RoSid FF - THE PROPHECY by Archana Vinod - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
sorry for late reply... just now read all updates..really from long back.want to read you're updates..but no time busy with schedule...because i need time to read and understand you're updates...i can't understand so easily...😊 i am really confused...i read all updates three times to understand but still i am confused.now ...so many questions...

y Roli is called Poonam Bhatia what is the connection...when Roli father is with her then who is J.D y he is caring for Roli...he called Kaushik and told Roli in danger...where is he...he is concern for her...uff so many questions...but no answers...dear...waiting for next updates...at-least then i may understand what all happenings...

is what all r happening Sid life is already written in that novel...when he showed to Roli that book is the content changed...y he is irritated...

only what i understood is Roli life is in danger Sid will save her...πŸ˜›

Archana dear plz..help me...plz update next updates...
really you're crazy girl..with crazy ideas...no one can even guess what you're thoughts can be what next twist can be...no guesses... while reading this is my expression...😲..really what Parsana said is correct...you're every FF..is different...with new concept...now i am trying to understand you hope i will understand soon...really i became crazy when i am can't even even
understand you're FF..what will understand about you and thoughts...πŸ˜›

one word can saw you're writing style is different...super...amazing...while reading i felt i am reading novel...which takes us to another world...love you're all updates..from you i learned i should start thinking different...same like you...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

Archana you know while writing this comment i took 20 minutes yaar...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†





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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sowmya567

sorry for late reply... just now read all updates..really from long back.want to read you're updates..but no time busy with schedule...because i need time to read and understand you're updates...i can't understand so easily...😊 i am really confused...i read all updates three times to understand but still i am confused.now ...so many questions...

y Roli is called Poonam Bhatia what is the connection...when Roli father is with her then who is J.D y he is caring for Roli...he called Kaushik and told Roli in danger...where is he...he is concern for her...uff so many questions...but no answers...dear...waiting for next updates...at-least then i may understand what all happenings...

is what all r happening Sid life is already written in that novel...when he showed to Roli that book is the content changed...y he is irritated...

only what i understood is Roli life is in danger Sid will save her...πŸ˜›

Archana dear plz..help me...plz update next updates...
really you're crazy girl..with crazy ideas...no one can even guess what you're thoughts can be what next twist can be...no guesses... while reading this is my expression...😲..really what Parsana said is correct...you're every FF..is different...with new concept...now i am trying to understand you hope i will understand soon...really i became crazy when i am can't even even
understand you're FF..what will understand about you and thoughts...πŸ˜›

one word can saw you're writing style is different...super...amazing...while reading i felt i am reading novel...which takes us to another world...love you're all updates..from you i learned i should start thinking different...same like you...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

Archana you know while writing this comment i took 20 minutes yaar...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†







πŸ˜†Hahaha! Thank you dear, I'm so flattered. Seriously.

Lot of questions to which answers will be revealed over the coming updates.

Why Roli is called as Poonam Bhatia
What's the connection between J.D. aka Jamanlal Dwivedi and Roli
What's the connection between Siddhant Bhatia and Roli?
The book... what is it... where is it from...
Who is Kaushik and Bhatia...

All these are going to be answered starting next update onwards. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod



πŸ˜†Hahaha! Thank you dear, I'm so flattered. Seriously.

Lot of questions to which answers will be revealed over the coming updates.

Why Roli is called as Poonam Bhatia
What's the connection between J.D. aka Jamanlal Dwivedi and Roli
What's the connection between Siddhant Bhatia and Roli?
The book... what is it... where is it from...
Who is Kaushik and Bhatia...

All these are going to be answered starting next update onwards. πŸ˜‰



plz.Archana..fast can't wait..with this suspense...more updates...dear...

for me another FF..pending..RENDEZVOUS..don't no when i will complete...and exited to read what suspense i will get their...πŸ˜‰ don't no how many times i have to read that SS...πŸ˜› to understand...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

THE PROPHECY - PART 6

By Archana Vinod

Siddhant is dumbfounded to see the man right in front of him!

He reaches into his pocket, pulls out an I.D. card and flashes it before Siddhant's eyes. Siddhant's eyes go as wide as gooseberries as he reads the card:

MUMBAI POLICE DEPARTMENT

BALRAM SINGH

SR. POLICE INSPECTOR

BALRAM: Police.

Siddhant has an "oh shit" expression written all over his face.

Balram spots The Prophecy in Siddhant's hand. He gestures to hand it over to him, but Siddhant hesitates.

BALRAM: (firmly) The book.

Unwillingly, Siddhant hands it over. He secretly wishes that the book is blank.

Balram turns the pages and throws suspicious glances at Siddhant. All the while, he keeps chewing on that disgusting paan masala.

