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@adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#541

Awaaz uthau Karz Chukau
bhoomi

i was counitnuly crying while reading this

very true bhoomi

girls hamesha apne sanakero mein lipti hue aise he dehaj ke bali chad jati hein

kyo passa ek inssan ke kimat se jayda ho jata hein

kitna he armaan hot hein jo bus rakh ho jatine hein

bhommi i am sppech les i wish this poen can effect some one so they help to stop this stupid custom

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi bhommi

well after a long time i am agin here and yes i am happy to here becoz i am reading your next heart touching and inspirable poem
well like the name ,kabhi kabhi life hoti hein aisa hein ke her taraf problems he problems hotin tab her positive baat bhi negitive lagti hein or jab ye hota hein tab hum sirf or sirf negtive he soctein hein
strange hein na

Jeetey hain kyunki Marna kayarta ki Nishani hai,
Najane kya likhi Ishwar ne agey ki kahani hai,
Samay badalega yeh Vishwas rakhna Jeevan ka niyam hai,
Umeed par kahatey hain saree Duniya kayam hai.

well said bhoomi viswas rakhna jaroori hein
bhoomi plz tell me your real name i want to write this poem in my room and your name too and want to gift this to my friend too ,she need this more ,and i must say this will help her or gave her the support wehich she need
yes bhoomi life mein viswas se he sab kuch ho sakta hein
vo prabaht jaror hoga
lvoley words
once again you deserve a jadu ke jappi

Hi Adi,

Yes u r right. Most of the times problems never r 1 there are loads of problems adding on and at one point it becomes as if we r surrounded them all.. there is no light to get out of it and we tend to either go into depression feelgin the dark room is too stressful but the only option we have to follow is to know light is gogin to come in we need to try our best to either wait for it or try and get the dark clouds away... and this poem ummeed is the thought that its possible just belive it is... only then u can usrvive and u have to survive as GOD gave u life with a purpose. I felt everyword in this poem..and even now when i read sometimes i feel i shouldnt let down myself and follow what i myself wrote in.. :)

About wanting to have it with u.. u can keep it as bny bhoomikauttam.. this name means a lot to me.. anythign more to want do PM .. If u feel someone shodul have it and u want to gift it.. dear this poem was written by Bhoomikauttam..by me and u can print have it with that name... or gift it to soeone with that name.. there r many online frineds who made me to write this one..i owe this to them.. my yahoo group buddies ...

Prabhaat is a postive aspect and true to its meaning.. life is never ugly its beautiful its just phases in life keep unfolding and always remember good times follow and keep lovingurself..sdo share this with ur friend.. i am glad if any word i wrote and hsared iwth u all..can remotely also inspire anyone.. thanks for likign and making me to also understnad life with ur views and thoguhts..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
Awaaz uthau Karz Chukau
bhoomi

i was counitnuly crying while reading this

very true bhoomi

girls hamesha apne sanakero mein lipti hue aise he dehaj ke bali chad jati hein

kyo passa ek inssan ke kimat se jayda ho jata hein

kitna he armaan hot hein jo bus rakh ho jatine hein

bhommi i am sppech les i wish this poen can effect some one so they help to stop this stupid custom

HI Adi,

its absolutely sad but educated highly educated men doctors enginners and advocates they ask for dowry its not only among illiterate rural india..but largely spread even NRI's i really dont understand what progression is all abotu when girls are bought like animals and treated like objects and thrown away or burnt away for money ..how much pain trauma a girl goes thorguh is just not taken into account.. and to add ot some misuse the laws women do misuse makking it more dificult to prove.. sadly the state needs to change esepcially people around need to come out and protect others and themselves stoppign giving dowry and askign is most important.. hoep it happens.. glad u liked the whole concept and issue raised.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23
hey awesome one

HI,

glad that u liked this one.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#545

Gam ka Saya

Gam ka Andhkar tha,
Bheeter hahakar tha,

Kuch samajh na paye hum,
Is kamarey se kaise bahar aye hum,

Socha jo ho, Apno ka saath to hai,
Socha jo ho, Thamaney ke liye kissika haath to hai,

Is kamare mey roshni badhti jati hai,
Prem ki varsha, Asso samet le jati hai,

Shayad safalta ke shikar ko nahi chhu payenge,
Chalo hum In gamoo se to Chhut jayenge,

Kamare se bahar Ate hi darr bahut lagata hai,
Jab andhkar kuch nahi kar paya to ujala kya kar sakta hai,

Sapney Apney kahin kho gaye the,
Kya kare hum apney aap ko Kho gaye the,

Lekin jo hai usey khush rahaker swikaar karna hai,
Apney jeevan mey har pal bas pyaar hi bharna hai,

Aaj Shrm karte hain aur sukoon hai,
Paise se Khushi milati hai is brahm ka nahi junoon hai,

Jeevan mey gam ka andhkar mit sakta hai,
Tufano ka samna har aadmi kar sakta hai,

Bas Apno ka saath aur pyaar ho,
Apne ander Hausla aur vishwas ho,

zindagi anmol hai na yaad karo dukh ko,
Muskurao aur jeeyo har pal sukh ko,

Khushi har gam ka chaader ban use dakhti hai,
Vishwas rakho zindagi khubasoorat bansakti hai.

Gam ka andhkar Bhi tab mitt jayega,
Bheeter mann pyaar paker nikhar jayega.

...............Bhoomikauttam

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#546

di!

main aakhir kaar abse first aa sakti hoon.....

and what a luck! maine just pc on hi kiya tha!

Jab andhkar kuch nahi kar paya to ujala kya kar sakta hai......

this line is sooooooooooo touching........

di this poem was awesome and perfect......

on one side it showed pain...and sufferings...... while on the other side it also portrayed the feeling of hope.....also not to ever give up!

so this poem was ultimate mixture of both the feelings.....

how can u write so brilliantly each time?

