Aisa kyon hua - Saras ki manodasha - Page 3

Originally posted by: veera25

pure bliss, Toni! You and Arshi should work on poems about Saras and Kumud together! Beautiful! 👏

Originally posted by: hotdogg

arshi & BNK..

lovely stuff this...

..both your poems provide the much needed redemption & eventual salvation to saras & kumud jiske woh poore haqdaar hai ...

...both desperately need to wash away their bitterness in order to rediscover the immutable truth that they belong only to each other...and that they can't let a small thing like life get in their way!

..Wish both gautam and jennifer could read these...I am sure if they internalize these, it would help them define their characters even better (in addition to the fab job they are already doing)...

Originally posted by: arshicritic

Thank you hgg, and it is actually a reversal of our feelings, Toni is a staunch Saras supporter, and I was team Kumud!

Aaj hamne team badal ki hai

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

Duukh jo gussa baan gaya ----> kumud

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...
Tere khud ki andhere ne tujhe itne badad de

Tune meri ujalame meri saath nahi di !!!!

Har ak hasi meri kyun asu me badal de ???



Andhere me thik hoon main andhere me thik hoon

Apne tute dil haat pe lake bathi hoon

Ana tab HI jab duniya se ladne ki himaat hoon ...

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Originally posted by: lakhy

Arshi...👏 and Tony 👏

I could only contribute this to the post...

Loved it...Wish to see more...

Originally posted by: veera25

@ Arshi and Toni!

extra Fabulous work for switching roles... itna achaa kaam role-reversal style, for even studious purposes, maine seriously aaj tak nahin dekha 🤗

Originally posted by: happychappy

@Toni, I never thought ye din bhi dekhne ko milega, aap ke haath se Kumud ke naam kavita?...

😲 😲

😆

Edit- was so shocked earlier, forgot to say that the kavita ws real good, in fact, khoob bhalo legechilo...

Originally posted by: arshicritic

Ya a great kavita from Toni! Happychappy tumi o bangali?