Repentance!! - Page 2

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

I think it is the only way Kumud can be redeemed. In Saraswatijal saved in extremist by Saraswatichandra!!😳

Thank u buddy for ur appreciation. U r being too kind.😳

Originally posted by: dazzzling

OMG!! I am dead. You gave wrote a one shot finally after so long. Thank u thank u thank u Jaanu meri Jaan.

You have no idea how good I am feeling after reading this. I badly needed something to hang on till Monday. Hope we get to see done thing like this soon.

Me too I am stuck in the Saraswatijal track. I want Kumud to go and wash her paap there and come back home in Saras' arms while Pramad is left gasping for air and coughing non stop.

Awesome write up.

You are one mutil talented gal I must say.

Originally posted by: dazzzling

OMG!! I am dead. You gave wrote a one shot finally after so long. Thank u thank u thank u Jaanu meri Jaan.

You have no idea how good I am feeling after reading this. I badly needed something to hang on till Monday. Hope we get to see done thing like this soon.

Me too I am stuck in the Saraswatijal track. I want Kumud to go and wash her paap there and come back home in Saras' arms while Pramad is left gasping for air and coughing non stop.

Awesome write up.

You are one mutil talented gal I must say.

Originally posted by: Mrieshka

May be water romance in saraswati jal and saraswati ma ka ashirvad. That would be interesting.

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

U r too funny Dazz especially the Kumud in Saras arm waala scene n Pramad gasping for air n coughing in the back ground😆

That would be awesome. I bet after the patch up first thing Kumud Sundari will do is tell Pramad to go n cure himself n she will wait for him to sign the divorce paper.😛

Yes after more crying n cajoling from Saras this is the Least thing she can do. Dump the zinmedaari who is not at all zimedaar and move on with the man who had always been the most zimedaar in her life and has stood by her through thick and thin, then I will be at peace.

Osm dr...!! Wish to see this in reality...

Jaanu !

Superb writing ! 🤗


Saras should go away. and Kumud should be left repentant ! Your post is superb food for thought and imagination on what can come next!

But meri ek aur iccha hai, yaar! I want Saras to give her a piece of his mind, before he goes. In the last many episodes, how many times has she begged him to stay with her, to not leave her and go, and how she cant live without him! etc. And then at the first available opportunity, she sacrificed him, his life ! He needs to TELL her that !

Love your writing! 😊

it is beautiful indeed omi :)


so gautam ji does know he is our besan ka ladoo and kumuds methi ka ladoo ...does he really read us ??...or he was told by our nikki

Originally posted by: -sudha-

Jaanu !

Superb writing ! 🤗


Saras should go away. and Kumud should be left repentant ! Your post is superb food for thought and imagination on what can come next!

But meri ek aur iccha hai, yaar! I want Saras to give her a piece of his mind, before he goes. In the last many episodes, how many times has she begged him to stay with her, to not leave her and go, and how she cant live without him! etc. And then at the first available opportunity, she sacrificed him, his life ! He needs to TELL her that !

Love your writing! 😊

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

it is beautiful indeed omi :)


so gautam ji does know he is our besan ka ladoo and kumuds methi ka ladoo ...does he really read us ??...or he was told by our nikki