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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Actual SSBN main to Bechare dakshu ko naina ko Sab kuch samjhana padta hai 😉 Kal hi to usne kaha meri biwi ke haat pau kam chalte hai aur Jaban jayda... Aur phir naina ne uska poora plan choupat kar diya... To Tere FF main to naina samajdhar tho honi hi chahiye na 😛

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

lucky.. super super yaa...

i hope al these are going to b shown in SSBN ;)

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

@ neetu and sousou

Thanks yaar...😉

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Actual SSBN main to Bechare dakshu ko naina ko Sab kuch samjhana padta hai 😉 Kal hi to usne kaha meri biwi ke haat pau kam chalte hai aur Jaban jayda... Aur phir naina ne uska poora plan choupat kar diya... To Tere FF main to naina samajdhar tho honi hi chahiye na 😛

yaar.. now I find Daksh's drastic changes.. Earlier, he was a man of less words.. now he talks.. earlier he rarely smiled... now he smiles a lot [naina smiles less in these months] Daksh is very happy now with his Naina eventhoguh his family is not happy with them. if Naina is with him, he is too happy.. he is not bothored abt other things. theat conversation.. naina asks why u stare at me like this..

D: kisi aur ko nahi. khud ki biwi ko dekh raha hoo.. [someting similar] agar tuhe problem hai to mei deek karoonga.. [very naughty]

N: achha ha.. muje problem hai.. tum kaise teek karoge..

D: itni jaldi kya hai naina.. poore rat hi baki hai.. [double naughty]

then u reme what happened then.. naina's lecture..

D: mei smachata hoo,. kabhi kabhi tum boho hoshiyar ki tarah bat karte ho.. par.. kabhi kabhi mere hoshiyar bato ko bhi tum manna hoga..

Oh.. i was really surprised.. actually CVs made him as in our FFs. naughty.. anyway wow.. i liked it... 😉

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#575

😆CONTD...

Fried rice - dakshna ka khissa

Daksh naina ko sudhaarne mein itna busy tha😉 aur naina good girl bante huye itni busy thi ki😉 movie programme shift hogayi later half mein😉

Both asleep on bed..besides each other..naina's head on daksh's hand..😛

Naina; daksh bhook lag raha hain

Daksh(;hand on head); arey bapre,tumhe sudharne ke chakkar mein... fried rice ke baare mein tho bhul gaya,😆.. chalo kitchen mein...jaldi se batavo kya karna hain..

Both rush into kitchen...

Naina starts giving instructions

Naina; pehle lighter lo, stove on karo..phie kadai rakho..aur

Daksh; offo naina ye koi khaana khazana programme nahi hain🤣.tum tv walo ki tarah basics se start matkaro...itna tho pata hain...

Naina; okkk..pehle oil daalo..arey itna jya da nahi...thoda kam daksh...

Daksh; itna chalega?😲

Naina; haan..ab sabjiyan ek ek karke uss mein daal do..

Naina continues with her instructions..daksh follow kar raha hain..almost final stage tak pahuch gaye...

Naina; main rice nikalthi hoon

..daksh; tum rehne do..main karta hoon..he goes to get the rice...Mean while naina goes near stove..accidently uska haath garam kadai pe laga gaya

Naina; takes bak her hand; ouch...

Daksh turns back and sees this aur bhagta waha aagaya

Daksh; naina tum teek tho hona😕..main kaha tha na bete reene ke liye..ab dekho..dard ho raha hain kya?..chalo..

Takes her to sink aur paani dalta hain...phir naina ko chair pe bitaya

Naina; daksh main teek hoon..itna dard nahi hain

Daksh; chup..chup chap beti raho...he rushes and gets onitment..aur naina ke haath ko pyar se lagata hain.naina is moved by dakshs concern and love😛..and she keeps looking at him.😳..daksh is busy taking care of naina's hand

Naina; daksh..( daksh looks up)...I love u😛

Daksh; agar tumhe lag raha hain ki I love u kehne se main tumhe nahi daatunga tho tum galat soch rahi ho😆.ab thoda teek hain.??.(naina nods her head yes)..

Daksh;I love u too..kiss on fore head...😳

Both lost looking at each other..aur bhool gaye! kya?? arey stove pe jo banraha hain woh..fried rice...😆😆

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

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Naina; daksh jalne ko boo😕

Daksh; tum phirse shuru hogayi?;😆

naina; sachi main...

Both look at stove..daksh hurriedly stove off kardeta hain...luckily itna jyada jala nahi hain..😛

Daksh; thank god...

Naina explains remaining process aur bangaya fried rice(😍 )...

Daksh usse table pe raktha hain; tho mam..tayar hain aapka fried rice KP Special exclusively for u my swthr8❤️

Naina; wow!KP special hmmm.😃.. kitna yummy lag raha hain ..lekin ab main tumhe kaise khilavungi?😕

Daksh; uss ke baare tum tension mat lo meri jaan...main hoo na😃

..fried race aur sauce plate maindaal diya...spoon se naina ko khila raha hain

Naina; tum bhi khavona

Daksh nods his head; pehle tum..😍 bhook lag rahithi na..

