Dakshna short story - part 5 update p8 - Page 3

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Originally posted by: Dansindiadans

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Originally posted by: Dansindiadans

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Daksh and Naina continue to stare at each other …. Ayi smiles.

Ayi: Chintu?? (Daksh and Naina come out of their trance… Naina looks down, while Daksh looks confusedly at Ayi)

Daksh: Haa hum jaayenge, kab jaana hai?

Ayi: Tum chai peekar hi nikar na, theek hai?? (she smiles)

Daksh: Jee (he also gives gentle smile, picks up his tea and looks at Naina while he drinks, Naina continues to look down with embarrassment and confusion, she comes out of her thoughts and also picks up her tea, she sees Daksh staring at her, which again makes her emabarssed)

Naina: (thinking) yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai … ajab sa lag raha hai… yeh kya hogaya mujhe … mein choti choti baato se kyun sharmane lagi hoon? Yehh …. (she continues to be lost in her thoughts, daksh sees that shes lost in thoughts)

Daksh: Naina?? ... (she doesn't answer) … Naina?? (naina comes out of her trance and realises daksh was calling her, she looks up)

Naina: Haa?

Daksh: Chale??

Naina: haa chaloo… (she finishes off her tea and places the cup on the table… she looks at ayi …. )

Daksh and Naina both speak together: Ayi hum jaa ke aati hai … (they realise they spoke at the same time, they look at each other while Ayi looks on smiling, Daksh gives a gentle smile to Naina and Naina tooo smiles back, they head out towards the door while Ayi watches them go … )

Ayi: (she folds her hands) O Ganpati Bapa, mere Chintu ki shaadi jaaldi se karva do … aur voh bhi Naina se…. mujhe bohot khushi hogiii … (she finishes off the prayers and takes the tray back to the kitchen)

Naina and Daksh reach the car … they sit in. They get in and both just stare at each other … they realise they both staring at each other so quickly move their eyes…. Daksh starts the car and they start to drive off … Naina was about to turn the radio on, when daksh also went to turn their radio on …. Naina could feel Daksh's soft hands on hers… Their hearts both skipped a sudden beat, Naina and Daksh both look at each other …. They continue to look into each others eyes, not realising their hands were still together … all of a sudden they hear horning, they see a car coming from the front….

Naina: (with fear) Daksh… gaadiii….. (Daksh all of a sudden realises and starts to panic, he swerves away from the car …. They get away safely and continue driving)

Daksh: Tum theek toh ho? (he starts to ask Naina with worry)

Naina: Haa, tum??

Daksh: Haa… (he realises that he lost concentration due to naina) (thinking: yeh mujhe kya hogaya tha? Accident se bacha hoon, mera dhyan kahan khoya tha?? Then he realises he was busy staring at Naina…. Mein Naina ki wajhe se khoya hua tha?? Lekin kyun?? Yeh kya hogaya? He continues to be confused …. While Naina is also considering the same thing …

Naina: (thinking) yeh kya hua tha… nearly accident hua tha?? Aur voh bhi kyun ki hum ek dosre se nazre mila re the?? Yeh kya ho rahe hai?? yeh nahin ho sakhta, mujhe Daksh se pyar nahin ho sakhta? Lekin yeh thodi na pyar he? Hum to sirf dost hai, aur mein voh ghar ki paying guest … yeh nahin ho sakhta … yh khadoos ki saath pyar?? Never … kabhi nahin … (she shakes her head and looks dismayed at herself)

While they thought about each other, they reach the school … Naina goes to get out the car ….

Daksh: Naina kahan jaa rahe ho?? (he asks with confusion)

Naina: Piche beth nahin, baba aayenge toh agar hi bethenge ...

Daksh: Naina iski zaroorat nahin hai, tum yahan bethooo ....

Naina: Nahin Daksh .... mein piche beth thi hoon, agar dosra accident hogaya tohhh .... (she gets out with a gentle smile, Daksh smiles after hearing that)

Daksh: (thinking) Yeh bhi naa, kitna khayal rakhti he sabka, khaas kar ayi baba kaa … (he smiles at himself, then looks back at Naina) Naina mein baba se phone karta hoon aur bataa du ke hum baar hai … (he gets his phone out and starts to call his dad)

Baba hum baar intezaar kar rahe he… theek he baba 2 minute mein milte he (he smiles and hangs up the phone)

Naina: Daksh radio on karo na please …

Daksh: Okay … (he turns it on, and pehli nazaar starts to play … daksh starts to smile …. So does Naina … all of a sudden they see Baba coming …. He gets into the car….

Baba: aare tum dono aaye? Mujhe nahin pata ke Naina bhi aane vaali thi …

Naina: Ha baba voh thodi fresh air ke liye baar nikaal aaye ... (she smiles)

Baba: Theek hai … toh chalee … (he looks at Daksh, Daksh looks back at Naina and drives off … the song is still playing … Daksh can see Naina looking out of her window with happiness on her face … he slightly adjusts his mirror so he can get a better view) (he thinks: Yeh ladki ne kaisa jaadu kar diya, ke abh mein bhi khayalo mein rehta hoon) (he continues to stare at her)

Baba: Toh Daksh, kaam kaise tha? (noone replies, he looks at Daksh, he sees him looking through his mirror and sees he is looking at Naina)