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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vidyasuresh

Really soper updates dear bt pls continue soon



yes will do so 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sheetal1979

Beautiful update cute nok jhok waali Rosid, loved it 😳 hehe funny sujata 😆 very nice part. Cant wait for the next part.



thanks sheetal will update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: suju.

woww superb start shri..👏👏👏 like it so much.



thanks suju 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: rosid

superb update i like sujata like this and prem & roli bond is very nice i love it update urnext part soon thanx for ur pm



thanks ezhil 😃 i also love new prem n roli's bond in these episodes of ssk 😳 hope to see more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sita_rama

nice update . I loved it . Thanks for the pm



thanks sita rama 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Nisha.

finally i read it sri
wonderful wonderful update again cute rosid love it so much
plz soon update next part i am waiting




thanks nisha jii 😃 i ll try my best to update soon but dont know when that soon will come 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: HemaG

pls continue soon...



trying my best to do so 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: hangok

ohhh myyy god dear , this is awesome ..

im really proud of you 👏👏👏
you have really became a good writer, the beginning of this story was perfect, you have wrote it well...


im sorry that i comment late😔 but my sis came to visit us...

oww this is excited pleasee try to continue soon, thanks for pm



ohoo no problem bennu sis ur lil sis still loves u and thanks for the appreciation ur appreciation encourages me to write more 😃

hehe will continue soon 😳 as soon as possible n PM u n force u to read again 😉 n comment also whether u get irritated or not i wont mind i l still make u read 😆 😉 hahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Part 2

Roli comes back to vrindavan

Jamna lal was not angry from her she was a bit shocked to see every one's behaviour and meena didn't even asked for her marriage ...

Roli called simar

Roli : hello didi what u said to papa u know he didn't asked me to meet the guy nor mummy taunted me for marriage

Simar : nothing , but listen roli we all are coming to vrindavan to visit baanke bihari's temple

Roli ; what why not our home , why in temple

Simar : for some pooja and mata ji and maa wants u to wear a saree

Roli : what saree !! really didi why mata ji and maa ji has asked

Simar : don't know but u please get ready nicely and come

Roli : i m feeling something really weird going today are u guys planning something then tell me now

Simar : no , nothing just a pooja and not only mata ji and maa even anjali wants her maasi to wear saree

Roli : ok i will wear it bye now i have to select saree to i don't have any saree u know

Simar : hmm bye

Bharadwaj house

Every one sitting in hall sid comes

Sid : maa i m going to meet one friend

Sujata : no

Sid : why

Mata ji : we have to leave for vrindavan

Sid : what vrindavan , but why

Prem : there is a pooja in some temple have to get ready u have to come with us

Sid : ok i will get ready but suddenly

Prem : u don't think so much just get ready

Sid goes

Sujata : thank god mata ji sid didn't questioned that much

Mata ji ok now we should get ready to leave for vrindavan

Every one leaves for vrindavan

In car prem driving uma , pari , prem , simar and siddhant in one car

Pari : today siddhant is looking too handsome roli will not be able to say no i m sure she will be mesmerized when she will see siddhant (sid was in his normal check shirt )

Sid : what roli , why u said so why roli will get mesmerized

Pari : nothing siddhant I was just saying like that

Sid : just like that ?? prem stop the car !!

Prem : why sidddhant

Siddhant : i said stop the car

Prem stops the car and mata ji's car also stops sid gets out of the car and every one comes out

Mata ji : what happened siddhant why u guys stopped the car

Sid : if u all won't tell me the truth i won't go with u all i ll go back to home

Sujata : what truth

Sid : maa don't try to hide things, your eyes are saying that u r lying , what truth u r hiding from me what is cooking in between u all

Prem : nothing

Sid : nothing , prem tell me

Sujata : i will tell u and she tells everything to sid

Sid : what marriage with roli no never not ,not even in my dreams but he saw simar and then he says i mean i never saw roli like that she is just simar's sister and prem's saali for me nothing else i m going back home i can't take this thing

Sujata : sid tujhe meri kasam (on my honour) u won't leave

Sid : what maa stop blackmailing me emotionally

Mausi ji : haan samajhne waali baat hai who asked u too marry now , u just meet roli and try to understand her for once

Sid : what

Mausi ji : forcefully pushes him in car

Sid : mausi ji

And mausi ji sits beside sid and on another side sujata and in between sid was sitting in anger

they reached temple ...