Naina; nahi..tume bhi khana padega mere saath..😛

.daksh; ok baba...

After few min

Naina; bas bas..bahut khiladiya..aur nahi daksh😛

Daksh; itni aasani tumhe chodnewala nhai hoon..khana padega..sirf do, nahi nahi ,teen spoon aur..😍

Naina; sirf teen..pakka??..daksh nods his head saying yes..

Khatam hogaya ..khaana...naina wants to clear table...but daksh doesnt allow her..wahi saara kaam karleta hain

Naina still near dining table..daksh comes near her and sits on table. naina is in chair...daksh holds her hand

Daksh; ab haath kaisa hain? doctor ke paas chale

Naina; offo daksh..tum tho aisa baath kar rahe ho jaisa bahut bada hadsaa hogaya..simple si chot hain..ek gante mein teek hojyaega😛

Daksh; chot chot hota hain..simple ho ya serious..lovingly puts hands on naina's cheek;😛

I love u naina/I love u a lot...promise karo ki ayinda se khayal rakhoge "meri jaan ka"...❤️ 😍warna mujhe office ko kitchen mein shift karna padega..wapas jaane ke baad( smiles)😉

Naina (smiles); promise.. ache se khayal rakhungi "tumhari jaan ka".❤️.Love u too..ab kitchen se bahar chale...

Daksh ; haan chalo...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

lucky...2 cute as usual😊😊😊...lekin naina ko use itnaa bhi nahi sudharna chahiye ki...u promisd a role reversal...i'l hold u 2 t😉😆😆😆😆...

ps : ha, aur veggies bhi jala diye...i did notic,nd age ka scn tho defo isse bhi cute hoga😛 but cute concernd dakshu itna cute tha ki veggies ko PS me dalna pada😆...luvd d whol thing...thnx sweety🤗🤗🤗

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: sweetaish
lucky...2 cute as usual😊😊😊...lekin naina ko use itnaa bhi nahi sudharna chahiye ki...u promisd a role reversal...i'l hold u 2 t😆...

ps : ha, aur veggies bhi jala diye...i did notic,nd age ka scn tho defo isse bhi cute hoga😛 but cute concernd dakshu itna cute tha ki veggies ko PM me dalna pada...luvd d whol thing...thnx sweety🤗🤗🤗

Thanks yaar🤗

U mean "ahem bshrm naina.😆.( rol rvrsal)banadenge.. lagta hain second part pada nahi tune..padke bata kaisa hain..😛

Kuch jyada sudharliya na dakshu ne? dnt wry..compensate hojayega...next parts main😉

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: lucky.m
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Naina; daksh jalne ko boo😕
Daksh; tum phirse shuru hogayi?;😆
naina; sachi main... LOL

Both look at stove..daksh hurriedly stove off kardeta hain...luckily itna jyada jala nahi hain..😛

Daksh; thank god...
Naina explains remaining process aur bangaya fried rice(😍 )...

Daksh usse table pe raktha hain; tho mam..tayar hain aapka fried rice KP Special exclusively for u my swthr8❤️
Naina; wow!KP special hmmm.😃.. kitna yummy lag raha hain .. (😲kaun..kya..ohk samaj gayi😆😆😆😆)lekin ab main tumhe kaise khilavungi?😕
Daksh; uss ke baare tum tension mat lo meri jaan...main hoo na😃

..fried race aur sauce plate maindaal diya...spoon se naina ko khila raha hain

Naina; tum bhi khavona
Daksh nods his head; pehle tum..😍 bhook lag rahithi na..
Naina; nahi..tume bhi khana padega mere saath..😛
.daksh; ok baba...

After few min

Naina; bas bas..bahut khiladiya..aur nahi daksh😛
Daksh; itni aasani tumhe chodnewala nhai hoon..khana padega..sirf do, nahi nahi ,teen spoon aur..😍
Naina; sirf teen..pakka??..daksh nods his head saying yes..

Khatam hogaya ..khaana...naina wants to clear table...but daksh doesnt allow her..wahi saara kaam karleta hain

Naina still near dining table..daksh comes near her and sits on table. naina is in chair...daksh holds her hand

Daksh; ab haath kaisa hain? doctor ke paas chale
Naina; offo daksh..tum tho aisa baath kar rahe ho jaisa bahut bada hadsaa hogaya..simple si chot hain..ek gante mein teek hojyaega😛
Daksh; chot chot hota hain..simple ho ya serious..lovingly puts hands on naina's cheek;😛
I love u naina/I love u a lot...promise karo ki ayinda se khayal rakhoge "meri jaan ka"...❤️ 😍warna mujhe office ko kitchen mein shift karna padega..wapas jaane ke baad( smiles)😉

😍fida...fida...totali fida🤗🤗🤗

Naina (smiles); promise.. ache se khayal rakhungi "tumhari jaan ka".❤️.Love u too..ab kitchen se bahar chale...
Daksh ; haan chalo...

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