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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Linda25
what happened to our meera ji ???

Meters ji ka bubble burst hogaya. Saras exchanged the dulha n nobody noticed😆 N when she finds out she again tried suicide n this time police has come to enquire n Danny goes n tells police that he is the pati.

All shocked n look at Saras but Saras says he is going to police station as his bro needs him n he will come back to explain but Kummi looks MAD!!

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indrani_chaudh

@indrani_chaudh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

such a beautiful OS omshreejanu! :) the plots come to you so fluidly and hats off to your writing style!! :) its a pleasure visiting this forum only to read such pieces...the show is more of a TRP-driven farce now...these figments of our imagination shows wat had got us hooked to this show initially

since the aesthetic content in the show has become very very sparse...its great to catch it in the fan literature instead 😊 thanks for these rare pieces of delight 😊😊😊

wish the CVs could be half as creative as you...wat a farcical track to ruin such a poignant love story😭 kusum...instead of repenting and moving on(like in your story) decided to commit suicide as the final blow she could fling on samud🤢 wat a character...gawd!!😭

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Orchid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Meters ji ka bubble burst hogaya. Saras exchanged the dulha n nobody noticed😆 N when she finds out she again tried suicide n this time police has come to enquire n Danny goes n tells police that he is the pati.
All shocked n look at Saras but Saras says he is going to police station as his bro needs him n he will come back to explain but Kummi looks MAD!!

Thanks 😃but kuumi di mad at saras ,though expected but wont she realize her mistake ? i am mad to see it , seems kummi di wont ractify her mistake so soon 🥱

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: indrani_chaudh
such a beautiful OS omshreejanu! :) the plots come to you so fluidly and hats off to your writing style!! :) its a pleasure visiting this forum only to read such pieces...the show is more of a TRP-driven farce now...these figments of our imagination shows wat had got us hooked to this show initially
since the aesthetic content in the show has become very very sparse...its great to catch it in the fan literature instead 😊 thanks for these rare pieces of delight 😊😊😊

wish the CVs could be half as creative as you...wat a farcical track to ruin such a poignant love story😭 kusum...instead of repenting and moving on(like in your story) decided to commit suicide as the final blow she could fling on samud🤢 wat a character...gawd!!😭

Thanks my friend. It means a lot. I have written after a very long time , felt a bit rusted too but happy u guys like it.😃

Oh yes I think the CVs are very good in drama unlike us who like less complications n more love scenes.😳

Kusum will b a big pain in SaMud life as from now n Danny too will not b spared. This is a lesson to parents who pamper their children that much that they turn unreasonable n start asking for the moon.

Saras is no moon nor a toy that she will demand n everybody will bow down to fulfill her wishes.

I am happy Saras has refused.

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