope so too... u can say this after u read that.. Superb are u ..as u encorauge me so much.. works are written with Gods wish in it..but encoruagment is a part of personality which needs goodness inside..thanks for been that .. a good hearted friend..
luv u tc
Bhoomi
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