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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: monikaseth
👏wow all are awesome bhoomi great poems ...all touches your heart ...👏

HI Monika dear,

do u think really they can be called poems... they are always verses kind of.. few od them r taken from my story Let me feelthe love... and i think i can write few more lines on it..but thought to post it and see the reaction it will inspire me to have various dimension to a thoguht.. glad dear that all touched ur heart.. love u for always been there to encoruage my effort.. u r absolutely sweetttttttttt ...😃

tc luv u

Bhoomi

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#502

hi bhoomi !!

all of them are brilliant....👏

but i liked...or you can say the poem that 'hit' me the most is "EDUCATION"....

coz its about time,we realise what "real" education means....

that its not something you earn in degrees, but something that you can express with awareness in you and your positive and responsible behaviour...😊

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#503

all of them are just superb.👏

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#504

Mr. Right.....U & Me.....Perfect Two?....:

Abt these....wat to say....lovely emotions....described even in a lovelier way!!! Did a gr8 job Bhoomi....'Perfect Two?" reminded me of ur story of Araav....may be it was also named...."Let me feel the love"....but however I just remember the name of the male lead...hehe. It was a beautiful one btw....and like always these poems/verses r also amazing!!

Education:

Isse specially mention isliye kiya....coz I also feel the same way that u depicted here....the edu system of today is worse than just pathetic....khud ko educated kehna bhi mujhe achha nahi lagta....hehe. But however u put it just perfectly dear!! Loved it too!!

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#505

heyyy bhoomi
amazing poems
i really enjoyed reading them
thanx for the pm
n me waiting for ur another story

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
hi bhoomi !!
all of them are brilliant....👏

but i liked...or you can say the poem that 'hit' me the most is "EDUCATION"....

coz its about time,we realise what "real" education means....

that its not something you earn in degrees, but something that you can express with awareness in you and your positive and responsible behaviour...😊

Hi,

Glad that u felt all were nice. Yes u felt the same with Education one.. i loved reading what u feel..and u know i want to write a longer one on this topic and discussign with u all here i would continue this one..and hope to post whenever i complte that.,...

feels nice to share views and knows others what they feel..thanks for commenting and encoruaging..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: golu_1677
all of them are just superb.👏

Hi Golu dear,

awww am very happy that u liked all of them and thanks for the applause.... it surely made me know that it meant sense.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Mr. Right.....U & Me.....Perfect Two?....:

Abt these....wat to say....lovely emotions....described even in a lovelier way!!! Did a gr8 job Bhoomi....'Perfect Two?" reminded me of ur story of Araav....may be it was also named...."Let me feel the love"....but however I just remember the name of the male lead...hehe. It was a beautiful one btw....and like always these poems/verses r also amazing!!

Education:

Isse specially mention isliye kiya....coz I also feel the same way that u depicted here....the edu system of today is worse than just pathetic....khud ko educated kehna bhi mujhe achha nahi lagta....hehe. But however u put it just perfectly dear!! Loved it too!!

Hi Sumaiya,

Wow!! u remember that story..yes these lines poem is taken from that story itself.. i wrote it first and banner also has these lines to it. U remember Aarav and the girl was SIndhu ... i remember as someone mentioned her sisters name is sindhu and was excited to read the story heehehe..

even the education verses...lines.. are taken from that story itself... I was wonderign to add more to education one and make it long with all that i feel.. but somethign has to inspire me to write it.. discussing iwth u all..surely many thoguhts came up it would help me addign more things to it.. glad u still remember th story so well..and u liked reading these makes me happpy... tc

luv u ..

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
heyyy bhoomi
amazing poems
i really enjoyed reading them
thanx for the pm
n me waiting for ur another story

HI Seema,

awww very sweet of u to say the poems are amazing..thanks for boosting my spirit ... U enjoyed reading ..i enjoyed sharign my work with u all... no need to thank me for the Pm its not a big deal.. yup i have written started another story and around 4-5 parts already done... i am assumign it to be a short story with not more than 10 parts.. still will post after 26th as one of the friend who pushed inspired me to write that one is busy with exams so will post when she is free to read .. by the way let me give a hint.. its with Mayank n Nupur as leads..😃 hoep u like them as couple.. tc

Bhoomi

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#508

Hey Bhoomi... Totally loved Bin dekhe Pyaar....... and U&Me, Perfect two?, Education andMr. Right... But Bin dekhe pyaar... really toooooooooooo gooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!

What else can I say?????? AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

and u r writing FF/SS on Mayank-Nupur..WOW.... Now i don't need to tell u tht u shuld be Pm'ing me for tht too, isn't it?

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago

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Kanu K

@artizia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#509

bhoomi i loved the one on education.
you have put my feelings in words

thats how our education system is now , what matter is score ..not the means u get it ..and nor what that score actually means ....

less attention to make sure u understand what you are doing..

The world seems like a business where everything is calculated and done in light of profits and losses

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Hey Bhoomi... Totally loved Bin dekhe Pyaar....... and U&Me, Perfect two?, Education andMr. Right... But Bin dekhe pyaar... really toooooooooooo gooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!

What else can I say?????? AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....AMAZING....

and u r writing FF/SS on Mayank-Nupur..WOW.... Now i don't need to tell u tht u shuld be Pm'ing me for tht too, isn't it?

Hi Divya,

Oh i am very happy that u liked Bin dekhe so much.. 😊... so read all the other small bits..u liked Bin dekhe so much means u could feel the concept glad that u liked it so much.. AMAzing??? I feel instead of my work.. that word suits to the readers and friends here...u all r AMAZING..my work is Okeyshokey u see.. abhi to I have to improve a lot.. but good ot see u liking the concept i take and like the thoguhts so much..

Yes u r right...i am writing an FF its been a long time... Wanted to complete.. Nupur n mayank ..yup so u want to read that too when i post..so sweet to know that dear.. i will surely Pm...😃.. after 26th i guess i will think of posting that..luvu tc

Bhoomi

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