Aisa kyon hua - Saras ki manodasha - Page 2

Originally posted by: Arshig8

Amazing poetry , I am really scared to watch Saras's reaction after he gain senses..woh keh the haina

Zindgi ka pahla pyar kaun bhulta hai

Ye pahli bar hota hai jab koi kisi ko

Khud se badhkar chahta hai,

Uski pasnd uski khwahish me khud ko bhul jata hai,

Hota hai itna khubsurt pehla pyar to na jane

Kyu aksar adhura reh jata hai'

I am feeling bad for kumud and Saras

Originally posted by: littles12

Omg great post! Loved ur favoring for Saras! Boy do I feel bad for him! But I feel like its just a matter of time when Saras realizes!

Just like how there is blood needed in every inch of our body Saras needs kumud with every step he takes in life

Just like bloods can be pumped into different directions but will meet sooner or later

Saras and kumud will be separated but there love is the one thing that keeps them bounded nd will bring them back

Plus blood needs a circulation system to run

And Saras needs kumud to run nd function!

It's all matter of time before he realizes!

Great post!

Originally posted by: arshicritic

Such beautiful lines, poignant and true.

They are so touching, your creation?

Originally posted by: Arshig8

No churaliya meri friend 😳se , I am not that creative

Originally posted by: arshicritic

Great analogy, littles12, very well said. Saras ki haalat when the reality hits him will be terrible!

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

Duukh jo gussa baan gaya ----> kumud

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Aisa kyun hota hai kisi ak ki baat sab se jayada chubta hai

Aisa kyun hota hai kisi ak ki na bolne se sari duniya rota hai

aisa kyun hota hai ki uski har nisani jalake baad bhi kuch chut ta hai

aisa kyun hota hai ki al- bida kahke bhi uski ahsaas har taraf hota hai

kyun !!!


Dil khole dekhaya tha tujhe , kabhi samjhe toh tune nahi

Apne pyaar pe na sahi mujpe pe varosa kyun nahi ?????

Teri naam se nahi kaam se nahi

Tujse pyaar kiya , per tujko meri asliyaat pe sharam aya !!



Ghaamad meri sringer hai gusaa meri taj

Sab ko chod ,teri liye kab tha ah raaj !!!


Tere khud ki andhere ne tujhe itne badad de

Tune meri ujalame meri saath nahi di !!!!

Har ak hasi meri kyun asu me badal de ???



Andhere me thik hoon main andhere me thik hoon

Apne tute dil haat pe lake bathi hoon

Ana tab HI jab duniya se ladne ki himaat hoon ...


kumud ji (😭 )

ps : i hate kumud ..i dont wanna feel what she felt ...but for the first time i m crying for her ...kyun ???


sorry for bangla wala hindi 😊

Originally posted by: dasan.divya

nice post dear

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

Duukh jo gussa baan gaya ----> kumud

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Aisa kyun hota hai kisi ak ki baat sab se jayada chubta hai

Aisa kyun hota hai kisi ak ki na bolne se sari duniya rota hai

aisa kyun hota hai ki uski har nisani jalake baad bhi kuch chut ta hai

aisa kyun hota hai ki al- bida kahke bhi uski ahsaas har taraf hota hai

kyun !!!


Dil khole dekhaya tha tujhe , kabhi samjhe toh tune nahi

Apne pyaar pe na sahi mujpe pe varosa kyun nahi ?????

Teri naam se nahi kaam se nahi

Tujse pyaar kiya , per tujko meri asliyaat pe sharam aya !!



Ghaamad meri sringer hai gusaa meri taj

Sab ko chod ,teri liye kab tha ah raaj !!!


Tere khud ki andhere ne tujhe itne badad de

Tune meri ujalame meri saath nahi di !!!!

Har ak hasi meri kyun asu me badal de ???



Andhere me thik hoon main andhere me thik hoon

Apne tute dil haat pe lake bathi hoon

Ana tab HI jab duniya se ladne ki himaat hoon ...


kumud ji (😭 )

ps : i hate kumud ..i dont wanna feel what she felt ...but for the first time i m crying for her ...kyun ???


sorry for bangla wala hindi 😊

arshi & BNK..

lovely stuff this...

..both your poems provide the much needed redemption & eventual salvation to saras & kumud jiske woh poore haqdaar hai ...

...both desperately need to wash away their bitterness in order to rediscover the immutable truth that they belong only to each other...and that they can't let a small thing like life get in their way!

..Wish both gautam and jennifer could read these...I am sure if they internalize these, it would help them define their characters even better (in addition to the fab job they are already doing)...