Siddhant winces as the man spits out a jet of red juice flat onto the ground. Eeeyuck! Siddhant has an irresistible urge to turn around and run away from this filthy bugger but he does a good job of controlling himself.

BALRAM: (goes through the book) What's your name?

SIDDHANT: Ji. Siddhant, sir.

BALRAM: Siddhant what?

SIDDHANT: Siddhant Bharadwaj.

BALRAM: (doesn't even look at him) From?

SIDDHANT: Delhi.

BALRAM: Then what are you doing here?

SIDDHANT: Working.

BALRAM: Where?

SIDDHANT: Infosys.

BALRAM: As?

Why is this fellow questioning me like a criminal, wonders Siddhant nervously. I hope he doesn't have any funny ideas.

SIDDHANT: Project Manager - J2EE

BALRAM: Keep it simple. No flashy titles.

SIDDHANT: Yes sir.

BALRAM: (shuts the book and looks up at Sid) Project Manager. Infosys. Good job. Good company. So why do you behave like a tramp?

SIDDHANT: (confused) Sir---

BALRAM: Why were you following that girl?

SIDDHANT: Sir---

BALRAM: I can arrest you and put you behind bars for stalking and compromising the modesty of a woman.

SIDDHANT: (panics) No sir, it's not like that ---

BALRAM: Then? What's the day today?

SIDDHANT: Tuesday.

BALRAM: Then why aren't you at work? Why are you roaming around?

SIDDHANT: Actually I'm on leave for a couple of days.

BALRAM: So this is your agenda. Taking leave and stalking females.

SIDDHANT: No sir. No---

BALRAM: Come and meet me at the station. You'll get your book there.

Balram begins to leave but Sid stops him.

SIDDHANT: (panics) But sir, it's just a book. And that's not even mine! I got it from the library. I'm supposed to return it.

BALRAM: (ignores him and gets on to his bike to leave) Meet me at the station. Chapter closed.

Balram leaves a frustrated Siddhant behind.

SIDDHANT'S APARTMENT - EVENING

The sun has set behind the horizon long back.

A dejected Siddhant walks into his apartment and slumps onto his couch.

What am I going to tell the librarian, he wonders as he kicks off his shoes, leans onto the couch and puts his legs onto the teapoy, maybe I can try and extend the return date. But he'd need the book for that. But what I can't figure out is what happened at the coffee shop today. Why's that I saw all that astrological stuff in that all these days and all of a sudden everything gets wiped out? I'm dead sure I read that. I did read it. Or did I?

Siddhant is super confused. He even begins to doubt his sanity. Maybe being in the I.T. field has finally taken its toll on my brain. It's a good thing that I signed off for a couple of days. Very much required.

A fluttering followed by a THUD comes from the other room.

What was that?

He gets up, quickly heads to the other bedroom and finds a thick book with a chocolate leather jacket face down on the floor. What the--- can't be---

Siddhant picks it up. The golden title of the book sends a chill down his spine - The Prophecy.

He picks it up and browses through. His eyes are stirring with disbelief. The contents of the book are no longer the novel he saw at the coffee shop, but the pin point accurate descriptions of his entire life.

He glances around. Where the hell did this come from? How? From where?

The windows are shut tight, then where did it come from? He opens the window and looks out. Nothing suspicious. No one in sight. He looks under the bed. What if someone is hiding? He checks out the wardrobes, the kitchen, the bathroom... no one in sight. Then where the hell did this come from? From thin air? Or is someone playing a dirty joke?

Siddhant is very confused. I clearly remember being confronted by that police guy Balram. I'm dead sure that he even seized this book. Then how the hell did it get here? I'm definitely not crazy. Or am I?

... TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
i felt like i am watching some horror movie...with full of suspenses...waiting when this suspense will end when i will get clarity...πŸ˜›
Edited by sowmya567 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
I got one point clearly, wherever sid goes that book wont leave him & keep on following like a shadow because, Many Christians
believe that the gift of prophecy is the
supernatural ability to receive and
convey a message from God. The
purpose of the message may be to
"edify, exhort and comfort" the
members of the Church. In this
context, not all prophecies contain
predictions about the future... But this book must be their save our rosid... Awesome update di... Waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
wow awesome update Archana really getting interesting and I love the suspense.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
This is such an interesting concept Archana.. Really looking forward to reading this ff now that I am free.. 😊
Edited by Arzoo-Khan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
u r a unique writer with innovative thoughts the story is tooo gud and my curiousity level is now at the peak eagerly waiting for ur updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sowmya567

i felt like i am watching some horror movie...with full of suspenses...waiting when this suspense will end when i will get clarity...πŸ˜›


Thank you dear πŸ˜ƒ Very soon, slowly but surely πŸ˜‰

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