Aisa kyon hua - Saras ki manodasha

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kabhi kabhi waqt aise halaat deta hai bana

Ki sabse pyaara saathi ho jaata hai juda


Main bura nahi jaanta hai tera man

Phir bhi man liya mujhko tune dushman

Tu bhi bewafa nahi, jaanta hoon main

Par tham liya hai tune kisi aur ka daman


Doshi hoon tera, sada rahoonga

Toda hai dil tera, rulaya hai tujhko

Par tune bhi der na ki bhoolne main mujhe

Kuch ilzaam iska lena hoga tujhe


Begunah nahi, par zaalim bhi mat samajh mujhko

Tujhko rula ke, chain mujhe bhi nahi,

Tadapaya hai gar tujhko, to roya hoon khud bhi

Naye rishton ki kushiyon ke beech

Yaad tujhko kahin satati hogi meri bhi



Rishte nazuk hote hain

Unko na sambhalne ki hum dono ne ki khata

Dono ko hi mil rahi hai iss gunah ki sazaa



Dedicated to a special friend
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arshi, you brought me to tears!

How do you do it? 👏 Your writing gets a lot of 'dam' from its honesty.

Dont ever stop!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: happychappy

Arshi, you brought me to tears!


How do you do it? 👏 Your writing is gets a lot of 'dam' from its honesty.

Dont ever stop!



Thank you dear, just feeling bad for Saras and how helpless he must be feeling over this, one small chook, done without any intent, and all is lost
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Even that iota of hatred I had towards Saras has melted with this..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adiani

Even that iota of hatred I had towards Saras has melted with this..



Hmm, that was the idea, today he is more to be pitied than hated!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Duukh jo gussa baan gaya ----> kumud


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Aisa kyun hota hai kisi ak ki baat sab se jayada chubta hai

Aisa kyun hota hai kisi ak ki na bolne se sari duniya rota hai

aisa kyun hota hai ki uski har nisani jalake baad bhi kuch chut ta hai

aisa kyun hota hai ki al- bida kahke bhi uski ahsaas har taraf hota hai

kyun !!!


Dil khole dekhaya tha tujhe , kabhi samjhe toh tune nahi

Apne pyaar pe na sahi mujpe pe varosa kyun nahi ?????

Teri naam se nahi kaam se nahi

Tujse pyaar kiya , per tujko meri asliyaat pe sharam aya !!



Ghaamad meri sringer hai gusaa meri taj

Sab ko chod ,teri liye kab tha ah raaj !!!


Tere khud ki andhere ne tujhe itne badad de

Tune meri ujalame meri saath nahi di !!!!

Har ak hasi meri kyun asu me badal de ???



Andhere me thik hoon main andhere me thik hoon

Apne tute dil haat pe lake bathi hoon

Ana tab HI jab duniya se ladne ki himaat hoon ...


kumud ji (😭 )

ps : i hate kumud ..i dont wanna feel what she felt ...but for the first time i m crying for her ...kyun ???


sorry for bangla wala hindi 😊


Edited by -B.N.K- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful. I can see your empathy on Saras. I loved it and u put it in a very nice way 👏 🤗 ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samsangeetha

Beautiful. I can see your empathy on Saras. I loved it and u put it in a very nice way 👏 🤗 ⭐️


Thank you dear, we all bashed him so much, just as he was rash in making that phone call, we too were rash in thrashing him, he repented, now it's our turn!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing poetry , I am really scared to watch Saras's reaction after he gain senses..woh keh the haina

Zindgi ka pahla pyar kaun bhulta hai
Ye pahli bar hota hai jab koi kisi ko
Khud se badhkar chahta hai,
Uski pasnd uski khwahish me khud ko bhul jata hai,
Hota hai itna khubsurt pehla pyar to na jane
Kyu aksar adhura reh jata hai…
I am feeling bad for kumud and Saras
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg great post! Loved ur favoring for Saras! Boy do I feel bad for him! But I feel like its just a matter of time when Saras realizes!
Just like how there is blood needed in every inch of our body Saras needs kumud with every step he takes in life
Just like bloods can be pumped into different directions but will meet sooner or later
Saras and kumud will be separated but there love is the one thing that keeps them bounded nd will bring them back
Plus blood needs a circulation system to run
And Saras needs kumud to run nd function!
It's all matter of time before he realizes!
Great post!

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