Diwedi family also reaches temple

Mata ji : simar jamana lal ji didn't came till now

Simar saw jamna lal an meena ji coming towards them

Simar : mata ji maa papa has arrived

Sujata : i can't see roli where is she

Jamana lal : radhe radhe mata ji

Mata ji : radhe radhe

Sujata : jamna lal jii where is roli

Jamna lal she will come actually

Flashback
roli got ready but a call came she received it was her friend rohini

And she cut call and asked jamna lal that her friend needs her she has to leave

Jamna lal : roli u know na bharadwaj family is coming u can't go anywhere

Roli : papa its urgent she needs me i promise i ll come before pooja starts

Jamna lal : ok

Flashback ends

Sid thinking oh yes roli escaped again thank u thank u thank uuu god now roli won't come and this marriage will get cancel... yes , but i should thank roli first all this will be canceled due to her planning after all i will call her and thank ...

Sujata : what happened sid don't worry roli will come

Sid (with a fake smile) : yes maa i know she will come on time and in mind he is thinking sorry maa i came here due to u but roli escaped now she won't come anytime soon , i m proud of u roli , sid beta why r u being proud on her , anyways lets see how much they will wait

Prem : siddhant , (siddhant didn't listened he was lost in his own thoughts prem hits him on his shoulders ) siddhant where r u lost

Sid : no where

Prem : pooja has just started roli will be reaching anytime soon get ready we will see a girl for u that too my saali and he winks

Sid : yes (with a fake smile)

Pooja ended but roli didn't came

Mata ji : since after noon we r waiting for roli don't know where is she , i hope she is fine , prem call roli

Prem : mata ji i called her but her phone is switched off

Listening to it sid smiled and was thinking that roli won't come

Sid : maa its too late i guess we should return

Jamna lal : sorry mata ji

Mata ji : don't worry jamna lal ji no problem we will meet roli some other day

Sujata was sad

Jamna lal : mata ji its not good to travel so late i guess u should stay at our house in night and due to this stay u will be able to meet roli too

Sid : yes we should stay at night

Prem thinking why is sid behaving so weird why suddenly he is so happy

Mata ji : but

Sujata : mata ji we should stay and we will meet roli too and its too late also we should not travel this late

Mata ji : ok we will stay at diwedi house at night

Now let's leave

Everyone was going prem comes near sid and whispers

Prem : why r u looking so much smiling , any problem

Siddhant : Bro i guess u forgot your mind before getting maa delivered u

Prem : what why

Siddhant : yes , when a person smiles that means they r happy not in problems understood and same with me that's why i m looking so happy

Prem : really what happiness share with me too , we r meeting roli also i thought u will be in anger but weird i guess u have gone in depression thinking about marrying roli (laughs)

Siddhant : shut up if i will tel u wont laugh as i will be laughing then u didn't took my sad and hided all this plan from me now ill laugh and u will be sad

Prem : really why oh one minute one minute i guess for taking revenge from ur bro u will escape with roli this time

Sid : this won't happen dude

Prem : why

Sid : because teri saali bhaag gayi (ur saali escaped again)

Prem : what are u serious (prem's smile disappeared)

Sid : where is your smile bro

presid were talking and were going towards stairs

When some ones comes running and accidently bump into sid and was about to fall when sid holds her with one hand she was about to fall from stairs both were at the edge of the stairswhen sid holds her, her hairs overcastting her face and her hands in one hand of sid's she was wearing a beautiful white saree long statement earrings just sid was not able to see her face ... he was trying but he can't her hands full off white and silver bangles

Girl : pull me up , where r u lost i will fall

Sid : i have heard this voice somewhere and he pulls her up

girl removes her hair which were coming on her face but she saw down suddenly to hold her anchal and correct her saree's pleats properly sid still can't see her face , he was trying too see her face but couldn't as the girl was busy in tackling her saree due to which she was about to fall , sid was trying he was little bit mesmerized suddenly girls sees towards him and sid can't believe, it was roli he was in shock that how come she is here as he thought she escaped ...

