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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 11 -The Announcement

Preeto in her bed, lying down. She looks at the ring on her finger and remembers last night's romantic date she had with Rajbeer. She didn't disclose the fact to anyone that Rajbeer has proposed to her as she wanted to announce to everyone with Rajbeer.

Preeto got ready and came down where she found her family members sitting down having breakfast' she knew that Rajbeer would be here any moment with Dhruv, Simran and Ishmeet.

Preeto -Mujhe ap sab ko kuch batana hain

Beeji - Pehle naashta toh karle

Preeto - Naashta baad mein, mujhe aap ko ek khush kabri deni hain

Beeji -Toh bhol na puthar ' kya baat hain '

Preeto - Ap Meeta di aur Pankaj ko bulao, Dhruv , Ishu aur Simran Rajbeer ke saath arey hain

Everyone looked at one another ' Beeji then went and phoned Meeta and Pankaj to hurry and come. They arrived in short time and soon after them Rajbeer , Dhruv , Ishu and Simran arrived. They took blessings from Beeji and Papaji and stood around. Rajbeer stood by Preeto '

Dhruv - Yaar Rajbeer ab toh bata de ' kya baat hain '

Everyone kind of knew in her head what the good news is by Rajbeer and Preeto standing next to each other and blushing. But no one spoke up . Rajbeer elbowed Preeto to start but she didn't know what to say '

Meeta - Arey Bolo naa , chup chup kyun kare ho

Preeto showed her left hand where the ring was worn '

Preeto - Rajbeer ne mujhe kaal Propose kiya

There were noises of joy made ' Simran, Pankaj and Dhruv came near Rajbeer patting him on his back ' and Meeta, Bani, Sonu and Simran hugging Preeto ' Beeji and Papaji smiled . Beeji came and touched Rajbeer's face

Beeji - Yeh toh bauth hi sona hogaya , mein aur master ji pehle se yeh hi chahte te

Bani - Oh wow Di ' I'm very happy , Ab party kare ge

Meeta - Party sharty baad mein , pehle yeh toh bata ke yeh kaab huya , kyunki kaal toh Rajbeer ki birthday party thi aur hum sab toh waha te

Preeto - Actually Party ke baad mein Rajbeer ko ek special gift diya

Simran - Oh hoh kya special gift diya

Rajbeer and Preeto smiled and looked at each other

Preeto - Woh mein dinner ka intazam kiya tha , aur phir Rajbeer ne waha mujhe Propose kiya tha

Ishu - Rajbeer tum toh sab kaam chupke chupke karte ho , humein nahi pata tha ke tum itne romantic ho '

Rajbeer smiled Beeji told everyone not to trouble Rajbeer

Beeji went to get snacks ' and then everyone had a long chat of what to do next , they decided to just get married as Rajbeer already proposed and then after marriage they would have a reception. Rajbeer sadly discussed about his parents to Beeji and Papaji how his mother ran away with someone else and his father is in America but he has no contact.

Beeji called Panjit do for tomorrow morning , and after everyone ate they left for their own homes.

Next morning Panjit ji came , Beeji handed kundli to him and he looked carefully to arrange a date ' Preeto was awake early and watching from the banister. The pandit gave a date for 10 days or then after 8 months ... 8 months was too late so they agreed for 10 days ' Preeto was happy ' Beeji let all the others know about the date.

All these days that were left for the wedding were very busy, all preparations were going on in the Dhillon house Rajbeer , Dhruv , Ishmeet and Simran went for Shaadi shopping , Rajbeer got a sherwani for himself and a sehra for his head ' After that they went to get Preeto wedding outfit ' Simran saw a gold and Maroon one but Rajbeer didn't agree saying that Preeto should look out of this world ' He looked around until his eyes came onto a red sparkly beaded lenga ' he imagined Preeto in it , she looked perfect. He asked the shop guy to pack it for him.

Rajbeer came the wedding outfit in ishmeet's hands to give to preeto. Ishmeet went and gave it to Preeto , she touched it and loved the outfit.

Precap ' The Wedding !!

Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Internet connection problem ... so lost what i did for part 12 ... but will update soon as i can ... i have included names in the wedding ...😃
Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww Aqeelah i know ur writing after longtime...really awsomee loved it...👏waiting for next part...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for the messages ... i will have to start part 12 all over again : ( ... annoying ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 12 - The Wedding

Shaadi wala din , preparations happening in the Dhillon house ... Preeto was sat infront of her mirror , she was dressed and Bani and Meeta were doing her make up for her ... she was looking very pretty . Beeji came in and saw Preeto ... she had water in her eyes , she told Meeta and Bani to go down , she had a one to one with her daughter , preeto was crying also but beeji told her to stop as her make up would get spoilt ...

