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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: happychappy


No, arshi...I'm a mallu, amar swami bangali!




🤣 🤣 OMG u r so cute 🤣 ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: arshicritic


I know what a beautiful and fitting reply to Saras, and also fantastic lasting thought of the poem!

But, woh bhi baithi nahin, kuch der aur intezaar kar leti, thoda our bharosa ...



baithi he to arshi ...is not she yet sitting sulking with that white chunni in her lap...crying at her dejection... is she not she sitting in darkness , the life has gifted her ...still waiting somewhere with a hope in some hidden corner of heart...

yes she seem to have gave in to the flow of time for her family and people around but inside she is still sitting with her broken heart in darkness waiting for him to be strong enough to come and sweep her away ...save her from life long sorrow they together inflicted on each other

My heart goes for saras kumud...i am in love with their love story...with every day it seems to grow...just one song comes in mind this time


Mujhe teri mohabbat ka sahara mil gaya hota
Agar tufan nahi aata, kinara mil gaya hota

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: shana0127



baithi he to arshi ...is not she yet sitting sulking with that white chunni in her lap...crying at her dejection... is she not she sitting in darkness , the life has gifted her ...still waiting somewhere with a hope in some hidden corner of heart...

yes she seem to have gave in to the flow of time for her family and people around but inside she is still sitting with her broken heart in darkness waiting for him to be strong enough to come and sweep her away ...save her from life long sorrow they together inflicted on each other

My heart goes for saras kumud...i am in love with their love story...with every day it seems to grow...just one song comes in mind this time


Mujhe teri mohabbat ka sahara mil gaya hota
Agar tufan nahi aata, kinara mil gaya hota



You have brought out Kumud's manodasha so beautifully Shana, read her mind and her heart perfectly.

I am pasting here an extract from hotdogg's post. It explains the chain of events so well, helped me to put into perspective the entire chain of events.

I tend to believe that in last weeks episodes, gumaan's master-stroke was like a close range emotional shot-gun blast for everyone involved...and everyone's instinctive reaction was simply emotional survival, with their minds shutting off their rational parts and simply trying to survive by ending the emotional pain as quickly as possible through their actions / decisions...now the rational parts are slowly awakening and taking back control, but it is too late...unfortunately for all involved, the emotional pain did not go away, but actually turned into a lingering, festering wound..

Credit : hotdogg

An analysis that explains so much, so clearly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
I wrote a few lnes of poem of what Saras may be thinking in his unconcious state
Har zara kar raha tha thujko besabri se yaad
Behoshi ke alam mein bhi lab pe tha sirf thumara naam
Hum tho aye the tumhe manane
Jo mere apnone diye zakhm zindagi bar unhe tumhe dikhane
Sochata maine ke kash ek din mujhe milegi kushi
Pahunga main tumhare pyar ke achal main sukun
Magar kismat ko tha kuch aur hi manzoor
Bichad gaye do pyaar karne wale bin kiye koi kasur
Abh rota hai mera dil yaad karke woh pal
Par umeed abhi bhi baki hai
hum milenge kabhi na kabhi zaroor
Agar dhatri pe na mil paye tho aasmanon mein hi sahi
Behoshi ke alam main bhi kartha hun main rab se dhua yahi
kartha hun main rab se dhua yahi
Edited by myviewprem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: myviewprem

I wrote a few lnes of poem of what Saras may be thinking in his unconcious state
Har zara kar raha tha thujko besabri se yaad
Behoshi ke alam mein bhi lab pe tha sirf thumara naam
Hum tho aye the tumhe manane
Jo mere apnone diye zakhm zindagi bar unhe tumhe dikhane
Sochata maine ke kash ek din mujhe milegi kushi
Pahunga main tumhare pyar ke achal main sukun
Magar kismat ko tha kuch aur hi manzoor
Bichad gaye do pyaar karne wale bin kiye koi kasur
Abh rota hai mera dil yaad karke woh pal
Par umeed abhi bhi baki hai
hum milenge kabhi na kabhi zaroor
Agar dhatri pe na mil paye tho aasmanon mein hi sahi
Behoshi ke alam main bhi kartha hun main rab se dhua yahi
kartha hun main rab se dhua yahi


Bahut bahut bahut sunder myviewprem!

Dear you have written a beautiful poem

You are really talented.

Here's a short verse in response to the end of your poem:


Dua karenge hum khuda se Saras aur Kumud ke liya

Pyaar unka rang laye, saath woh dono jiyen

Milan ho unka, rahain woh dono sang

Safed odhni main Kumud ki Saras bhar de rang!
Edited by arshicritic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bahut bahut bahut sunder myviewprem!

Dear you have written a beautiful poem

You are really talented.

Here's a short verse in response to the end of your poem:


Dua karenge hum khuda se Saras aur Kumud ke liya

Pyaar unka rang laye, saath woh dono jiyen

Milan ho unka, rahain woh dono sang

Safed odhni main Kumud ki Saras bhar de rang!
thanks a lot
your poem is also very nice and conveys SC feelings

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