roli saw towards sid ,

roli : why r u staring me like this (sid was silent and was staring her in shock his mouth was open) "close your mouth" and roli goes sid turned and he was still shocked

mata ji : roli why u got so late we all were getting tensed and your phone was also switched off

roli : mata ji i was not getting any taxi and when i got it got puncher at end moment that's why and my phone's battery was dead i m sorry ,

sujata : oh k no problem , siddhant see roli came

prem pats sid's shoulder

prem : sid close your mouth hehe our PT Usha has arrived

sid : PT Usha who

prem : uff i by PT Usha i meant roli

sid : but why u called her PT Usha

prem : sidhant is roli looking too beautiful

sid : yes ... i i i mean she is ok types but why u asked

prem : i thought u lost our your brain cells after seeing roli in saree

sid : what shut up don't speak so much let us return home ill se u there have to take revenge of many things

prem : ok lets see who will take revenge and who will thank but now

let's go maa is calling

sid : hmm ok go i m coming sid walks slowly roli takes anjali from simar and kisses her sid was walking but unknowingly got lost in her she was looking too beautiful sid was unknowingly smiling looking at her her small small things made him feel that he is heaven ...

prem : sid where r u lost come fast

sid : what roli

prem laughs from now only roli

sid : prem i ll beat u

prem : ok ok sid now i wont say anything now whatever will happene maa wwill do that and laughs again

sujata : what happened prem why r u laughing

prem : maa nothing looks like sid's marriage will be fixed today only and laughs again

sid : shut up

roli : marriage really u all have come to see girl for siddhant ji , i mean u all met her na

sujata : yes we met her and we know her from many days

roli : oh really how is she ??

sujata : she is really beautiful , lovely and she and standing in front of me

roli sees at her back but where "maa ji"

sujata turns roli towards herself "here"

roli shocked what maa ji u r kidding na

sujata : no roli i m not joking its true i have chose u for sid

roli wan not even able utter a word was completely shocked sujata drags her and make her stands beside sid and meanwhile come in the real world

sujata : they look so perfect together (rosid sees towards each other in anger)

prem : i guess we should go home and let sid and roli talk in alone they will come together afterwards

mata Ji ; yes

sid : but

prem : sid u both take your time

sid : prem u wait i will not leave u

prem winks and goes with all family members

roli and sid walks towards the parapet inside temple and both sat there and were silent

sid and roli speaks together u and then both turns on opposite direction in angers

sid : we can't remain silent for long have to talk

roli : what to talk

sid : why u didn't escaped this time u want this marriage to happen or u have fallen for my charm

roli : really charm my foot u look like a cartoon if i knew about all this i must have escaped from my friends house

sid : what u didn't knew all this thing

roli : no but u knew then why u didn't escaped , u have changed your mind u want to marry me and who knows u was staring me also

sid : what who will stare u can't even handle a saree

roli : i don't want to talk to u

sid : same here

and they both turns in opposite direction again

sid turns towards roli

sid : ok u say no for marriage

roli : i can't because proposals came from your house its simar didi's sasural u say no

sid : i can't i have promised to maa that i won't say no for marrying you , and why r u thinking about simar she will be fine no one will say anything to her ...

roli : siddhant ji i still can't say no u didn't saw maa ji she was so happy

sid : i know she was but what we can do know

roli : this time u escape

sid : what ?? roli this escaping work suits on u not on me i m business man

roli : than leave all this and lets marry

sid : what r u serious

roli : yes and we don't have any other way too

sid : hmm we should go home and at least think for we have whole night to tell our decision

roli : ok

both were walking when roli's pleats comes under her sandals and she was about to fall when sid holds her and roli's anchal comes on sid's face sid removes it roli still in his arms and he got lost in her big beautiful mesmerizing eyes and roli lost in his dreamy eyes ...

will roli and siddhant agree for marriage or they have some other plans catch in my next update 😃

to be continued

(precap : sid and roli in Sikkim)

Edited by wamavasant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooow I likee it a lot, cant wait for next.

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