Dakshna short story - part 5 update p8 - Page 5

Originally posted by: PLKG90

hehe! yeah I really enjoy ur FF as this is my first ever FF reading on Dakshana..... hehe!

Yeah u should update very soon! otherwise 😡 (lol just joking)

hehehe! take ur time !

im so happy that u enjoy it 😉 and i will try to update soon, but what can i do, got exams but i will try to update today or tomorrow ....

Originally posted by: Rashmi_Nair

Pls update next part soon. Its fantastic.

Originally posted by: Rashiiiii17

wowwwwwwww...........👍🏼
i really like dis dear.good work...keep it up

Originally posted by: vivacious95

sry could not comment as i was busy shifting my house ......... nw anyways i am free..... it ws an excellent update...... totally awesome...... do update soon........

Originally posted by: prat9

Wow!!...Splendid!!⭐️👏..I read part 2 & 3 together (I missed your part 2 since the last time i was here). Your thoughts flow so smoothly through your fingers dear....and beautiful storyline!! .

You are an incredibly brilliant writer and that too with an acute sense of imagination!!!👏

...Can't wait for next part to be updated!

Originally posted by: geetanshi

yar plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss jaldi update kr na!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

Part 4

Baba: Daksh?? (Daksh still doesn't reply) Daksh?? (he puts his hand on his shoulder, Daksh comes out of his staring session and realises his dad was calling him, he looks at him) Daksh, kahan kho gaye the?? (Daksh looks embarrassed, he sees Naina also confused and looking embarrassed in the mirror)

Daksh: Baba, wohhh ….. (he was struggling on what to say, he gives one more glimpse at Naina) Baba, wohh windscreen mein kuch laga tha toh dekh rat ha ke kya he…. (he looks away embarrassingly, Baba looks back on the window and sees nothing)

Baba: Daksh vahan kuch nahin haii. (Daksh suddenly looks back in shock)

Daksh: Baba … chodo na, shayad udh gaya…. (before Baba could reply he tries to change the topic) toh batao parent's evening kaise rahi??

Baba: (smiles to himself at Daksh's approach to the situation) Parents evening theek rahe, sab ache se gaya, sab students ka parents se milaaa, bohot acha tha … tumara kaam kaisa raha …. (he looks at Daksh for response, Daksh again was paying no attention and was lost in thoughts, looking through the mirror, Baba starts to laugh at himself … Naina also realises that Daksh has failed to reply again…. She sees Baba laughing and gets quite embarrassed when she sees that Daksh is looking at her through the mirror)

Naina: Daksh, Baba tumse baat kar rahe haii .... (Daksh hears his name from Naina's mouth so he comes out of the trance…. )

Daksh: Baba, kya pooch rahe the??

Baba: Daksh, abh tumhari dhyan kahan thi ....

Daksh: (embarassed) Baba, voh kaam ki baare mein sosch raha tha ... kal court jaana he naa, isliye ... (before Baba could reply) Dekho ghar aa gayeee .... chalooo.... mujhe zor se bhuk lage hai…. (he parks up the car in the drive and they all get out… Baba goes in to the house, then Naina and Daksh follows her)

Daksh: (thinking to himself as they walk in) Daksh tu kitna stupid he, baba ke saamne yeh kya kar raha tha … aur baar baar kyun use naina se dekh raha hai, pagal toh nahin hogaya? (they get into the house, Baba goes into his room, Naina goes up to put her things away, and Daksh follows her up)

In Ayi/Baba's room….

Baba: Vibhaaa….. Kahan ho tum??

Ayi: Ahoo, Kya hai?

Baba: mujhe tumse zaroorat baat karni thi?

Ayi: Achaa kya hai?? Pehle suno, tumhari paani laati hoon (she runs out the room)

Baba: Yeh bhi naa, sunti nahin haiii…. (he starts to put his bag down and starts to freshen up, Ayi returns)

Ayi: Yeh lo, paani (He takes it from her and starts to drink it … Abh bolo…. Kya kehna tha?

Baba: Voh daksh ki baare mein baat karni thii??

Ayi: Daksh ki baare mein? Kya kiya usne?? (Baba starts to smile and chuckles)

Baba: Tumhara Daksh toh abh haath se gaya? (He starts to smile, while Ayi looks confused)

Ayi: Kya kehna chaate ho? Kuch samaj mein nahin aata??

Baba: Vibha tum bhi na, aapka Daksh aur Naina ki shaadi karane mein kya khayal he? (he smiles)

Ayi: daksh toh ladki dekhenge nahin, aur hume kaisa pata ke Naina ka kya khayal hai ladki ke baare mein??

Baba: Vibhaa, tum galat samaj rahe ho, mein uss dono ki shaadi saath mein karane ki baat kar raha hoon (Ayis face lights up on hearing this)

Ayi: Kya?

Baba: Haa, humko Naina pasand he, voh humari beti jaise he, toh iss mein kya galat he? Yeh perfect he…. (Ayi's smiling and cant contain her excitement)

Ayi: yeh toh bohot acha hai… lekin aapne yeh kaisa socha??

Baba: Voh mein ne gaadi mein Daksh ko baar baar Naina ko dekhna dikhaa…. Bichari puri taraa se phaas gaya jab maine use dekhaaa…. Lekin mujhe Naina jaise bahu hi chayee… toh isse better kya hai…

Ayi : Haa, mein bohot khush hoon ke aapka khayal yeh hi tha… Lekha aur Sushant mujhe yeh ek din bataa ke gaye thi, aur mujhe yeh idea pasand thii…. Lekin abh yeh baat ko kaise handle karenge ??

Baba : Mujhko lagta he ke dono ki taang kichni chaaye… Hum Daksh ko Shaadi ki baat karenge… aur Naina ko uska ideal partner ki baare mein poochenge … lekin dono ki alag shaadi ki baat karenge …

Ayi : Haa voh theek hai … bohot mazaa ayenge … Acha suno, khana kha ne chalee…

Baba : Ha chalo…

Meanwhile upstairs…. Naina put her things away…. And Daksh also went to her room… they were both coming out then they again come face to face …. They stare at each other for few minutes ….

Naina: Daksh, yeh kya kar rahe hoon? Tumko ho kya gaya??

Daksh: (embarassed) Kya matlab??

Naina: Mujhe baar baar gaadi mein kyun dekh rahe thee?? Baba ne kitni baar tumko dekhaa....

Daksh: Kya?? Kya kaha ussse?

Naina: Voh haas rahe the... kyun kar rahe the yehhh sab?? (Daksh looks shocked… he is confused as what to say…. )

How is Daksh going to react? what will he say?? will he finally tell her he likes her.... are more sparks to fly? or are they going to carry on fighting as usual??? How are Baba and Ayi going to play their game? stay tuned to find outtt ....