Gam ka andhkar Bhi tab mitt jayega,
Bheeter mann pyaar paker nikhar jayega.

wow what a lines!

di u write brilliantly.....

everytime u make me feel a complete loss at words......

vaise i read ur reply in which u said that the banner is not good....di use pm kajiye.....i wanna see the banner.....and aapne five parts likh bhi li? then agar aap theek ho toh sixth part jaldi likhiyega.....i am very excited to read that......

i loved the poem!

do write more.....

love,
Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#547

Khushi har gam ka chaader ban use dakhti hai,
Vishwas rakho zindagi khubasoorat bansakti hai.

Gam ka andhkar Bhi tab mitt jayega,
Bheeter mann pyaar paker nikhar jayega.

bhoomi you are
right yaar
khud per trust karna bahut jarori

muje is poem mein ye kamra hamera mann ka fear ,hamari negative thinking lag rahi hein
jo hum kabhi kuch bhi good nahi karne deti ehin
us andkaar se hame khud he ladna hoga
is me sirf mere apne he meri madad ker sakti hein
very well written bhoomi

khusi he hume her dukh se ladne ka rasts de sakti hein
or hum is baat ko swikar karna hoga

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#548

Khushi har gam ka chaader ban use dakhti hai,
Vishwas rakho zindagi khubasoorat bansakti hai.

Gam ka andhkar Bhi tab mitt jayega,
Bheeter mann pyaar paker nikhar jayega.
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I am glad to read this poem this is true vishwaas mein hi jeevan hai aur jo log vishwaas ko apne andar zinda rakhte hai wi hi aage badhte hai .

Thank you Bhoomi My Sweet Friend & Sis You Make Me Proud Dear you are amazing writer 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di!

main aakhir kaar abse first aa sakti hoon.....

and what a luck! maine just pc on hi kiya tha!

Jab andhkar kuch nahi kar paya to ujala kya kar sakta hai......

this line is sooooooooooo touching........

di this poem was awesome and perfect......

on one side it showed pain...and sufferings...... while on the other side it also portrayed the feeling of hope.....also not to ever give up!

so this poem was ultimate mixture of both the feelings.....

how can u write so brilliantly each time?

Gam ka andhkar Bhi tab mitt jayega,
Bheeter mann pyaar paker nikhar jayega.

wow what a lines!

di u write brilliantly.....

everytime u make me feel a complete loss at words......

vaise i read ur reply in which u said that the banner is not good....di use pm kajiye.....i wanna see the banner.....and aapne five parts likh bhi li? then agar aap theek ho toh sixth part jaldi likhiyega.....i am very excited to read that......

i loved the poem!

do write more.....

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak,

Yipeee.. u came first again..and i know u have to as kuch telepathy hoti hai and u come on the comp and see my work here and jump in to be the first to read and reply here.. awesome feelgin for me .. and am happy its the same for u dear..

This poem does say a lot.. and true that line is for me also a very favourite of mine.. glad u liked it too.. u felt it was perfect.. with such poems i soemwhere want to feel u all rnt depressed but have some hope inurself or for others..in distress... soemwhere with the reply i felt that... it didnt make u feel down but get up and fight emotion.. thanks for makign me feel that ..

Oh its easy to write brilliantly u know very well.. Dost itneey talented hai ki unkey thoughts share hotey hain and usss vishal dariyaa sey kuch soch main nikalti hun aur poem tayaar.. and see u all like it...:) lol..

Awwww thats very sweet of u MAhak.. i feel this poem is written from my heart .. its like i sat in the dark room myself and felt abt the light to come ....:) thanks for ur lovely spedy comments...

Ya i will Pm u the banner am not happy with the flow.. whatver i have as banner is what i wanted but gloss effect mey it woudl shine but cant learn properly to give that... more than 5 parts now almost 7 parts r over.. lets see.. when i post.. mood depend kart ahai all.. wheni fisnih i will ..

very soon dear.. sorry for makign u alll wait..

luv u tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

Khushi har gam ka chaader ban use dakhti hai,
Vishwas rakho zindagi khubasoorat bansakti hai.

Gam ka andhkar Bhi tab mitt jayega,
Bheeter mann pyaar paker nikhar jayega.

bhoomi you are
right yaar
khud per trust karna bahut jarori

muje is poem mein ye kamra hamera mann ka fear ,hamari negative thinking lag rahi hein
jo hum kabhi kuch bhi good nahi karne deti ehin
us andkaar se hame khud he ladna hoga
is me sirf mere apne he meri madad ker sakti hein
very well written bhoomi

khusi he hume her dukh se ladne ka rasts de sakti hein
or hum is baat ko swikar karna hoga

HI Adi,

Yes, i learnt this.. I mean there is a line in the poem which says succcess peak we may not reach but why get depressed with that.. many times with less marks in exams or failure we feel we wotn be able to reach our goals or college with those marks.. but its important atleast we come otu of that situation and try again and walk ahead even that is an achivment to go throguh a low phase and come back strong... only thing is belief in urself God and love of clsoeones... even if many times u feel u let ur self down very iumportant of family to be there to make u trust urself again.. and if u have them..why blame God for takign away other things.. u have somethign very preciosu too...

U r absolutely right and my thought of the dark room was the inner darkness... we dont want others to meet us, talk with us we want to not face anyone or anysituation as we feel no hope to come out.. at that time only u can help urself have belief love urself and do what all makes u to enjoy smile and do for u.. take some support little by little ... walk ahead thats what this poem meant and u beautifully felt the emotion..

yes pamper uself happiness will divert the gam disappointmetn slowly.. with time.. glad u liked this poem and felt the meotion.. tc

Bhoomi