In Rajbeer's house , Rajbeer was ready with his sehra on ... Dhruv , Simran and Ishu were waiting for Rajbeer's cousin ... and the band wale ... finally they came and rajbeer's cousin and friends came dancing ... Sonia , Sneha , Saina, Gurminder , Soumi , Preeti , Meenu, Maariyah and Aneesah came ... Rajbeer was happy to see them , they all sat in the car and went to Preeto's house ...

Meanwhile in Preeto's house , her friends came also , these were Anasuya , Madhu , Hanouna , Sana and Jessica ...they went up to congratulate preeto , they were having a laugh and talking naughty things ...

Rajbeer got out of the car with Dhruv , Ishmeet , Simran and all the rest ...
they came walking to the house with the band wale ... singing songs

" Peeche baarati agai band baaja , aye dulhe raja , gori khol darwaza "

Sneha , Meenu ,Saina and Sonia were dancing like crazy , at one point Meenu took the drum from one of the band wale and started playing it ...😆

Preeto's relatives all came running down at the sound of the drums ...Beeji welcomed Rajbeer ... and then he sat down on the mandap where the pandit was already sat down ... Preeto's sisters went to get preeto accompanied by Anasuya , Sana and Madhu ... Anasuya , Sana and Madhu were holding the chunri over preeto with Bani and Sonu while she was coming down...

Preeto looked like this




Rajbeer couldn't take his eyes of her ... she sat down at the mandap next to Rajbeer , the Pandit started reciting the matra's ...Rajbeer put mangalsutra in her neck and also put sindoor and then did the phere ... Pankaj and Meeta tied the knot ... and then they got up to do the phere's ... All the gang ( meaning all of you in india forums who i mentioned ) were throwing flowers ...

After Phere completed Rajbeer and Preeto took blessings from adults ... It was time for bidai ...and Preeto met with her sisters ... crying and hugging them tightly , she hugged Papaji and then Beeji and couldn't control herself ... Anasuya and Madhu held her back , she met with them also crying very badly ...
She met with all her friends/ relatives ... one by one ...

she did the rasam of the rice throwing ... and then sat in the car with Rajbeer ...
All the rest came in the other cars ... Beeji told Rajbeer to take care of Preeto ... The car drove off , Preeto was looking back and crying , Rajbeer held her hand and wiped her tears for her ... and told her not to cry ...😳

After a 20 mins drive they reached to Rajbeer's house ... Dhruv , Ishu and Simran went in ... while Sneha , Saina , Gurminder , Sonia and Meenu were walking with the couple ... they stood by the door and Simran welcomed them both with arti and then kept a pot with rice on the floor , Preeto tumbled it over with her foot , then Ishmeet kept a big palette with red colour in it ... Preeto was beginning to put her foot in it when Rajbeer gave his hand , she held it and then put both foot in the colour and walked in Rajbeer's house ...

All the rasam's were done now ...guests left ... Rajbeer's cousins and friends hugged the couple and left ... and Dhruv , Simran and Ishmeet left them as well and went home ...

Rajbeer's house wasn't that big but it was still nice and cosy , ... Preeto looked around ...

Rajbeer - Ahem !!

Preeto looked at him and smiled ...

Rajbeer - Bedroom mein chale 😳 ?? he winked ...😉

Preeto - Rajbeeer !!
She came towards him and hit him on his chest ... Rajbeer held her hand

Rajbeer - Kya Rajbeeer ... ( mimicking her ) Ap hum pati , patni hain aur pati jo marzi kar sakta hain ... chalo gi 😉

Preeto - Mein nahi ari ... tum khud jao 😆

Rajbeer - Acha ... he thought for a while and then picked Preeto up , she screamed , he took her to his room and put her on the bed and then closed the door ... 😳



Hope you like it ... i couldn't be asked ... am sooo lazy ... 🥱






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Posted: 13 years ago
yes its so good Aqeelah, u know what for my version on Rajpreet wedding i might take ur's if thats okay with u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Aqeelah this part '11 is really really good , i like it very much and will enjoy reading the next one, its soo sweet of how rajbeer and preeto are shy of each other and the wedding preperations. 👍🏼 Keep it upp leela 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
this part 12 is soo good lve , i like the ending 😉 better than the proper dramas end ... great work
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: unknownunknown

yes its so good Aqeelah, u know what for my version on Rajpreet wedding i might take ur's if thats okay with u.



Yeah sure ... to be honest i don't think mine is that good ... you will do much better😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: x-Maariyah-x

Hey Aqeelah this part '11 is really really good , i like it very much and will enjoy reading the next one, its soo sweet of how rajbeer and preeto are shy of each other and the wedding preperations. 👍🏼 Keep it upp leela 👏




Thanks Cousin 😃 Awww so sweet

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