RoSid FF - THE PROPHECY by Archana Vinod - Page 10

Originally posted by: magicalrosid

Awesome...superb...mind blowing...I am waiting for the rest...

😃 Thanku dear

super..update..what will happen now...what all happening to Sid really confused😕...waiting to know what and how he will save Roli...what is the danger for her...
i can't even guess...now her papa also in tension he closed all doors...what is happening...who came plz...next updates soon can't wait with this suspense...

hi nice update dear. i think now roli is know that sid was right that she is in trouble. i think sid will come for her rescue. waiting for next update

mind blowing updates di...
what is gonna happen??bleeding book- bad omen 😲
nw sid should rush to save his soul mate. hope the one who ring the door bell is nt the person in white T shirt 😕
nd i loved it when roli ask abt herself to bhatia 😉 looks funny nd also roli describing abt the persons who r following them especially when she told abt sid 😃
in first part, JD was calling from Pakistan border... so does this mean that they belong to army or something 😕 weird guess right 😉 no i can't guess more...so better u give the next update asap before i guess something rubbish :P to be honest, now u r taking a looong time in giving updates...its too bad ;)

Originally posted by: sowmya567

super..update..what will happen now...what all happening to Sid really confused😕...waiting to know what and how he will save Roli...what is the danger for her...
i can't even guess...now her papa also in tension he closed all doors...what is happening...who came plz...next updates soon can't wait with this suspense...

Originally posted by: rishi_rosid

hi nice update dear. i think now roli is know that sid was right that she is in trouble. i think sid will come for her rescue. waiting for next update

Originally posted by: greshin

mind blowing updates di...
what is gonna happen??bleeding book- bad omen 😲
nw sid should rush to save his soul mate. hope the one who ring the door bell is nt the person in white T shirt 😕
nd i loved it when roli ask abt herself to bhatia 😉 looks funny nd also roli describing abt the persons who r following them especially when she told abt sid 😃
in first part, JD was calling from Pakistan border... so does this mean that they belong to army or something 😕 weird guess right 😉 no i can't guess more...so better u give the next update asap before i guess something rubbish :P to be honest, now u r taking a looong time in giving updates...its too bad ;)

THE PROPHECY - PART 8

By Archana Vinod

BHATIA'S APARTMENT - NIGHT

There is unbelievable fear and panic in Bhatia's eyes.

Her father's fear instills a feeling of dread in her. Something is seriously wrong.

ROLI: Papa. Wha"

BHATIA: (cuts her off in a whisper) Shh. You stay in here.

ROLI: (in a low voice) But why?

BHATIA: Just do as I say. And no matter what happens... whatever happens... don't come out. And don't even make a single sound.

ROLI: What? Stop it Papa! Why are you talking like this?

But Bhatia doesn't hang around to respond. He locks her in the room against her wish and proceeds to the main entrance. With a pounding head, he peeps through the lens with the gun held behind him.

A tiny, frail man stands outside the door.

Bhatia opens the door ajar with an unwelcome expression all over his face.

BHATIA: (rudely) What is it?

FRAIL MAN: Ji sir, I heard that your faucet was damaged. So I came to fix it. I'm a plumber.

BHATIA: You heard it wrong. (closes the door, almost...)

FRAIL MAN: (stops him from closing the door) No-no. I got the call from here only. Your faucet is damaged.

BHATIA: I said no. Now please leave.

FRAIL MAN: At least check with the others.

BHATIA: (irritated) What the f**k! I live here. Do you think that I'm a fool?

FRAIL MAN: Sir, why are you getting angry? I came here cause I was asked to.

BHATIA: (blasts at him) Who asked you to?

FRAIL MAN: Abhey oye! No need to get so worked up! If you don't want to get it repaired, it's your problem. Not mine!

BHATIA: (gnashes his teeth in anger) What do you want? You want to repair my faucet? Huh? Idiot! For your kind information, I can repair it myself! Understand? Now get lost!

Bhatia prepares to SLAM the door shut, but---

BLAMM!!!

The door is kicked open with such savage force that Bhatia is thrown off his feet.

He falls flat to the ground!

Three men in white T-shirts move in with silenced guns, shutting the entrance door behind them as they do.

MEANWHILE, INSIDE THE ROOM

Roli is perturbed to hear unusual thuds and knocks in the living room. She peeps through the key hole to get a glimpse of what's happening.

IN THE LIVING ROOM

Bhatia is horrified to see the "men in white" in his apartment. He rolls over to pick up his gun but one of the men kicks it out of reach and stamps his arm in place.

Bhatia squirms in pain and tries to pry it loose.

But he is simply held in place with a strong leg on his chest. He is too old to fight the men around him.

MAN #1: (points the gun at Bhatia's face) Where's the girl?

Bhatia doesn't respond.

MAN #1: (firmly) Where's the girl?

BHATIA: (breathless) Which girl?

MAN #1: (stamps on his arm harder) Wrong answer. Try again.

BHATIA: (cries in pain) Alright. I'll tell you.

MAN #1: Go on.

BHATIA: She--- she's here only...

MAN #1: Where? In the room?

BHATIA: (smirks) No--- up your ass.

Pissed off, Man #1 prepares to shoot Bhatia. But he grapples the man around his legs and TUGS hard.

The man loses his balance and TOPPLES to the ground. His head gets SMASHED against the wall.

Bhatia scampers away to his gun. But"

POP!!!

A bullet enters his flesh effortlessly and quietly. Bhatia collapses to his knees, overwhelmed with the blinding pain of the injury.

He is kicked down to the ground and turned around.

Man #2 holds down Bhatia with a firm leg on his chest.

MAN #2: (to Man #3) Scour the place. Find the girl. (to Bhatia) Join your friends in hell.

POP! POP! POP!

Man # 2 empties the trigger into Bhatia's chest.

IN THE ROOM

The horrifying scene is witnessed by Roli live.

ROLI: (muffles her own whimpers) No--- Papa--- No---

Her vision blurs as tears brim and spill over her eyes.

Through the key hole, she can see Bhatia sprawled over the floor with multiple bullet wounds to his chest and back. He gags and coughs up blood before he chokes to death.

Roli hangs her head and sobs quietly behind the door. She can't believe that this is happening! Never has she felt so helpless! She covers her mouth to muffle up her tortured sobs.

Suddenly, the door's knob TURNS.

Roli freezes over.

The man outside PUSHES at the door but it doesn't budge.

She can hear a voice outside say: "this one's locked!" and the response... "open it up!"

A soft scratching sound alarms her.

She peeps into the keyhole and is horrified to see a pin picking on the lock. Roli scurries away and stands in a corner of the room in utter terror. She has no clue what to do... where to go...

She opens the door to the balcony and looks out.

A strong gust of wind hits her hard in the face and amplifies her fear.

It's a long way down. Five floors! There's no way she can make it down without breaking her leg! Or worse... breaking her head.

The door knob turns and the scratching continues...

She looks back helplessly.

An obvious click from the door startles her! They have managed to pick on the lock.

Hey Matarani, save me! Show me a way out of this!

... TO BE CONTINUED

Now...I guess sid should be here...come on yaar...

Originally posted by: magicalrosid

Now...I guess sid should be here...come on yaar...